Comments received on poems by queer-with-a-pen
oh, father (or: what i would say at my father\'s funeral)
dusk arising said:
These feelings are out and good for you for saying it BLUNT cos its so hurtful for you. He damaged you.
But you are not beyond recovery. The very fact that you are poetic shows you are evacuating the damage from your soul. It will take time and you should be gentle with the process.
MPS is a very theraputic place where goodwill exists in bucket loads.
Publishing what you write when drunk really gets it off your chest. I hope your head feels ok - hangover wise.
August 12th, 2019 00:27
dusk arising said:
These feelings are out and good for you for saying it BLUNT cos its so hurtful for you. He damaged you.
But you are not beyond recovery. The very fact that you are poetic shows you are evacuating the damage from your soul. It will take time and you should be gentle with the process.
MPS is a very theraputic place where goodwill exists in bucket loads.
Publishing what you write when drunk really gets it off your chest. I hope your head feels ok - hangover wise.
August 12th, 2019 00:27
lover boy
dusk arising said:
When a love is special poetry is in the air. When a poet finds that love, then poetry fills the air and powers the hand to write.
A lovely love poem today.
August 5th, 2019 12:57
dusk arising said:
When a love is special poetry is in the air. When a poet finds that love, then poetry fills the air and powers the hand to write.
A lovely love poem today.
August 5th, 2019 12:57
old wounds
Christina8 said:
This is a heartwrenching write but very well done! I hope you have found the peace you so richly deserve.---Christina
July 28th, 2019 12:03
Christina8 said:
This is a heartwrenching write but very well done! I hope you have found the peace you so richly deserve.---Christina
July 28th, 2019 12:03
secrets
Suresh said:
As the old saying goes \" you wear your heart on your sleeves\", but you know what, it\'s the cuffs that truly show the wear.
June 22nd, 2019 18:36
Suresh said:
As the old saying goes \" you wear your heart on your sleeves\", but you know what, it\'s the cuffs that truly show the wear.
June 22nd, 2019 18:36
this body/my body
Goddess of the Mist said:
Beautiful! Very honest, and you did a wonderful job of expressing something that is hard to say.
May 22nd, 2019 20:58
Goddess of the Mist said:
Beautiful! Very honest, and you did a wonderful job of expressing something that is hard to say.
May 22nd, 2019 20:58
this body/my body
dusk arising said:
Great finale there. Your words made me think of your mind and its struggle with your body while i was making a comparison. You see some people who ARE their bodies - the architypical \'dumb blonde\' - who are apparently of little mind.
May 22nd, 2019 01:57
dusk arising said:
Great finale there. Your words made me think of your mind and its struggle with your body while i was making a comparison. You see some people who ARE their bodies - the architypical \'dumb blonde\' - who are apparently of little mind.
May 22nd, 2019 01:57
who are you (to me)?
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, powerful stuff my friend reminds me of when I confronted my real father at 18 asking why he was never there! My sister and brother both had memories but I have none, even when the words sorry left his lips, I could not expect it!
How could I from a man I didn\'t know, I may look like him but there was not an ounce of respect for him.
12 years later I was getting a divorce and becoming a part time dad, that\'s when I understood not everyone can handle this kind of pain but I\'d make sure mine would never feel the same.
Thank you for sharing yours, if this is actually happening I hope you find the same strength.
Much peace and respect
May 9th, 2019 08:47
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, powerful stuff my friend reminds me of when I confronted my real father at 18 asking why he was never there! My sister and brother both had memories but I have none, even when the words sorry left his lips, I could not expect it!
How could I from a man I didn\'t know, I may look like him but there was not an ounce of respect for him.
12 years later I was getting a divorce and becoming a part time dad, that\'s when I understood not everyone can handle this kind of pain but I\'d make sure mine would never feel the same.
Thank you for sharing yours, if this is actually happening I hope you find the same strength.
Much peace and respect
May 9th, 2019 08:47
secrets
Nafis Light said:
Makes me wonder if it is a real story, but I see it as real.
Maybe it is in a way because how could you be able to say all of that if it\'s not real?
April 1st, 2019 09:01
Nafis Light said:
Makes me wonder if it is a real story, but I see it as real.
Maybe it is in a way because how could you be able to say all of that if it\'s not real?
April 1st, 2019 09:01
shine on
dusk arising said:
Mixed thoughts of missing someone in a cruel world. Our beds always accentuate the shadows within us.
March 27th, 2019 05:15
dusk arising said:
Mixed thoughts of missing someone in a cruel world. Our beds always accentuate the shadows within us.
March 27th, 2019 05:15
mud
Goldfinch60 said:
If love is in the air you can get away with most things.
February 25th, 2019 04:04
Goldfinch60 said:
If love is in the air you can get away with most things.
February 25th, 2019 04:04
snip
luckykarma said:
I just found this website by accident and this is the very first poem on here I read.... and it absolutely took my breath away.
February 8th, 2019 15:20
luckykarma said:
I just found this website by accident and this is the very first poem on here I read.... and it absolutely took my breath away.
February 8th, 2019 15:20
snip
Neville said:
I found these words quite by accident while mooching around here this evening.. I am glad I stumbled upon them in such a way... to be honest, the more I read, the more impressed I was with them.. I found them emotionally charged but blunted, if that makes any sense... you tell a story that had a reality to it that made me draw breath sharply through clenched teeth and quite a few times... I dont know whether the details are autobiographical or fiction.. at the end of the day, it does not really matter, I thoroughly enjoyed my visit... Neville
February 6th, 2019 18:09
Neville said:
I found these words quite by accident while mooching around here this evening.. I am glad I stumbled upon them in such a way... to be honest, the more I read, the more impressed I was with them.. I found them emotionally charged but blunted, if that makes any sense... you tell a story that had a reality to it that made me draw breath sharply through clenched teeth and quite a few times... I dont know whether the details are autobiographical or fiction.. at the end of the day, it does not really matter, I thoroughly enjoyed my visit... Neville
February 6th, 2019 18:09
a gospel of tenderness
Neville said:
This is really quite special, at least in my book it is.. original and well worth re-visiting again, when I am sure it will have the same impact upon my poetic receptors.... Neville
December 20th, 2018 10:00
Neville said:
This is really quite special, at least in my book it is.. original and well worth re-visiting again, when I am sure it will have the same impact upon my poetic receptors.... Neville
December 20th, 2018 10:00
Pleas(e)
Cali Kittana said:
I can\'t even explain how many fights I\'ve gotten into over gun control. Even my own mother disagrees with how I think things should be fixed. Exactly, we don\'t want them ripped away from people, if you wish to own one, then fine. Own it to protect your family from real dangers. Armed robbers or things of that nature. Or if you\'re a hunter out during hunting season getting your deer for the year. Fine, you do you. But I see no reason why regular civilians need such dangerous weapons in their possession! And the process of accepting or denying someone a weapon is too short! There needs to be a stronger background check, a mental check, a waiting period! If you can\'t wait a week for your background checks to come through, then you don\'t really need the gun! This violence is getting crazy lately. It\'s only gotten worse within the past two years. (And I\'m not blaming it on the current politics, but I\'m also not saying the current politics are helping). People are losing their minds, especially here in the states!
November 9th, 2018 09:27
Cali Kittana said:
I can\'t even explain how many fights I\'ve gotten into over gun control. Even my own mother disagrees with how I think things should be fixed. Exactly, we don\'t want them ripped away from people, if you wish to own one, then fine. Own it to protect your family from real dangers. Armed robbers or things of that nature. Or if you\'re a hunter out during hunting season getting your deer for the year. Fine, you do you. But I see no reason why regular civilians need such dangerous weapons in their possession! And the process of accepting or denying someone a weapon is too short! There needs to be a stronger background check, a mental check, a waiting period! If you can\'t wait a week for your background checks to come through, then you don\'t really need the gun! This violence is getting crazy lately. It\'s only gotten worse within the past two years. (And I\'m not blaming it on the current politics, but I\'m also not saying the current politics are helping). People are losing their minds, especially here in the states!
November 9th, 2018 09:27
Pleas(e)
Debsspot said:
Well said. Just because you can doesn\'t mean you should. With each incident we here in Australia respect our gun laws more. The needless loss is so sad.
November 9th, 2018 06:05
Debsspot said:
Well said. Just because you can doesn\'t mean you should. With each incident we here in Australia respect our gun laws more. The needless loss is so sad.
November 9th, 2018 06:05
coming out
dusk arising said:
Long may your heart and mind be free to be what you are. For all the struggles and torment youve endured, you are surely most deserving to be free.
October 11th, 2018 15:08
dusk arising said:
Long may your heart and mind be free to be what you are. For all the struggles and torment youve endured, you are surely most deserving to be free.
October 11th, 2018 15:08
coming out
Laura🌻 said:
Boaz,
I applaud you for this beautiful poem!
It is your right as a human being to enjoy your life and be happy!
Thank you for sharing!
HappyNational Coming Out Day!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 14:00
Laura🌻 said:
Boaz,
I applaud you for this beautiful poem!
It is your right as a human being to enjoy your life and be happy!
Thank you for sharing!
HappyNational Coming Out Day!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 14:00
leon
dusk arising said:
Fun writing. I believe everyone should write like this about their lovers. In years to come you can look at the stuff you wrote and those memories will come back fresh instead of just letting the years fade them away.
Please comment on my poem today.
July 11th, 2018 21:39
dusk arising said:
Fun writing. I believe everyone should write like this about their lovers. In years to come you can look at the stuff you wrote and those memories will come back fresh instead of just letting the years fade them away.
Please comment on my poem today.
July 11th, 2018 21:39
bright
A.C Doomcraft said:
we are all just emotion and expression our bodies arent who we are its our minds and we express that through the body it is but a tool for us to express
Im too ill informed to be completely for or against transgender but i believe nobody has a right to tell another how to live sadly our society has become one of blind opinions hopefully one day all this will be a bad dream and we can all live as we please without being judged
June 23rd, 2018 11:56
A.C Doomcraft said:
we are all just emotion and expression our bodies arent who we are its our minds and we express that through the body it is but a tool for us to express
Im too ill informed to be completely for or against transgender but i believe nobody has a right to tell another how to live sadly our society has become one of blind opinions hopefully one day all this will be a bad dream and we can all live as we please without being judged
June 23rd, 2018 11:56
store-bought serotonin
Caring dove said:
sad thing when we have to \'\' rely \'\' on \'\' medication \'\' . you speak some very true words... medication does not \'\' fix\'\' that which is wrong in our minds, it helps us to feel a bit better and to maybe feel more able to cope, if only we could take the meds for a little bit and then our illness ceases to exist.
i can read your frustration at having to take \'\' pills \'\'\' and having to deal with a mental illness which never goes away .
its strange , some people have no understanding at all about \'\' mental illness\'\' responses like get out in the sun and you will feel a lot better , nature is the cure.. unfortunately some people do not understand.
you expressed yourself in a good way
May 11th, 2018 02:56
Caring dove said:
sad thing when we have to \'\' rely \'\' on \'\' medication \'\' . you speak some very true words... medication does not \'\' fix\'\' that which is wrong in our minds, it helps us to feel a bit better and to maybe feel more able to cope, if only we could take the meds for a little bit and then our illness ceases to exist.
i can read your frustration at having to take \'\' pills \'\'\' and having to deal with a mental illness which never goes away .
its strange , some people have no understanding at all about \'\' mental illness\'\' responses like get out in the sun and you will feel a lot better , nature is the cure.. unfortunately some people do not understand.
you expressed yourself in a good way
May 11th, 2018 02:56
a well written father
onepauly said:
at least you can dream.
and write.
you would not be the only one.
May 3rd, 2018 12:32
onepauly said:
at least you can dream.
and write.
you would not be the only one.
May 3rd, 2018 12:32
a well written father
marlenawood said:
Beautiful writing love very deep an emotional
May 3rd, 2018 07:42
marlenawood said:
Beautiful writing love very deep an emotional
May 3rd, 2018 07:42
edges
florence arla said:
\"I don\'t want something already made but something still being tortuosely made\"
As always, eye-opening and you\'re so very brave to let yourself be so very vulnerable. Amazing.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:57
florence arla said:
\"I don\'t want something already made but something still being tortuosely made\"
As always, eye-opening and you\'re so very brave to let yourself be so very vulnerable. Amazing.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:57
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