Comments received on poems by queer-with-a-pen
secrets
Nafis Light said:
Makes me wonder if it is a real story, but I see it as real.
Maybe it is in a way because how could you be able to say all of that if it\'s not real?
April 1st, 2019 09:01
Nafis Light said:
Makes me wonder if it is a real story, but I see it as real.
Maybe it is in a way because how could you be able to say all of that if it\'s not real?
April 1st, 2019 09:01
shine on
dusk arising said:
Mixed thoughts of missing someone in a cruel world. Our beds always accentuate the shadows within us.
March 27th, 2019 05:15
dusk arising said:
Mixed thoughts of missing someone in a cruel world. Our beds always accentuate the shadows within us.
March 27th, 2019 05:15
mud
Goldfinch60 said:
If love is in the air you can get away with most things.
February 25th, 2019 04:04
Goldfinch60 said:
If love is in the air you can get away with most things.
February 25th, 2019 04:04
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luckykarma said:
I just found this website by accident and this is the very first poem on here I read.... and it absolutely took my breath away.
February 8th, 2019 15:20
luckykarma said:
I just found this website by accident and this is the very first poem on here I read.... and it absolutely took my breath away.
February 8th, 2019 15:20
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Neville said:
I found these words quite by accident while mooching around here this evening.. I am glad I stumbled upon them in such a way... to be honest, the more I read, the more impressed I was with them.. I found them emotionally charged but blunted, if that makes any sense... you tell a story that had a reality to it that made me draw breath sharply through clenched teeth and quite a few times... I dont know whether the details are autobiographical or fiction.. at the end of the day, it does not really matter, I thoroughly enjoyed my visit... Neville
February 6th, 2019 18:09
Neville said:
I found these words quite by accident while mooching around here this evening.. I am glad I stumbled upon them in such a way... to be honest, the more I read, the more impressed I was with them.. I found them emotionally charged but blunted, if that makes any sense... you tell a story that had a reality to it that made me draw breath sharply through clenched teeth and quite a few times... I dont know whether the details are autobiographical or fiction.. at the end of the day, it does not really matter, I thoroughly enjoyed my visit... Neville
February 6th, 2019 18:09
a gospel of tenderness
Neville said:
This is really quite special, at least in my book it is.. original and well worth re-visiting again, when I am sure it will have the same impact upon my poetic receptors.... Neville
December 20th, 2018 10:00
Neville said:
This is really quite special, at least in my book it is.. original and well worth re-visiting again, when I am sure it will have the same impact upon my poetic receptors.... Neville
December 20th, 2018 10:00
Pleas(e)
Cali Kittana said:
I can\'t even explain how many fights I\'ve gotten into over gun control. Even my own mother disagrees with how I think things should be fixed. Exactly, we don\'t want them ripped away from people, if you wish to own one, then fine. Own it to protect your family from real dangers. Armed robbers or things of that nature. Or if you\'re a hunter out during hunting season getting your deer for the year. Fine, you do you. But I see no reason why regular civilians need such dangerous weapons in their possession! And the process of accepting or denying someone a weapon is too short! There needs to be a stronger background check, a mental check, a waiting period! If you can\'t wait a week for your background checks to come through, then you don\'t really need the gun! This violence is getting crazy lately. It\'s only gotten worse within the past two years. (And I\'m not blaming it on the current politics, but I\'m also not saying the current politics are helping). People are losing their minds, especially here in the states!
November 9th, 2018 09:27
Cali Kittana said:
I can\'t even explain how many fights I\'ve gotten into over gun control. Even my own mother disagrees with how I think things should be fixed. Exactly, we don\'t want them ripped away from people, if you wish to own one, then fine. Own it to protect your family from real dangers. Armed robbers or things of that nature. Or if you\'re a hunter out during hunting season getting your deer for the year. Fine, you do you. But I see no reason why regular civilians need such dangerous weapons in their possession! And the process of accepting or denying someone a weapon is too short! There needs to be a stronger background check, a mental check, a waiting period! If you can\'t wait a week for your background checks to come through, then you don\'t really need the gun! This violence is getting crazy lately. It\'s only gotten worse within the past two years. (And I\'m not blaming it on the current politics, but I\'m also not saying the current politics are helping). People are losing their minds, especially here in the states!
November 9th, 2018 09:27
Pleas(e)
Debsspot said:
Well said. Just because you can doesn\'t mean you should. With each incident we here in Australia respect our gun laws more. The needless loss is so sad.
November 9th, 2018 06:05
Debsspot said:
Well said. Just because you can doesn\'t mean you should. With each incident we here in Australia respect our gun laws more. The needless loss is so sad.
November 9th, 2018 06:05
coming out
dusk arising said:
Long may your heart and mind be free to be what you are. For all the struggles and torment youve endured, you are surely most deserving to be free.
October 11th, 2018 15:08
dusk arising said:
Long may your heart and mind be free to be what you are. For all the struggles and torment youve endured, you are surely most deserving to be free.
October 11th, 2018 15:08
coming out
Laura🌻 said:
Boaz,
I applaud you for this beautiful poem!
It is your right as a human being to enjoy your life and be happy!
Thank you for sharing!
HappyNational Coming Out Day!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 14:00
Laura🌻 said:
Boaz,
I applaud you for this beautiful poem!
It is your right as a human being to enjoy your life and be happy!
Thank you for sharing!
HappyNational Coming Out Day!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 14:00
leon
dusk arising said:
Fun writing. I believe everyone should write like this about their lovers. In years to come you can look at the stuff you wrote and those memories will come back fresh instead of just letting the years fade them away.
Please comment on my poem today.
July 11th, 2018 21:39
dusk arising said:
Fun writing. I believe everyone should write like this about their lovers. In years to come you can look at the stuff you wrote and those memories will come back fresh instead of just letting the years fade them away.
Please comment on my poem today.
July 11th, 2018 21:39
bright
A.C Doomcraft said:
we are all just emotion and expression our bodies arent who we are its our minds and we express that through the body it is but a tool for us to express
Im too ill informed to be completely for or against transgender but i believe nobody has a right to tell another how to live sadly our society has become one of blind opinions hopefully one day all this will be a bad dream and we can all live as we please without being judged
June 23rd, 2018 11:56
A.C Doomcraft said:
we are all just emotion and expression our bodies arent who we are its our minds and we express that through the body it is but a tool for us to express
Im too ill informed to be completely for or against transgender but i believe nobody has a right to tell another how to live sadly our society has become one of blind opinions hopefully one day all this will be a bad dream and we can all live as we please without being judged
June 23rd, 2018 11:56
store-bought serotonin
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
sad thing when we have to \'\' rely \'\' on \'\' medication \'\' . you speak some very true words... medication does not \'\' fix\'\' that which is wrong in our minds, it helps us to feel a bit better and to maybe feel more able to cope, if only we could take the meds for a little bit and then our illness ceases to exist.
i can read your frustration at having to take \'\' pills \'\'\' and having to deal with a mental illness which never goes away .
its strange , some people have no understanding at all about \'\' mental illness\'\' responses like get out in the sun and you will feel a lot better , nature is the cure.. unfortunately some people do not understand.
you expressed yourself in a good way
May 11th, 2018 02:56
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
sad thing when we have to \'\' rely \'\' on \'\' medication \'\' . you speak some very true words... medication does not \'\' fix\'\' that which is wrong in our minds, it helps us to feel a bit better and to maybe feel more able to cope, if only we could take the meds for a little bit and then our illness ceases to exist.
i can read your frustration at having to take \'\' pills \'\'\' and having to deal with a mental illness which never goes away .
its strange , some people have no understanding at all about \'\' mental illness\'\' responses like get out in the sun and you will feel a lot better , nature is the cure.. unfortunately some people do not understand.
you expressed yourself in a good way
May 11th, 2018 02:56
a well written father
onepauly said:
at least you can dream.
and write.
you would not be the only one.
May 3rd, 2018 12:32
onepauly said:
at least you can dream.
and write.
you would not be the only one.
May 3rd, 2018 12:32
a well written father
marlenawood said:
Beautiful writing love very deep an emotional
May 3rd, 2018 07:42
marlenawood said:
Beautiful writing love very deep an emotional
May 3rd, 2018 07:42
edges
florence arla said:
\"I don\'t want something already made but something still being tortuosely made\"
As always, eye-opening and you\'re so very brave to let yourself be so very vulnerable. Amazing.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:57
florence arla said:
\"I don\'t want something already made but something still being tortuosely made\"
As always, eye-opening and you\'re so very brave to let yourself be so very vulnerable. Amazing.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:57
oh, sweet memory
florence arla said:
I don\'t know how the hell you managed to capture the very feeling of nostalgia but you did it, lovely, with a flourish. Your poems are becoming a favourite of mine. Sorry to be relentlessly stalking your poems but their tone feels familiar even though I\'ve never seen it before and the skill it takes to do that is incredible.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:51
florence arla said:
I don\'t know how the hell you managed to capture the very feeling of nostalgia but you did it, lovely, with a flourish. Your poems are becoming a favourite of mine. Sorry to be relentlessly stalking your poems but their tone feels familiar even though I\'ve never seen it before and the skill it takes to do that is incredible.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:51
mi amor
florence arla said:
Beautiful imagery. There is a book by Clarice Lispector called Água Viva spilling over the go in with incredible imagery (just a reccommendation) and your poem reminds me of one of my favourite lines in there:
\"I want a cloak woven from threads of solar gold... I open the black umbrella and throw myself into a feast of dancing where stars sparkle\"
And reading your poems make me feel the same way as I felt reading these quotes. You have a natural gift for it.
-Flo
April 30th, 2018 11:45
florence arla said:
Beautiful imagery. There is a book by Clarice Lispector called Água Viva spilling over the go in with incredible imagery (just a reccommendation) and your poem reminds me of one of my favourite lines in there:
\"I want a cloak woven from threads of solar gold... I open the black umbrella and throw myself into a feast of dancing where stars sparkle\"
And reading your poems make me feel the same way as I felt reading these quotes. You have a natural gift for it.
-Flo
April 30th, 2018 11:45
to: simon
florence arla said:
Incredible. Your words flow like a mountain spring, a rhythm like that is hard to achieve so I applaud you👏
Thank you for this. Absolutely lovely.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:39
florence arla said:
Incredible. Your words flow like a mountain spring, a rhythm like that is hard to achieve so I applaud you👏
Thank you for this. Absolutely lovely.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:39
memory of a life once lived
marlenawood said:
Takes a lot of courage an pride within yourself to write such an I\'m proud of you good work keep it up love
April 26th, 2018 09:01
marlenawood said:
Takes a lot of courage an pride within yourself to write such an I\'m proud of you good work keep it up love
April 26th, 2018 09:01
courageous on accident
marlenawood said:
Wow that\'s so deep yet emotional because I know how cruel the world is an karma is a bitch so I hope they make sure she/he is beautiful! Love this babe
April 26th, 2018 09:00
marlenawood said:
Wow that\'s so deep yet emotional because I know how cruel the world is an karma is a bitch so I hope they make sure she/he is beautiful! Love this babe
April 26th, 2018 09:00
memory of a life once lived
Christina Lancon said:
Very nice. Life can be so cruel making for a sad existence. Life can be so beautiful when we are finally, truly able to exist.
April 25th, 2018 15:30
Christina Lancon said:
Very nice. Life can be so cruel making for a sad existence. Life can be so beautiful when we are finally, truly able to exist.
April 25th, 2018 15:30
Discomfort
onepauly said:
be patient, things always change. to put it another way, time is a great healer.
April 20th, 2018 11:36
onepauly said:
be patient, things always change. to put it another way, time is a great healer.
April 20th, 2018 11:36
mi amor
Aislinn Wilson said:
i was really shocked by how vulnerable this is. it\'s really beautiful
April 11th, 2018 11:24
Aislinn Wilson said:
i was really shocked by how vulnerable this is. it\'s really beautiful
April 11th, 2018 11:24
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