Comments received on poems by queer-with-a-pen
hold (me) tight
FredPeyer said:
Boaz, a very well written poem with an important message. Would be nice to have this one posted in the New Yorker or some other influental newspaper. It really brings home the point that we have to be more accepting of the differences in all of us. My wife is Chinese, and in the little village in Switzerland where I grew up, at that time they looked at her as if she was an alien.
August 15th, 2017 02:14
FredPeyer said:
Boaz, a very well written poem with an important message. Would be nice to have this one posted in the New Yorker or some other influental newspaper. It really brings home the point that we have to be more accepting of the differences in all of us. My wife is Chinese, and in the little village in Switzerland where I grew up, at that time they looked at her as if she was an alien.
August 15th, 2017 02:14
hold (me) tight
Frank Prem said:
Fine exploration here, Q. Good work, I think.
August 14th, 2017 23:54
Frank Prem said:
Fine exploration here, Q. Good work, I think.
August 14th, 2017 23:54
counting by even numbers
orchidee said:
Well, it\'s ironic maybe, that 40 is an EVEN number, if even numbers are meant to be good for you?! And yet it was good, in that you survived. A good write Q.
August 13th, 2017 02:19
orchidee said:
Well, it\'s ironic maybe, that 40 is an EVEN number, if even numbers are meant to be good for you?! And yet it was good, in that you survived. A good write Q.
August 13th, 2017 02:19
counting by even numbers
FredPeyer said:
Very good and very emotional writing. You do put it all out there. I am glad you wrote a comment about your poem and am happy for you that you are better and safe now.
August 13th, 2017 00:54
FredPeyer said:
Very good and very emotional writing. You do put it all out there. I am glad you wrote a comment about your poem and am happy for you that you are better and safe now.
August 13th, 2017 00:54
always been
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, with much emotion and understanding. Now I get at least an inkling on how it must feel to be trapped in a different body.
Thank you for sharing.
August 12th, 2017 12:14
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, with much emotion and understanding. Now I get at least an inkling on how it must feel to be trapped in a different body.
Thank you for sharing.
August 12th, 2017 12:14
drunk texts, unsent
FredPeyer said:
A little bit rambling, but I like it. Well written!
August 7th, 2017 01:30
FredPeyer said:
A little bit rambling, but I like it. Well written!
August 7th, 2017 01:30
liar liar
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong, sad, heart-felt introductory poem, Sebastian! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more work from you.
August 1st, 2017 08:47
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong, sad, heart-felt introductory poem, Sebastian! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more work from you.
August 1st, 2017 08:47
liar liar
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site Sebastian. Wow, that is quite a piece of work you present as your first poem. Very impressive, written from the heart. I cannot even start to imagine how you must have felt, growing up, but I could feel the pain in your words. Very well written. Would like to read more from you.
August 1st, 2017 02:03
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site Sebastian. Wow, that is quite a piece of work you present as your first poem. Very impressive, written from the heart. I cannot even start to imagine how you must have felt, growing up, but I could feel the pain in your words. Very well written. Would like to read more from you.
August 1st, 2017 02:03
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