Comments received on poems by lasergraph
HARVEY AND IRMA
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem. Now as you say, time to get busy! We need to be able to send relief or donate for those of us who can. What awful tragedies. But I loved the poem!
September 14th, 2017 09:09
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem. Now as you say, time to get busy! We need to be able to send relief or donate for those of us who can. What awful tragedies. But I loved the poem!
September 14th, 2017 09:09
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I am and always have been an early riser but now having been retired for over five years I can nap anytime anywhere.
September 13th, 2017 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I am and always have been an early riser but now having been retired for over five years I can nap anytime anywhere.
September 13th, 2017 23:55
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
drchito fl said:
A lot of thoughts to ponder before going to sleep. Well written, my friend!
Drchito fl
September 13th, 2017 19:53
drchito fl said:
A lot of thoughts to ponder before going to sleep. Well written, my friend!
Drchito fl
September 13th, 2017 19:53
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like you need the Dream Police to re-direct the traffic to a detour. Sweet dreams my friend. ; )
September 13th, 2017 19:14
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like you need the Dream Police to re-direct the traffic to a detour. Sweet dreams my friend. ; )
September 13th, 2017 19:14
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
Christina8 said:
This is such a well written poem! It is so relatable. Going into the faves!
September 13th, 2017 18:49
Christina8 said:
This is such a well written poem! It is so relatable. Going into the faves!
September 13th, 2017 18:49
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
myself and me said:
I shall read this again before I go to bed. It drove me sleepy.
Really nice read.
September 13th, 2017 13:14
myself and me said:
I shall read this again before I go to bed. It drove me sleepy.
Really nice read.
September 13th, 2017 13:14
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
Louis Gibbs said:
Sleep, our respite from this dark dream. Dreams, our contact with reality. Thought-provoking poem, lg!
September 13th, 2017 12:17
Louis Gibbs said:
Sleep, our respite from this dark dream. Dreams, our contact with reality. Thought-provoking poem, lg!
September 13th, 2017 12:17
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
orchidee said:
A good write laser. You dozed off after writing this?! lol.
September 13th, 2017 11:56
orchidee said:
A good write laser. You dozed off after writing this?! lol.
September 13th, 2017 11:56
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
FredPeyer said:
Excellent writing! By the time I finished it I was snoring! (Just kidding) Love your poem!
September 13th, 2017 11:40
FredPeyer said:
Excellent writing! By the time I finished it I was snoring! (Just kidding) Love your poem!
September 13th, 2017 11:40
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
WL Schuett said:
A fine description, I liked this a lot... well done
September 13th, 2017 10:56
WL Schuett said:
A fine description, I liked this a lot... well done
September 13th, 2017 10:56
VISIONS OF SLUMBER
Mugsdaddy said:
Well thank you... Now I need a nap Mugs-damn-Daddy
September 13th, 2017 08:59
Mugsdaddy said:
Well thank you... Now I need a nap Mugs-damn-Daddy
September 13th, 2017 08:59
BUCKET
Mandi said:
I absolutely love the structure of this poem. Your words are equally amazing. ❤ You never know how much time you have, I always hope to make the most with mine.😊
September 13th, 2017 04:20
Mandi said:
I absolutely love the structure of this poem. Your words are equally amazing. ❤ You never know how much time you have, I always hope to make the most with mine.😊
September 13th, 2017 04:20
BUCKET
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, every moment is precious, use them all.
September 13th, 2017 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, every moment is precious, use them all.
September 13th, 2017 01:07
BUCKET
Mugsdaddy said:
Sadly I took from this time doesn\'t mean enough until we run out of it. Great piece.
Mugsdaddy
September 12th, 2017 22:19
Mugsdaddy said:
Sadly I took from this time doesn\'t mean enough until we run out of it. Great piece.
Mugsdaddy
September 12th, 2017 22:19
BUCKET
myself and me said:
To me, I shall create the list ASAP.
Thank you for sharing.
September 12th, 2017 13:52
myself and me said:
To me, I shall create the list ASAP.
Thank you for sharing.
September 12th, 2017 13:52
BUCKET
Simple-Man87 said:
\"the chances may just fade away\"
I loved that line. Very true. We miss 100% of the chances we don\'t take.
September 12th, 2017 13:28
Simple-Man87 said:
\"the chances may just fade away\"
I loved that line. Very true. We miss 100% of the chances we don\'t take.
September 12th, 2017 13:28
BUCKET
FredPeyer said:
Lasergraph, your excellent poem speaks to my heart. Maybe it has something to do with age? Never mind, am trying to cross off as many items on that bucket list as I can, as quickly as I can!
September 12th, 2017 11:55
FredPeyer said:
Lasergraph, your excellent poem speaks to my heart. Maybe it has something to do with age? Never mind, am trying to cross off as many items on that bucket list as I can, as quickly as I can!
September 12th, 2017 11:55
OUR AUTUMN HOME
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, autumn is my favourite season as well.
September 12th, 2017 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, autumn is my favourite season as well.
September 12th, 2017 00:31
OUR AUTUMN HOME
myself and me said:
I love autumn too.
You paint such a beautiful autumn in your poem.
Wonderful.
September 11th, 2017 19:52
myself and me said:
I love autumn too.
You paint such a beautiful autumn in your poem.
Wonderful.
September 11th, 2017 19:52
OUR AUTUMN HOME
FredPeyer said:
A great ode to Fall, lasergraph! Fall used to be my favorite season too.
September 11th, 2017 19:49
FredPeyer said:
A great ode to Fall, lasergraph! Fall used to be my favorite season too.
September 11th, 2017 19:49
OUR AUTUMN HOME
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful piece. I am a winter soul, thank you so much for reminding me my time is near.
Mugsdaddy
September 11th, 2017 16:00
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful piece. I am a winter soul, thank you so much for reminding me my time is near.
Mugsdaddy
September 11th, 2017 16:00
OUR AUTUMN HOME
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine poetic description of my favorite season as well. Thanks, lg!
September 11th, 2017 15:59
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine poetic description of my favorite season as well. Thanks, lg!
September 11th, 2017 15:59
GOOD GUYS WON
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write. I was always one of the \'Good Guys\' as we fought against all those \'Baddies\' back in our wonderful childhood days.
September 9th, 2017 11:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write. I was always one of the \'Good Guys\' as we fought against all those \'Baddies\' back in our wonderful childhood days.
September 9th, 2017 11:06
GOOD GUYS WON
myself and me said:
\"Life was simple long ago,\"
Life was simple then because we were simple.
Fine writing.
September 8th, 2017 21:26
myself and me said:
\"Life was simple long ago,\"
Life was simple then because we were simple.
Fine writing.
September 8th, 2017 21:26
GOOD GUYS WON
Louis Gibbs said:
A great reflection on the time in our lives that we still knew we were creating our own reality. Well done, lg!
September 8th, 2017 12:13
Louis Gibbs said:
A great reflection on the time in our lives that we still knew we were creating our own reality. Well done, lg!
September 8th, 2017 12:13
GOOD GUYS WON
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful--reminiscing about your childhood days. Before all this technology. Times have certainly changed but some things hopefully never will. Great piece, I enjoyed reading!
September 8th, 2017 10:35
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful--reminiscing about your childhood days. Before all this technology. Times have certainly changed but some things hopefully never will. Great piece, I enjoyed reading!
September 8th, 2017 10:35
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