Comments received on poems by lasergraph
GOOD GUYS WON
poetboy123 said:
Spectacular piece! I interpreted it as how when we are children we are exposed to naive ideas of good and evil. As if it\'s always black and white, and not a shift of goals and different character traits that define us.
September 8th, 2017 10:28
poetboy123 said:
Spectacular piece! I interpreted it as how when we are children we are exposed to naive ideas of good and evil. As if it\'s always black and white, and not a shift of goals and different character traits that define us.
September 8th, 2017 10:28
WRITING
Accidental Poet said:
I too like to write of writing poetry. Oh how it comes together. This is a great piece lasergraph. ; )
September 7th, 2017 19:50
Accidental Poet said:
I too like to write of writing poetry. Oh how it comes together. This is a great piece lasergraph. ; )
September 7th, 2017 19:50
WRITING
FredPeyer said:
lasergraph, I truly like this poem, or as you say \'description of process\'. And while you are right that novels come from the brain, without heart they are nothing but a series of words.
You are an excellent writer!
September 7th, 2017 19:37
FredPeyer said:
lasergraph, I truly like this poem, or as you say \'description of process\'. And while you are right that novels come from the brain, without heart they are nothing but a series of words.
You are an excellent writer!
September 7th, 2017 19:37
WRITING
myself and me said:
A nice writing about \"writing\". Please let us know when you finish your novel.
September 7th, 2017 13:14
myself and me said:
A nice writing about \"writing\". Please let us know when you finish your novel.
September 7th, 2017 13:14
WRITING
Louis Gibbs said:
To the author, \"The end\" means, \"What to write next?\' We described, lg!
September 7th, 2017 08:36
Louis Gibbs said:
To the author, \"The end\" means, \"What to write next?\' We described, lg!
September 7th, 2017 08:36
ODE\' TO COFFEE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and tribute to that wonderful bean that once it has been ground, had hot water filtered through it becomes that nectar that wakens my senses.
September 7th, 2017 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and tribute to that wonderful bean that once it has been ground, had hot water filtered through it becomes that nectar that wakens my senses.
September 7th, 2017 00:33
ODE\' TO COFFEE
myself and me said:
Coffee, can not resist the smell.
\"There isn\'t many morning ills,
That coffee can not cure.\"
Not only it is good for morning ills, it cure other ill too.
Love this.
September 6th, 2017 20:15
myself and me said:
Coffee, can not resist the smell.
\"There isn\'t many morning ills,
That coffee can not cure.\"
Not only it is good for morning ills, it cure other ill too.
Love this.
September 6th, 2017 20:15
ODE\' TO COFFEE
Accidental Poet said:
Ok, I gotta be the weirdo in the bunch. Never cared for coffee myself. Orange juice gets my motor running in the morning. And if it\'s cold out, a hot chocolate is the ticket for me. Great write lasergraph. ; )
September 6th, 2017 18:16
Accidental Poet said:
Ok, I gotta be the weirdo in the bunch. Never cared for coffee myself. Orange juice gets my motor running in the morning. And if it\'s cold out, a hot chocolate is the ticket for me. Great write lasergraph. ; )
September 6th, 2017 18:16
ODE\' TO COFFEE
dusk arising said:
Its all been said by my fellow coffee quaffing poetic colleagues here. The writing tho is excellent.
September 6th, 2017 16:41
dusk arising said:
Its all been said by my fellow coffee quaffing poetic colleagues here. The writing tho is excellent.
September 6th, 2017 16:41
ODE\' TO COFFEE
poetboy123 said:
Indeed, lighthearted poetry is just as good, stupendous write, though I do prefer water myself.
September 6th, 2017 12:12
poetboy123 said:
Indeed, lighthearted poetry is just as good, stupendous write, though I do prefer water myself.
September 6th, 2017 12:12
ODE\' TO COFFEE
WriteBeLight said:
I agree Edward! Nice ode to coffee. First thing I do in the morning is make a pot. :) Great beverage.
September 6th, 2017 12:06
WriteBeLight said:
I agree Edward! Nice ode to coffee. First thing I do in the morning is make a pot. :) Great beverage.
September 6th, 2017 12:06
ODE\' TO COFFEE
FredPeyer said:
LG, something else we have in common! My eyes are not really open, my mind not really awake, my bodily functions on slow motion, until......YES, my first coffee!
September 6th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
LG, something else we have in common! My eyes are not really open, my mind not really awake, my bodily functions on slow motion, until......YES, my first coffee!
September 6th, 2017 11:34
ODE\' TO COFFEE
Michael Edwards said:
Coffee before lunch and tea after and never the twain shall meet. They do both have to be properly made - correctly filtered and not forced - using real tea leaves and made in a pot. Also they have to be savoured. I still totally fail to understand why people buy coffee and instead of sitting enjoying it walk down the road drinking it as they go - mind you such coffee is usually made by Starbucks et al who haven\'t a clue. Love the write lasergraph.
September 6th, 2017 10:19
Michael Edwards said:
Coffee before lunch and tea after and never the twain shall meet. They do both have to be properly made - correctly filtered and not forced - using real tea leaves and made in a pot. Also they have to be savoured. I still totally fail to understand why people buy coffee and instead of sitting enjoying it walk down the road drinking it as they go - mind you such coffee is usually made by Starbucks et al who haven\'t a clue. Love the write lasergraph.
September 6th, 2017 10:19
ODE\' TO COFFEE
Louis Gibbs said:
Part of my morning ritual, for sure. Good write, lg!
September 6th, 2017 08:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Part of my morning ritual, for sure. Good write, lg!
September 6th, 2017 08:42
WISHING
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true but I had a good life and will go on enjoying my ageing years.
September 6th, 2017 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true but I had a good life and will go on enjoying my ageing years.
September 6th, 2017 00:54
WISHING
FredPeyer said:
Love your great, well written poem very much lasergraph. At 69 I know from personal experience what you are so eloquently talking about. While I do remember the good things from the past, I am looking forward to the next 30 years!
September 5th, 2017 21:39
FredPeyer said:
Love your great, well written poem very much lasergraph. At 69 I know from personal experience what you are so eloquently talking about. While I do remember the good things from the past, I am looking forward to the next 30 years!
September 5th, 2017 21:39
WISHING
Accidental Poet said:
Great poem lasergraph. I remember when I was in my teen years, I couldn\'t imagine being 40 or older. It seemed so very far away. I wasted my time on the present, unaware of how fast the time would pass. Now I\'m fast approaching 61 and I\'m always looking in that rear view mirror it seems. The things I did or didn\'t do and why. But...the past is a great teacher of life. ; )
September 5th, 2017 19:16
Accidental Poet said:
Great poem lasergraph. I remember when I was in my teen years, I couldn\'t imagine being 40 or older. It seemed so very far away. I wasted my time on the present, unaware of how fast the time would pass. Now I\'m fast approaching 61 and I\'m always looking in that rear view mirror it seems. The things I did or didn\'t do and why. But...the past is a great teacher of life. ; )
September 5th, 2017 19:16
WISHING
myself and me said:
\"And I wish I had them back again,
They went away far too fast.\"
Me too. Feel the same way.
Nice writing.
September 5th, 2017 17:57
myself and me said:
\"And I wish I had them back again,
They went away far too fast.\"
Me too. Feel the same way.
Nice writing.
September 5th, 2017 17:57
ANOTHER TIME (Grand daughter story)
John Prophet said:
Very nice write from a proud grand papa...
September 5th, 2017 17:13
John Prophet said:
Very nice write from a proud grand papa...
September 5th, 2017 17:13
WISHING
LM1005 said:
I\'ve often thought as a child how I wished I were an adult, and now being an adult I wish youth back.
September 5th, 2017 15:45
LM1005 said:
I\'ve often thought as a child how I wished I were an adult, and now being an adult I wish youth back.
September 5th, 2017 15:45
WISHING
Michael Edwards said:
I rarely look back but how I would like back all those days - there is so much I still want to do despite my ancient frame - love the poem.
September 5th, 2017 15:41
Michael Edwards said:
I rarely look back but how I would like back all those days - there is so much I still want to do despite my ancient frame - love the poem.
September 5th, 2017 15:41
WORKING MOMS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so true. So many mums out there have no rest but carry on withut any rancour.
September 5th, 2017 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so true. So many mums out there have no rest but carry on withut any rancour.
September 5th, 2017 01:32
WORKING MOMS
Michael Edwards said:
My mum, my wife, my granddaughters - the circle continues - enjoyed this lasergraph.
September 4th, 2017 23:25
Michael Edwards said:
My mum, my wife, my granddaughters - the circle continues - enjoyed this lasergraph.
September 4th, 2017 23:25
WORKING MOMS
Seek said:
Even BEFORE getting a job, moms already have a full time job. A wonderful tribute to all mothers. Great piece!
September 4th, 2017 19:52
Seek said:
Even BEFORE getting a job, moms already have a full time job. A wonderful tribute to all mothers. Great piece!
September 4th, 2017 19:52
WORKING MOMS
myself and me said:
Working moms work 7/24. That\'s the hardest job on earth.
You wrote so nice.
September 4th, 2017 19:22
myself and me said:
Working moms work 7/24. That\'s the hardest job on earth.
You wrote so nice.
September 4th, 2017 19:22
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