Comments received on poems by lasergraph
AS SUMMER FADES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Autumn is my favourite month and I look forward to those days where the sun is shining and the frost is on the ground.
September 2nd, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Autumn is my favourite month and I look forward to those days where the sun is shining and the frost is on the ground.
September 2nd, 2017 01:00
AS SUMMER FADES
sue.evans said:
Lovely observation - captured the seasonal shift perfectly!
September 1st, 2017 13:02
sue.evans said:
Lovely observation - captured the seasonal shift perfectly!
September 1st, 2017 13:02
AS SUMMER FADES
myself and me said:
\"They can get Christmas on your mind,
As they battle for your buck.\"
Yes, they wish Christmas for every month.
can\'t believe summer is over. Let\'s enjoy autumn, and leave the battle for the greedy.
September 1st, 2017 12:42
myself and me said:
\"They can get Christmas on your mind,
As they battle for your buck.\"
Yes, they wish Christmas for every month.
can\'t believe summer is over. Let\'s enjoy autumn, and leave the battle for the greedy.
September 1st, 2017 12:42
AS SUMMER FADES
Heather T said:
I\'m excited to see autumn, but stores make me crazy putting holidays ahead in my face. I love to slow sip each season and enjoy each sight and sound. Very appropriate write, sir.
September 1st, 2017 10:32
Heather T said:
I\'m excited to see autumn, but stores make me crazy putting holidays ahead in my face. I love to slow sip each season and enjoy each sight and sound. Very appropriate write, sir.
September 1st, 2017 10:32
THE LAST DAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so true, so many people are too busy worrying about what might happen to take time to look around them.
September 1st, 2017 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so true, so many people are too busy worrying about what might happen to take time to look around them.
September 1st, 2017 00:01
THE LAST DAY
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, when our numbers up, it\'s up. My problem is I do more adding to my bucket list than I do checking off what I\'ve done. Great write laser. ; )
August 31st, 2017 19:37
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, when our numbers up, it\'s up. My problem is I do more adding to my bucket list than I do checking off what I\'ve done. Great write laser. ; )
August 31st, 2017 19:37
THE LAST DAY
myself and me said:
Live your day, don\'t plan your day.
A deep topic illustrate in a easy way. Great poem.
August 31st, 2017 13:57
myself and me said:
Live your day, don\'t plan your day.
A deep topic illustrate in a easy way. Great poem.
August 31st, 2017 13:57
THE LAST DAY
orchidee said:
You lived a lot of days, writing this in 1015?? heehee
August 31st, 2017 09:18
orchidee said:
You lived a lot of days, writing this in 1015?? heehee
August 31st, 2017 09:18
ANOTHER TIME (Grand daughter story)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write about special times. As the saying goes \"If I had known how much fun grandchildren are I would have had them first\".
August 31st, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write about special times. As the saying goes \"If I had known how much fun grandchildren are I would have had them first\".
August 31st, 2017 01:23
ANOTHER TIME (Grand daughter story)
myself and me said:
\"Her world is filled with simple things\". It\'s the simplicity that makes them happy and pure.
Lovely and thoughtful poem.
August 30th, 2017 14:07
myself and me said:
\"Her world is filled with simple things\". It\'s the simplicity that makes them happy and pure.
Lovely and thoughtful poem.
August 30th, 2017 14:07
ANOTHER TIME (Grand daughter story)
WL Schuett said:
Only a Grandfather can know , a nice poem of innocence, well done
August 30th, 2017 13:17
WL Schuett said:
Only a Grandfather can know , a nice poem of innocence, well done
August 30th, 2017 13:17
ANOTHER TIME (Grand daughter story)
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing more radiantly beautiful than a little girl greeting her world in wonder! So well put, lg.
August 30th, 2017 08:50
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing more radiantly beautiful than a little girl greeting her world in wonder! So well put, lg.
August 30th, 2017 08:50
MEMORIES OF YOUTH
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true lg. We went out just after breakfast and joined our friends and played all day using that thing called imagination. Or exploring our local area, we never came to any harm and learnt a great deal about nature and ourselves.
August 30th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true lg. We went out just after breakfast and joined our friends and played all day using that thing called imagination. Or exploring our local area, we never came to any harm and learnt a great deal about nature and ourselves.
August 30th, 2017 01:10
MEMORIES OF YOUTH
Accidental Poet said:
You must be the brother I didn\'t know I had. This is my childhood as well. We played baseball, football, hide-and-go-seek, rode our bikes. We were outdoors all day long. Miss all those days. Great write my friend. ; )
August 29th, 2017 18:59
Accidental Poet said:
You must be the brother I didn\'t know I had. This is my childhood as well. We played baseball, football, hide-and-go-seek, rode our bikes. We were outdoors all day long. Miss all those days. Great write my friend. ; )
August 29th, 2017 18:59
MEMORIES OF YOUTH
malubotelho said:
Great writing L.G. Really enjoyed reading. Awesome. I too lived like that. I enjoyed very much my youthful time.
August 29th, 2017 15:49
malubotelho said:
Great writing L.G. Really enjoyed reading. Awesome. I too lived like that. I enjoyed very much my youthful time.
August 29th, 2017 15:49
MEMORIES OF YOUTH
myself and me said:
\"We were taught that life\'s not easy,
We knew it wasn\'t always fair.
Some people had more than we had,
We just didn\'t care.\"
Today\'s young kids always whine for fair and more.
Hard work indeed kept depression away.
Very well written memories.
August 29th, 2017 14:36
myself and me said:
\"We were taught that life\'s not easy,
We knew it wasn\'t always fair.
Some people had more than we had,
We just didn\'t care.\"
Today\'s young kids always whine for fair and more.
Hard work indeed kept depression away.
Very well written memories.
August 29th, 2017 14:36
MEMORIES OF YOUTH
Louis Gibbs said:
We lived across the street from a huge cornfield and would get lost in it, when we weren\'t climbing every tree in the neighborhood, or walking down to the river to fish. Kids miss so much today! Well done poem, lg!
August 29th, 2017 09:18
Louis Gibbs said:
We lived across the street from a huge cornfield and would get lost in it, when we weren\'t climbing every tree in the neighborhood, or walking down to the river to fish. Kids miss so much today! Well done poem, lg!
August 29th, 2017 09:18
INSPIRATION
Michael Edwards said:
I guess we\'ve all been there - well expressed.
August 29th, 2017 00:52
Michael Edwards said:
I guess we\'ve all been there - well expressed.
August 29th, 2017 00:52
INSPIRATION
Louis Gibbs said:
At times it seems my muse is asleep. I just keep hounding her until she gives me something to shut me up. I can appreciate your poem, laser!
August 28th, 2017 20:53
Louis Gibbs said:
At times it seems my muse is asleep. I just keep hounding her until she gives me something to shut me up. I can appreciate your poem, laser!
August 28th, 2017 20:53
INSPIRATION
myself and me said:
I already see the sprout of your seed. A nice writing.
August 28th, 2017 20:38
myself and me said:
I already see the sprout of your seed. A nice writing.
August 28th, 2017 20:38
INSPIRATION
ron parrish aka wordman said:
but tet it grew into a blooming flower
August 28th, 2017 20:37
ron parrish aka wordman said:
but tet it grew into a blooming flower
August 28th, 2017 20:37
OUR LITTLE HOUSE
myself and me said:
\"It\'s not brick and mortar, that makes you a home.
It is the memories it holds inside,
It is those memories that make your house,
Much more than a place you reside.\"
It says all. House is just a structure, home is where your heart hold.
Lovely.
August 25th, 2017 21:35
myself and me said:
\"It\'s not brick and mortar, that makes you a home.
It is the memories it holds inside,
It is those memories that make your house,
Much more than a place you reside.\"
It says all. House is just a structure, home is where your heart hold.
Lovely.
August 25th, 2017 21:35
OUR LITTLE HOUSE
malubotelho said:
Luck you that got to keep it your home for so long. Beautiful writing. You draw a picture of your family life with this poem.
August 25th, 2017 14:52
malubotelho said:
Luck you that got to keep it your home for so long. Beautiful writing. You draw a picture of your family life with this poem.
August 25th, 2017 14:52
AGE : (Perspective)
sue.evans said:
I remember those same thoughts and feel the same as you now. Lovely poem and so true.
August 25th, 2017 09:23
sue.evans said:
I remember those same thoughts and feel the same as you now. Lovely poem and so true.
August 25th, 2017 09:23
THE LIGHTHOUSE
sue.evans said:
I love this poem - whenever we visit the coast - never far away in U.K.! - I like to see a good old fashioned lighthouse. Synonymous with the coast.
August 25th, 2017 09:21
sue.evans said:
I love this poem - whenever we visit the coast - never far away in U.K.! - I like to see a good old fashioned lighthouse. Synonymous with the coast.
August 25th, 2017 09:21
AGE : (Perspective)
myself and me said:
\"Age is just a perception of,
Your own point of view.
Others may not see the same,
In people that you do.\"
Very well said. When I was at high school, one teacher said, thirty years pass by just like a snap. I did not believe and didn\'t understand either. Now I would say the same to the young fellas.
Nice poem.
August 24th, 2017 20:41
myself and me said:
\"Age is just a perception of,
Your own point of view.
Others may not see the same,
In people that you do.\"
Very well said. When I was at high school, one teacher said, thirty years pass by just like a snap. I did not believe and didn\'t understand either. Now I would say the same to the young fellas.
Nice poem.
August 24th, 2017 20:41
AGE : (Perspective)
dusk arising said:
I hate the shop window reflection but my eyes look out young. Nice writing.
August 24th, 2017 17:53
dusk arising said:
I hate the shop window reflection but my eyes look out young. Nice writing.
August 24th, 2017 17:53
AGE : (Perspective)
malubotelho said:
Very interesting writing. I feel the same way. We only realize that we got old when looking at our friends or looking at the mirror. It is funny that the other day I was at the groceries store and I\'ve noticed some older guys trying to flirt with me and I thought to myself: well I\'m at that age when the old guys think: oh! This is a cute older lady. Maybe she is available. I laughed at the thought. Where all the strong big muscles guys went?
August 24th, 2017 09:40
malubotelho said:
Very interesting writing. I feel the same way. We only realize that we got old when looking at our friends or looking at the mirror. It is funny that the other day I was at the groceries store and I\'ve noticed some older guys trying to flirt with me and I thought to myself: well I\'m at that age when the old guys think: oh! This is a cute older lady. Maybe she is available. I laughed at the thought. Where all the strong big muscles guys went?
August 24th, 2017 09:40
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