Comments received on poems by dusk arising



dark places
MDStone said:

Exquisite, Dusk. The scenes of life seem to flow from your fingertips, the feelings and emotions jumping onto page. As always, thank you for sharing with us.

June 27th, 2022 07:58

dark places
Fay Slimm. said:

Such inventive appeal in this penned detail of \"victimhood\" dear Dusk - you nailed those dark places and what light lies around them so well.

June 27th, 2022 03:01

dark places
Teddy.15 said:

This is a masterpiece of emotion. Kudos dear Dusk. 💖

June 27th, 2022 03:00

dark places
Goldfinch60 said:

Dark emotive words d a.

Andy

June 27th, 2022 01:48

dark places
Raven333 said:

interesting read, I definitely felt the shadows and darkness. enjoyed it

June 27th, 2022 01:38

dark places
Saxon Crow said:

Stevie Rai a much better musician than Hendrix. A very dark and brooding poem today Dusk. Great stuff

June 27th, 2022 00:30

an old moan
kivous said:

Wonderful plus I guess you have these years of wisdom to enjoy this good old life wisely :)

June 24th, 2022 11:42

an old moan
Poetic Dan said:

Boom and there is a fresh hot of the morning, I know of so many ages that didn\'t get to ride this ride for as long as they should or maybe its all chance!

Whatever the case, we have to be glad to have ours! Even when the bones start to crumble, this was and is one hell of a rumble....

Good to see you my friend and thanks again for always keeping it real!
Much peace and respect

June 23rd, 2022 01:34

an old moan
Morwenna said:

Absolutely yes. Me and my fellow wrinklies make a timed space for the Organ Recital and then disallow any more of it. Happy to be here, aches and all. More than happy.

June 22nd, 2022 16:24

an old moan
Raven333 said:

I liked this poem, it was nicely written and told the truth. myself have grunts and groins my daughter and grandchildren make fun. but I am blessed to be in this world.

June 22nd, 2022 15:11

an old moan
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well said, dear poet.
I told my grand children that much of what they study as history, to me was current events.

June 22nd, 2022 09:20

an old moan
Teddy.15 said:

Wonderful and so true, instead of commiserations on my next birthday, I always think of those who were gone far to early,even my dear mum was.only 64. Thank you Dusk, appreciate being alive is something we should all do even in dark times. 💖

June 22nd, 2022 02:37

an old moan
jarcher54 said:

I pledged to myself never to grumble about it... the neuropathy, the eyesight, the loose teeth, the skin splotches, the sciatica, the aching thumb, the twitching eyelid, the heartburn, the ulcer, the itchy spots, the aching arches, the arthritic toe, the A1C, the balding, the tinnitus... everyone says I seem so youthful... but its all a lie. I just wait till I\'m alone to moan.

June 22nd, 2022 02:23

an old moan
Saxon Crow said:

Ha. You wait until my poem tomorrow. I wasn\'t going to publish it but after that reflective piece I have to now. Nicely worded Dusk.

June 22nd, 2022 00:39

an old moan
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words d a, us old fogies have seen such a great deal in lfe and it only wants us to see more.
Life is wonderful.

Andy

June 22nd, 2022 00:36

the green
Goldfinch60 said:

It is so wonderful to be at peace in Natures harmony d a.

Andy

June 21st, 2022 00:21

the green
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - love the theme of your woodland dream before that warm lick my friend. Great read

June 20th, 2022 10:16

the green
Teddy.15 said:

In a dreamy moment of a day dream and then yuck snogged by a dog 🐕 lol fabulous

June 20th, 2022 10:13

the green
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautiful, Dusk. The loving reminder of a dog. It\'s time to move on.

June 20th, 2022 07:17

the green
L. B. Mek said:

\'the leaf kissed breeze
showering cascades of light
as if to hypnotise, mesmerise.
And so so gently, this woodland surround
relaxes into it\'s dance
of silken charmed caress\'..
your elegant poetry, at its vivid best
thank you! Dusk

June 20th, 2022 03:56

dads garden
JudyStella said:

Nice portrayal! I do write my dreams too.

June 19th, 2022 08:16

dads garden
Teddy.15 said:

Love this dear Dusk, such beauty hidden in deep here. Dreams can bring us anywhere. 💖 And yes I often write about mine

June 19th, 2022 08:00

dads garden
Dove said:

Beautiful memories, I had to sigh! Yes, I always write mine...

June 19th, 2022 07:56

dads garden
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautiful writing, Dusk.
Yes, I do, often.

June 19th, 2022 06:31

moment of release (rewrite)
Paul Bell said:

One bottle of wine and the sea parts and everything else parts with it. Two bottles mind you.

June 18th, 2022 04:28

moment of release (rewrite)
Goldfinch60 said:

May that passion be with you d a.

Andy

June 18th, 2022 00:54

moment of release (rewrite)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Love it, Dusk. Made me horney gonna wake up my wife.

June 17th, 2022 09:39

moment of release (rewrite)
Teddy.15 said:



June 17th, 2022 01:56

moment of release (rewrite)
Teddy.15 said:

Well I believe if passion exists it is certainly between these lines. 💖

June 17th, 2022 01:56

history
Jon Nakapalau said:

Well done!

June 16th, 2022 16:31

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