Comments received on poems by dusk arising
one facet of motivation
Osei Zion said:
I feel like I am in a community of poets. Thanks for sharing wonderful thoughts.
August 5th, 2022 08:31
Osei Zion said:
I feel like I am in a community of poets. Thanks for sharing wonderful thoughts.
August 5th, 2022 08:31
one facet of motivation
sorenbarrett said:
dusk I too share four feeling of reaching out to myself and others through words. I find that words span cultures, race, backgrounds and gender. We are all people.
August 5th, 2022 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
dusk I too share four feeling of reaching out to myself and others through words. I find that words span cultures, race, backgrounds and gender. We are all people.
August 5th, 2022 06:45
one facet of motivation
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear and very courageous Dusk - your words strike to the core of what we have as comfort in this friendly and caring poetry site so do be assured your readers including yours truly will support all your efforts to bring some relief to your treatment continues . - -- My wholehearted admiration and sending you warm hugs. - - Fay.
August 5th, 2022 04:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear and very courageous Dusk - your words strike to the core of what we have as comfort in this friendly and caring poetry site so do be assured your readers including yours truly will support all your efforts to bring some relief to your treatment continues . - -- My wholehearted admiration and sending you warm hugs. - - Fay.
August 5th, 2022 04:17
freight train
Goldfinch60 said:
That train will always take you to the places you most want to be d a.
Andy
July 30th, 2022 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That train will always take you to the places you most want to be d a.
Andy
July 30th, 2022 00:58
freight train
Neville said:
what a bluesy little number this turned out to be .. and my word sir, I seriously enjoyed the ride .. Neville
July 29th, 2022 07:47
Neville said:
what a bluesy little number this turned out to be .. and my word sir, I seriously enjoyed the ride .. Neville
July 29th, 2022 07:47
freight train
RL Randall said:
In the hope of finding a better place I long to be on the passing train. This was a good read.
July 29th, 2022 07:39
RL Randall said:
In the hope of finding a better place I long to be on the passing train. This was a good read.
July 29th, 2022 07:39
freight train
sorenbarrett said:
dusk this struck deep into some old memories of childhood when I and my cousin used to go down to the train yard and hop freight trains. Latter in South America I would ride old steam locomotives. Sometimes you wish you could go back. A great metaphor
July 29th, 2022 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
dusk this struck deep into some old memories of childhood when I and my cousin used to go down to the train yard and hop freight trains. Latter in South America I would ride old steam locomotives. Sometimes you wish you could go back. A great metaphor
July 29th, 2022 07:16
freight train
arqios said:
The call of travel and the splendid feel of a proper journey. When that is taken away there is no other such desolation. Thanks for sharing.
July 29th, 2022 06:15
arqios said:
The call of travel and the splendid feel of a proper journey. When that is taken away there is no other such desolation. Thanks for sharing.
July 29th, 2022 06:15
if i were a flower
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and thought out. It gives pause as to what our purpose is. Instead of being so arrogant maybe we should assume our proper place.
July 28th, 2022 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and thought out. It gives pause as to what our purpose is. Instead of being so arrogant maybe we should assume our proper place.
July 28th, 2022 09:55
if i were a flower
Neville said:
I being a lover of words and indeed of satire and truth am mightily indebted to both you sir DA and the lovely FS .. NP ........................................... :)
July 28th, 2022 03:39
Neville said:
I being a lover of words and indeed of satire and truth am mightily indebted to both you sir DA and the lovely FS .. NP ........................................... :)
July 28th, 2022 03:39
there were shadows
Jerry Reynolds said:
Felt a sadness in this fine writing, Dusk. Or maybe it\'s just me.
July 27th, 2022 14:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Felt a sadness in this fine writing, Dusk. Or maybe it\'s just me.
July 27th, 2022 14:42
there were shadows
Raven333 said:
I thought this was a great write..well written and descriptive. well done..
July 27th, 2022 10:25
Raven333 said:
I thought this was a great write..well written and descriptive. well done..
July 27th, 2022 10:25
there were shadows
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe, as we run the race of life we never really knowing what awaits us, but we keep going no matter what. You really made me think, and I like that very much.
July 27th, 2022 09:59
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe, as we run the race of life we never really knowing what awaits us, but we keep going no matter what. You really made me think, and I like that very much.
July 27th, 2022 09:59
there were shadows
Fay Slimm. said:
A scene of mid-summer where games never cease and yet I have a feeling there;s a much deeper meaning to these poignant lines . dear Dusk.
July 27th, 2022 05:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A scene of mid-summer where games never cease and yet I have a feeling there;s a much deeper meaning to these poignant lines . dear Dusk.
July 27th, 2022 05:52
there were shadows
Neville said:
the ability to convey such wistfulness is rarely encountered in so few words ..
read with a smile that\'ll likely last until my mid morning coffee .. N
July 27th, 2022 03:50
Neville said:
the ability to convey such wistfulness is rarely encountered in so few words ..
read with a smile that\'ll likely last until my mid morning coffee .. N
July 27th, 2022 03:50
the love years
sorenbarrett said:
This was very well written and more yet reached to the heart. It was nice to read.
July 26th, 2022 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
This was very well written and more yet reached to the heart. It was nice to read.
July 26th, 2022 07:14
the love years
Saxon Crow said:
Dusk, this is beautiful. I love the emotion. Faves definitely.
July 26th, 2022 04:42
Saxon Crow said:
Dusk, this is beautiful. I love the emotion. Faves definitely.
July 26th, 2022 04:42
the love years
Fay Slimm. said:
So sadly emotive these lines today Dusk - - time marches on with our hearts soaked in memories.
The missing can be riddled with much introspection when life takes those love-days away. A sigh of a read.
July 26th, 2022 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
So sadly emotive these lines today Dusk - - time marches on with our hearts soaked in memories.
The missing can be riddled with much introspection when life takes those love-days away. A sigh of a read.
July 26th, 2022 03:48
the love years
Neville said:
I felt every single bloomin well placed word sir ..
Not only can I relate, but am sure many others who follow me here shall also ...
I guess that\'s poetry and life for ya ............. Neville
July 26th, 2022 03:15
Neville said:
I felt every single bloomin well placed word sir ..
Not only can I relate, but am sure many others who follow me here shall also ...
I guess that\'s poetry and life for ya ............. Neville
July 26th, 2022 03:15
the love years
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'love years\' may be in the past d a but they will never be forgotten.
Andy
July 26th, 2022 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'love years\' may be in the past d a but they will never be forgotten.
Andy
July 26th, 2022 00:45
days of morphine sulphate
Neville said:
My thoughts are with you DA & no kidding ...................................... oh\' n just between you n me .. I was once hauled over the coals for prescribing morphine sulphate .. E.P.A.C.T & the H.A said I prescribed more of it than Harold Shipman ... took me almost a year before I was exonerated .. write on and go well my friend .......... Neville
July 25th, 2022 13:06
Neville said:
My thoughts are with you DA & no kidding ...................................... oh\' n just between you n me .. I was once hauled over the coals for prescribing morphine sulphate .. E.P.A.C.T & the H.A said I prescribed more of it than Harold Shipman ... took me almost a year before I was exonerated .. write on and go well my friend .......... Neville
July 25th, 2022 13:06
days of morphine sulphate
Dove said:
Sorry , Sleep if you must.. Be Well Dusk: I don’t frequent here often enough , but you still stand out as one of the few, I enjoy reading.. Take Care,
July 17th, 2022 15:01
Dove said:
Sorry , Sleep if you must.. Be Well Dusk: I don’t frequent here often enough , but you still stand out as one of the few, I enjoy reading.. Take Care,
July 17th, 2022 15:01
days of morphine sulphate
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh dearest Dusk - sending my best of big hugs as you try to recoup from your treatment - -the verse is so telling and strikes to this reader\'s heart - how hard it must be but you are a survivor and never forget it my wonderful friend.
July 17th, 2022 13:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh dearest Dusk - sending my best of big hugs as you try to recoup from your treatment - -the verse is so telling and strikes to this reader\'s heart - how hard it must be but you are a survivor and never forget it my wonderful friend.
July 17th, 2022 13:09
days of morphine sulphate
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hope you feel better soon dusk ) and sorry to hear of your pain and struggles
July 17th, 2022 11:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hope you feel better soon dusk ) and sorry to hear of your pain and struggles
July 17th, 2022 11:32
smile
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiling is so important in our lives d a.
\"Smile, it confuses people!\"
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiling is so important in our lives d a.
\"Smile, it confuses people!\"
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:11
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