Comments received on poems by dusk arising
of D - day
Goldfinch60 said:
Such powerful words d a,
\"We shall remember them\"
Andy
June 8th, 2022 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Such powerful words d a,
\"We shall remember them\"
Andy
June 8th, 2022 00:17
of D - day
Neville said:
of all the 21st century war poems I have ever read .. and quite possibly, ever shall, this will stand here and for always, shaking a fist at war mongers everywhere .. tis a fine and fitting tribute to those who gave their all on the beaches of Normandy on D- Day too DA ... N
June 7th, 2022 03:45
Neville said:
of all the 21st century war poems I have ever read .. and quite possibly, ever shall, this will stand here and for always, shaking a fist at war mongers everywhere .. tis a fine and fitting tribute to those who gave their all on the beaches of Normandy on D- Day too DA ... N
June 7th, 2022 03:45
bad habit
Neville said:
I know I shouldn\'t but I do kinda like this .. an awful lot :)
June 5th, 2022 10:40
Neville said:
I know I shouldn\'t but I do kinda like this .. an awful lot :)
June 5th, 2022 10:40
in the arms of a stranger
Morwenna said:
So evocative. It had me casting my mind back decades.
June 5th, 2022 03:15
Morwenna said:
So evocative. It had me casting my mind back decades.
June 5th, 2022 03:15
in the arms of a stranger
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what avid dejection this verse brings out when deceit becomes clear enough to want escape - such a telling verse Dusky..
June 4th, 2022 06:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what avid dejection this verse brings out when deceit becomes clear enough to want escape - such a telling verse Dusky..
June 4th, 2022 06:50
in the arms of a stranger
Michael Edwards said:
Oh to be accosted by a stranger - never happened to me but if he was a man I would feel the same way. - great words dusk.
June 4th, 2022 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
Oh to be accosted by a stranger - never happened to me but if he was a man I would feel the same way. - great words dusk.
June 4th, 2022 03:26
in the arms of a stranger
Neville said:
you got me babe :) this is so bloomin cool you old scribe ... N
June 4th, 2022 02:56
Neville said:
you got me babe :) this is so bloomin cool you old scribe ... N
June 4th, 2022 02:56
in the arms of a stranger
Caring dove said:
Interesting words dusk 🙂 nice writing
June 4th, 2022 00:39
Caring dove said:
Interesting words dusk 🙂 nice writing
June 4th, 2022 00:39
a lifetime ago haunts still.
sorenbarrett said:
No one no matter how famous or wealthy can escape the scars of emotional damage. We are all human and repeated beatings from childhood on leaves one expecting and accepting further abuse. Well written
June 3rd, 2022 21:05
sorenbarrett said:
No one no matter how famous or wealthy can escape the scars of emotional damage. We are all human and repeated beatings from childhood on leaves one expecting and accepting further abuse. Well written
June 3rd, 2022 21:05
a lifetime ago haunts still.
SureshG said:
Physical scars - physical, thou not to be diminished,
Verbal abuse, as you exposed, deep, seldom surface
June 3rd, 2022 10:02
SureshG said:
Physical scars - physical, thou not to be diminished,
Verbal abuse, as you exposed, deep, seldom surface
June 3rd, 2022 10:02
a lifetime ago haunts still.
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words d a so well written.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words d a so well written.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:36
a lifetime ago haunts still.
languale said:
Such a beautiful use of language! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Maybe you want to check on mine too? I\'d be happy if you leave a comment. I\'ts always exiting to know what other people like about your work. :)
June 2nd, 2022 11:13
languale said:
Such a beautiful use of language! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Maybe you want to check on mine too? I\'d be happy if you leave a comment. I\'ts always exiting to know what other people like about your work. :)
June 2nd, 2022 11:13
a lifetime ago haunts still.
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, this is truly \"raw\" as you put it. But I enjoy the way you left it unrefined because it illuminates the unadulterated truth. I hope this incident didn\'t leave too many setbacks for you to have to hurdle now and again.
June 2nd, 2022 09:54
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, this is truly \"raw\" as you put it. But I enjoy the way you left it unrefined because it illuminates the unadulterated truth. I hope this incident didn\'t leave too many setbacks for you to have to hurdle now and again.
June 2nd, 2022 09:54
a lifetime ago haunts still.
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing, Dusk
the brave honesty
makes this reading experience
such a powerful one
June 2nd, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing, Dusk
the brave honesty
makes this reading experience
such a powerful one
June 2nd, 2022 04:39
a lifetime ago haunts still.
Neville said:
every now and then .. I come across words that appear & feel to have spilled out .. they could not possibly contain or hold such intensity of meaning had they been teased, forced out or tinkered with .. .. this is one of them .. I take my hat off to you DA ............... Neville
June 2nd, 2022 03:14
Neville said:
every now and then .. I come across words that appear & feel to have spilled out .. they could not possibly contain or hold such intensity of meaning had they been teased, forced out or tinkered with .. .. this is one of them .. I take my hat off to you DA ............... Neville
June 2nd, 2022 03:14
a lifetime ago haunts still.
tallisman said:
The real drama lies in the soul here and it shows through.. it’s brave to expose like this, yet it is part of who you are today. You can’t deny a past, and you can’t escape it. We are all haunted by the ghosts of our history. It’s learning to live with them that is so bloody difficult….
June 2nd, 2022 02:40
tallisman said:
The real drama lies in the soul here and it shows through.. it’s brave to expose like this, yet it is part of who you are today. You can’t deny a past, and you can’t escape it. We are all haunted by the ghosts of our history. It’s learning to live with them that is so bloody difficult….
June 2nd, 2022 02:40
part of all this
MendedFences27 said:
\"as if the land talked,\" \"I am proud to be among them.\" human connection to the land and Nature. WE are all a part of it. It is time to take care of her, this planet. Liked your sense of connection taking you back in time. - Phil A.
May 31st, 2022 15:34
MendedFences27 said:
\"as if the land talked,\" \"I am proud to be among them.\" human connection to the land and Nature. WE are all a part of it. It is time to take care of her, this planet. Liked your sense of connection taking you back in time. - Phil A.
May 31st, 2022 15:34
part of all this
Neville said:
fine words indeed .. and how bloomin true .........................................Neville
May 31st, 2022 12:18
Neville said:
fine words indeed .. and how bloomin true .........................................Neville
May 31st, 2022 12:18
part of all this
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, that final line hit like a truck. Yes, we are all part of this marevlous world. I just hope we can all cherish it and spread kindness instead of hate.
May 31st, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, that final line hit like a truck. Yes, we are all part of this marevlous world. I just hope we can all cherish it and spread kindness instead of hate.
May 31st, 2022 08:31
part of all this
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words d a, if only we could all walk in peace with Nature.
Andy
May 31st, 2022 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words d a, if only we could all walk in peace with Nature.
Andy
May 31st, 2022 00:54
part of all this
Saxon Crow said:
How coincidental. I was aiming for the same feeling in my poem today. Great stuff dusk
May 31st, 2022 00:45
Saxon Crow said:
How coincidental. I was aiming for the same feeling in my poem today. Great stuff dusk
May 31st, 2022 00:45
part of all this
tallisman said:
Good message and it’s true that some places, well loved call out for you…
May 31st, 2022 00:35
tallisman said:
Good message and it’s true that some places, well loved call out for you…
May 31st, 2022 00:35
part of all this
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing dusk )) love nature and it’s so important to look after .
May 31st, 2022 00:13
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing dusk )) love nature and it’s so important to look after .
May 31st, 2022 00:13
bad habit
L. B. Mek said:
\'entangled, all elbows and knees
yet, their feelings make music...\'
truly, no two love\'s are the same
if it works, who are we to judge?
a succinctly incisive, shorty
thank you! Dusk
May 30th, 2022 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'entangled, all elbows and knees
yet, their feelings make music...\'
truly, no two love\'s are the same
if it works, who are we to judge?
a succinctly incisive, shorty
thank you! Dusk
May 30th, 2022 06:05
bad habit
spilleronsheet said:
Very intriguing…and the bad habit did get a poetic voice….
May 30th, 2022 05:47
spilleronsheet said:
Very intriguing…and the bad habit did get a poetic voice….
May 30th, 2022 05:47
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