disappointed (re-write)
Jonas Robinson said:

Wow, man. Wow.

May 28th, 2022 15:04

so secret
Bella Shepard said:

Steamy, seductive, as passion behind closed doors should be. Freedom to love to the fullest. Goooood!

May 28th, 2022 14:55

so secret
Neville said:



this is so bloomin cool, it puts permafrost to shame ... Neville


May 28th, 2022 01:15

lessons
L. B. Mek said:

\'tick - tock\'
hammers home the urgency in your words
wonderfully realised, a great poem
with purpose..
I read and learn, thanks Dusk

May 27th, 2022 05:03

disappointed (re-write)
L. B. Mek said:

\'The very word \"Christianity\" is a misunderstanding — in truth, there was only one Christian, and he died on the cross.\'
by Nietzsche
but Any religion, even the Atheist one
as a topic
only serves to divide and segregate
people, from people
\'faith is a personal and intimate
topic\'
far removed
from conglomerates with their power regime changes;
they have little to do
with the dying, bedridden
or downtrodden, dispirited
seeking salvation
in one deity or another
that\'s just Natural, to me
we all need something
to hope or believe-in
at our arrival
of finite\'s, devastating inevitability..
\'who cares\'
be it the Moon, they howl at
or a God shared between three
archaic religions
but titled, the: \'One n Only\'
life\'s
just too short, if
its not impeding your lifestyle
then you\'re just wasting your life, engaging with it..
well, unless its that very
disharmony, you seek
in that case
hope creating havoc
works out well for you..
I personally, just don\'t care anymore
the subject itself, bores me
its just Futility: Defined!

May 26th, 2022 06:07

disappointed (re-write)
Fay Slimm. said:

You pen this shameful condition in established religion so well here my friend. So many have left folds whose lust for money leaves bitter taste when once digested. Yet purity of heart still appears and so it will in all the tomorrows.

May 26th, 2022 01:44

disappointed (re-write)
Saxon Crow said:

Yep. Churches were not where Jesus preached

May 26th, 2022 01:16

all in a dream
Rozina said:

Gentle, serene, dreamy, a fairy tale.....
I hope to have such a dream tonight.

May 25th, 2022 01:30

all in a dream
Bella Shepard said:

The scope of this poem is just breathtaking. The rhyming pattern and cadence is sublime. Would that such dreams may come. Absolutely beautiful!

May 24th, 2022 16:04

all in a dream
Aradhya said:

wow, just wow! this is truly an exceptional piece.
\' gossamer wings paint airy trails
through twighlight\'s eerie hue\'
so so very beautiful, dear poet!

May 24th, 2022 15:17

all in a dream
Fay Slimm. said:

Well after reading this piece of classical prose I shall look forward to dreaming of those fairy people as sleep descends my dear friend. - You excel with this write on night\'s promise - must add this gem to my faves..

May 24th, 2022 13:43

a fox
Goldfinch60 said:

Foxes are beautiful creatures to see.
Many years ago one of my wife\'s colleagues used to have a fox come into her garden and lay down beside her dog.

Andy

May 24th, 2022 00:09

a fox
jarcher54 said:

You English and your foxes! Here in Texas we have gray and red foxes. We do not chase them in funny suits on horseback. But your description of one haunting the grounds in the moonlight is perfect. They don\'t have those long snouts for nothing!

May 23rd, 2022 15:33

a fox
L. B. Mek said:

the fantastic Mr Fox, is one of my favourite films
and your words brought back
my appreciation for that film
and its depiction of foxes, as
inquisitively loveable, creatures
a far cry - removed
from my reality, of coming across
their guts, splattered all over our motorways
and country roads..
(sorry for my morbid last few lines
thanks for sharing Dusk, a wonderful read)

May 23rd, 2022 06:42

my first haiku
Paul Bell said:

Defo, less is best, and that\'s just the maths part.

May 15th, 2022 06:18