Comments received on poems by dusk arising
my first haiku
Rozina said:
Excellent job! I think haiku/senryu is difficult because a whole completed message/story has to be packed into 17 syllables as Teddy said. But it can be stunning. Cute pictures too.
May 14th, 2022 18:14
Rozina said:
Excellent job! I think haiku/senryu is difficult because a whole completed message/story has to be packed into 17 syllables as Teddy said. But it can be stunning. Cute pictures too.
May 14th, 2022 18:14
my first haiku
Michael Edwards said:
not that bad is it?
writing haikus can be fun!
so why not write more?
May 14th, 2022 15:30
Michael Edwards said:
not that bad is it?
writing haikus can be fun!
so why not write more?
May 14th, 2022 15:30
my first haiku
Christina8 said:
Very nice Haiku and cute pictures to boot! Great job!
May 14th, 2022 11:40
Christina8 said:
Very nice Haiku and cute pictures to boot! Great job!
May 14th, 2022 11:40
places in my dreams
Bella Shepard said:
What would our waking minds be like without out our dreams? They so often inspire and even guide us to be more creative. I love how you have framed the dreaming experience. May you wander happily there and continue to be that inspired poet.
May 13th, 2022 16:08
Bella Shepard said:
What would our waking minds be like without out our dreams? They so often inspire and even guide us to be more creative. I love how you have framed the dreaming experience. May you wander happily there and continue to be that inspired poet.
May 13th, 2022 16:08
places in my dreams
Christina8 said:
Isn\'t it wonderful that you have lucid dreams? I have them on occasion. may they continue to delight and amaze!
May 13th, 2022 09:27
Christina8 said:
Isn\'t it wonderful that you have lucid dreams? I have them on occasion. may they continue to delight and amaze!
May 13th, 2022 09:27
places in my dreams
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was superb. Dreams are truly quite an elusive thing. But that description, \"caught for a few moments on my waking breath,\" is actually divine and spot-on. I can relate so much, it\'s like I can barely grasp it as soon as I wake up but then it just fades away. Your actually so lucky to have \"lucid dreams,\" I\'ve always wanted to have one, but have never succeeded. It\'s like having control over your own dreamland, wow.
May 13th, 2022 08:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was superb. Dreams are truly quite an elusive thing. But that description, \"caught for a few moments on my waking breath,\" is actually divine and spot-on. I can relate so much, it\'s like I can barely grasp it as soon as I wake up but then it just fades away. Your actually so lucky to have \"lucid dreams,\" I\'ve always wanted to have one, but have never succeeded. It\'s like having control over your own dreamland, wow.
May 13th, 2022 08:12
places in my dreams
Saxon Crow said:
This reminds me of my dog. No not really. I love the dreams that give you poetry. They\'re special. Just like this poem
May 13th, 2022 00:42
Saxon Crow said:
This reminds me of my dog. No not really. I love the dreams that give you poetry. They\'re special. Just like this poem
May 13th, 2022 00:42
places in my dreams
Rozina said:
You are so right. It\'s deja vu. Sometimes in my dreams the scene is so familiar, \"I\'ve been here before sensation\". Lovely poem.
May 13th, 2022 00:42
Rozina said:
You are so right. It\'s deja vu. Sometimes in my dreams the scene is so familiar, \"I\'ve been here before sensation\". Lovely poem.
May 13th, 2022 00:42
places in my dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dreams of wonder and memories fill your life with the glory of your world d a.
Andy
May 13th, 2022 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dreams of wonder and memories fill your life with the glory of your world d a.
Andy
May 13th, 2022 00:27
kissing our toes with ebbing lust
Neville said:
been there, done that and enjoyed immensely ............ swimmingly good say\'s I sir ....................... Neville
May 12th, 2022 12:03
Neville said:
been there, done that and enjoyed immensely ............ swimmingly good say\'s I sir ....................... Neville
May 12th, 2022 12:03
kissing our toes with ebbing lust
Rozina said:
Beautiful beach scene of lovers together.
May 12th, 2022 00:50
Rozina said:
Beautiful beach scene of lovers together.
May 12th, 2022 00:50
kissing our toes with ebbing lust
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words d a, I do hope they come your way.
Andy
May 12th, 2022 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words d a, I do hope they come your way.
Andy
May 12th, 2022 00:27
kissing our toes with ebbing lust
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this feels so alive. I can sense the passion and intensity you wrote this with. \"Feeling more alive than ever.\" A truly riveting experience.
May 11th, 2022 09:23
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this feels so alive. I can sense the passion and intensity you wrote this with. \"Feeling more alive than ever.\" A truly riveting experience.
May 11th, 2022 09:23
Throwing sticks
Rozina said:
Such a lovely poem about your dog. Truly Man\'s best friend.
May 10th, 2022 20:41
Rozina said:
Such a lovely poem about your dog. Truly Man\'s best friend.
May 10th, 2022 20:41
Throwing sticks
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
My My
Boys and Dogs
Apples and Pies
May 10th, 2022 13:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
My My
Boys and Dogs
Apples and Pies
May 10th, 2022 13:19
Throwing sticks
Paul Bell said:
Man\'s best friend, they never moan when you don\'t turn up, enjoy the food you put down them, what is there not to love.
May 10th, 2022 11:45
Paul Bell said:
Man\'s best friend, they never moan when you don\'t turn up, enjoy the food you put down them, what is there not to love.
May 10th, 2022 11:45
Throwing sticks
MendedFences27 said:
May the days on the beach linger ever longer for you both. What a terrific piece, it caught the scene and the sentiment perfectly. Zoe seemed alive with energy waiting for each and every toss. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
May 10th, 2022 11:15
MendedFences27 said:
May the days on the beach linger ever longer for you both. What a terrific piece, it caught the scene and the sentiment perfectly. Zoe seemed alive with energy waiting for each and every toss. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
May 10th, 2022 11:15
Throwing sticks
Rocky Lagou said:
I think animal love is probably one of the most purest loves in existence. It\'s that bond that never breaks, it\'s a true frienship. Hope everything\'s alright with you and your furry pal, the tone seems a little wistful.
May 10th, 2022 09:09
Rocky Lagou said:
I think animal love is probably one of the most purest loves in existence. It\'s that bond that never breaks, it\'s a true frienship. Hope everything\'s alright with you and your furry pal, the tone seems a little wistful.
May 10th, 2022 09:09
Throwing sticks
Saxon Crow said:
Oh don\'t even go there. My Bella is ageing rapidly. She can\'t get into a lake anymore to play.
May 10th, 2022 03:39
Saxon Crow said:
Oh don\'t even go there. My Bella is ageing rapidly. She can\'t get into a lake anymore to play.
May 10th, 2022 03:39
no medal
Neville said:
there is more to this than meets the eye .. a message, within a message .. does deserve a medal ............... N
May 10th, 2022 01:27
Neville said:
there is more to this than meets the eye .. a message, within a message .. does deserve a medal ............... N
May 10th, 2022 01:27
no medal
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words d a, we must always endure in our lives.
Andy
May 10th, 2022 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words d a, we must always endure in our lives.
Andy
May 10th, 2022 00:53
no medal
Rozina said:
This is the most difficult fight of all, faced with great courage. A beautiful write.
May 9th, 2022 05:31
Rozina said:
This is the most difficult fight of all, faced with great courage. A beautiful write.
May 9th, 2022 05:31
no medal
Sophenia said:
Beautiful message! \'Maybe they call it
strength and enduring spirit.\' It takes a lot of strength to be okay and fighting your own struggle. Thank you for sharing!
May 9th, 2022 05:20
Sophenia said:
Beautiful message! \'Maybe they call it
strength and enduring spirit.\' It takes a lot of strength to be okay and fighting your own struggle. Thank you for sharing!
May 9th, 2022 05:20
The other side of clearing something up
Noah Malice said:
lol you\'d do better to keep this to your dms.
May 5th, 2022 16:25
Noah Malice said:
lol you\'d do better to keep this to your dms.
May 5th, 2022 16:25
joey played the saxophone
Neville said:
this is an absolutely spot on reminisce sir & a to die for concluding stanza .......... in effect, bloomin brilliant and all that jazz ..
Neville
May 5th, 2022 10:20
Neville said:
this is an absolutely spot on reminisce sir & a to die for concluding stanza .......... in effect, bloomin brilliant and all that jazz ..
Neville
May 5th, 2022 10:20
grazed knees
SureshG said:
Those underpasses hold in their shadows youths passion, that your poetic words so vividly expose.
May 3rd, 2022 09:39
SureshG said:
Those underpasses hold in their shadows youths passion, that your poetic words so vividly expose.
May 3rd, 2022 09:39
The other side of clearing something up
sorenbarrett said:
Sad I thought this was a poetry site not facebook
May 1st, 2022 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
Sad I thought this was a poetry site not facebook
May 1st, 2022 16:32
grazed knees
Neville said:
ouch I like it .. I like it a whole bloomin lot ..................................... Neville
May 1st, 2022 15:15
Neville said:
ouch I like it .. I like it a whole bloomin lot ..................................... Neville
May 1st, 2022 15:15
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