Comments received on poems by dusk arising
what need in me for kisses
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor well worded metered with a sad feeling.
April 26th, 2022 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor well worded metered with a sad feeling.
April 26th, 2022 11:03
what need in me for kisses
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. Truly emotional. Endearment is useless when there\'s no love within. Those memories, or picture frames, also feel like those memories that are just inescapable and that bring us down. Poignant.
April 26th, 2022 09:08
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. Truly emotional. Endearment is useless when there\'s no love within. Those memories, or picture frames, also feel like those memories that are just inescapable and that bring us down. Poignant.
April 26th, 2022 09:08
what need in me for kisses
Neville said:
tis indeed a masterpiece mate .. seriously superb ............. Neville
April 26th, 2022 08:44
Neville said:
tis indeed a masterpiece mate .. seriously superb ............. Neville
April 26th, 2022 08:44
what need in me for kisses
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautifully sad eight liner dear friend - and a sure verse for my favourites
April 26th, 2022 07:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautifully sad eight liner dear friend - and a sure verse for my favourites
April 26th, 2022 07:17
what need in me for kisses
Distant View said:
Nicely expressed in all its stark sadness. The second stanza is particularly poetic!
April 26th, 2022 05:04
Distant View said:
Nicely expressed in all its stark sadness. The second stanza is particularly poetic!
April 26th, 2022 05:04
what need in me for kisses
L. B. Mek said:
\'its funny, you think by now
we humans would have learnt
to have funerals, for our romances..\'
still, without it
it\'s all, that noir of bleak
but
at a mere scent of potential
for it, to visit us again
and we\'ll only be using
those vibrant filters
for our memento, snapshots
of life..
(another relatable
and ever-so impactful shorty, Dusk
thank you!)
April 26th, 2022 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'its funny, you think by now
we humans would have learnt
to have funerals, for our romances..\'
still, without it
it\'s all, that noir of bleak
but
at a mere scent of potential
for it, to visit us again
and we\'ll only be using
those vibrant filters
for our memento, snapshots
of life..
(another relatable
and ever-so impactful shorty, Dusk
thank you!)
April 26th, 2022 04:45
what need in me for kisses
Nicholas Browning said:
You\'ve given us much to think about. Well done.
April 26th, 2022 01:20
Nicholas Browning said:
You\'ve given us much to think about. Well done.
April 26th, 2022 01:20
what need in me for kisses
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good writing dusk .. like your words ))I think even buildings and houses need love and care ..
Sad writing tho .. I like how you speak of a lot in a few words
April 26th, 2022 00:51
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good writing dusk .. like your words ))I think even buildings and houses need love and care ..
Sad writing tho .. I like how you speak of a lot in a few words
April 26th, 2022 00:51
what need in me for kisses
Saxon Crow said:
Well that\'s a work of art. A masterpiece Dusk.
April 26th, 2022 00:43
Saxon Crow said:
Well that\'s a work of art. A masterpiece Dusk.
April 26th, 2022 00:43
what makes a poet
sorenbarrett said:
Great measures for what is a poet. Much of what we write does come from the pain we experienced as part of us was broken. Sometimes I like to just write to laugh. Although this probably does not touch others as much and maybe is not poetic.
April 25th, 2022 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
Great measures for what is a poet. Much of what we write does come from the pain we experienced as part of us was broken. Sometimes I like to just write to laugh. Although this probably does not touch others as much and maybe is not poetic.
April 25th, 2022 14:32
what makes a poet
Neville said:
you ask a question with an answer
like a poet only can
ta for posting this today DA your da man :)
Neville
April 25th, 2022 12:59
Neville said:
you ask a question with an answer
like a poet only can
ta for posting this today DA your da man :)
Neville
April 25th, 2022 12:59
what makes a poet
FallenAngel1š said:
Straight from the heartā¤ļøš„š«¶š¹šš
April 25th, 2022 10:24
FallenAngel1š said:
Straight from the heartā¤ļøš„š«¶š¹šš
April 25th, 2022 10:24
what makes a poet
Christina8 said:
Love, love, love this poem!! Spoken like a true poet, from one to another!
April 25th, 2022 06:17
Christina8 said:
Love, love, love this poem!! Spoken like a true poet, from one to another!
April 25th, 2022 06:17
what makes a poet
spilleronsheet said:
Cheers over a glassā¦so true dear Duskā¦each one of us got their portraitā¦thank you so muchā¦
April 25th, 2022 05:48
spilleronsheet said:
Cheers over a glassā¦so true dear Duskā¦each one of us got their portraitā¦thank you so muchā¦
April 25th, 2022 05:48
what makes a poet
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true, dear poet
and so frustratingly, elusive
to mere
wannabe scribblers, like me
lol
(as-ever
sorry for making your words
all about me..)
thanks Dusk, a great write!
\'in my humble opinion\'
April 25th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true, dear poet
and so frustratingly, elusive
to mere
wannabe scribblers, like me
lol
(as-ever
sorry for making your words
all about me..)
thanks Dusk, a great write!
\'in my humble opinion\'
April 25th, 2022 05:26
what makes a poet
Rozina said:
This is interesting dusk. Reading poems from MPS has opened up my mind to so many shared emotions and ideas and laughter and friendships. And inspires poetry writing.
April 25th, 2022 04:09
Rozina said:
This is interesting dusk. Reading poems from MPS has opened up my mind to so many shared emotions and ideas and laughter and friendships. And inspires poetry writing.
April 25th, 2022 04:09
what makes a poet
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wonderful Dusk, you really spoke our hearts out !!
April 25th, 2022 01:48
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wonderful Dusk, you really spoke our hearts out !!
April 25th, 2022 01:48
what makes a poet
Saxon Crow said:
I love the poem Dusk but I wouldn\'t say we are all broken. But we are all capable of expressing the aspects of ourselves freely
April 25th, 2022 01:31
Saxon Crow said:
I love the poem Dusk but I wouldn\'t say we are all broken. But we are all capable of expressing the aspects of ourselves freely
April 25th, 2022 01:31
what makes a poet
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, those words must come out.
Andy
April 25th, 2022 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, those words must come out.
Andy
April 25th, 2022 00:51
this special springtime
spilleronsheet said:
The beautiful scenery and the memories priceless to earsā¦it has been tough times, it is still darkā¦.but hope and beauty in your poetry shall come again reviveā¦beautiful dear duskā¦.
April 24th, 2022 21:25
spilleronsheet said:
The beautiful scenery and the memories priceless to earsā¦it has been tough times, it is still darkā¦.but hope and beauty in your poetry shall come again reviveā¦beautiful dear duskā¦.
April 24th, 2022 21:25
this special springtime
Rozina said:
A wonderful description of spring. I can imagine walking through English countryside seeing and smelling these scenes. Thank you.
April 24th, 2022 17:27
Rozina said:
A wonderful description of spring. I can imagine walking through English countryside seeing and smelling these scenes. Thank you.
April 24th, 2022 17:27
this special springtime
Fay Slimm. said:
Your selection of springtime treasures in hedgerow and lane is stunningly good dear Dusk and am doubly grateful for another helping of Nature\'s plenty from your gifted pen.
April 24th, 2022 16:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Your selection of springtime treasures in hedgerow and lane is stunningly good dear Dusk and am doubly grateful for another helping of Nature\'s plenty from your gifted pen.
April 24th, 2022 16:04
this special springtime
Saxon Crow said:
Ah great one here Dusk. Very enjoyable. And lotsssssss of wild garlic this year!
April 24th, 2022 10:55
Saxon Crow said:
Ah great one here Dusk. Very enjoyable. And lotsssssss of wild garlic this year!
April 24th, 2022 10:55
this special springtime
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of my childhood weekly visiting my grandparents farm and playing with cousins in the pasture, stream and fields. Very nostalgic for me.
April 24th, 2022 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of my childhood weekly visiting my grandparents farm and playing with cousins in the pasture, stream and fields. Very nostalgic for me.
April 24th, 2022 10:06
looking forward
Neville said:
exceptionally well crafted and a truly meaningful little pearl of a poem ..
April 24th, 2022 06:58
Neville said:
exceptionally well crafted and a truly meaningful little pearl of a poem ..
April 24th, 2022 06:58
every now and again
Goldfinch60 said:
That song will always be with you d a.
Andy
April 24th, 2022 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That song will always be with you d a.
Andy
April 24th, 2022 00:45
every now and again
Neville said:
............ these scant few words made a big shiver run up n down my spine so they did sir ................. N
April 23rd, 2022 08:43
Neville said:
............ these scant few words made a big shiver run up n down my spine so they did sir ................. N
April 23rd, 2022 08:43
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