Comments received on poems by dusk arising
September
SureshG said:
Your ode to September tells us that the change is in the air. To enjoy the last of the blooms, to reap the bounty of the harvest. Winter is coming…..
August 30th, 2022 06:20
SureshG said:
Your ode to September tells us that the change is in the air. To enjoy the last of the blooms, to reap the bounty of the harvest. Winter is coming…..
August 30th, 2022 06:20
hoops
Neville said:
if this is autobiographical, you have my utmost respect ..
if it is a poem that demonstrates your versatility as a poet, then likewise, you have my utmost respect .............. Neville
August 28th, 2022 01:45
Neville said:
if this is autobiographical, you have my utmost respect ..
if it is a poem that demonstrates your versatility as a poet, then likewise, you have my utmost respect .............. Neville
August 28th, 2022 01:45
September
sorenbarrett said:
No matter which season you love this poem conveys the passion and lust for living the moment and its joys. Beautiful
August 27th, 2022 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
No matter which season you love this poem conveys the passion and lust for living the moment and its joys. Beautiful
August 27th, 2022 07:41
September
Neville said:
Outstanding in every poetic sense of the word .. you just nailed my favourite month too sir ..
Indeed, my hat is appropriately doffed ........ Neville
August 26th, 2022 06:45
Neville said:
Outstanding in every poetic sense of the word .. you just nailed my favourite month too sir ..
Indeed, my hat is appropriately doffed ........ Neville
August 26th, 2022 06:45
September
Aradhya said:
Loved how you breathed life in to September with excellent imagery and lines. An extraordinary piece, so moving Dusk!
August 26th, 2022 04:55
Aradhya said:
Loved how you breathed life in to September with excellent imagery and lines. An extraordinary piece, so moving Dusk!
August 26th, 2022 04:55
September
Fay Slimm. said:
These words feed the soul with tangible emotion as September draws near and so heartfelt their pathos in my list of favourites. they belong - --linguistically brilliant Dusk.,
August 26th, 2022 02:45
Fay Slimm. said:
These words feed the soul with tangible emotion as September draws near and so heartfelt their pathos in my list of favourites. they belong - --linguistically brilliant Dusk.,
August 26th, 2022 02:45
September
arqios said:
We do \"remember the 21st night of September...\" and the melting in the bellowing heat of August. The change of seasons never give us thermostatic control.
August 26th, 2022 02:42
arqios said:
We do \"remember the 21st night of September...\" and the melting in the bellowing heat of August. The change of seasons never give us thermostatic control.
August 26th, 2022 02:42
September
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words d a, September is a wonderful month as the beginning of Autumn starts, my favourite season of the year.
Andy
August 26th, 2022 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words d a, September is a wonderful month as the beginning of Autumn starts, my favourite season of the year.
Andy
August 26th, 2022 01:57
hoops
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have things that happen in our lives that show us who we are d a. You are now the person that you were aiming for in your life.
Andy
August 21st, 2022 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have things that happen in our lives that show us who we are d a. You are now the person that you were aiming for in your life.
Andy
August 21st, 2022 00:52
hoops
Bella Shepard said:
The old saying \"Hindsight is 20/20\" is true when we learn from it, and that reflection can often times change our lives in so many good ways. Here you are clear eyed and empowered. Kudos my friend, a great introspective poem and a joy to read.
August 20th, 2022 09:46
Bella Shepard said:
The old saying \"Hindsight is 20/20\" is true when we learn from it, and that reflection can often times change our lives in so many good ways. Here you are clear eyed and empowered. Kudos my friend, a great introspective poem and a joy to read.
August 20th, 2022 09:46
hoops
Caring dove said:
A good writing dusk ) never nice to be treated like we’re rubbish
August 20th, 2022 08:18
Caring dove said:
A good writing dusk ) never nice to be treated like we’re rubbish
August 20th, 2022 08:18
hoops
Jonas Robinson said:
To be treated as an animal is horrible. It should never be done to some with your talent. Thank you for sharing. :)
August 20th, 2022 07:44
Jonas Robinson said:
To be treated as an animal is horrible. It should never be done to some with your talent. Thank you for sharing. :)
August 20th, 2022 07:44
perceiving chapters
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true d a, in our now long lives we can look back and see the errors but now our experience can show us the correct way we need to go in our lives.
Andy
August 20th, 2022 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true d a, in our now long lives we can look back and see the errors but now our experience can show us the correct way we need to go in our lives.
Andy
August 20th, 2022 01:21
perceiving chapters
Rocky Lagou said:
The line \"growing older, bolder, colder\" may just become my new motto.
Hey Dusk, it\'s nice to read your poems again, this one is so real that it got me right in guts.
\"for they know not what they do
beyond the pulse of procreation\"
Jeez, talk about it.
Loved it, thxxx
August 19th, 2022 10:11
Rocky Lagou said:
The line \"growing older, bolder, colder\" may just become my new motto.
Hey Dusk, it\'s nice to read your poems again, this one is so real that it got me right in guts.
\"for they know not what they do
beyond the pulse of procreation\"
Jeez, talk about it.
Loved it, thxxx
August 19th, 2022 10:11
perceiving chapters
Fay Slimm. said:
A question worth asking fills your last lines Dusk in this heart-tugging and exceptional verse lauding acceptance - as life unfolds we learn if we are wise that all humanity deserves warmth of empathy because of inheritance. This gem must be in my list of favourites and so in it goes.
August 19th, 2022 04:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A question worth asking fills your last lines Dusk in this heart-tugging and exceptional verse lauding acceptance - as life unfolds we learn if we are wise that all humanity deserves warmth of empathy because of inheritance. This gem must be in my list of favourites and so in it goes.
August 19th, 2022 04:31
take away
Dove said:
Heartfelt words.. best to you! May the train of peace carry you to far away places… Choo Choo
August 16th, 2022 13:16
Dove said:
Heartfelt words.. best to you! May the train of peace carry you to far away places… Choo Choo
August 16th, 2022 13:16
surface tension
Morwenna said:
So simple - apparently - but so brilliantly crafted. Thanks
August 16th, 2022 09:23
Morwenna said:
So simple - apparently - but so brilliantly crafted. Thanks
August 16th, 2022 09:23
take away
Bella Shepard said:
What a magical train that would be, I think, a peaceful journey away from life\'s troubles. Beautifully penned!
August 14th, 2022 11:02
Bella Shepard said:
What a magical train that would be, I think, a peaceful journey away from life\'s troubles. Beautifully penned!
August 14th, 2022 11:02
take away
dusk arising said:
I saw a GWR prairie doing mixed work at the new Broadway (Worcs) station whilst out for a drive recently. I\'m hoping to catch it again, but armed with camera, when they run steam again. Theyre based at Toddington. Were very lucky to be close to both Toddington and Bewdley (SVR) here.
August 14th, 2022 01:18
dusk arising said:
I saw a GWR prairie doing mixed work at the new Broadway (Worcs) station whilst out for a drive recently. I\'m hoping to catch it again, but armed with camera, when they run steam again. Theyre based at Toddington. Were very lucky to be close to both Toddington and Bewdley (SVR) here.
August 14th, 2022 01:18
take away
Goldfinch60 said:
My friend works at a steam train survival group, I will ask him to send one your way d a.
Andy
August 14th, 2022 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
My friend works at a steam train survival group, I will ask him to send one your way d a.
Andy
August 14th, 2022 01:14
surface tension
sorenbarrett said:
Like an ember that glows, hope can be ignited to blaze anew with the smallest breath. A wonderful thought that gave me pause.
August 12th, 2022 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
Like an ember that glows, hope can be ignited to blaze anew with the smallest breath. A wonderful thought that gave me pause.
August 12th, 2022 11:18
surface tension
Goldfinch60 said:
It only needs one word from a friend to raise you from that despair d a.
Andy
August 12th, 2022 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
It only needs one word from a friend to raise you from that despair d a.
Andy
August 12th, 2022 00:36
surface tension
Fay Slimm. said:
You catch the essence of the waning spirit being lifted by wonderfully healing kindness - so emotive it brings tears to this reader who can only imagine the dark of despair\'s surface tension. Another masterclass in penning it just as it is dear friend.
August 11th, 2022 14:05
Fay Slimm. said:
You catch the essence of the waning spirit being lifted by wonderfully healing kindness - so emotive it brings tears to this reader who can only imagine the dark of despair\'s surface tension. Another masterclass in penning it just as it is dear friend.
August 11th, 2022 14:05
surface tension
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful and oh so true, what a small ray of sunshine or love can do. Thank you for the wonderful thought of the day!
August 11th, 2022 12:00
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful and oh so true, what a small ray of sunshine or love can do. Thank you for the wonderful thought of the day!
August 11th, 2022 12:00
surface tension
Neville said:
a little more than somewhat perfectly postulated my friend ................................... Neville
August 11th, 2022 10:04
Neville said:
a little more than somewhat perfectly postulated my friend ................................... Neville
August 11th, 2022 10:04
surface tension
Caring dove said:
Kindness is so important when struggling .. I hope things improve for you , dusk ) a nicely expressed writing
August 11th, 2022 09:25
Caring dove said:
Kindness is so important when struggling .. I hope things improve for you , dusk ) a nicely expressed writing
August 11th, 2022 09:25
one facet of motivation
MDStone said:
I always enjoy your scrawling. Thank you for sharing “what in this stirring of a telling recounts” with us.
August 5th, 2022 21:18
MDStone said:
I always enjoy your scrawling. Thank you for sharing “what in this stirring of a telling recounts” with us.
August 5th, 2022 21:18
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