Comments received on poems by dusk arising
quench
malubotelho said:
This is one of the most beautiful poem I ever read. So soft, serene. It is quenching my thrirsty of poesy and fantasy. Delightfully beautiful.
August 28th, 2017 16:08
malubotelho said:
This is one of the most beautiful poem I ever read. So soft, serene. It is quenching my thrirsty of poesy and fantasy. Delightfully beautiful.
August 28th, 2017 16:08
quench
myself and me said:
\"my songbird of the woodgreen wild
sings sweetly by the day
as she calls her love from the forest green
where silently i lay \"
So peaceful. Got caught in your poem cant not extricate myself.
August 28th, 2017 15:08
myself and me said:
\"my songbird of the woodgreen wild
sings sweetly by the day
as she calls her love from the forest green
where silently i lay \"
So peaceful. Got caught in your poem cant not extricate myself.
August 28th, 2017 15:08
quench
Accidental Poet said:
This is beautiful dusk. I can almost hear music playing with it. An excellent write. ; )
August 28th, 2017 04:12
Accidental Poet said:
This is beautiful dusk. I can almost hear music playing with it. An excellent write. ; )
August 28th, 2017 04:12
happened
myself and me said:
It will be a wonderful card for a deserved friend.
August 27th, 2017 17:38
myself and me said:
It will be a wonderful card for a deserved friend.
August 27th, 2017 17:38
happened
malubotelho said:
Lovely words Dusk. I would have loved to receive such a gift. Just beautiful.
August 27th, 2017 08:37
malubotelho said:
Lovely words Dusk. I would have loved to receive such a gift. Just beautiful.
August 27th, 2017 08:37
happened
Michael Edwards said:
What lovely words - ideal for a card as intended.
August 27th, 2017 08:15
Michael Edwards said:
What lovely words - ideal for a card as intended.
August 27th, 2017 08:15
thoughts on time
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, time is there for us all to enjoy.
August 27th, 2017 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, time is there for us all to enjoy.
August 27th, 2017 01:59
thoughts on time
Christina8 said:
I absolutely love this poem. Beautiful rhymes! I wonder too if we will ever see a time of peace to all men. Great job!
August 26th, 2017 18:35
Christina8 said:
I absolutely love this poem. Beautiful rhymes! I wonder too if we will ever see a time of peace to all men. Great job!
August 26th, 2017 18:35
thoughts on time
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, great rhyming, and I especially like the ending.
August 26th, 2017 14:45
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, great rhyming, and I especially like the ending.
August 26th, 2017 14:45
thoughts on time
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise thoughts on time and its place in our lives.
August 26th, 2017 14:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise thoughts on time and its place in our lives.
August 26th, 2017 14:30
thoughts on time
malubotelho said:
Time, what a thing. Time is everything and yet they say time is an illusion. I believe time is flexible and changes according to your perception of it. It is magical because the more you need it the less you seems to have but when you have plenty it seems that you are stuck with it. You wrote about time in a wonderful way, again you got your inspiration to the top. Thanks for sharing.
August 26th, 2017 13:13
malubotelho said:
Time, what a thing. Time is everything and yet they say time is an illusion. I believe time is flexible and changes according to your perception of it. It is magical because the more you need it the less you seems to have but when you have plenty it seems that you are stuck with it. You wrote about time in a wonderful way, again you got your inspiration to the top. Thanks for sharing.
August 26th, 2017 13:13
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myself and me said:
Death could be so peacefully beautiful under your pen.
August 25th, 2017 11:58
myself and me said:
Death could be so peacefully beautiful under your pen.
August 25th, 2017 11:58
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malubotelho said:
Very nice reading. Unusual subject. I believe in reincarnation and appreciated your poem from the beginning to the end. Awesome writing dusk
August 25th, 2017 10:38
malubotelho said:
Very nice reading. Unusual subject. I believe in reincarnation and appreciated your poem from the beginning to the end. Awesome writing dusk
August 25th, 2017 10:38
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FredPeyer said:
dusk arising, beautifully penned. I agree with the readers before me. Your poem is so well written, it drew me in, I could not stop reading, and then the unexpected ending.
Since I do believe in multiple lives, this poem is for me!
Mahalo!
August 25th, 2017 01:53
FredPeyer said:
dusk arising, beautifully penned. I agree with the readers before me. Your poem is so well written, it drew me in, I could not stop reading, and then the unexpected ending.
Since I do believe in multiple lives, this poem is for me!
Mahalo!
August 25th, 2017 01:53
forever
MaddieJ said:
SO beautiful like everyone said.... I;m sorry she is now a \"was.\"
August 24th, 2017 22:52
MaddieJ said:
SO beautiful like everyone said.... I;m sorry she is now a \"was.\"
August 24th, 2017 22:52
forever
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a beautiful poem of love,sounded like it was a secret love
August 24th, 2017 22:28
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a beautiful poem of love,sounded like it was a secret love
August 24th, 2017 22:28
forever
Accidental Poet said:
I love the whole poem, it is the euphoric feeling within the heart in love. ; )
August 24th, 2017 18:31
Accidental Poet said:
I love the whole poem, it is the euphoric feeling within the heart in love. ; )
August 24th, 2017 18:31
forever
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and well written poem! I too love the last line. It really brought it together. Awesome!
August 24th, 2017 12:58
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and well written poem! I too love the last line. It really brought it together. Awesome!
August 24th, 2017 12:58
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