Comments received on poems by dusk arising
thoughts on time
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise thoughts on time and its place in our lives.
August 26th, 2017 14:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise thoughts on time and its place in our lives.
August 26th, 2017 14:30
thoughts on time
malubotelho said:
Time, what a thing. Time is everything and yet they say time is an illusion. I believe time is flexible and changes according to your perception of it. It is magical because the more you need it the less you seems to have but when you have plenty it seems that you are stuck with it. You wrote about time in a wonderful way, again you got your inspiration to the top. Thanks for sharing.
August 26th, 2017 13:13
malubotelho said:
Time, what a thing. Time is everything and yet they say time is an illusion. I believe time is flexible and changes according to your perception of it. It is magical because the more you need it the less you seems to have but when you have plenty it seems that you are stuck with it. You wrote about time in a wonderful way, again you got your inspiration to the top. Thanks for sharing.
August 26th, 2017 13:13
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myself and me said:
Death could be so peacefully beautiful under your pen.
August 25th, 2017 11:58
myself and me said:
Death could be so peacefully beautiful under your pen.
August 25th, 2017 11:58
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malubotelho said:
Very nice reading. Unusual subject. I believe in reincarnation and appreciated your poem from the beginning to the end. Awesome writing dusk
August 25th, 2017 10:38
malubotelho said:
Very nice reading. Unusual subject. I believe in reincarnation and appreciated your poem from the beginning to the end. Awesome writing dusk
August 25th, 2017 10:38
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FredPeyer said:
dusk arising, beautifully penned. I agree with the readers before me. Your poem is so well written, it drew me in, I could not stop reading, and then the unexpected ending.
Since I do believe in multiple lives, this poem is for me!
Mahalo!
August 25th, 2017 01:53
FredPeyer said:
dusk arising, beautifully penned. I agree with the readers before me. Your poem is so well written, it drew me in, I could not stop reading, and then the unexpected ending.
Since I do believe in multiple lives, this poem is for me!
Mahalo!
August 25th, 2017 01:53
forever
MaddieJ said:
SO beautiful like everyone said.... I;m sorry she is now a \"was.\"
August 24th, 2017 22:52
MaddieJ said:
SO beautiful like everyone said.... I;m sorry she is now a \"was.\"
August 24th, 2017 22:52
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ron parrish aka wordman said:
a beautiful poem of love,sounded like it was a secret love
August 24th, 2017 22:28
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a beautiful poem of love,sounded like it was a secret love
August 24th, 2017 22:28
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Christina8 said:
Beautiful and well written poem! I too love the last line. It really brought it together. Awesome!
August 24th, 2017 12:58
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and well written poem! I too love the last line. It really brought it together. Awesome!
August 24th, 2017 12:58
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Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful scene that I can see in my minds eye - great write.
August 24th, 2017 11:47
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful scene that I can see in my minds eye - great write.
August 24th, 2017 11:47
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malubotelho said:
Wonderful writing here. Smoothing read. Beautiful words. Welcome.
August 23rd, 2017 10:32
malubotelho said:
Wonderful writing here. Smoothing read. Beautiful words. Welcome.
August 23rd, 2017 10:32
woman
Michael Edwards said:
Just found this and glad I did - great work and welcome to MPS
August 23rd, 2017 01:14
Michael Edwards said:
Just found this and glad I did - great work and welcome to MPS
August 23rd, 2017 01:14
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FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Dusk. Love your poem, what an entrance!
August 23rd, 2017 00:40
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Dusk. Love your poem, what an entrance!
August 23rd, 2017 00:40
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