Comments received on poems by DesertWords
Rising To The Day
Alex Kay said:
The first two stanzas are the weakest here, I\'d say; they feel as if you\'re attempting a poem rather than just letting it happen (\"Do, or do not, there is no try\"). I\'d suggest having a look at those again. But then the poem finds its stride after that and bursts forth with lush, loving prose for the remaining stanzas.
June 9th, 2018 13:10
Alex Kay said:
The first two stanzas are the weakest here, I\'d say; they feel as if you\'re attempting a poem rather than just letting it happen (\"Do, or do not, there is no try\"). I\'d suggest having a look at those again. But then the poem finds its stride after that and bursts forth with lush, loving prose for the remaining stanzas.
June 9th, 2018 13:10
Brighter Days
LiterateLesbian said:
This relates on a deep level. Beautiful words!
May 24th, 2018 13:58
LiterateLesbian said:
This relates on a deep level. Beautiful words!
May 24th, 2018 13:58
The Latest In A Series...
DesertWords said:
Hard to think about. Hard to write about. Thanks for commenting.
May 22nd, 2018 14:54
DesertWords said:
Hard to think about. Hard to write about. Thanks for commenting.
May 22nd, 2018 14:54
The Latest In A Series...
SLR said:
So heartbreaking. So true. Devastating. Every parents worst nightmare.
May 21st, 2018 22:07
SLR said:
So heartbreaking. So true. Devastating. Every parents worst nightmare.
May 21st, 2018 22:07
Song In The Trees
Goldfinch60 said:
The sound of natures symphony is always wonderful.
May 18th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
The sound of natures symphony is always wonderful.
May 18th, 2018 00:54
Birthing A Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it is surprising from where some of the words come.
May 17th, 2018 00:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it is surprising from where some of the words come.
May 17th, 2018 00:03
Birthing A Poem
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding, all thoses words dancing round my head. You\'ve managed to capture so many moments that sit in the corner of my brain, just rhyming way.
Thank ever so much!
May 16th, 2018 11:37
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding, all thoses words dancing round my head. You\'ve managed to capture so many moments that sit in the corner of my brain, just rhyming way.
Thank ever so much!
May 16th, 2018 11:37
How Fast Is Fast Enough
SLR said:
I love this. It shows how we change and priorities change as we grow older. I\'m getting older but I still tend to have a heavy foot. :-) :-)
May 15th, 2018 22:19
SLR said:
I love this. It shows how we change and priorities change as we grow older. I\'m getting older but I still tend to have a heavy foot. :-) :-)
May 15th, 2018 22:19
The Poem That Will Never End
SLR said:
TOO FUNNY!! I love this!! Great flow, and word combos. Definitely a keeper! :-) :-) :-)
May 12th, 2018 13:09
SLR said:
TOO FUNNY!! I love this!! Great flow, and word combos. Definitely a keeper! :-) :-) :-)
May 12th, 2018 13:09
Wandering
dusk arising said:
I\'d love to see tomorrows poem with the beginning \"yesterday i woke up intending to.....\"
... just to see whether you managed to turn wonderment into reality.
May 7th, 2018 13:40
dusk arising said:
I\'d love to see tomorrows poem with the beginning \"yesterday i woke up intending to.....\"
... just to see whether you managed to turn wonderment into reality.
May 7th, 2018 13:40
Wandering
dusk arising said:
I\'d love to see tomorrows poem with the beginning \"yesterday i woke up intending to.....\"
... just to see whether you managed to turn wonderment into reality.
May 7th, 2018 13:30
dusk arising said:
I\'d love to see tomorrows poem with the beginning \"yesterday i woke up intending to.....\"
... just to see whether you managed to turn wonderment into reality.
May 7th, 2018 13:30
Morning Walk
Shadowbox15 said:
Trés belle! I loved what you said on the “mystery of living”. It’s a very true statement.
November 13th, 2017 15:01
Shadowbox15 said:
Trés belle! I loved what you said on the “mystery of living”. It’s a very true statement.
November 13th, 2017 15:01
Watching Butterflies
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem. So descriptive, I can imagine it all! I love the ending. Very nice!
October 21st, 2017 15:10
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem. So descriptive, I can imagine it all! I love the ending. Very nice!
October 21st, 2017 15:10
Morning\'s Visit
Christina8 said:
Beautifully written! I absolutely loved this write.
October 9th, 2017 13:22
Christina8 said:
Beautifully written! I absolutely loved this write.
October 9th, 2017 13:22
Singing To The Mountain
Michael Edwards said:
Sheer delight - my kind of poetry - it paints a wonderful picture written with the heart.
Just posted something similar - A Gentle Land - you want to take a look.
October 8th, 2017 00:47
Michael Edwards said:
Sheer delight - my kind of poetry - it paints a wonderful picture written with the heart.
Just posted something similar - A Gentle Land - you want to take a look.
October 8th, 2017 00:47
Words
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a good write, one day the reverse may happen and the words on the page are full of life as they are on this page. Welcome to MPS.
October 7th, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a good write, one day the reverse may happen and the words on the page are full of life as they are on this page. Welcome to MPS.
October 7th, 2017 01:00
Words
Simple-Man87 said:
I loved this. You did a wonderful job writing this. Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2017 13:58
Simple-Man87 said:
I loved this. You did a wonderful job writing this. Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2017 13:58
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