Comments received on poems by DesertWords



Red Petals
Caring dove said:

Everyone wants to feel strong ... and petals do not want to fall away from where they belong .

Your poem is very good

February 26th, 2021 18:23

Red Petals
Caring dove said:

I really like this . Makes me feel a little sorry for the red petals no longer on the tree .

February 26th, 2021 18:21

At The Deepest Center
Caring dove said:

Lovely poem . I especially love the lines with reference to the eagle and the lilac

Flows really well

February 26th, 2021 18:16

At The Deepest Center
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read, D.W.

February 26th, 2021 09:29

At The Deepest Center
dusk arising said:

Yes, totally agree and the light is within us too.
Wonderful spiritual stuff without any of the religious mumbo jumbo which has confused so many minds among us.

February 26th, 2021 08:58

No Ashes This Year
FredPeyer said:

Well written, and I love the layout. Kudos!

February 18th, 2021 21:46

No Ashes This Year
heatherbee said:

Wow strong words a good read.

February 18th, 2021 04:40

A Technicolor Day
L. B. Mek said:

really well written, galloping line from line smoothly,
a wonderful flow
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'I shall write a poem or sing a song,
maybe climb a mountain peak,
find a friend to take along,
we\'ll do something quite unique.
This is a day when nothing is wrong.
The thrills are for those who seek
with determined will and courage strong,
not the frightened or the meek.\'

February 8th, 2021 06:05

A Technicolor Day
Doggerel Dave said:

Words don\'t desert you do they? (sorry if you\'ve heard it before).
I really fancy the structure and rhymes. Such days do exist - just infrequent enough to be really valued - which is as it should be.

February 7th, 2021 18:52

A Technicolor Day
Jerry Reynolds said:

Enjoyable reading D.W.

February 7th, 2021 14:16

Masks
Doggerel Dave said:

Great piece of satire which hums along with pace rhythm and direction.
Tempted to do a \'let\'s have more\' until I realize you have an extensive back catalogue to poke around in....

February 6th, 2021 20:38

Masks
FredPeyer said:

Well said, DW. There are always people trying to cash in on other peoples misfortune.

February 6th, 2021 18:18

Creative Writing 101
Goldfinch60 said:

Writing is within us and we write how we want to put our feelings on the page.

Good words.

Andy

January 24th, 2021 01:31

Creative Writing 101
Doggerel Dave said:

By all means \"Lay aside the rules and the style\" if you so wish - your choice. But if no one then understands what you\'re on about, it was wasted effort, surely?

January 23rd, 2021 17:42

Creative Writing 101
orchidee said:

Good write DW.

January 23rd, 2021 08:28

Wave Goodbye, Say Hello
L. B. Mek said:

a good read,
indeed not all relationships become so profound, some we hardly recall,
but then that reminds us - most of the people we treasure in our memories: have long since forgotten us...

January 15th, 2021 05:39

I Heard Your Name
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write DW, may your heart always speak to you of love.

Andy

January 6th, 2021 01:34

I Heard Your Name
Amon said:

Lovely
stay safe DW


January 5th, 2021 07:51

In My Father\'s House
orchidee said:

A fine write Desert.

December 31st, 2020 10:56

In My Father\'s House
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written. Have a Happy New Years Eve.

December 31st, 2020 10:45

In My Father\'s House
Amon said:

I like the gospel

December 31st, 2020 07:38

Living Questions
Goldfinch60 said:

There are so many questions in our life, many are answered and allow you to move forward, some cannot be answered so just leave them that way and move on.
The question \'why\' can never be amswered.

Andy

November 16th, 2020 01:04

Living Questions
Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic flow and well needed read, I\'ll take in every word as I can always keep questioning everything!

Thanks again
Much peace and respect

November 15th, 2020 15:26

Living Questions
dusk arising said:

And perhaps compromise comes later still. Some questions are so huge we cannot answer them, yet time can have a way of changing the question.

November 15th, 2020 07:46

Pegasus
Goldfinch60 said:

May \"You Be\" unencumbered by the problems in your realm of wonder.

Andy

November 5th, 2020 01:50

I Will Pay You Back Next Week
Goldfinch60 said:

The \'Bank of Mum and Dad\' is the most used bank in the world.
One family set up their answerphone when there children called:
\"If you are one of our children asking for a loan, press 1\"
If you are one of our children asking us to help you with something, press 2\"
\"If you are one of our children ringing to ask how we are, check you have dialed the right number!\"

Andy

October 14th, 2020 00:47

I Will Pay You Back Next Week
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Afternoon Friend ~ Thanks for your EPIC POEM pn a very important topic for the under 40s ! We have just has an interest free Loan from both Our Parents to buy our first House & reduce the Mortgage ! We loved your Poem ~ replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ and will recite it at our next Seniors Poetry Group ~ it will strike some chords ! Confusius He say *Gambling is the Worst Form of investment* but we Young Ones are always over Optimisitic ! We run *Keeping out of Debt Classes* in our Church ~ so Preachers can give helpful advice ~ even when they have no spare Dollars ! Thanks for sharing !

Every Blessing during this difficult PANDEMIC !
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
Please check our Site and add a Poem
to our Latest FUSION about COVID 19 ~ Thanks A & B !

October 13th, 2020 09:41

Big Mistake
dusk arising said:

Excellent! Really enjoyed this. Pathos throughout. Great slant upon which to tell the tale.

September 14th, 2020 06:10

Golden Years
dusk arising said:

Ha ha, good fun writing.

August 31st, 2020 00:25

The Day The Carousel Stopped
L. B. Mek said:

deep, deep insight to the fallible aspects within humankind,
some thought provoking and well thought-out gems:
\' We, carnivores of consumption,
devour ourselves one deceit at a
time until the plate is clean and the
cupboard is bare.\'

August 27th, 2020 03:05

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