Comments received on poems by DesertWords
Songbird\'s Blessing
psychofemale said:
this was lovely the first stanza was my fav :)
January 9th, 2019 21:58
psychofemale said:
this was lovely the first stanza was my fav :)
January 9th, 2019 21:58
Songbird\'s Blessing
Aislinn Wilson said:
Reminds me of the pope releasing the doves in Ukraine which were attacked by seagull and crow. The repetition is powerful.
January 9th, 2019 10:59
Aislinn Wilson said:
Reminds me of the pope releasing the doves in Ukraine which were attacked by seagull and crow. The repetition is powerful.
January 9th, 2019 10:59
Afternoon Rain
sylviasearcher said:
One of my first short stories a long time ago as a teenager was about the rain. Even then the rain was special, replenishing, pure, unfettered.
Thus resonates.
January 9th, 2019 08:17
sylviasearcher said:
One of my first short stories a long time ago as a teenager was about the rain. Even then the rain was special, replenishing, pure, unfettered.
Thus resonates.
January 9th, 2019 08:17
Afternoon Rain
Goldfinch60 said:
The rain cleans the ground as your words clean the soul. Good write.
January 2nd, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
The rain cleans the ground as your words clean the soul. Good write.
January 2nd, 2019 01:43
Afternoon Rain
Neville said:
just like that rain, these words are refreshingly good.... Neville
January 1st, 2019 12:47
Neville said:
just like that rain, these words are refreshingly good.... Neville
January 1st, 2019 12:47
The Star
Crystal Hope said:
so very beautifully written. excellent penning.
December 23rd, 2018 13:48
Crystal Hope said:
so very beautifully written. excellent penning.
December 23rd, 2018 13:48
Christmas Journey
Crystal Hope said:
This was a great take on the story. :)
December 23rd, 2018 13:43
Crystal Hope said:
This was a great take on the story. :)
December 23rd, 2018 13:43
Wounded Dove
Neville said:
it can appear so very cruel at times, but so absolutely necessary.... a series of well penned observations...
December 17th, 2018 13:16
Neville said:
it can appear so very cruel at times, but so absolutely necessary.... a series of well penned observations...
December 17th, 2018 13:16
Waiting For Wonder
MaddieJ said:
This is so full of balatent truth. I often have to lie down to the ground to allow my heart to beat with the earth. And often times, feeling the wonder of the nature around me, comes after I surrender to its heartbeat. Such a great reminder to be still and wait for it.
December 16th, 2018 10:52
MaddieJ said:
This is so full of balatent truth. I often have to lie down to the ground to allow my heart to beat with the earth. And often times, feeling the wonder of the nature around me, comes after I surrender to its heartbeat. Such a great reminder to be still and wait for it.
December 16th, 2018 10:52
Graceful Hands
Lorna said:
My friend was a horseman and broke many of his fingers - and now he is old and they are all askew as reminders of all his adventures........... so this poem has a special meaning.......
December 10th, 2018 06:13
Lorna said:
My friend was a horseman and broke many of his fingers - and now he is old and they are all askew as reminders of all his adventures........... so this poem has a special meaning.......
December 10th, 2018 06:13
I Never Thought I\'d See The Day
John Lee said:
Yeah I\'m not political. I just know those Democrats have definitely lost their minds. Plus, it just rhymed 😁
November 26th, 2018 22:47
John Lee said:
Yeah I\'m not political. I just know those Democrats have definitely lost their minds. Plus, it just rhymed 😁
November 26th, 2018 22:47
I Never Thought I\'d See The Day
John Lee said:
I never thought I\'d see the day-
The world would believe what is seen through a milky lense
Open their mouths to eat such a tasty treat from slithery friends
Democracy at stake when hypocrisy is made
Offering a plate of steak when its truly a den of rats
Your life you rake goodbye as you trust the Democrats..
November 23rd, 2018 00:56
John Lee said:
I never thought I\'d see the day-
The world would believe what is seen through a milky lense
Open their mouths to eat such a tasty treat from slithery friends
Democracy at stake when hypocrisy is made
Offering a plate of steak when its truly a den of rats
Your life you rake goodbye as you trust the Democrats..
November 23rd, 2018 00:56
Question Mark?
Echo Seeker said:
Wow. The way you write poems is really entertaining.
November 22nd, 2018 00:31
Echo Seeker said:
Wow. The way you write poems is really entertaining.
November 22nd, 2018 00:31
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
Echo Seeker said:
Lol, I know that feeling.
November 22nd, 2018 00:29
Echo Seeker said:
Lol, I know that feeling.
November 22nd, 2018 00:29
I Never Thought I\'d See The Day
Echo Seeker said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for writing it. :)
November 22nd, 2018 00:25
Echo Seeker said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for writing it. :)
November 22nd, 2018 00:25
Mourning and Moving On
Debsspot said:
Everyone comes to these thoughts it there own time. Some easier than others.
November 21st, 2018 06:08
Debsspot said:
Everyone comes to these thoughts it there own time. Some easier than others.
November 21st, 2018 06:08
Mourning and Moving On
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! Your words are profound and what you speak is truth. All things must die. If we mourn for a significant amount of time, we die a little too and that leads us into severe depression.
Your poem is well-written, though heavy on the heart, and is a realistic view of life.
Keep up with your writing. :-)
November 20th, 2018 18:04
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! Your words are profound and what you speak is truth. All things must die. If we mourn for a significant amount of time, we die a little too and that leads us into severe depression.
Your poem is well-written, though heavy on the heart, and is a realistic view of life.
Keep up with your writing. :-)
November 20th, 2018 18:04
Nodding Offffffffffff
orchidee said:
Cooeeee yes, me here! lol. Good write.
November 16th, 2018 10:08
orchidee said:
Cooeeee yes, me here! lol. Good write.
November 16th, 2018 10:08
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, I can remember one vicar that used to slap the top of the pulpit allegedly to make a point, in reality to wake people up.
November 11th, 2018 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, I can remember one vicar that used to slap the top of the pulpit allegedly to make a point, in reality to wake people up.
November 11th, 2018 02:16
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
dusk arising said:
Ironic isn\'t that a preacher regurgitates phrases from a book that has now been proven to be full of mis-translations from the original script. Generally accepted by the various church\'\'s own theologists as being true. Perhaps the congregation would be larger if a lot of the falseness was taken away.
Sorry to drone on a bit, your writing was certainly fun but as you can see - touched a nerve.
November 10th, 2018 16:33
dusk arising said:
Ironic isn\'t that a preacher regurgitates phrases from a book that has now been proven to be full of mis-translations from the original script. Generally accepted by the various church\'\'s own theologists as being true. Perhaps the congregation would be larger if a lot of the falseness was taken away.
Sorry to drone on a bit, your writing was certainly fun but as you can see - touched a nerve.
November 10th, 2018 16:33
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
Leisa Niamh said:
Really funny. reminds me why I don\'t go to church!
November 10th, 2018 16:13
Leisa Niamh said:
Really funny. reminds me why I don\'t go to church!
November 10th, 2018 16:13
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
orchidee said:
And we\'re trapped heehee! If someone just drones on, we can\'t get out, apart from leaving most embarrassed, with some excuse like: \'I really must go, me house is on fire!\' Or \'if I don\'t leave now, it\'ll be Monday any minute!\'
November 10th, 2018 14:37
orchidee said:
And we\'re trapped heehee! If someone just drones on, we can\'t get out, apart from leaving most embarrassed, with some excuse like: \'I really must go, me house is on fire!\' Or \'if I don\'t leave now, it\'ll be Monday any minute!\'
November 10th, 2018 14:37
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