Comments received on poems by DesertWords
The Star
Crystal Hope said:
so very beautifully written. excellent penning.
December 23rd, 2018 13:48
Crystal Hope said:
so very beautifully written. excellent penning.
December 23rd, 2018 13:48
Christmas Journey
Crystal Hope said:
This was a great take on the story. :)
December 23rd, 2018 13:43
Crystal Hope said:
This was a great take on the story. :)
December 23rd, 2018 13:43
Wounded Dove
Neville said:
it can appear so very cruel at times, but so absolutely necessary.... a series of well penned observations...
December 17th, 2018 13:16
Neville said:
it can appear so very cruel at times, but so absolutely necessary.... a series of well penned observations...
December 17th, 2018 13:16
Waiting For Wonder
MaddieJ said:
This is so full of balatent truth. I often have to lie down to the ground to allow my heart to beat with the earth. And often times, feeling the wonder of the nature around me, comes after I surrender to its heartbeat. Such a great reminder to be still and wait for it.
December 16th, 2018 10:52
MaddieJ said:
This is so full of balatent truth. I often have to lie down to the ground to allow my heart to beat with the earth. And often times, feeling the wonder of the nature around me, comes after I surrender to its heartbeat. Such a great reminder to be still and wait for it.
December 16th, 2018 10:52
Graceful Hands
Lorna said:
My friend was a horseman and broke many of his fingers - and now he is old and they are all askew as reminders of all his adventures........... so this poem has a special meaning.......
December 10th, 2018 06:13
Lorna said:
My friend was a horseman and broke many of his fingers - and now he is old and they are all askew as reminders of all his adventures........... so this poem has a special meaning.......
December 10th, 2018 06:13
I Never Thought I\'d See The Day
John Lee said:
Yeah I\'m not political. I just know those Democrats have definitely lost their minds. Plus, it just rhymed 😁
November 26th, 2018 22:47
John Lee said:
Yeah I\'m not political. I just know those Democrats have definitely lost their minds. Plus, it just rhymed 😁
November 26th, 2018 22:47
I Never Thought I\'d See The Day
John Lee said:
I never thought I\'d see the day-
The world would believe what is seen through a milky lense
Open their mouths to eat such a tasty treat from slithery friends
Democracy at stake when hypocrisy is made
Offering a plate of steak when its truly a den of rats
Your life you rake goodbye as you trust the Democrats..
November 23rd, 2018 00:56
John Lee said:
I never thought I\'d see the day-
The world would believe what is seen through a milky lense
Open their mouths to eat such a tasty treat from slithery friends
Democracy at stake when hypocrisy is made
Offering a plate of steak when its truly a den of rats
Your life you rake goodbye as you trust the Democrats..
November 23rd, 2018 00:56
Question Mark?
Echo Seeker said:
Wow. The way you write poems is really entertaining.
November 22nd, 2018 00:31
Echo Seeker said:
Wow. The way you write poems is really entertaining.
November 22nd, 2018 00:31
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
Echo Seeker said:
Lol, I know that feeling.
November 22nd, 2018 00:29
Echo Seeker said:
Lol, I know that feeling.
November 22nd, 2018 00:29
I Never Thought I\'d See The Day
Echo Seeker said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for writing it. :)
November 22nd, 2018 00:25
Echo Seeker said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for writing it. :)
November 22nd, 2018 00:25
Mourning and Moving On
Debsspot said:
Everyone comes to these thoughts it there own time. Some easier than others.
November 21st, 2018 06:08
Debsspot said:
Everyone comes to these thoughts it there own time. Some easier than others.
November 21st, 2018 06:08
Mourning and Moving On
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! Your words are profound and what you speak is truth. All things must die. If we mourn for a significant amount of time, we die a little too and that leads us into severe depression.
Your poem is well-written, though heavy on the heart, and is a realistic view of life.
Keep up with your writing. :-)
November 20th, 2018 18:04
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! Your words are profound and what you speak is truth. All things must die. If we mourn for a significant amount of time, we die a little too and that leads us into severe depression.
Your poem is well-written, though heavy on the heart, and is a realistic view of life.
Keep up with your writing. :-)
November 20th, 2018 18:04
Nodding Offffffffffff
orchidee said:
Cooeeee yes, me here! lol. Good write.
November 16th, 2018 10:08
orchidee said:
Cooeeee yes, me here! lol. Good write.
November 16th, 2018 10:08
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, I can remember one vicar that used to slap the top of the pulpit allegedly to make a point, in reality to wake people up.
November 11th, 2018 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, I can remember one vicar that used to slap the top of the pulpit allegedly to make a point, in reality to wake people up.
November 11th, 2018 02:16
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
dusk arising said:
Ironic isn\'t that a preacher regurgitates phrases from a book that has now been proven to be full of mis-translations from the original script. Generally accepted by the various church\'\'s own theologists as being true. Perhaps the congregation would be larger if a lot of the falseness was taken away.
Sorry to drone on a bit, your writing was certainly fun but as you can see - touched a nerve.
November 10th, 2018 16:33
dusk arising said:
Ironic isn\'t that a preacher regurgitates phrases from a book that has now been proven to be full of mis-translations from the original script. Generally accepted by the various church\'\'s own theologists as being true. Perhaps the congregation would be larger if a lot of the falseness was taken away.
Sorry to drone on a bit, your writing was certainly fun but as you can see - touched a nerve.
November 10th, 2018 16:33
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
Leisa Niamh said:
Really funny. reminds me why I don\'t go to church!
November 10th, 2018 16:13
Leisa Niamh said:
Really funny. reminds me why I don\'t go to church!
November 10th, 2018 16:13
Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off!
orchidee said:
And we\'re trapped heehee! If someone just drones on, we can\'t get out, apart from leaving most embarrassed, with some excuse like: \'I really must go, me house is on fire!\' Or \'if I don\'t leave now, it\'ll be Monday any minute!\'
November 10th, 2018 14:37
orchidee said:
And we\'re trapped heehee! If someone just drones on, we can\'t get out, apart from leaving most embarrassed, with some excuse like: \'I really must go, me house is on fire!\' Or \'if I don\'t leave now, it\'ll be Monday any minute!\'
November 10th, 2018 14:37
Circling Crown
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully penned images grace your beautiful poem.
An enjoyable read. Keep posting! :-)
October 31st, 2018 15:18
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully penned images grace your beautiful poem.
An enjoyable read. Keep posting! :-)
October 31st, 2018 15:18
Midnight Raid
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautifully penned rhyming poem that holds the reader\'s suspense from beginning to end. I loved it. :)
Thanks for sharing.
October 22nd, 2018 16:00
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautifully penned rhyming poem that holds the reader\'s suspense from beginning to end. I loved it. :)
Thanks for sharing.
October 22nd, 2018 16:00
Hugs All Around
dusk arising said:
And theres a kid in us all. Sadly though some deny that inner child so are blind to yours and mine.
October 11th, 2018 15:04
dusk arising said:
And theres a kid in us all. Sadly though some deny that inner child so are blind to yours and mine.
October 11th, 2018 15:04
Is Anyone There?
sylviasearcher said:
I heard you!
Such a powerful poem. I love how you capture the beauty and awesomeness of the natural world in the opening.
Then you bring in the \'stewards\' (humans) and the tone changes to a slight contempt (or maybe I am projecting my own feelings here).
I think people are too busy to pay attention these days.
October 11th, 2018 01:37
sylviasearcher said:
I heard you!
Such a powerful poem. I love how you capture the beauty and awesomeness of the natural world in the opening.
Then you bring in the \'stewards\' (humans) and the tone changes to a slight contempt (or maybe I am projecting my own feelings here).
I think people are too busy to pay attention these days.
October 11th, 2018 01:37
Wind At My Back
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. I too enjoy walking with nature in all its glories and moods.
October 10th, 2018 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. I too enjoy walking with nature in all its glories and moods.
October 10th, 2018 23:55
Sometimes I Think In Rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write DW, thinking in rhyme is great. I have a poet friend who thinks in 5-7-5 (haiku) all the time.
October 9th, 2018 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write DW, thinking in rhyme is great. I have a poet friend who thinks in 5-7-5 (haiku) all the time.
October 9th, 2018 00:09
Sometimes I Think In Rhyme
MaddieJ said:
I love that you captured the concept of thinking in rhyme. Well done sir!
October 8th, 2018 23:18
MaddieJ said:
I love that you captured the concept of thinking in rhyme. Well done sir!
October 8th, 2018 23:18
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