Comments received on poems by DesertWords
Ticket, Please
Accidental Poet said:
My ticket is my life for which I\'m grateful for, and learned that love is the common bond among all living life. Great write DW. 😉
August 29th, 2021 09:40
Accidental Poet said:
My ticket is my life for which I\'m grateful for, and learned that love is the common bond among all living life. Great write DW. 😉
August 29th, 2021 09:40
I Choose The Light
aDarkerMind said:
so you have found a light that blinds you from a real world?
what does that achieve?
we are not confined ro pity...
some have chosen to be confined to it;
I have not!
there is no light that \'chooses\' anyone.
August 29th, 2021 09:35
aDarkerMind said:
so you have found a light that blinds you from a real world?
what does that achieve?
we are not confined ro pity...
some have chosen to be confined to it;
I have not!
there is no light that \'chooses\' anyone.
August 29th, 2021 09:35
I Choose The Light
Accidental Poet said:
And the light shall choose you DW. Stay strong in heart, mind and soul. 👍
August 29th, 2021 09:23
Accidental Poet said:
And the light shall choose you DW. Stay strong in heart, mind and soul. 👍
August 29th, 2021 09:23
Ticket, Please
Eugene S. said:
Said so eloquently. You have mastered your words! Your cathedral leaves me awestruck.
August 29th, 2021 03:57
Eugene S. said:
Said so eloquently. You have mastered your words! Your cathedral leaves me awestruck.
August 29th, 2021 03:57
Ticket, Please
dusk arising said:
Nice to read but your opening line states you searched.... then there\'s no mention of what you searched for...
August 28th, 2021 18:32
dusk arising said:
Nice to read but your opening line states you searched.... then there\'s no mention of what you searched for...
August 28th, 2021 18:32
Virtue Vendor
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderfully metaphorical conceptualisation
really helped to synthesise the nucleus
of your poems message, I found
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
a world without \'marketed Virtue\', what a horror to consider
almost like a world
with diminishing reliance on \'institutionalised belief systems\'
still, as chaotic a reality - we of modernity traverse
somehow, we seem to be carving: a path...
so lets all hope: \'we will survive!\'
June 24th, 2021 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderfully metaphorical conceptualisation
really helped to synthesise the nucleus
of your poems message, I found
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
a world without \'marketed Virtue\', what a horror to consider
almost like a world
with diminishing reliance on \'institutionalised belief systems\'
still, as chaotic a reality - we of modernity traverse
somehow, we seem to be carving: a path...
so lets all hope: \'we will survive!\'
June 24th, 2021 03:41
Lions In The Night
L. B. Mek said:
\'defines the reality.
Danger walks through
the night.
Death is close by.
Be silent.
Do not move.
Wait\'..
really well thought-out and executed,
of our innate, survival senses
you\'ve versed
and worded so poetically immersive
we readers, can feel that tingling sensation
on the back of our necks, trembling
evermore, with each line we devour;
showcasing how: not only
the voice of the prey - freights,
now we, the consuming predators
and interpreters of your poem
are willingly sharing, that same fearful state..
(brilliantly creative, in its concept
creating almost a self-removed feel, within
a wholesome reading experience
somewhat surreal and unique,
briefly transformative, to say the least
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I\'d also liken this to poetry
conceptualising Artistry\'s, surrealist effect
though, by utilising words alone
that itself is a great poetic feat
in my humble opinion
June 21st, 2021 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'defines the reality.
Danger walks through
the night.
Death is close by.
Be silent.
Do not move.
Wait\'..
really well thought-out and executed,
of our innate, survival senses
you\'ve versed
and worded so poetically immersive
we readers, can feel that tingling sensation
on the back of our necks, trembling
evermore, with each line we devour;
showcasing how: not only
the voice of the prey - freights,
now we, the consuming predators
and interpreters of your poem
are willingly sharing, that same fearful state..
(brilliantly creative, in its concept
creating almost a self-removed feel, within
a wholesome reading experience
somewhat surreal and unique,
briefly transformative, to say the least
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I\'d also liken this to poetry
conceptualising Artistry\'s, surrealist effect
though, by utilising words alone
that itself is a great poetic feat
in my humble opinion
June 21st, 2021 04:50
Lions In The Night
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write DW, I was staying silent and still.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write DW, I was staying silent and still.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 23:55
Long Ago and Evermore
L. B. Mek said:
awesome!
works well, either with young love
or that forever love, of yearning and loss..
in-fact, you could clarify this write
as a Portrait of Love!
June 3rd, 2021 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
awesome!
works well, either with young love
or that forever love, of yearning and loss..
in-fact, you could clarify this write
as a Portrait of Love!
June 3rd, 2021 04:06
Long Ago and Evermore
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that the way will be found and you will walk the path together.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that the way will be found and you will walk the path together.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:26
I Choose The Light
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m very literal in my use and understanding of language, DW.
Hence I would like to ask:
-What is this world of pity I\'m allegedly confining you to?
- I can\'t actually speak instead with words of understanding or have
- a strong Voice that speaks words of concern, not condemnation, unless I know what you are on about.
Wot is your problem??? 😊
May 27th, 2021 05:08
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m very literal in my use and understanding of language, DW.
Hence I would like to ask:
-What is this world of pity I\'m allegedly confining you to?
- I can\'t actually speak instead with words of understanding or have
- a strong Voice that speaks words of concern, not condemnation, unless I know what you are on about.
Wot is your problem??? 😊
May 27th, 2021 05:08
I Choose The Light
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
what a profound statement, of self
thanks for sharing
May 27th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
what a profound statement, of self
thanks for sharing
May 27th, 2021 04:34
I Choose The Light
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light be forever in front of you.
Andy
May 27th, 2021 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light be forever in front of you.
Andy
May 27th, 2021 00:42
A Man Who Does Not Care
Goldfinch60 said:
Very understandable words DW, we must all go our own way in the world.
Andy
May 19th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very understandable words DW, we must all go our own way in the world.
Andy
May 19th, 2021 01:49
Inseparable
dusk arising said:
Refreshing to see words of an enlightened mind. God is within us all, we are all god.
Too many time on MPS we read self righteous twaddle of folk sucked into the \'established\' ways of spirituality.
A very enjoyable read from start to finish and desreving of a place among my favourites.
April 18th, 2021 08:34
dusk arising said:
Refreshing to see words of an enlightened mind. God is within us all, we are all god.
Too many time on MPS we read self righteous twaddle of folk sucked into the \'established\' ways of spirituality.
A very enjoyable read from start to finish and desreving of a place among my favourites.
April 18th, 2021 08:34
Golden Beach
Doggerel Dave said:
Surprised me (recalcitrantly anti love poetry) - I really felt this one. Admittedly the disciplined structure and unambiguous imagery helped - so for me, good work all round.
Thanks for it all.
April 13th, 2021 19:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Surprised me (recalcitrantly anti love poetry) - I really felt this one. Admittedly the disciplined structure and unambiguous imagery helped - so for me, good work all round.
Thanks for it all.
April 13th, 2021 19:24
Golden Beach
L. B. Mek said:
immersive poetry: worded accessibly
a good write, thanks for sharing
April 13th, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
immersive poetry: worded accessibly
a good write, thanks for sharing
April 13th, 2021 05:16
Golden Beach
orchidee said:
Cccoeee! You hearing my voice?!
(Do shut up Orchi. lol).
Good write DW.
April 13th, 2021 01:48
orchidee said:
Cccoeee! You hearing my voice?!
(Do shut up Orchi. lol).
Good write DW.
April 13th, 2021 01:48
Betrayal
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery and depth of vulnerability
a good write
(thank you for inspiring my little reply)..
\'though if a tomb remains open
however drained the occupant and rendered incapable
of self-salvaging feats of escape
hope remains, someone may choose to play the hero
and revive, what limitless treasure
is still left to salvage, in your poetry\'s pulsing beacon
even if that someone
is a mirror\'s reflection of belated: self-worth realisation\'
April 1st, 2021 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery and depth of vulnerability
a good write
(thank you for inspiring my little reply)..
\'though if a tomb remains open
however drained the occupant and rendered incapable
of self-salvaging feats of escape
hope remains, someone may choose to play the hero
and revive, what limitless treasure
is still left to salvage, in your poetry\'s pulsing beacon
even if that someone
is a mirror\'s reflection of belated: self-worth realisation\'
April 1st, 2021 05:12
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