Comments received on poems by DesertWords
Betrayal
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery and depth of vulnerability
a good write
(thank you for inspiring my little reply)..
\'though if a tomb remains open
however drained the occupant and rendered incapable
of self-salvaging feats of escape
hope remains, someone may choose to play the hero
and revive, what limitless treasure
is still left to salvage, in your poetry\'s pulsing beacon
even if that someone
is a mirror\'s reflection of belated: self-worth realisation\'
April 1st, 2021 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery and depth of vulnerability
a good write
(thank you for inspiring my little reply)..
\'though if a tomb remains open
however drained the occupant and rendered incapable
of self-salvaging feats of escape
hope remains, someone may choose to play the hero
and revive, what limitless treasure
is still left to salvage, in your poetry\'s pulsing beacon
even if that someone
is a mirror\'s reflection of belated: self-worth realisation\'
April 1st, 2021 05:12
No Ashes This Year
A.H. Browning said:
I just read this today. This is incredible.
March 25th, 2021 19:41
A.H. Browning said:
I just read this today. This is incredible.
March 25th, 2021 19:41
Fresh New Day
L. B. Mek said:
what a triumphantly euphoric - depiction, of Aurora\'s unwavering brilliance..
sat witnessing a brilliant Friday morning of emerging Spring, I can only smile in appreciation and write this words of gratitude for gifting me a rare experience of poetic words, reflecting my reality\'s scenes - simultaneously..
thank you for sharing dear poet!
March 5th, 2021 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
what a triumphantly euphoric - depiction, of Aurora\'s unwavering brilliance..
sat witnessing a brilliant Friday morning of emerging Spring, I can only smile in appreciation and write this words of gratitude for gifting me a rare experience of poetic words, reflecting my reality\'s scenes - simultaneously..
thank you for sharing dear poet!
March 5th, 2021 04:24
It Just Gets Better and Better
L. B. Mek said:
\'Question
marks began to replace exclamation points.
Lashings that held the cargo in place started to
unravel. Brilliant colors on the paint-by-number
canvas lost their luster. And as each year passed,
right up to this 2 a.m. hour in the year of my
eighth decade, clarity gave way to mystery.\'
what a wonderfully relatable way you have of expressing such complex feeling\'s or emotion\'s..
a great journey of rediscovery within a read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 4th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'Question
marks began to replace exclamation points.
Lashings that held the cargo in place started to
unravel. Brilliant colors on the paint-by-number
canvas lost their luster. And as each year passed,
right up to this 2 a.m. hour in the year of my
eighth decade, clarity gave way to mystery.\'
what a wonderfully relatable way you have of expressing such complex feeling\'s or emotion\'s..
a great journey of rediscovery within a read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 4th, 2021 05:26
Created In The Image
Goldfinch60 said:
Our god is within us it is not the one being thrust upon us by organised religions who just confuse reality.
Andy
February 28th, 2021 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Our god is within us it is not the one being thrust upon us by organised religions who just confuse reality.
Andy
February 28th, 2021 02:38
At The Deepest Center
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a true write DW, the light is always there within us.
Andy
February 27th, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a true write DW, the light is always there within us.
Andy
February 27th, 2021 01:34
Red Petals
Caring dove said:
Everyone wants to feel strong ... and petals do not want to fall away from where they belong .
Your poem is very good
February 26th, 2021 18:23
Caring dove said:
Everyone wants to feel strong ... and petals do not want to fall away from where they belong .
Your poem is very good
February 26th, 2021 18:23
Red Petals
Caring dove said:
I really like this . Makes me feel a little sorry for the red petals no longer on the tree .
February 26th, 2021 18:21
Caring dove said:
I really like this . Makes me feel a little sorry for the red petals no longer on the tree .
February 26th, 2021 18:21
At The Deepest Center
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem . I especially love the lines with reference to the eagle and the lilac
Flows really well
February 26th, 2021 18:16
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem . I especially love the lines with reference to the eagle and the lilac
Flows really well
February 26th, 2021 18:16
At The Deepest Center
dusk arising said:
Yes, totally agree and the light is within us too.
Wonderful spiritual stuff without any of the religious mumbo jumbo which has confused so many minds among us.
February 26th, 2021 08:58
dusk arising said:
Yes, totally agree and the light is within us too.
Wonderful spiritual stuff without any of the religious mumbo jumbo which has confused so many minds among us.
February 26th, 2021 08:58
No Ashes This Year
FredPeyer said:
Well written, and I love the layout. Kudos!
February 18th, 2021 21:46
FredPeyer said:
Well written, and I love the layout. Kudos!
February 18th, 2021 21:46
A Technicolor Day
L. B. Mek said:
really well written, galloping line from line smoothly,
a wonderful flow
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'I shall write a poem or sing a song,
maybe climb a mountain peak,
find a friend to take along,
we\'ll do something quite unique.
This is a day when nothing is wrong.
The thrills are for those who seek
with determined will and courage strong,
not the frightened or the meek.\'
February 8th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
really well written, galloping line from line smoothly,
a wonderful flow
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'I shall write a poem or sing a song,
maybe climb a mountain peak,
find a friend to take along,
we\'ll do something quite unique.
This is a day when nothing is wrong.
The thrills are for those who seek
with determined will and courage strong,
not the frightened or the meek.\'
February 8th, 2021 06:05
A Technicolor Day
Doggerel Dave said:
Words don\'t desert you do they? (sorry if you\'ve heard it before).
I really fancy the structure and rhymes. Such days do exist - just infrequent enough to be really valued - which is as it should be.
February 7th, 2021 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Words don\'t desert you do they? (sorry if you\'ve heard it before).
I really fancy the structure and rhymes. Such days do exist - just infrequent enough to be really valued - which is as it should be.
February 7th, 2021 18:52
Masks
Doggerel Dave said:
Great piece of satire which hums along with pace rhythm and direction.
Tempted to do a \'let\'s have more\' until I realize you have an extensive back catalogue to poke around in....
February 6th, 2021 20:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Great piece of satire which hums along with pace rhythm and direction.
Tempted to do a \'let\'s have more\' until I realize you have an extensive back catalogue to poke around in....
February 6th, 2021 20:38
Masks
FredPeyer said:
Well said, DW. There are always people trying to cash in on other peoples misfortune.
February 6th, 2021 18:18
FredPeyer said:
Well said, DW. There are always people trying to cash in on other peoples misfortune.
February 6th, 2021 18:18
Creative Writing 101
Goldfinch60 said:
Writing is within us and we write how we want to put our feelings on the page.
Good words.
Andy
January 24th, 2021 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Writing is within us and we write how we want to put our feelings on the page.
Good words.
Andy
January 24th, 2021 01:31
Creative Writing 101
Doggerel Dave said:
By all means \"Lay aside the rules and the style\" if you so wish - your choice. But if no one then understands what you\'re on about, it was wasted effort, surely?
January 23rd, 2021 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
By all means \"Lay aside the rules and the style\" if you so wish - your choice. But if no one then understands what you\'re on about, it was wasted effort, surely?
January 23rd, 2021 17:42
Wave Goodbye, Say Hello
L. B. Mek said:
a good read,
indeed not all relationships become so profound, some we hardly recall,
but then that reminds us - most of the people we treasure in our memories: have long since forgotten us...
January 15th, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
a good read,
indeed not all relationships become so profound, some we hardly recall,
but then that reminds us - most of the people we treasure in our memories: have long since forgotten us...
January 15th, 2021 05:39
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