Comments received on poems by DesertWords
Circling Crown
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully penned images grace your beautiful poem.
An enjoyable read. Keep posting! :-)
October 31st, 2018 15:18
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully penned images grace your beautiful poem.
An enjoyable read. Keep posting! :-)
October 31st, 2018 15:18
Midnight Raid
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautifully penned rhyming poem that holds the reader\'s suspense from beginning to end. I loved it. :)
Thanks for sharing.
October 22nd, 2018 16:00
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautifully penned rhyming poem that holds the reader\'s suspense from beginning to end. I loved it. :)
Thanks for sharing.
October 22nd, 2018 16:00
Hugs All Around
dusk arising said:
And theres a kid in us all. Sadly though some deny that inner child so are blind to yours and mine.
October 11th, 2018 15:04
dusk arising said:
And theres a kid in us all. Sadly though some deny that inner child so are blind to yours and mine.
October 11th, 2018 15:04
Is Anyone There?
sylviasearcher said:
I heard you!
Such a powerful poem. I love how you capture the beauty and awesomeness of the natural world in the opening.
Then you bring in the \'stewards\' (humans) and the tone changes to a slight contempt (or maybe I am projecting my own feelings here).
I think people are too busy to pay attention these days.
October 11th, 2018 01:37
sylviasearcher said:
I heard you!
Such a powerful poem. I love how you capture the beauty and awesomeness of the natural world in the opening.
Then you bring in the \'stewards\' (humans) and the tone changes to a slight contempt (or maybe I am projecting my own feelings here).
I think people are too busy to pay attention these days.
October 11th, 2018 01:37
Wind At My Back
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. I too enjoy walking with nature in all its glories and moods.
October 10th, 2018 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. I too enjoy walking with nature in all its glories and moods.
October 10th, 2018 23:55
Sometimes I Think In Rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write DW, thinking in rhyme is great. I have a poet friend who thinks in 5-7-5 (haiku) all the time.
October 9th, 2018 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write DW, thinking in rhyme is great. I have a poet friend who thinks in 5-7-5 (haiku) all the time.
October 9th, 2018 00:09
Sometimes I Think In Rhyme
MaddieJ said:
I love that you captured the concept of thinking in rhyme. Well done sir!
October 8th, 2018 23:18
MaddieJ said:
I love that you captured the concept of thinking in rhyme. Well done sir!
October 8th, 2018 23:18
Sometimes I Think In Rhyme
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well done DW I love the meter
a rhyme for me could not be sweeter
when laid out i n the sanzas so
Strong start. nice build and end?
Bravo!
October 8th, 2018 10:33
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well done DW I love the meter
a rhyme for me could not be sweeter
when laid out i n the sanzas so
Strong start. nice build and end?
Bravo!
October 8th, 2018 10:33
Pendulum
Goldfinch60 said:
A very true write. In this day and age integrity seems to be a thing of the past, may it come back in time.
October 1st, 2018 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
A very true write. In this day and age integrity seems to be a thing of the past, may it come back in time.
October 1st, 2018 00:32
Keeping Secrets
A.H. Browning said:
Iām smiling as I read every word. Thank you for the honest truth in this matter š
Best wishes,
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 21:44
A.H. Browning said:
Iām smiling as I read every word. Thank you for the honest truth in this matter š
Best wishes,
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 21:44
Encounter
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely fantastic. Thank you very much for sharing
August 30th, 2018 13:18
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely fantastic. Thank you very much for sharing
August 30th, 2018 13:18
Behind The Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day is so special and is shown in your words.
August 29th, 2018 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day is so special and is shown in your words.
August 29th, 2018 00:44
Dawn
Crystal Hope said:
Your description was incredible. I could literally feel the atmosphere
August 28th, 2018 13:09
Crystal Hope said:
Your description was incredible. I could literally feel the atmosphere
August 28th, 2018 13:09
Behind The Darkness
Crystal Hope said:
Excellent penning you did on this one. Beautiful! :)
August 28th, 2018 13:08
Crystal Hope said:
Excellent penning you did on this one. Beautiful! :)
August 28th, 2018 13:08
Behind The Darkness
sylviasearcher said:
When she feels the
time is right, She
will paint the sky above me with
shades of soft yellows and reds,
blend them into a wordless wonder.
I love that image
August 28th, 2018 09:10
sylviasearcher said:
When she feels the
time is right, She
will paint the sky above me with
shades of soft yellows and reds,
blend them into a wordless wonder.
I love that image
August 28th, 2018 09:10
Bad Choice
sylviasearcher said:
Today I chose door number 3. Laying awhile longer in bed reading poems.
I prefer taking a wander inside the word pictures of unique people.
Albeit virtually.
Thanks for letting me wander around yours š
August 28th, 2018 01:44
sylviasearcher said:
Today I chose door number 3. Laying awhile longer in bed reading poems.
I prefer taking a wander inside the word pictures of unique people.
Albeit virtually.
Thanks for letting me wander around yours š
August 28th, 2018 01:44
Red-Checked Apron
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the darkness can be so special in our lives.
August 22nd, 2018 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the darkness can be so special in our lives.
August 22nd, 2018 00:26
Red-Checked Apron
sylviasearcher said:
Oh you made darkness so beautiful. So necessary. So welcoming.
It is the best time of day.
August 21st, 2018 10:41
sylviasearcher said:
Oh you made darkness so beautiful. So necessary. So welcoming.
It is the best time of day.
August 21st, 2018 10:41
She Danced
sylviasearcher said:
What a beautiful way to capture her memory š
August 16th, 2018 01:27
sylviasearcher said:
What a beautiful way to capture her memory š
August 16th, 2018 01:27
Speaking The Name
Lorna said:
Oh how perfectly lovely and the descriptions had me soaring in the desert.........
July 27th, 2018 12:43
Lorna said:
Oh how perfectly lovely and the descriptions had me soaring in the desert.........
July 27th, 2018 12:43
\"If I have not love...\"
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful read as a tribute to love - an outstanding stanza has to be number four. Well done.
July 12th, 2018 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful read as a tribute to love - an outstanding stanza has to be number four. Well done.
July 12th, 2018 15:58
\"If I have not love...\"
sylviasearcher said:
I have my own spirituality but I think the bible sums this up well
The Way of Love
13 If I speak in the tongues of men and of angels, but have not love, I am a noisy gong or a clanging cymbal. 2 And if I have aprophetic powers, and understand all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith, bso as to remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. 3 cIf I give away all I have, and dif I deliver up my body to be burned,1 but have not love, I gain nothing.
4 eLove is patient and fkind; love gdoes not envy or boast; it his not arrogant 5 or rude. It idoes not insist on its own way; it jis not irritable or resentful;2 6 it kdoes not rejoice at wrongdoing, but lrejoices with the truth. 7 mLove bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, eendures all things.
8 Love never ends. As for prophecies, they will pass away; as for tongues, they will cease; as for knowledge, it will pass away. 9 For nwe know in part and we prophesy in part, 10 but owhen the perfect comes, the partial will pass away. 11 When I was a child, I spoke like a child, I thought like a child, I reasoned like a child. When I became a man, I gave up childish ways. 12 For pnow we see in a mirror dimly, but qthen face to face. Now I know in part; then I shall know fully, even as rI have been fully known.
13 So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love.
July 12th, 2018 08:59
sylviasearcher said:
I have my own spirituality but I think the bible sums this up well
The Way of Love
13 If I speak in the tongues of men and of angels, but have not love, I am a noisy gong or a clanging cymbal. 2 And if I have aprophetic powers, and understand all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith, bso as to remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. 3 cIf I give away all I have, and dif I deliver up my body to be burned,1 but have not love, I gain nothing.
4 eLove is patient and fkind; love gdoes not envy or boast; it his not arrogant 5 or rude. It idoes not insist on its own way; it jis not irritable or resentful;2 6 it kdoes not rejoice at wrongdoing, but lrejoices with the truth. 7 mLove bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, eendures all things.
8 Love never ends. As for prophecies, they will pass away; as for tongues, they will cease; as for knowledge, it will pass away. 9 For nwe know in part and we prophesy in part, 10 but owhen the perfect comes, the partial will pass away. 11 When I was a child, I spoke like a child, I thought like a child, I reasoned like a child. When I became a man, I gave up childish ways. 12 For pnow we see in a mirror dimly, but qthen face to face. Now I know in part; then I shall know fully, even as rI have been fully known.
13 So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love.
July 12th, 2018 08:59
The Best Way To Bike
Heartwriter said:
It is the safer way to cycle. A member of my family is a long distance rider. He had an accident and flipped over the handle bars at a high speed for a bike of course. Broke is neck in five places. His back in four. A few ribs and a hand. After a year or so he rode again. Against doctors orders. In contact pain now. However he still cycles. I think it will be the death of him.
July 4th, 2018 11:13
Heartwriter said:
It is the safer way to cycle. A member of my family is a long distance rider. He had an accident and flipped over the handle bars at a high speed for a bike of course. Broke is neck in five places. His back in four. A few ribs and a hand. After a year or so he rode again. Against doctors orders. In contact pain now. However he still cycles. I think it will be the death of him.
July 4th, 2018 11:13
Pathway By The Stream
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, i is amazing at the things that we see can often inspire us.
July 1st, 2018 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, i is amazing at the things that we see can often inspire us.
July 1st, 2018 00:21
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