Comments received on poems by DesertWords

Faith That Engages Life
orchidee said:

Good write DW.

January 11th, 2023 15:05

Speak Now
Crowns4Christ said:

This is so beautiful,is at about a certain person,it\'s very Loving

November 24th, 2022 16:34

The Pain of Forgetting
orchidee said:

I forgot what I was trying to forget! Eh?! heehee.

October 12th, 2022 09:32

Hand In Hand
Paul Bell said:

The journey started through love, and the journey continued. I think you can look back and say. We did good.

September 28th, 2022 05:41

Hand In Hand
Millennia_Chase said:

so well written, I could feel the love though the words you stiched together.

September 27th, 2022 10:07

Hand In Hand
orchidee said:

I was walking by the light, then I fell down a hole. Someone turned the light switch off. Doh! I didn\'t quite get the hang of things! lol.

September 27th, 2022 09:31

Hand In Hand
darknessandlight said:

This is so beautiful and so powerful. I can feel the love and care radiating from it. I sincerely hope one day to have this very same love and longevity with someone.

September 27th, 2022 09:20

Matthew Kx said:

\"A footnote to what
might have been, a thought in
a mindless moment of time.\" Nicely finished. Reminded me a bit of something I might write. For what that\'s worth. The poem excelled at eloquently expressing your feeling. Thanks for sharing.

August 6th, 2022 14:09

Saxon Crow said:

We\'ve all been there and felt such things. Eloquently penned here my friend.

August 6th, 2022 01:26

Just Me
L. B. Mek said:

life\'s harsh enough, on us
dear poet
lets take it easy on ourselves
forgiveness of self, opens
windows for our soaring
we\'re all
just trying to do our best
tripping up and getting
back UP, and learning a little
from our falls, nothing
more to it, than that..
if we\'re blessed, we\'ll have
a long road ahead of us
in this \'blink-n-miss\', Life..
lets just take it, one step
and breath
and mistake, at a time..
thanks for sharing

June 7th, 2022 03:35

Common Song
Luna Nera said:

exactly this is an incredible message!

April 17th, 2022 20:53

Common Song
Rozina said:

I agree with your message. Good poem.

April 17th, 2022 17:21

Get It While You Can!
Crowns4Christ said:

This is true, we all need love faith and understanding,,but we have to be careful where we learn from

March 4th, 2022 19:23

Get It While You Can!
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow as a teen who is forced to go to church weekly by my father I really could relate to this. Pastors nowadays are really just swindling pretend-believers. They steal your money and claim that God will repay you. Please! Nonetheless, great poem and well done! 💖

March 4th, 2022 09:14

Get It While You Can!
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

Religion is a fickle thing. Nothing wrong with faith, but like everything else, it can very easily be monetized. If only most of them were self aware enough not to fall for it.

March 4th, 2022 09:03

Passing Dream
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow I love the vision you were going for. The imagery is vivid and real and the wording is beautiful. Kudos! 💖

February 16th, 2022 11:13

Get A Job! Who, Me?
Coyote said:


December 26th, 2021 11:48

Get A Job! Who, Me?
Rozina said:

Hahaha, a nice fun poem!

December 25th, 2021 22:39

Virtue Vendor
A.H. Browning said:

I enjoyed your writing here. Made me think and smile. (Honestly, I probably need the Vendor to visit once a week instead of once a month)

October 3rd, 2021 11:31

Ticket, Please
Accidental Poet said:

My ticket is my life for which I\'m grateful for, and learned that love is the common bond among all living life. Great write DW. 😉

August 29th, 2021 09:40

I Choose The Light
aDarkerMind said:

so you have found a light that blinds you from a real world?
what does that achieve?
we are not confined ro pity...
some have chosen to be confined to it;
I have not!
there is no light that \'chooses\' anyone.

August 29th, 2021 09:35

I Choose The Light
Accidental Poet said:

And the light shall choose you DW. Stay strong in heart, mind and soul. 👍

August 29th, 2021 09:23

Ticket, Please
Eugene S. said:

Said so eloquently. You have mastered your words! Your cathedral leaves me awestruck.

August 29th, 2021 03:57

Ticket, Please
dusk arising said:

Nice to read but your opening line states you searched.... then there\'s no mention of what you searched for...

August 28th, 2021 18:32

Virtue Vendor
L. B. Mek said:

(a wonderfully metaphorical conceptualisation
really helped to synthesise the nucleus
of your poems message, I found
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
a world without \'marketed Virtue\', what a horror to consider
almost like a world
with diminishing reliance on \'institutionalised belief systems\'
still, as chaotic a reality - we of modernity traverse
somehow, we seem to be carving: a path...
so lets all hope: \'we will survive!\'

June 24th, 2021 03:41

Lions In The Night
L. B. Mek said:

\'defines the reality.
Danger walks through
the night.
Death is close by.

Be silent.
Do not move.
really well thought-out and executed,
of our innate, survival senses
you\'ve versed
and worded so poetically immersive
we readers, can feel that tingling sensation
on the back of our necks, trembling
evermore, with each line we devour;
showcasing how: not only
the voice of the prey - freights,
now we, the consuming predators
and interpreters of your poem
are willingly sharing, that same fearful state..
(brilliantly creative, in its concept
creating almost a self-removed feel, within
a wholesome reading experience
somewhat surreal and unique,
briefly transformative, to say the least
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I\'d also liken this to poetry
conceptualising Artistry\'s, surrealist effect
though, by utilising words alone
that itself is a great poetic feat
in my humble opinion

June 21st, 2021 04:50

Lions In The Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write DW, I was staying silent and still.


June 20th, 2021 23:55

Lions In The Night
Having hope said:

Great combination of words.❣

June 20th, 2021 08:27

Long Ago and Evermore
L. B. Mek said:

works well, either with young love
or that forever love, of yearning and loss..
in-fact, you could clarify this write
as a Portrait of Love!

June 3rd, 2021 04:06

Long Ago and Evermore
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure that the way will be found and you will walk the path together.


June 3rd, 2021 00:26

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