Comments received on poems by DesertWords



Virtue Vendor
L. B. Mek said:

(a wonderfully metaphorical conceptualisation
really helped to synthesise the nucleus
of your poems message, I found
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
a world without \'marketed Virtue\', what a horror to consider
almost like a world
with diminishing reliance on \'institutionalised belief systems\'
still, as chaotic a reality - we of modernity traverse
somehow, we seem to be carving: a path...
so lets all hope: \'we will survive!\'


June 24th, 2021 03:41

Lions In The Night
L. B. Mek said:

\'defines the reality.
Danger walks through
the night.
Death is close by.

Be silent.
Do not move.
Wait\'..
really well thought-out and executed,
of our innate, survival senses
you\'ve versed
and worded so poetically immersive
we readers, can feel that tingling sensation
on the back of our necks, trembling
evermore, with each line we devour;
showcasing how: not only
the voice of the prey - freights,
now we, the consuming predators
and interpreters of your poem
are willingly sharing, that same fearful state..
(brilliantly creative, in its concept
creating almost a self-removed feel, within
a wholesome reading experience
somewhat surreal and unique,
briefly transformative, to say the least
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I\'d also liken this to poetry
conceptualising Artistry\'s, surrealist effect
though, by utilising words alone
that itself is a great poetic feat
in my humble opinion



June 21st, 2021 04:50

Lions In The Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write DW, I was staying silent and still.

Andy

June 20th, 2021 23:55

Lions In The Night
Having hope said:

Great combination of words.❣

June 20th, 2021 08:27

Lions In The Night
Neil Higgins said:

Lots of lovely imagery here

June 20th, 2021 07:02

Long Ago and Evermore
L. B. Mek said:

awesome!
works well, either with young love
or that forever love, of yearning and loss..
in-fact, you could clarify this write
as a Portrait of Love!

June 3rd, 2021 04:06

Long Ago and Evermore
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure that the way will be found and you will walk the path together.

Andy

June 3rd, 2021 00:26

Long Ago and Evermore
rebmasters said:

So beautiful

June 2nd, 2021 14:55

Long Ago and Evermore
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely heartaching poem

June 2nd, 2021 12:55

I Choose The Light
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m very literal in my use and understanding of language, DW.
Hence I would like to ask:
-What is this world of pity I\'m allegedly confining you to?
- I can\'t actually speak instead with words of understanding or have
- a strong Voice that speaks words of concern, not condemnation, unless I know what you are on about.
Wot is your problem??? 😊



May 27th, 2021 05:08

I Choose The Light
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
what a profound statement, of self
thanks for sharing

May 27th, 2021 04:34

I Choose The Light
Goldfinch60 said:

May that light be forever in front of you.

Andy

May 27th, 2021 00:42

A Man Who Does Not Care
Doggerel Dave said:

Alienation rules.....

May 19th, 2021 19:25

A Man Who Does Not Care
Goldfinch60 said:

Very understandable words DW, we must all go our own way in the world.

Andy

May 19th, 2021 01:49

Inseparable
dusk arising said:

Refreshing to see words of an enlightened mind. God is within us all, we are all god.
Too many time on MPS we read self righteous twaddle of folk sucked into the \'established\' ways of spirituality.
A very enjoyable read from start to finish and desreving of a place among my favourites.

April 18th, 2021 08:34

Inseparable
Goldfinch60 said:

May your god go with you.



April 18th, 2021 02:00

Golden Beach
Trenz Pruca said:

lovely and sad. Thank you.

April 13th, 2021 20:02

Golden Beach
Doggerel Dave said:

Surprised me (recalcitrantly anti love poetry) - I really felt this one. Admittedly the disciplined structure and unambiguous imagery helped - so for me, good work all round.
Thanks for it all.

April 13th, 2021 19:24

Golden Beach
L. B. Mek said:

immersive poetry: worded accessibly
a good write, thanks for sharing

April 13th, 2021 05:16

Golden Beach
orchidee said:

Cccoeee! You hearing my voice?!
(Do shut up Orchi. lol).
Good write DW.

April 13th, 2021 01:48

Golden Beach
yellowrose said:

Beautiful words )

April 13th, 2021 00:38

Golden Beach
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive words DW.

Andy

April 13th, 2021 00:35

Betrayal
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery and depth of vulnerability
a good write
(thank you for inspiring my little reply)..
\'though if a tomb remains open
however drained the occupant and rendered incapable
of self-salvaging feats of escape
hope remains, someone may choose to play the hero
and revive, what limitless treasure
is still left to salvage, in your poetry\'s pulsing beacon
even if that someone
is a mirror\'s reflection of belated: self-worth realisation\'

April 1st, 2021 05:12

Betrayal
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with very meaningful words.

Andy

April 1st, 2021 00:28

Betrayal
Goddess of the Mist said:

Amazing poem - full of so much meaning!

March 31st, 2021 22:26

Betrayal
A.H. Browning said:

👍

March 31st, 2021 21:56

Betrayal
heatherbee said:

Lovely to read great sense of words

March 31st, 2021 17:17

Betrayal
aDarkerMind said:

a true write of art, and a pleasure to read.

March 31st, 2021 12:45

No Ashes This Year
A.H. Browning said:

I just read this today. This is incredible.

March 25th, 2021 19:41

Fresh New Day
L. B. Mek said:

what a triumphantly euphoric - depiction, of Aurora\'s unwavering brilliance..
sat witnessing a brilliant Friday morning of emerging Spring, I can only smile in appreciation and write this words of gratitude for gifting me a rare experience of poetic words, reflecting my reality\'s scenes - simultaneously..
thank you for sharing dear poet!

March 5th, 2021 04:24

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