Comments received on poems by DesertWords
Unless We Try...
Doggerel Dave said:
Not a good day to be posting a reasoned piece on peace and war when a quick slogan or two will do.
Neat - asking the right questions. Thanks.
November 11th, 2024 15:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Not a good day to be posting a reasoned piece on peace and war when a quick slogan or two will do.
Neat - asking the right questions. Thanks.
November 11th, 2024 15:42
Clouds At Play
sorenbarrett said:
A nice use of anthropomorphism in a most beautiful setting giving a maternal feel to this wonderful poem
August 23rd, 2024 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
A nice use of anthropomorphism in a most beautiful setting giving a maternal feel to this wonderful poem
August 23rd, 2024 04:53
Wink and Grin
sorenbarrett said:
Great use of rhyme to convey a rhythm to this piece. It sends a most interesting message. Loved it.
July 17th, 2024 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Great use of rhyme to convey a rhythm to this piece. It sends a most interesting message. Loved it.
July 17th, 2024 10:20
Courage To Press On
Mutley Ravishes said:
Awesome rhyme! A friend of mine said courage is the power that transmutes a life into its true potential.
July 7th, 2024 04:13
Mutley Ravishes said:
Awesome rhyme! A friend of mine said courage is the power that transmutes a life into its true potential.
July 7th, 2024 04:13
Coming Home
mvvenkataraman said:
Home is true Heaven,
Nice description,
I enjoyed your poem,
I remember my parents !
April 28th, 2024 09:04
mvvenkataraman said:
Home is true Heaven,
Nice description,
I enjoyed your poem,
I remember my parents !
April 28th, 2024 09:04
Coming Home
Eugene S. said:
Wonderful. I kept envisioning Dorothy waking up from the dream to see that everything she loved was still there.
April 28th, 2024 08:34
Eugene S. said:
Wonderful. I kept envisioning Dorothy waking up from the dream to see that everything she loved was still there.
April 28th, 2024 08:34
Visit To The Dentist
Teddy.15 said:
LOL how I relate to this you have no idea, I have been terrified all my life of the dentist, I actually befriended my last one 20 years ago and she thinks I\'m a nut. Saying goodbye to the dog oh so funny and so what I myself do before a check up! LoL thank you for the realism and the down to earth way you reminded.me I\'m not alone. LOL 🤣 💖
September 16th, 2023 14:54
Teddy.15 said:
LOL how I relate to this you have no idea, I have been terrified all my life of the dentist, I actually befriended my last one 20 years ago and she thinks I\'m a nut. Saying goodbye to the dog oh so funny and so what I myself do before a check up! LoL thank you for the realism and the down to earth way you reminded.me I\'m not alone. LOL 🤣 💖
September 16th, 2023 14:54
You Must Begin To End
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece friend,
Full of truth and like Pops said lessons
September 15th, 2023 08:35
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece friend,
Full of truth and like Pops said lessons
September 15th, 2023 08:35
You Must Begin To End
Pop64 said:
You eagerly teach all those who are willing to read. Lessons are welcomed when presented as such, with tact, rhythm and rhyme. Nicely penned!
September 15th, 2023 07:54
Pop64 said:
You eagerly teach all those who are willing to read. Lessons are welcomed when presented as such, with tact, rhythm and rhyme. Nicely penned!
September 15th, 2023 07:54
What if...
Pop64 said:
Not a pleasant world if only to have what ifs. Your write allows the teenager in me to exist again, reeling through those memories of my own what ifs and disbeliefs. Very good write and story telling.
September 15th, 2023 07:44
Pop64 said:
Not a pleasant world if only to have what ifs. Your write allows the teenager in me to exist again, reeling through those memories of my own what ifs and disbeliefs. Very good write and story telling.
September 15th, 2023 07:44
I Have Wondered...
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
you have a wonderful talent dear poet
thanks for sharing
\'of all the odds that say \"Don\'t try.\"
And I\'ve looked in the mirror to ask, simply, \"Why?\"
Have I made a difference? Did I build or destroy?
Did I leave the footprints of peace or joy?
These haunting questions fill my mind
and sometimes the answers I cannot find.
And I wonder how I will be inclined
to interpret the score on this life-card of mine.\'
September 15th, 2023 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
you have a wonderful talent dear poet
thanks for sharing
\'of all the odds that say \"Don\'t try.\"
And I\'ve looked in the mirror to ask, simply, \"Why?\"
Have I made a difference? Did I build or destroy?
Did I leave the footprints of peace or joy?
These haunting questions fill my mind
and sometimes the answers I cannot find.
And I wonder how I will be inclined
to interpret the score on this life-card of mine.\'
September 15th, 2023 06:34
I Have Wondered...
Bobby O said:
Nice last line. It’s a personal pronouncement and yet it’s for all of us. How cool is that? Nice write good read
September 14th, 2023 22:51
Bobby O said:
Nice last line. It’s a personal pronouncement and yet it’s for all of us. How cool is that? Nice write good read
September 14th, 2023 22:51
What if...
Parisab said:
Such a timeless longing and fear of rejection! They don’t make them like that anymore! It’s no risk, just comfort!
August 13th, 2023 16:13
Parisab said:
Such a timeless longing and fear of rejection! They don’t make them like that anymore! It’s no risk, just comfort!
August 13th, 2023 16:13
Bow Upon String
Parisab said:
Patiently built the action, to be release! Very succinct and a beautiful read…
August 11th, 2023 15:40
Parisab said:
Patiently built the action, to be release! Very succinct and a beautiful read…
August 11th, 2023 15:40
The Almost Poet
Pop64 said:
Sad when one turns away from that which makes them whole, internally satisfied. A fond adieu to one who just says they will stop. Very well written.
July 19th, 2023 11:40
Pop64 said:
Sad when one turns away from that which makes them whole, internally satisfied. A fond adieu to one who just says they will stop. Very well written.
July 19th, 2023 11:40
And So You Remain Forever
L. B. Mek said:
\'A cold wind paralyzes all efforts to smile\'
I so relate, a wonderful write
thanks for sharing
July 10th, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'A cold wind paralyzes all efforts to smile\'
I so relate, a wonderful write
thanks for sharing
July 10th, 2023 04:44
Speak Now
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so beautiful,is at about a certain person,it\'s very Loving
November 24th, 2022 16:34
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so beautiful,is at about a certain person,it\'s very Loving
November 24th, 2022 16:34
The Pain of Forgetting
orchidee said:
I forgot what I was trying to forget! Eh?! heehee.
October 12th, 2022 09:32
orchidee said:
I forgot what I was trying to forget! Eh?! heehee.
October 12th, 2022 09:32
Hand In Hand
Paul Bell said:
The journey started through love, and the journey continued. I think you can look back and say. We did good.
September 28th, 2022 05:41
Paul Bell said:
The journey started through love, and the journey continued. I think you can look back and say. We did good.
September 28th, 2022 05:41
Hand In Hand
Millennia_Chase said:
so well written, I could feel the love though the words you stiched together.
September 27th, 2022 10:07
Millennia_Chase said:
so well written, I could feel the love though the words you stiched together.
September 27th, 2022 10:07
Hand In Hand
orchidee said:
I was walking by the light, then I fell down a hole. Someone turned the light switch off. Doh! I didn\'t quite get the hang of things! lol.
September 27th, 2022 09:31
orchidee said:
I was walking by the light, then I fell down a hole. Someone turned the light switch off. Doh! I didn\'t quite get the hang of things! lol.
September 27th, 2022 09:31
Hand In Hand
darknessandlight said:
This is so beautiful and so powerful. I can feel the love and care radiating from it. I sincerely hope one day to have this very same love and longevity with someone.
September 27th, 2022 09:20
darknessandlight said:
This is so beautiful and so powerful. I can feel the love and care radiating from it. I sincerely hope one day to have this very same love and longevity with someone.
September 27th, 2022 09:20
Disappointment
Matthew Kx said:
\"A footnote to what
might have been, a thought in
a mindless moment of time.\" Nicely finished. Reminded me a bit of something I might write. For what that\'s worth. The poem excelled at eloquently expressing your feeling. Thanks for sharing.
August 6th, 2022 14:09
Matthew Kx said:
\"A footnote to what
might have been, a thought in
a mindless moment of time.\" Nicely finished. Reminded me a bit of something I might write. For what that\'s worth. The poem excelled at eloquently expressing your feeling. Thanks for sharing.
August 6th, 2022 14:09
Disappointment
Saxon Crow said:
We\'ve all been there and felt such things. Eloquently penned here my friend.
August 6th, 2022 01:26
Saxon Crow said:
We\'ve all been there and felt such things. Eloquently penned here my friend.
August 6th, 2022 01:26
Just Me
L. B. Mek said:
life\'s harsh enough, on us
dear poet
lets take it easy on ourselves
forgiveness of self, opens
windows for our soaring
hopes..
we\'re all
just trying to do our best
tripping up and getting
back UP, and learning a little
from our falls, nothing
more to it, than that..
if we\'re blessed, we\'ll have
a long road ahead of us
in this \'blink-n-miss\', Life..
lets just take it, one step
and breath
and mistake, at a time..
thanks for sharing
June 7th, 2022 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
life\'s harsh enough, on us
dear poet
lets take it easy on ourselves
forgiveness of self, opens
windows for our soaring
hopes..
we\'re all
just trying to do our best
tripping up and getting
back UP, and learning a little
from our falls, nothing
more to it, than that..
if we\'re blessed, we\'ll have
a long road ahead of us
in this \'blink-n-miss\', Life..
lets just take it, one step
and breath
and mistake, at a time..
thanks for sharing
June 7th, 2022 03:35
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