Comments received on poems by GON
the rich man and the poor man
L. B. Mek said:
had me rereading to insure I could understand or relate, I think I get it,
of that final \'crossing\' you depict, where finery riche\'s are as valued as the dirt beneath fingernails..
a thought provoking write (well for those of limited intellect like myself anyway, lol)
February 25th, 2021 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
had me rereading to insure I could understand or relate, I think I get it,
of that final \'crossing\' you depict, where finery riche\'s are as valued as the dirt beneath fingernails..
a thought provoking write (well for those of limited intellect like myself anyway, lol)
February 25th, 2021 06:01
silver and gold are getting old
Goldfinch60 said:
We must keep moving forward in our lives.
Andy
February 24th, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
We must keep moving forward in our lives.
Andy
February 24th, 2021 01:51
silver and gold are getting old
FredPeyer said:
Nice rhyme, well written. Now, without that Covid problem, I could go out too!
February 23rd, 2021 10:46
FredPeyer said:
Nice rhyme, well written. Now, without that Covid problem, I could go out too!
February 23rd, 2021 10:46
silver and gold are getting old
Jerry Reynolds said:
Optimistic write, Gon. Good one.
February 23rd, 2021 10:31
Jerry Reynolds said:
Optimistic write, Gon. Good one.
February 23rd, 2021 10:31
fantastic things | draft 2
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful read, with a resoundingly impowering message..
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful read, with a resoundingly impowering message..
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:28
fantastic things | draft 2
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely expression and nice flow to this one 🙂
February 23rd, 2021 03:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely expression and nice flow to this one 🙂
February 23rd, 2021 03:05
fantastic things | draft 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Through that black hole light shines in your words.
Andy
February 23rd, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Through that black hole light shines in your words.
Andy
February 23rd, 2021 01:54
fantastic things | draft 2
FredPeyer said:
Go for it Noah, all it takes is that first step. Well written!
February 22nd, 2021 21:52
FredPeyer said:
Go for it Noah, all it takes is that first step. Well written!
February 22nd, 2021 21:52
to carry the zero
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very good! Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe
December 24th, 2020 17:05
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very good! Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe
December 24th, 2020 17:05
Ms. Dickinson—Come out your room!
L. B. Mek said:
She travelled the depths and breaths of human nature like few ever have or will do: she glided, while we trudged - through life...
solitude, like all things unknown and thus feared - has its own virtues,
if only all of us can live our life as free, as she was in that room of hers
August 10th, 2020 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
She travelled the depths and breaths of human nature like few ever have or will do: she glided, while we trudged - through life...
solitude, like all things unknown and thus feared - has its own virtues,
if only all of us can live our life as free, as she was in that room of hers
August 10th, 2020 05:43
Ms. Dickinson—Come out your room!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good tribute to a super poet.
Andy
August 9th, 2020 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good tribute to a super poet.
Andy
August 9th, 2020 00:46
thank you for my son
Fay Slimm. said:
A moving tribute to a much loved new addition to a caring family - - the rhyming scheme is perfect for reading and digesting this gem of a write.
August 2nd, 2020 04:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A moving tribute to a much loved new addition to a caring family - - the rhyming scheme is perfect for reading and digesting this gem of a write.
August 2nd, 2020 04:30
rise and fall
GON said:
haven\'t been submitting much lately due to the chaos of life but don\'t worry, i\'ve been writing quite a lot...or maybe do worry lol
July 31st, 2020 09:36
GON said:
haven\'t been submitting much lately due to the chaos of life but don\'t worry, i\'ve been writing quite a lot...or maybe do worry lol
July 31st, 2020 09:36
windowpane
Evergreen said:
“Your soft lips pressed against mine, like the windowpane to my hand”
Beautiful.
July 24th, 2020 02:38
Evergreen said:
“Your soft lips pressed against mine, like the windowpane to my hand”
Beautiful.
July 24th, 2020 02:38
windowpane
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love come to you and be forever with you.
Andy
July 23rd, 2020 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love come to you and be forever with you.
Andy
July 23rd, 2020 00:34
windowpane
dusk arising said:
tears of raindrops on windows bring out the melancholy often it seems in love songs
hope tinged with sadness, one wonders if you are thinking of someone out of your league here or perhaps they\'re \'spoken for\'
July 22nd, 2020 14:18
dusk arising said:
tears of raindrops on windows bring out the melancholy often it seems in love songs
hope tinged with sadness, one wonders if you are thinking of someone out of your league here or perhaps they\'re \'spoken for\'
July 22nd, 2020 14:18
windowpane
benevolentbluebabe said:
Even the most stoic of hearts may be warmed, given the right counterpart : )
July 22nd, 2020 11:12
benevolentbluebabe said:
Even the most stoic of hearts may be warmed, given the right counterpart : )
July 22nd, 2020 11:12
fuck it
TWENTY3 said:
what is going on at Mps, its all guitars. This one stands out for the uniqeness and structure. So in some kind of conclusion, i say fuck it all!
July 22nd, 2020 05:12
TWENTY3 said:
what is going on at Mps, its all guitars. This one stands out for the uniqeness and structure. So in some kind of conclusion, i say fuck it all!
July 22nd, 2020 05:12
5 minutes
TWENTY3 said:
brilliant! My name Omega gets constant satelitte updates so I can\'t set the time 5 mins forward or backwards. Fuck! I really want my crops to dry up so I can argue with God.
July 17th, 2020 06:09
TWENTY3 said:
brilliant! My name Omega gets constant satelitte updates so I can\'t set the time 5 mins forward or backwards. Fuck! I really want my crops to dry up so I can argue with God.
July 17th, 2020 06:09
for scarlet poet
TWENTY3 said:
19 views and no comments, what is wrong with this place. This stands out higher than the usual rhetoric on this site.
July 17th, 2020 06:04
TWENTY3 said:
19 views and no comments, what is wrong with this place. This stands out higher than the usual rhetoric on this site.
July 17th, 2020 06:04
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