Comments received on poems by Noah Malice
She\'s The One
Caring dove said:
Great poem .. nicely expressed .like your mention of the wooden house , dancing and the crystal ball
May 10th, 2022 14:16
Caring dove said:
Great poem .. nicely expressed .like your mention of the wooden house , dancing and the crystal ball
May 10th, 2022 14:16
atlas ii: prose and verse
Caring dove said:
Hi Noah .. a good poem .. nicely expressed . It can be really difficult to feel alone and like we’re living a lie .. and wanting searching for something more . I guess there always has to be a hope of something more .. hope is important . I like your poem tho it is sad .. sorry you might be feeling like this . Can relate in a way
May 10th, 2022 14:04
Caring dove said:
Hi Noah .. a good poem .. nicely expressed . It can be really difficult to feel alone and like we’re living a lie .. and wanting searching for something more . I guess there always has to be a hope of something more .. hope is important . I like your poem tho it is sad .. sorry you might be feeling like this . Can relate in a way
May 10th, 2022 14:04
what sets us apart // draft 1
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
thank you, dear Poet
(I read and learn)
\'to roll with the punches
and roll punches no more
to stick to the trenches
when the punches pour
take cover with courage
take courage in flood
and remember sacrifices
we gave all in blood
what sets us apart
though we\'re not there yet
is we know we\'ll make it
...\'
May 10th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
thank you, dear Poet
(I read and learn)
\'to roll with the punches
and roll punches no more
to stick to the trenches
when the punches pour
take cover with courage
take courage in flood
and remember sacrifices
we gave all in blood
what sets us apart
though we\'re not there yet
is we know we\'ll make it
...\'
May 10th, 2022 05:15
Old Friend
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
effortlessly relatable
and those light piano notes
accentuate
the duality of both
whimsical and yearning, tones
of your words..
thanks for sharing
May 9th, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
effortlessly relatable
and those light piano notes
accentuate
the duality of both
whimsical and yearning, tones
of your words..
thanks for sharing
May 9th, 2022 04:17
Old Friend
Rozina said:
Exactly what happened between a very good old friend and me more than 40 years ago. We lost touch after moving. But when we got together again recently it was just like old times. So wonderful.
May 9th, 2022 03:18
Rozina said:
Exactly what happened between a very good old friend and me more than 40 years ago. We lost touch after moving. But when we got together again recently it was just like old times. So wonderful.
May 9th, 2022 03:18
So far so down / Land of the dead
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem just grabbed me! You have a depth of understanding beyond your years, and your words are truly profound. I love the line \"I just got lost trying to be found\". A state I find myself in from time to time. You also introduced me to \"Petrichor\" which did not know, but will think of every time I smell the rain coming. Being of the older generation I can appreciate the feeling that went into this piece. A very well crafted and heartfelt poem.
May 8th, 2022 09:16
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem just grabbed me! You have a depth of understanding beyond your years, and your words are truly profound. I love the line \"I just got lost trying to be found\". A state I find myself in from time to time. You also introduced me to \"Petrichor\" which did not know, but will think of every time I smell the rain coming. Being of the older generation I can appreciate the feeling that went into this piece. A very well crafted and heartfelt poem.
May 8th, 2022 09:16
holding onto me holding onto you // draft 1
Caring dove said:
Really beautiful )) lovely poetry
May 6th, 2022 14:08
Caring dove said:
Really beautiful )) lovely poetry
May 6th, 2022 14:08
you aren\'t the only fish in the sea
Caring dove said:
Don’t think I’ve commented on your poems before . This is lovely ))
Some connections can be strong .. and not always easy to deal with
May 6th, 2022 13:36
Caring dove said:
Don’t think I’ve commented on your poems before . This is lovely ))
Some connections can be strong .. and not always easy to deal with
May 6th, 2022 13:36
Ambulance of meditation
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any thoelogical alignment
I can\'t help but champion
your life-affirming, message
wonderfully worded
and full of practical applications
to your chosen faith system
really like your phrasing of
\'ambulance of meditation\'
speaks to your open minded
wide lensed, scope of life..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'and in the green
you sit so still
through power of will
so stoic and serene
and under sky
you know well why
the ambulance of meditation
keeps your body clean\'
that practical, cleanliness
excavated from within
via introspection\'s, meditative qualities!
May 6th, 2022 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any thoelogical alignment
I can\'t help but champion
your life-affirming, message
wonderfully worded
and full of practical applications
to your chosen faith system
really like your phrasing of
\'ambulance of meditation\'
speaks to your open minded
wide lensed, scope of life..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'and in the green
you sit so still
through power of will
so stoic and serene
and under sky
you know well why
the ambulance of meditation
keeps your body clean\'
that practical, cleanliness
excavated from within
via introspection\'s, meditative qualities!
May 6th, 2022 03:38
holding onto me holding onto you // draft 1
L. B. Mek said:
these words, should be put to music!
and I second hoolihooli\'s comment
such wonderfully flowing
quintessential, Poetry..
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
May 5th, 2022 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
these words, should be put to music!
and I second hoolihooli\'s comment
such wonderfully flowing
quintessential, Poetry..
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
May 5th, 2022 03:28
holding onto me holding onto you // draft 1
Hoolihooli said:
I absolutely adore your style of poetry I can’t describe to you how much I love this
May 4th, 2022 20:41
Hoolihooli said:
I absolutely adore your style of poetry I can’t describe to you how much I love this
May 4th, 2022 20:41
i can\'t be the one
Crowns4Christ said:
Why can\'t you,you are the one for someone out there, maybe the one right in front of you,
Don\'t let fear of the unknown overtake you
April 24th, 2022 17:24
Crowns4Christ said:
Why can\'t you,you are the one for someone out there, maybe the one right in front of you,
Don\'t let fear of the unknown overtake you
April 24th, 2022 17:24
racehorse / penny in the air
Evergreen said:
Beautiful. Glad to see you writing again :)
April 23rd, 2022 22:11
Evergreen said:
Beautiful. Glad to see you writing again :)
April 23rd, 2022 22:11
racehorse / penny in the air
Crowns4Christ said:
This is incredible Gon, I love it
April 23rd, 2022 21:45
Crowns4Christ said:
This is incredible Gon, I love it
April 23rd, 2022 21:45
you aren\'t the only fish in the sea
Crowns4Christ said:
Hi gon it\'s been awhile, love your poem,
April 5th, 2022 17:44
Crowns4Christ said:
Hi gon it\'s been awhile, love your poem,
April 5th, 2022 17:44
back on my feet
L. B. Mek said:
Love, the invigorating message
what a poetic gift, you\'ve weaved
thank you! for choosing to share
August 20th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
Love, the invigorating message
what a poetic gift, you\'ve weaved
thank you! for choosing to share
August 20th, 2021 04:01
/ talk of the town /
Doggerel Dave said:
As a portrait of a very strong person, that has depth, and is something one could hopefully aspire to.
A rounded (and deep, as above) picture.
August 14th, 2021 23:41
Doggerel Dave said:
As a portrait of a very strong person, that has depth, and is something one could hopefully aspire to.
A rounded (and deep, as above) picture.
August 14th, 2021 23:41
butterflies probing weeds
L. B. Mek said:
a great read, witty and light-hearted in tone but with real depth
thanks for sharing
April 29th, 2021 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
a great read, witty and light-hearted in tone but with real depth
thanks for sharing
April 29th, 2021 03:13
Curtains
L. B. Mek said:
deep, we readers kinda have to be angled in the right mindset to catch your subtle nuances I think, clever word choices..
thanks for sharing
March 25th, 2021 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
deep, we readers kinda have to be angled in the right mindset to catch your subtle nuances I think, clever word choices..
thanks for sharing
March 25th, 2021 04:06
sewer rat queen
L. B. Mek said:
lol,
well, that\'s certainly a definitive statement: of intent...
good luck!
February 26th, 2021 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
lol,
well, that\'s certainly a definitive statement: of intent...
good luck!
February 26th, 2021 06:10
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