Comments received on poems by Noah Malice
The harder we fell (GON\'s version)
tallisman said:
Hi both of you! Actually enjoyed both versions! I like GON statement about melody and verse, agree with rhat. I’m very agreeable this morning! You two should do a few collaborations, you have talent, both of you!
June 8th, 2022 00:27
tallisman said:
Hi both of you! Actually enjoyed both versions! I like GON statement about melody and verse, agree with rhat. I’m very agreeable this morning! You two should do a few collaborations, you have talent, both of you!
June 8th, 2022 00:27
The harder we fell (GON\'s version)
a thousand wishes said:
And you should take some of the credit :) you made it so much more beautiful
June 7th, 2022 13:49
a thousand wishes said:
And you should take some of the credit :) you made it so much more beautiful
June 7th, 2022 13:49
The harder we fell (GON\'s version)
a thousand wishes said:
WOW. You were modest when you said ¨level 3¨ this is like level 100. My favorite part is the ¨up and down of you on this rollercoaster¨ You truly took my first version and made it 100x better
June 7th, 2022 13:48
a thousand wishes said:
WOW. You were modest when you said ¨level 3¨ this is like level 100. My favorite part is the ¨up and down of you on this rollercoaster¨ You truly took my first version and made it 100x better
June 7th, 2022 13:48
submission
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful piece, love the structure and your words, well, let´s just say I felt all your words very deeply
June 7th, 2022 11:18
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful piece, love the structure and your words, well, let´s just say I felt all your words very deeply
June 7th, 2022 11:18
submission
L. B. Mek said:
break-up\'s
don\'t have to be so toxic
for some, relationships
that evolve
to realm\'s of friendship
we can, excavate
something
tangibly beautiful, in our
sweet sorrow...
as your Poetry, poignantly
alludes to
\'at least in my interpretation of it\'
dear Poet
thank you! a Great read
June 7th, 2022 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
break-up\'s
don\'t have to be so toxic
for some, relationships
that evolve
to realm\'s of friendship
we can, excavate
something
tangibly beautiful, in our
sweet sorrow...
as your Poetry, poignantly
alludes to
\'at least in my interpretation of it\'
dear Poet
thank you! a Great read
June 7th, 2022 03:41
the planes are flying again
arqios said:
So much sounds in the skies these days. The air lanes are starting up again. There in front of us are possibilities beginning to unfold and present themselves. Thanks for sharing.
June 6th, 2022 05:33
arqios said:
So much sounds in the skies these days. The air lanes are starting up again. There in front of us are possibilities beginning to unfold and present themselves. Thanks for sharing.
June 6th, 2022 05:33
the planes are flying again
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(those wings of regret
fuelled
by enduring engines of
hope;
I wish you a landing strip
of peace)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
June 6th, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(those wings of regret
fuelled
by enduring engines of
hope;
I wish you a landing strip
of peace)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
June 6th, 2022 04:22
May
JudyStella said:
may you love the life you have to live
there may not be another one
This line strikes so hard. Well written!
June 4th, 2022 23:35
JudyStella said:
may you love the life you have to live
there may not be another one
This line strikes so hard. Well written!
June 4th, 2022 23:35
May
a thousand wishes said:
I ABSOLUTELY love this poem, it\'s my favorite out of all the poems I have read on here and I don\'t say that about just any poem, so don\'t take it lightly :) and the a thousand wishes part!! I melted and this whole poem was just so beautiful and artistic. So many emotions carried throughout your poem but the biggest one was love and your emphasis on it was enviable
June 4th, 2022 22:27
a thousand wishes said:
I ABSOLUTELY love this poem, it\'s my favorite out of all the poems I have read on here and I don\'t say that about just any poem, so don\'t take it lightly :) and the a thousand wishes part!! I melted and this whole poem was just so beautiful and artistic. So many emotions carried throughout your poem but the biggest one was love and your emphasis on it was enviable
June 4th, 2022 22:27
big shirt
arqios said:
awesome to see that, she floating within the shirt, probably using it as a dress or pyjamas. Cool poem.
June 3rd, 2022 08:15
arqios said:
awesome to see that, she floating within the shirt, probably using it as a dress or pyjamas. Cool poem.
June 3rd, 2022 08:15
drifting and daydreaming
orchidee said:
Good write Gon.
Ohhh, you\'ll look up and see me. I\'ll always be there. I hang around like a.......bad smell! lol.
June 3rd, 2022 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write Gon.
Ohhh, you\'ll look up and see me. I\'ll always be there. I hang around like a.......bad smell! lol.
June 3rd, 2022 02:11
drifting and daydreaming
arqios said:
When your love takes you and where despair does likewise, we can be transported and the distance is not physical. And most decidedly a very lonesome place to be. Exquisite expression, Gon. And not an easy do. Thanks for sharing.
June 2nd, 2022 20:54
arqios said:
When your love takes you and where despair does likewise, we can be transported and the distance is not physical. And most decidedly a very lonesome place to be. Exquisite expression, Gon. And not an easy do. Thanks for sharing.
June 2nd, 2022 20:54
drifting and daydreaming
a thousand wishes said:
This was a very strong poem, like I can feel the emotion just through your words and it made me sad the meaning of this poem but at the same time hopeful because I know that feeling and at least I\'m not the only one
June 2nd, 2022 16:36
a thousand wishes said:
This was a very strong poem, like I can feel the emotion just through your words and it made me sad the meaning of this poem but at the same time hopeful because I know that feeling and at least I\'m not the only one
June 2nd, 2022 16:36
positivity freestyle
languale said:
I like this positivity.
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell, let me know what you think about it!
June 2nd, 2022 10:12
languale said:
I like this positivity.
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell, let me know what you think about it!
June 2nd, 2022 10:12
positivity freestyle
languale said:
I like this positivity.
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell, let me know what you think about it!
June 2nd, 2022 09:58
languale said:
I like this positivity.
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell, let me know what you think about it!
June 2nd, 2022 09:58
The Game is On
orchidee said:
Good write Gon - reading it with a magnifying glass! lol.
June 1st, 2022 02:21
orchidee said:
Good write Gon - reading it with a magnifying glass! lol.
June 1st, 2022 02:21
Inside of You
L. B. Mek said:
kind words, born of empathy
and a willingness
to offer words, that ease
the struggles of another
we recognise
ourselves, as having experienced..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
hope your intensions are rewarded
and these words, can help
May 31st, 2022 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
kind words, born of empathy
and a willingness
to offer words, that ease
the struggles of another
we recognise
ourselves, as having experienced..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
hope your intensions are rewarded
and these words, can help
May 31st, 2022 04:12
Inside of You
JudyStella said:
A very reflective poem✨ and make peace with the sin
look within
Loved this verse! We should look inside ourselves to forgive ourselves and live on!
May 30th, 2022 22:35
JudyStella said:
A very reflective poem✨ and make peace with the sin
look within
Loved this verse! We should look inside ourselves to forgive ourselves and live on!
May 30th, 2022 22:35
Coming Home Late
L. B. Mek said:
(the despair, reads so authentic
in your poetic prose, dear poet
forgive me
I couldn\'t refrain, from offering
a little poetic reply of my own..
I meant no disrespect in doing so)
that cruel ill-fate, as happenstance
breaking your back, doing overtime
earning for a child
that\'s gasping for life, hoping
you were by their side...
and you, stopping by the grocery
store
to buy their favourite, dessert treat
imagining
their delighted face, at your reveal
while
callous life, awaits
to bring you to your knees, with its
reveal...
(so much indifference, cruelty
imbued in the word: Destiny)
so what\'s our choice? to give up
add to the manically nihilistic
hopelessness that\'s so abundant
or
to kiss and hug our loved ones
every time we part
to offer
our consideration and kindness
like its air;
and cherish every gifted, snippet
of peace and joy
like, it was the very last we\'ll be offered
by life...!
\'we must persevere, for those survivors
that look upon us, to remind them
there\'s meaning to this existence
we\'re All, so fortunate to experience\'
May 30th, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
(the despair, reads so authentic
in your poetic prose, dear poet
forgive me
I couldn\'t refrain, from offering
a little poetic reply of my own..
I meant no disrespect in doing so)
that cruel ill-fate, as happenstance
breaking your back, doing overtime
earning for a child
that\'s gasping for life, hoping
you were by their side...
and you, stopping by the grocery
store
to buy their favourite, dessert treat
imagining
their delighted face, at your reveal
while
callous life, awaits
to bring you to your knees, with its
reveal...
(so much indifference, cruelty
imbued in the word: Destiny)
so what\'s our choice? to give up
add to the manically nihilistic
hopelessness that\'s so abundant
or
to kiss and hug our loved ones
every time we part
to offer
our consideration and kindness
like its air;
and cherish every gifted, snippet
of peace and joy
like, it was the very last we\'ll be offered
by life...!
\'we must persevere, for those survivors
that look upon us, to remind them
there\'s meaning to this existence
we\'re All, so fortunate to experience\'
May 30th, 2022 05:43
Coming Home Late
JudyStella said:
This is soo beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time🥺!! Innocent lives are taken up for no reason. It is intensely sad what the world has gone to😔 I love the conversational style adapted in this poem!❤️ It gives an original ring to it!
I\'ve grieved for so many
I can\'t grieve for another
This part is so true! With all the crimes taking place, there are no tears left to grieve for all the poor souls that were cruelly taken away. Another amazing poem Noah!! I Love it!😊
May 30th, 2022 02:01
JudyStella said:
This is soo beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time🥺!! Innocent lives are taken up for no reason. It is intensely sad what the world has gone to😔 I love the conversational style adapted in this poem!❤️ It gives an original ring to it!
I\'ve grieved for so many
I can\'t grieve for another
This part is so true! With all the crimes taking place, there are no tears left to grieve for all the poor souls that were cruelly taken away. Another amazing poem Noah!! I Love it!😊
May 30th, 2022 02:01
Coming Home Late
arqios said:
That is so sadly beautiful. It immortalises and encapsulates many emotions and wandering thoughts. A worthy tribute.
May 29th, 2022 17:19
arqios said:
That is so sadly beautiful. It immortalises and encapsulates many emotions and wandering thoughts. A worthy tribute.
May 29th, 2022 17:19
Heaven knows II
Caring dove said:
Good writing )) I completely believe in angels
May 29th, 2022 15:55
Caring dove said:
Good writing )) I completely believe in angels
May 29th, 2022 15:55
Heaven knows II
Bella Shepard said:
Two stellar poets, shining in the heavens, orbiting each other in beautiful verse. This is such a beautiful poem.
May 28th, 2022 13:31
Bella Shepard said:
Two stellar poets, shining in the heavens, orbiting each other in beautiful verse. This is such a beautiful poem.
May 28th, 2022 13:31
Heaven knows II
JudyStella said:
OMG !! 😭This is BRILLIANT !! I am overjoyed that I was able to inspire such a masterpiece!! such representation of emotions!!
I love this verse❤️!!
and heaven knows
the fire below
the wild blown hope
hanging on one thin rope
It speaks to the heart! A beautiful creation dear Noah ! I love it!
May 28th, 2022 11:32
JudyStella said:
OMG !! 😭This is BRILLIANT !! I am overjoyed that I was able to inspire such a masterpiece!! such representation of emotions!!
I love this verse❤️!!
and heaven knows
the fire below
the wild blown hope
hanging on one thin rope
It speaks to the heart! A beautiful creation dear Noah ! I love it!
May 28th, 2022 11:32
no resolve
Bella Shepard said:
A state of mind all to familiar, love the way you\'ve phrased this. Good write!
May 22nd, 2022 11:10
Bella Shepard said:
A state of mind all to familiar, love the way you\'ve phrased this. Good write!
May 22nd, 2022 11:10
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