Comments received on poems by GON
Better or Worse
TWENTY3 said:
great piece that clearly most have not understood enough to comment on.
July 17th, 2020 06:02
TWENTY3 said:
great piece that clearly most have not understood enough to comment on.
July 17th, 2020 06:02
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Goldfinch60 said:
That happens and it gets worse with age unfortunately.
Andy
July 12th, 2020 04:17
Goldfinch60 said:
That happens and it gets worse with age unfortunately.
Andy
July 12th, 2020 04:17
my heart is a place
jarcher54 said:
The last couplet is a delightful expression of a shared experience!
now i don\'t know where
everything is in there
I will memorize that!
June 3rd, 2020 02:49
jarcher54 said:
The last couplet is a delightful expression of a shared experience!
now i don\'t know where
everything is in there
I will memorize that!
June 3rd, 2020 02:49
Learn from the Worst
Evergreen said:
Beautiful as always, so glad to be reading what you write
June 3rd, 2020 02:35
Evergreen said:
Beautiful as always, so glad to be reading what you write
June 3rd, 2020 02:35
Ride the wave draft 1
Evergreen said:
“Ride the wave; don’t let it ride you.” Love that
May 3rd, 2020 05:26
Evergreen said:
“Ride the wave; don’t let it ride you.” Love that
May 3rd, 2020 05:26
smile back draft 5
smallest_stars said:
\"The beacon of light
flashed from his face,
fragmenting the darkness
she felt its embrace...\"
February 4th, 2020 14:19
smallest_stars said:
\"The beacon of light
flashed from his face,
fragmenting the darkness
she felt its embrace...\"
February 4th, 2020 14:19
smile back draft 5
orchidee said:
Well, that\'s this fine poem finished, so that\'s one thing completed at least! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 02:42
orchidee said:
Well, that\'s this fine poem finished, so that\'s one thing completed at least! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 02:42
Evergreen draft 1
Evergreen said:
Correct. Love can be far from evergreen though evergreen is a beautiful word if I do say so myself. Thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
October 10th, 2019 23:54
Evergreen said:
Correct. Love can be far from evergreen though evergreen is a beautiful word if I do say so myself. Thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
October 10th, 2019 23:54
One Lost Soul
Evergreen said:
Love love loved this so much my friend. Your writing is my favorite.
August 21st, 2019 23:46
Evergreen said:
Love love loved this so much my friend. Your writing is my favorite.
August 21st, 2019 23:46
i always lose
Evergreen said:
Don’t settle for second best, loved this piece, keep writing what you feel.
April 15th, 2019 01:45
Evergreen said:
Don’t settle for second best, loved this piece, keep writing what you feel.
April 15th, 2019 01:45
i always lose
Seek said:
The first stanza was a winner. Why the switch in the second? Go get \'em!
February 5th, 2019 10:45
Seek said:
The first stanza was a winner. Why the switch in the second? Go get \'em!
February 5th, 2019 10:45
i always lose
orchidee said:
Play with loaded dice then, and cheat! Oohh heehee. You\'ll win every time.
February 5th, 2019 03:01
orchidee said:
Play with loaded dice then, and cheat! Oohh heehee. You\'ll win every time.
February 5th, 2019 03:01
You Are Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
May that fire in your soul be with you forever.
February 3rd, 2019 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
May that fire in your soul be with you forever.
February 3rd, 2019 01:39
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