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dusk arising said:

tears of raindrops on windows bring out the melancholy often it seems in love songs

hope tinged with sadness, one wonders if you are thinking of someone out of your league here or perhaps they\'re \'spoken for\'

July 22nd, 2020 14:18

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benevolentbluebabe said:

Even the most stoic of hearts may be warmed, given the right counterpart : )

July 22nd, 2020 11:12

Moonbloom
orchidee said:

Good write Gon.

July 19th, 2020 02:08

5 minutes
TWENTY3 said:

brilliant! My name Omega gets constant satelitte updates so I can\'t set the time 5 mins forward or backwards. Fuck! I really want my crops to dry up so I can argue with God.

July 17th, 2020 06:09

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TWENTY3 said:

just make shit up as you go along, works for me.

July 17th, 2020 06:03

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Goldfinch60 said:

That happens and it gets worse with age unfortunately.

Andy

July 12th, 2020 04:17

my heart is a place
jarcher54 said:

The last couplet is a delightful expression of a shared experience!

now i don\'t know where
everything is in there

I will memorize that!

June 3rd, 2020 02:49

Ride the wave draft 1
Evergreen said:

“Ride the wave; don’t let it ride you.” Love that

May 3rd, 2020 05:26

smile back draft 5
smallest_stars said:

\"The beacon of light
flashed from his face,
fragmenting the darkness
she felt its embrace...\"

February 4th, 2020 14:19

bitterwin
Nicholas Browning said:

This is pretty cool. I like it!

December 22nd, 2019 10:16

good morning
Goldfinch60 said:

Good morning.

December 3rd, 2019 02:38

Evergreen draft 1
Evergreen said:

Correct. Love can be far from evergreen though evergreen is a beautiful word if I do say so myself. Thoroughly enjoyed this piece.

October 10th, 2019 23:54

Rocking
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure those dreams will come true.

August 31st, 2019 00:30

One Lost Soul
orchidee said:

A fine write Gon.

August 16th, 2019 03:25

Teach Me
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem. Good ending!

July 27th, 2019 23:54