Comments received on poems by Noah Malice
Smoke To Smoke
SLR said:
I didn\'t read it as a religious piece. The only thing I saw was the reference of spiritual brother but I took that as a figurative reference not as a religious one. This reads (to me) as someone getting ready for his own end and trying to decide how he\'s going to face it. As smoke, rain or fire. Will he fight, bend/join or float away. Great piece. Great post.
June 22nd, 2018 17:16
SLR said:
I didn\'t read it as a religious piece. The only thing I saw was the reference of spiritual brother but I took that as a figurative reference not as a religious one. This reads (to me) as someone getting ready for his own end and trying to decide how he\'s going to face it. As smoke, rain or fire. Will he fight, bend/join or float away. Great piece. Great post.
June 22nd, 2018 17:16
Smoke To Smoke
Michela Vismara said:
I love the description and religious references, great write
June 21st, 2018 14:53
Michela Vismara said:
I love the description and religious references, great write
June 21st, 2018 14:53
Ice Cream With Alice
smallest_stars said:
What a delightful and charming little poem you\'ve written here, Noah. Loved it.
June 19th, 2018 12:13
smallest_stars said:
What a delightful and charming little poem you\'ve written here, Noah. Loved it.
June 19th, 2018 12:13
Ice Cream With Alice
Frogspoetry said:
THIS IS A CUTE AND FUNNY STORY,I LIKED IT ALOT
June 19th, 2018 11:41
Frogspoetry said:
THIS IS A CUTE AND FUNNY STORY,I LIKED IT ALOT
June 19th, 2018 11:41
Written In The Stars
smallest_stars said:
I just read your comment. Haha Very funny.
I love the meter in this poem. Good stuff Noah.
June 17th, 2018 18:14
smallest_stars said:
I just read your comment. Haha Very funny.
I love the meter in this poem. Good stuff Noah.
June 17th, 2018 18:14
hello again my enemy
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
That\'s exactly where the crux lies!
Searing honesty, yes, profound, if only a lot of us realize this and have the courage to face ourselves. Thanks....
June 17th, 2018 04:44
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
That\'s exactly where the crux lies!
Searing honesty, yes, profound, if only a lot of us realize this and have the courage to face ourselves. Thanks....
June 17th, 2018 04:44
hello again my enemy
SLR said:
This is profound in an almost casual way. Gets you to think. Good write, thank you for sharing it.
June 16th, 2018 23:04
SLR said:
This is profound in an almost casual way. Gets you to think. Good write, thank you for sharing it.
June 16th, 2018 23:04
Look
Laura🌻 said:
Gon,
I like your message. Very well said with very few words. Bravo!
Your eye avatar IS magnetic...I dare say!
~Laura~
June 15th, 2018 22:14
Laura🌻 said:
Gon,
I like your message. Very well said with very few words. Bravo!
Your eye avatar IS magnetic...I dare say!
~Laura~
June 15th, 2018 22:14
Written In The Stars
Mil57Man said:
Beautiful GON. When darkness falls we need to grow some balls and answer the call.
June 14th, 2018 18:53
Mil57Man said:
Beautiful GON. When darkness falls we need to grow some balls and answer the call.
June 14th, 2018 18:53
And In The End
AmateurSomeone said:
I agree with spinner
One of the hardest things I find is keeping a poem short but still conveying the message I want to send, yet you do it perfectly.
I also enjoy your rhyming technique
June 14th, 2018 14:56
AmateurSomeone said:
I agree with spinner
One of the hardest things I find is keeping a poem short but still conveying the message I want to send, yet you do it perfectly.
I also enjoy your rhyming technique
June 14th, 2018 14:56
Written In The Stars
AmateurSomeone said:
I love the way this sounds read aloud, like a lullaby, it’s soothing to hear
June 14th, 2018 13:10
AmateurSomeone said:
I love the way this sounds read aloud, like a lullaby, it’s soothing to hear
June 14th, 2018 13:10
Written In The Stars
Frogspoetry said:
I like that one,it is great.As we are all like stars in the sky,all trying to shine bright in this world.
June 14th, 2018 12:24
Frogspoetry said:
I like that one,it is great.As we are all like stars in the sky,all trying to shine bright in this world.
June 14th, 2018 12:24
This Is How I Feel About Writing: Pt. 1 & 2
Lorna said:
Gon this poem is like a butterfly dancing from flower to flower trying to find the best pollen - and it will!
June 13th, 2018 06:08
Lorna said:
Gon this poem is like a butterfly dancing from flower to flower trying to find the best pollen - and it will!
June 13th, 2018 06:08
Dear Charlotte Mae
smallest_stars said:
It\'s a sweet poem. Thanks for caring about my poetry and about me as well. I\'ve written some and I\'ll post them. For better or worse.
June 12th, 2018 23:57
smallest_stars said:
It\'s a sweet poem. Thanks for caring about my poetry and about me as well. I\'ve written some and I\'ll post them. For better or worse.
June 12th, 2018 23:57
This Is How I Feel About Writing: Pt. 1 & 2
Frogspoetry said:
This is a really beautiful poem.it truly is how I feel when I sit and try to force myself to write.So I don\'t.When it flows out of me,is what I feel I am meant to write.
June 12th, 2018 23:12
Frogspoetry said:
This is a really beautiful poem.it truly is how I feel when I sit and try to force myself to write.So I don\'t.When it flows out of me,is what I feel I am meant to write.
June 12th, 2018 23:12
This Is How I Feel About Writing: Pt. 1 & 2
Michela Vismara said:
So true hahaha and beautiful poem at the end x
June 12th, 2018 13:23
Michela Vismara said:
So true hahaha and beautiful poem at the end x
June 12th, 2018 13:23
I\'m Keeping An Eye Out For Every Girl In The World
Evergreen said:
It’s beautiful
June 11th, 2018 20:39
Evergreen said:
It’s beautiful
June 11th, 2018 20:39
Good Dreams Tonight
Lorna said:
This is quietly optimistic and peaceful.........
June 10th, 2018 05:56
Lorna said:
This is quietly optimistic and peaceful.........
June 10th, 2018 05:56
Katerina Broke Her Butt
Michela Vismara said:
I like how at the start the rhyme is deceptive as i thought this would be a cheerful lymric , although it is at the end but i also like the undertones of uneasiness , like the high on meds, its really clever xxx
June 10th, 2018 05:24
Michela Vismara said:
I like how at the start the rhyme is deceptive as i thought this would be a cheerful lymric , although it is at the end but i also like the undertones of uneasiness , like the high on meds, its really clever xxx
June 10th, 2018 05:24
You Are You
dusk arising said:
Hey i really like this and its made me smile and chuckle.
There\'s so much i can relate to in this piece. Brilliant.
Going into my favourites.
June 8th, 2018 18:10
dusk arising said:
Hey i really like this and its made me smile and chuckle.
There\'s so much i can relate to in this piece. Brilliant.
Going into my favourites.
June 8th, 2018 18:10
You Are You
prettylittlepoet said:
I love this poem so much, you’re such a great writer!
June 8th, 2018 14:51
prettylittlepoet said:
I love this poem so much, you’re such a great writer!
June 8th, 2018 14:51
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