Comments received on poems by Noah Malice
a single look from you
Paul Bell said:
Love, kicks you in the nuts, stays until it hurts.
August 7th, 2022 03:38
Paul Bell said:
Love, kicks you in the nuts, stays until it hurts.
August 7th, 2022 03:38
Don\'t Throw Me Back
L. B. Mek said:
there is an image for the saying
\'never give up\'
where a swan is all-but swallowed a frog
but the frog\'s hands are chocking
the swan
who is looking a little, perplexed:
(
https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/708754060076953365/
)
and I can\'t help thinking this image and never give up, theme
is the antithesis to your image and write..
lol
(a really good read and fun
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 29th, 2022 03:15
L. B. Mek said:
there is an image for the saying
\'never give up\'
where a swan is all-but swallowed a frog
but the frog\'s hands are chocking
the swan
who is looking a little, perplexed:
(
https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/708754060076953365/
)
and I can\'t help thinking this image and never give up, theme
is the antithesis to your image and write..
lol
(a really good read and fun
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 29th, 2022 03:15
Don\'t Throw Me Back
wren said:
Lovely. The rhyme scheme gives it a good rhythm- I laughed out loud when I got to “well now he is fucked” lmao. I couldn’t find the original for comparison, but this one’s great.
July 28th, 2022 23:49
wren said:
Lovely. The rhyme scheme gives it a good rhythm- I laughed out loud when I got to “well now he is fucked” lmao. I couldn’t find the original for comparison, but this one’s great.
July 28th, 2022 23:49
lonely nights
arqios said:
A brilliant expression Gon. Once you\'ve been paired, and coupled rightly, it\'s not the easiest thing to be only half of a whole. The crazy thing is that there are times as well that even as part of a whole, together yet also feel lost and alone. It\'s quite a curious thing. Thanks for sharing.
July 28th, 2022 23:12
arqios said:
A brilliant expression Gon. Once you\'ve been paired, and coupled rightly, it\'s not the easiest thing to be only half of a whole. The crazy thing is that there are times as well that even as part of a whole, together yet also feel lost and alone. It\'s quite a curious thing. Thanks for sharing.
July 28th, 2022 23:12
lonely nights
L. B. Mek said:
\'but the warmth and the love
deliver on lonely nights
when i\'m only a half
a joke with no laugh\'..
yeah, just so relatable
its crazy to think
some people, are so desperate
whenever they\'re gifted
a laugh or chuckle
they\'ll choke it back, quickly
as-if to save it
for
those nights, they\'ll need it
just to get from midnight
till, they finish counting
satellites
as stars
cos, that\'s all they\'ve got left
to limit how much fear, seeps
into their dreams...
(a great read and an important theme
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 26th, 2022 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'but the warmth and the love
deliver on lonely nights
when i\'m only a half
a joke with no laugh\'..
yeah, just so relatable
its crazy to think
some people, are so desperate
whenever they\'re gifted
a laugh or chuckle
they\'ll choke it back, quickly
as-if to save it
for
those nights, they\'ll need it
just to get from midnight
till, they finish counting
satellites
as stars
cos, that\'s all they\'ve got left
to limit how much fear, seeps
into their dreams...
(a great read and an important theme
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 26th, 2022 04:13
she has weird thoughts / another year
madalynsamantha said:
I love this one,a lot.🙂
July 16th, 2022 17:28
madalynsamantha said:
I love this one,a lot.🙂
July 16th, 2022 17:28
the last great war
a thousand wishes said:
I like this one, might be my favorite :)
-your biggest fan
July 12th, 2022 14:50
a thousand wishes said:
I like this one, might be my favorite :)
-your biggest fan
July 12th, 2022 14:50
save the living
JudyStella said:
A very effective and timely message! Save the living!
July 10th, 2022 13:29
JudyStella said:
A very effective and timely message! Save the living!
July 10th, 2022 13:29
in the Dead of Night
ela said:
I enjoyed reading in the dead of night It has this swaying pattern of chosen words that rhyming well.
June 30th, 2022 10:11
ela said:
I enjoyed reading in the dead of night It has this swaying pattern of chosen words that rhyming well.
June 30th, 2022 10:11
in the Dead of Night
L. B. Mek said:
\'the last one, to leave
my heart
I beg
turn off, the lights
offer me
that same
escape, from myself...\'
June 30th, 2022 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'the last one, to leave
my heart
I beg
turn off, the lights
offer me
that same
escape, from myself...\'
June 30th, 2022 05:54
in the Dead of Night
arqios said:
The light that used to be there, wow. That just struck home. This will sit with me for a while. Thanks for sharing.
June 30th, 2022 03:40
arqios said:
The light that used to be there, wow. That just struck home. This will sit with me for a while. Thanks for sharing.
June 30th, 2022 03:40
redplatformshoes
L. B. Mek said:
you want that person to tap their
\'Dorothy\' red\'s and wink away?
I prefer red hats
then at least my fishing rod
will have something to aim at...
lol
(sorry had a little fun with this one
thank you! dear Poet
a w wonderful shorty)
oh and fyi, i HATE musicals..
some things need to clarified early
to minimise misunderstandings
lol
June 23rd, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
you want that person to tap their
\'Dorothy\' red\'s and wink away?
I prefer red hats
then at least my fishing rod
will have something to aim at...
lol
(sorry had a little fun with this one
thank you! dear Poet
a w wonderful shorty)
oh and fyi, i HATE musicals..
some things need to clarified early
to minimise misunderstandings
lol
June 23rd, 2022 04:00
redplatformshoes
JudyStella said:
Platform shoes are the new trend now and they are totally cool! Well crafted! And yeah you can mail them to me,lol!😂
June 22nd, 2022 15:33
JudyStella said:
Platform shoes are the new trend now and they are totally cool! Well crafted! And yeah you can mail them to me,lol!😂
June 22nd, 2022 15:33
she has weird thoughts / another year
Evergreen said:
Had to pull out my guitar and sing to this one. Just lovely, wonderful flow.
June 15th, 2022 01:46
Evergreen said:
Had to pull out my guitar and sing to this one. Just lovely, wonderful flow.
June 15th, 2022 01:46
she has weird thoughts / another year
JudyStella said:
A very reflective poem! A good one indeed!
June 12th, 2022 10:58
JudyStella said:
A very reflective poem! A good one indeed!
June 12th, 2022 10:58
Into Quietness
L. B. Mek said:
we are each imbued, with potential
to love
but, with that gift comes a responsibility
to love ourselves, Equally
to yearn, is to breathe
such is the curse of life
but we may, empower
that survival instinct, inherrant
in our very pulse
and utilise it, to find a path
past
those heartbreaks, dwindling
our whispering lungs
to mere, deflated balloons
and so, hopefully
we emerge, wiser
with a little bit more density
to our heart\'s
and a lot more, sensitivity
in our awareness
and as we sand by the backdoor
looking out at regret\'s, desolate yard
we must remember
to keep our front door, wide open
and clean
ready, and with an enduringly
hopeful heart
awaiting...!
(thanks for sharing, dear Poet
and inspiring my little scribble
of a poetic reply
forgive me, if you deem me rude
I genuinely
meant no disrespect, in doing so)
June 9th, 2022 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
we are each imbued, with potential
to love
but, with that gift comes a responsibility
to love ourselves, Equally
to yearn, is to breathe
such is the curse of life
but we may, empower
that survival instinct, inherrant
in our very pulse
and utilise it, to find a path
past
those heartbreaks, dwindling
our whispering lungs
to mere, deflated balloons
and so, hopefully
we emerge, wiser
with a little bit more density
to our heart\'s
and a lot more, sensitivity
in our awareness
and as we sand by the backdoor
looking out at regret\'s, desolate yard
we must remember
to keep our front door, wide open
and clean
ready, and with an enduringly
hopeful heart
awaiting...!
(thanks for sharing, dear Poet
and inspiring my little scribble
of a poetic reply
forgive me, if you deem me rude
I genuinely
meant no disrespect, in doing so)
June 9th, 2022 04:05
Into Quietness
arqios said:
Hope she gets to read this! What with \'sanctuary\' and \'mist,\' \'whispering\' and \'quietness.\' The smallest of light is visible in any darkness, so the smallest of poems to the most distant of hearts. At least, that\'s the hope. Thanks for sharing.
June 8th, 2022 22:43
arqios said:
Hope she gets to read this! What with \'sanctuary\' and \'mist,\' \'whispering\' and \'quietness.\' The smallest of light is visible in any darkness, so the smallest of poems to the most distant of hearts. At least, that\'s the hope. Thanks for sharing.
June 8th, 2022 22:43
The harder we fell (GON\'s version)
JudyStella said:
Great minds think alike! Love the theme, structure and how the feelings are penned so well!
June 8th, 2022 14:50
JudyStella said:
Great minds think alike! Love the theme, structure and how the feelings are penned so well!
June 8th, 2022 14:50
The harder we fell (GON\'s version)
tallisman said:
Hi both of you! Actually enjoyed both versions! I like GON statement about melody and verse, agree with rhat. I’m very agreeable this morning! You two should do a few collaborations, you have talent, both of you!
June 8th, 2022 00:27
tallisman said:
Hi both of you! Actually enjoyed both versions! I like GON statement about melody and verse, agree with rhat. I’m very agreeable this morning! You two should do a few collaborations, you have talent, both of you!
June 8th, 2022 00:27
The harder we fell (GON\'s version)
a thousand wishes said:
And you should take some of the credit :) you made it so much more beautiful
June 7th, 2022 13:49
a thousand wishes said:
And you should take some of the credit :) you made it so much more beautiful
June 7th, 2022 13:49
The harder we fell (GON\'s version)
a thousand wishes said:
WOW. You were modest when you said ¨level 3¨ this is like level 100. My favorite part is the ¨up and down of you on this rollercoaster¨ You truly took my first version and made it 100x better
June 7th, 2022 13:48
a thousand wishes said:
WOW. You were modest when you said ¨level 3¨ this is like level 100. My favorite part is the ¨up and down of you on this rollercoaster¨ You truly took my first version and made it 100x better
June 7th, 2022 13:48
submission
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful piece, love the structure and your words, well, let´s just say I felt all your words very deeply
June 7th, 2022 11:18
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful piece, love the structure and your words, well, let´s just say I felt all your words very deeply
June 7th, 2022 11:18
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