Comments received on poems by Noah Malice
Snowed In
Lorna said:
Oh I hope this really happened because it sounds like the perfect date!!! (If they don\'t get lost in the snow that is!)
March 14th, 2018 07:04
Lorna said:
Oh I hope this really happened because it sounds like the perfect date!!! (If they don\'t get lost in the snow that is!)
March 14th, 2018 07:04
The Apricot Tree
Caring dove said:
i agree with hope .. this is a really fantastic piece of writing .. truly enjoyed reading ! :-) i love the story you told .. i love how you have given character and personality to both the worm and the cat ...the cats piercing eyes and the worms delicate, kind and friendly nature , scared and vulnerable . and i love the ending the worm escaped ! its prayers were answered. well done
March 12th, 2018 14:47
Caring dove said:
i agree with hope .. this is a really fantastic piece of writing .. truly enjoyed reading ! :-) i love the story you told .. i love how you have given character and personality to both the worm and the cat ...the cats piercing eyes and the worms delicate, kind and friendly nature , scared and vulnerable . and i love the ending the worm escaped ! its prayers were answered. well done
March 12th, 2018 14:47
The Soundscape Of Your Mind, a short poem about headphones
Echo Seeker said:
So true.
March 11th, 2018 12:27
Echo Seeker said:
So true.
March 11th, 2018 12:27
The Soundscape Of Your Mind, a short poem about headphones
Lorna said:
It\'s a good message and poem - but don\'t be afraid to take those headphones off once in a while - then you can write a poem!
February 25th, 2018 05:30
Lorna said:
It\'s a good message and poem - but don\'t be afraid to take those headphones off once in a while - then you can write a poem!
February 25th, 2018 05:30
The Soundscape Of Your Mind, a short poem about headphones
b-LAH-que said:
This enjoyable poem that finds significance in one of life\'s seemingly more simple happenings definitely deserves more views. Well done, I like it!
February 25th, 2018 01:17
b-LAH-que said:
This enjoyable poem that finds significance in one of life\'s seemingly more simple happenings definitely deserves more views. Well done, I like it!
February 25th, 2018 01:17
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