Comments received on poems by GON
Always Be Love
Laura🌻 said:
Noah,
A beautiful write!
I especially favored the ending!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
January 22nd, 2019 19:53
Laura🌻 said:
Noah,
A beautiful write!
I especially favored the ending!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
January 22nd, 2019 19:53
A Big Hallucination
smallest_stars said:
I like this part best..
\"I see you hide as well in her
Clever disguise to mask the hurt\"
That is an intriguing and yet relatable line.
January 6th, 2019 12:44
smallest_stars said:
I like this part best..
\"I see you hide as well in her
Clever disguise to mask the hurt\"
That is an intriguing and yet relatable line.
January 6th, 2019 12:44
better vision
Neville said:
dont ya just love bacon... crusty bread, real butter and a couple of fried eggs.. if it wasn\'t for bacon.. I would be vegetarian... having said that.. I cant remember the last time I had any... an interesting poem and enjoyed too ... N
December 30th, 2018 13:48
Neville said:
dont ya just love bacon... crusty bread, real butter and a couple of fried eggs.. if it wasn\'t for bacon.. I would be vegetarian... having said that.. I cant remember the last time I had any... an interesting poem and enjoyed too ... N
December 30th, 2018 13:48
What You Do
orchidee said:
I suppose the thing is to remember them while they are here. We shall still grieve for them when they\'ve gone, but we won\'t have regrets of \'If only I had...\' or \'I wish I had..\' when they were alive.
December 29th, 2018 03:10
orchidee said:
I suppose the thing is to remember them while they are here. We shall still grieve for them when they\'ve gone, but we won\'t have regrets of \'If only I had...\' or \'I wish I had..\' when they were alive.
December 29th, 2018 03:10
One Step At A Time
Poetic Dan said:
Your flow is wonderful, and I know of this feeling. Thank you for sharing
September 27th, 2018 10:25
Poetic Dan said:
Your flow is wonderful, and I know of this feeling. Thank you for sharing
September 27th, 2018 10:25
On Being Eager
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Goosebumps all over, very powerful and moving. Thank you for the poetic reminder!
September 27th, 2018 10:23
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Goosebumps all over, very powerful and moving. Thank you for the poetic reminder!
September 27th, 2018 10:23
So Much
sylviasearcher said:
You have captured the complexity of a broken heart so softly but with powerful sentiment.
September 25th, 2018 07:26
sylviasearcher said:
You have captured the complexity of a broken heart so softly but with powerful sentiment.
September 25th, 2018 07:26
So Much
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, we all feel the depth of the words that are breaking your heart.
Although sad, you\'ve relayed your message nicely. :)
September 24th, 2018 18:14
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, we all feel the depth of the words that are breaking your heart.
Although sad, you\'ve relayed your message nicely. :)
September 24th, 2018 18:14
So Much
Christina8 said:
Very sweet and heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing! Loved the rhymes.
September 24th, 2018 17:46
Christina8 said:
Very sweet and heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing! Loved the rhymes.
September 24th, 2018 17:46
Glass Heart
smallest_stars said:
I hope the glass heart drops in good answers. Loved this heart felt poem.
August 13th, 2018 13:00
smallest_stars said:
I hope the glass heart drops in good answers. Loved this heart felt poem.
August 13th, 2018 13:00
One Less Reason To Cry At Night
E-Poems said:
This is so full of warmth. Honestly beautiful.
July 14th, 2018 15:27
E-Poems said:
This is so full of warmth. Honestly beautiful.
July 14th, 2018 15:27
One Less Reason To Cry At Night
sylviasearcher said:
What a beautiful sentiment.
I am restless with thoughts whirring through my head.
Poems expressing a longing for exactly that.
And an internal resentment that I am so fundamentally flawed that I have never evoked that feeling in anyone.
July 6th, 2018 01:09
sylviasearcher said:
What a beautiful sentiment.
I am restless with thoughts whirring through my head.
Poems expressing a longing for exactly that.
And an internal resentment that I am so fundamentally flawed that I have never evoked that feeling in anyone.
July 6th, 2018 01:09
You Go First
Michela Vismara said:
Oooo is this about a certain someone? Rodella is a beautiful name
July 3rd, 2018 13:36
Michela Vismara said:
Oooo is this about a certain someone? Rodella is a beautiful name
July 3rd, 2018 13:36
You Go First
orchidee said:
A fine write Gon. I suppose if we never go first ourselves, we shall never get there - wherever we are going, that is!
June 29th, 2018 02:27
orchidee said:
A fine write Gon. I suppose if we never go first ourselves, we shall never get there - wherever we are going, that is!
June 29th, 2018 02:27
When The Dust Settles
Frogspoetry said:
thisis a very nice poem Gon,it makes perfect sense to me.
June 25th, 2018 17:40
Frogspoetry said:
thisis a very nice poem Gon,it makes perfect sense to me.
June 25th, 2018 17:40
Sliver Of Light
Michela Vismara said:
love the control of the structure throughout :)
June 23rd, 2018 16:18
Michela Vismara said:
love the control of the structure throughout :)
June 23rd, 2018 16:18
Smoke To Smoke
SLR said:
I didn\'t read it as a religious piece. The only thing I saw was the reference of spiritual brother but I took that as a figurative reference not as a religious one. This reads (to me) as someone getting ready for his own end and trying to decide how he\'s going to face it. As smoke, rain or fire. Will he fight, bend/join or float away. Great piece. Great post.
June 22nd, 2018 17:16
SLR said:
I didn\'t read it as a religious piece. The only thing I saw was the reference of spiritual brother but I took that as a figurative reference not as a religious one. This reads (to me) as someone getting ready for his own end and trying to decide how he\'s going to face it. As smoke, rain or fire. Will he fight, bend/join or float away. Great piece. Great post.
June 22nd, 2018 17:16
Smoke To Smoke
Michela Vismara said:
I love the description and religious references, great write
June 21st, 2018 14:53
Michela Vismara said:
I love the description and religious references, great write
June 21st, 2018 14:53
Ice Cream With Alice
smallest_stars said:
What a delightful and charming little poem you\'ve written here, Noah. Loved it.
June 19th, 2018 12:13
smallest_stars said:
What a delightful and charming little poem you\'ve written here, Noah. Loved it.
June 19th, 2018 12:13
Ice Cream With Alice
Frogspoetry said:
THIS IS A CUTE AND FUNNY STORY,I LIKED IT ALOT
June 19th, 2018 11:41
Frogspoetry said:
THIS IS A CUTE AND FUNNY STORY,I LIKED IT ALOT
June 19th, 2018 11:41
Written In The Stars
smallest_stars said:
I just read your comment. Haha Very funny.
I love the meter in this poem. Good stuff Noah.
June 17th, 2018 18:14
smallest_stars said:
I just read your comment. Haha Very funny.
I love the meter in this poem. Good stuff Noah.
June 17th, 2018 18:14
hello again my enemy
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
That\'s exactly where the crux lies!
Searing honesty, yes, profound, if only a lot of us realize this and have the courage to face ourselves. Thanks....
June 17th, 2018 04:44
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
That\'s exactly where the crux lies!
Searing honesty, yes, profound, if only a lot of us realize this and have the courage to face ourselves. Thanks....
June 17th, 2018 04:44
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