Comments received on poems by Noah Malice
i always lose
Evergreen said:
Don’t settle for second best, loved this piece, keep writing what you feel.
April 15th, 2019 01:45
Evergreen said:
Don’t settle for second best, loved this piece, keep writing what you feel.
April 15th, 2019 01:45
i always lose
Seek said:
The first stanza was a winner. Why the switch in the second? Go get \'em!
February 5th, 2019 10:45
Seek said:
The first stanza was a winner. Why the switch in the second? Go get \'em!
February 5th, 2019 10:45
i always lose
orchidee said:
Play with loaded dice then, and cheat! Oohh heehee. You\'ll win every time.
February 5th, 2019 03:01
orchidee said:
Play with loaded dice then, and cheat! Oohh heehee. You\'ll win every time.
February 5th, 2019 03:01
You Are Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
May that fire in your soul be with you forever.
February 3rd, 2019 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
May that fire in your soul be with you forever.
February 3rd, 2019 01:39
Always Be Love
Laura🌻 said:
Noah,
A beautiful write!
I especially favored the ending!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
January 22nd, 2019 19:53
Laura🌻 said:
Noah,
A beautiful write!
I especially favored the ending!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
January 22nd, 2019 19:53
A Big Hallucination
smallest_stars said:
I like this part best..
\"I see you hide as well in her
Clever disguise to mask the hurt\"
That is an intriguing and yet relatable line.
January 6th, 2019 12:44
smallest_stars said:
I like this part best..
\"I see you hide as well in her
Clever disguise to mask the hurt\"
That is an intriguing and yet relatable line.
January 6th, 2019 12:44
better vision
Neville said:
dont ya just love bacon... crusty bread, real butter and a couple of fried eggs.. if it wasn\'t for bacon.. I would be vegetarian... having said that.. I cant remember the last time I had any... an interesting poem and enjoyed too ... N
December 30th, 2018 13:48
Neville said:
dont ya just love bacon... crusty bread, real butter and a couple of fried eggs.. if it wasn\'t for bacon.. I would be vegetarian... having said that.. I cant remember the last time I had any... an interesting poem and enjoyed too ... N
December 30th, 2018 13:48
What You Do
orchidee said:
I suppose the thing is to remember them while they are here. We shall still grieve for them when they\'ve gone, but we won\'t have regrets of \'If only I had...\' or \'I wish I had..\' when they were alive.
December 29th, 2018 03:10
orchidee said:
I suppose the thing is to remember them while they are here. We shall still grieve for them when they\'ve gone, but we won\'t have regrets of \'If only I had...\' or \'I wish I had..\' when they were alive.
December 29th, 2018 03:10
One Step At A Time
Poetic Dan said:
Your flow is wonderful, and I know of this feeling. Thank you for sharing
September 27th, 2018 10:25
Poetic Dan said:
Your flow is wonderful, and I know of this feeling. Thank you for sharing
September 27th, 2018 10:25
On Being Eager
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Goosebumps all over, very powerful and moving. Thank you for the poetic reminder!
September 27th, 2018 10:23
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Goosebumps all over, very powerful and moving. Thank you for the poetic reminder!
September 27th, 2018 10:23
So Much
sylviasearcher said:
You have captured the complexity of a broken heart so softly but with powerful sentiment.
September 25th, 2018 07:26
sylviasearcher said:
You have captured the complexity of a broken heart so softly but with powerful sentiment.
September 25th, 2018 07:26
So Much
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, we all feel the depth of the words that are breaking your heart.
Although sad, you\'ve relayed your message nicely. :)
September 24th, 2018 18:14
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, we all feel the depth of the words that are breaking your heart.
Although sad, you\'ve relayed your message nicely. :)
September 24th, 2018 18:14
So Much
Christina8 said:
Very sweet and heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing! Loved the rhymes.
September 24th, 2018 17:46
Christina8 said:
Very sweet and heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing! Loved the rhymes.
September 24th, 2018 17:46
Glass Heart
smallest_stars said:
I hope the glass heart drops in good answers. Loved this heart felt poem.
August 13th, 2018 13:00
smallest_stars said:
I hope the glass heart drops in good answers. Loved this heart felt poem.
August 13th, 2018 13:00
One Less Reason To Cry At Night
E-Poems said:
This is so full of warmth. Honestly beautiful.
July 14th, 2018 15:27
E-Poems said:
This is so full of warmth. Honestly beautiful.
July 14th, 2018 15:27
One Less Reason To Cry At Night
sylviasearcher said:
What a beautiful sentiment.
I am restless with thoughts whirring through my head.
Poems expressing a longing for exactly that.
And an internal resentment that I am so fundamentally flawed that I have never evoked that feeling in anyone.
July 6th, 2018 01:09
sylviasearcher said:
What a beautiful sentiment.
I am restless with thoughts whirring through my head.
Poems expressing a longing for exactly that.
And an internal resentment that I am so fundamentally flawed that I have never evoked that feeling in anyone.
July 6th, 2018 01:09
You Go First
Michela Vismara said:
Oooo is this about a certain someone? Rodella is a beautiful name
July 3rd, 2018 13:36
Michela Vismara said:
Oooo is this about a certain someone? Rodella is a beautiful name
July 3rd, 2018 13:36
You Go First
orchidee said:
A fine write Gon. I suppose if we never go first ourselves, we shall never get there - wherever we are going, that is!
June 29th, 2018 02:27
orchidee said:
A fine write Gon. I suppose if we never go first ourselves, we shall never get there - wherever we are going, that is!
June 29th, 2018 02:27
When The Dust Settles
Frogspoetry said:
thisis a very nice poem Gon,it makes perfect sense to me.
June 25th, 2018 17:40
Frogspoetry said:
thisis a very nice poem Gon,it makes perfect sense to me.
June 25th, 2018 17:40
Sliver Of Light
Michela Vismara said:
love the control of the structure throughout :)
June 23rd, 2018 16:18
Michela Vismara said:
love the control of the structure throughout :)
June 23rd, 2018 16:18
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