Comments received on poems by IndisClaire



Two Pink Lines (reprise)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI *IC* ANGELA HERE - Thanks for caring & sharing. Poems from MUMS-TO-BE to their developing DAUGHTER are to me (as a Potential MUM one DAY !) the very essence of Perfect Poetry on a Perfect Subject. You have done it proud in both the Structure and Sacred Subject of your Perfect Poem !
My fave line is *I couldnt ask for anyhing more in life* ! That says it all. Im 31 and Ive never been PREGNANT - BUT Im getting married @ Easter 2020 and BRIAN my Fiance has promised me I can have all the BABIES I want - when I want ! I am already praying to GOD to send me at least ONE DAUGHTER ! Then I will be as *Over the Moon* as you !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡

October 23rd, 2019 13:12

Temples
FredPeyer said:

Very powerful writing with a great ending.

September 26th, 2019 21:11

Open Letter To My ABuser
G84 said:

I applaud you for your strength and bravery, as the father of a one year old girl stories of this level of disgust , frighten the hell out of me. I sincerely hope you have found or will find peace and wish you the very best in life, no one should go through this. Powerful poem, filled with emotion.

August 26th, 2019 15:56

Baby girl (Song for my daughter)
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure your daughter will have a wonderful joyful life.

July 10th, 2019 01:47

Baby girl (Song for my daughter)
orchidee said:

A lovely write Claire.

July 10th, 2019 01:33

Miscarriage
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for caring CLAIRE and sharing a very precious & personal story. Im engaged but Ive never been pregnant ! However I have councelled and massaged (Im a Physiotherapist) Ladies who have lost a Baby they were carrying : and wept with them ! The Ecstacy suddenly ends in Agony and to the Mother it always remains as real as a full-term Baby. Thanks GOD you have a very supportive HUSBAND for whom the loss will be equally sad !
Thinking of You : Praying for You
Lots of Love & TLC : ANGELA 🧡🧡

February 24th, 2019 11:50

Love Letter to My Body
Neville said:

brilliant..

love the skin your in... oh\' I so wish I had penned those words..

December 26th, 2018 17:08

Love Letter to My Body
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI CLAIRE : Great Poem about self awareness & self respect : love it ! The Good Book says \"Love Others as You love Yourself\" If we dont love ourselves : Inside & out : Body Mind & Spirit : we cant love anybody else : OK ! Im 30 and in my Prime (Im a PHYSIOTHERAPIST !) and when I look at myself (naked) in full length Mirror it reflects my History ! Scars : irregularities : tatoos but NO strech marks yet (Im getting married at Easter in 2020 !). Right now I love my BODY (inside & out) and I wore my BIKINI today (Im working in New Zealand and its 75 F : middle of Summer !). I only wear a swim suit (one piece) for AQUAROBICS my Clients envy my BODY but they are all \"recovering\" or a bit obese. Thanks for your Poem ~ a great uplift to all those (including me !) who think they\'ve got something to hide ! Love & Blessings : ANGELA 🧡 I share this site with my Fiance BRIAN (35) please check our Poems : thanks.

December 26th, 2018 16:10

my fault
ExistentialSarah said:

This is powerful and it is unfortunately an all too common reaction from people who just don\'t get it...


Whatever people say, I hope that you can find peace and healing. Its not easy, but writing helps for sure! This was well done.

August 26th, 2018 10:38

Survivor
Rainbow said:

I can relate to this feeling of feeling like a victim to things that happen to you. I think when it comes to abuse in any forms it is hard not to feel like a victim. I love your last line of this poem, your right you are a survivor

July 21st, 2018 16:03

Relapse
Rainbow said:

hello. I am sorry your struggle with this. i too know what it is like to struggle with a mental illness. Relapsing from any type of mental illness does not make you a failure


July 21st, 2018 15:52

A Letter To My Eating Disorder
ah353 said:

Loved this, a positive outlook on a negative issue. Very inspiring. Xx

July 3rd, 2018 18:58