Comments received on poems by BoxMyHeart
Happy Easter Poem (late)
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
You expressed succinctly in this fine poem , your muse is nice to read, but welcome life even if death is inevitable . Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 06:38
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
You expressed succinctly in this fine poem , your muse is nice to read, but welcome life even if death is inevitable . Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 06:38
Just A Toy
arqios said:
Very relatable. Back in the day this was described as a very intense infatuation.
January 8th, 2023 22:05
arqios said:
Very relatable. Back in the day this was described as a very intense infatuation.
January 8th, 2023 22:05
U R So Co0L
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah what a fantastic sarcastic slam type ranting rocking rapping poem, so scintillating clever i was admiring your sharpness. The high horse stanza gahhh!!
I know dome people like that too, they think they are so cool they walk all over on clouds.
Kudos!!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wish u a happy new yr.
December 29th, 2022 13:43
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah what a fantastic sarcastic slam type ranting rocking rapping poem, so scintillating clever i was admiring your sharpness. The high horse stanza gahhh!!
I know dome people like that too, they think they are so cool they walk all over on clouds.
Kudos!!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wish u a happy new yr.
December 29th, 2022 13:43
Borrowed Time
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes this feels like a song in the making along with the right music - - a very good read.
October 25th, 2020 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes this feels like a song in the making along with the right music - - a very good read.
October 25th, 2020 05:30
Borrowed Time
orchidee said:
Good write Box.
You seem to be able to see both sides in this, summarised at the end.
October 25th, 2020 03:13
orchidee said:
Good write Box.
You seem to be able to see both sides in this, summarised at the end.
October 25th, 2020 03:13
Borrowed Time
Neville said:
I think a song with the melody built around your words would probably work .. Good luck
Neville
October 25th, 2020 03:03
Neville said:
I think a song with the melody built around your words would probably work .. Good luck
Neville
October 25th, 2020 03:03
Even the rich die
Lorna said:
So much wisdom here..... well done upbeat message...........
October 12th, 2020 05:24
Lorna said:
So much wisdom here..... well done upbeat message...........
October 12th, 2020 05:24
Young Cancer
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine word BMH, it can be so hard when you know that that disease is in you and there will be no cure.
Andy
August 18th, 2020 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine word BMH, it can be so hard when you know that that disease is in you and there will be no cure.
Andy
August 18th, 2020 00:17
Carry you (short poem)
Goldfinch60 said:
If that love is there it will never be too long.
July 17th, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
If that love is there it will never be too long.
July 17th, 2020 00:16
Just A Toy
Goldfinch60 said:
Those relationships in our younger days can be so meaningful.
May 12th, 2020 00:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Those relationships in our younger days can be so meaningful.
May 12th, 2020 00:02
Just A Toy
Neville said:
I know that feeling... I guess many of us do..... well expressed and enjoyed by me..... Neville
May 11th, 2020 05:37
Neville said:
I know that feeling... I guess many of us do..... well expressed and enjoyed by me..... Neville
May 11th, 2020 05:37
Entirely devoted
PoeticBiscuit said:
Now where have you been hiding? Cause apparently I’ve been missing out on some amazing talent.
August 9th, 2019 20:05
PoeticBiscuit said:
Now where have you been hiding? Cause apparently I’ve been missing out on some amazing talent.
August 9th, 2019 20:05
Entirely devoted
dusk arising said:
In genuine romantic love is there any other way. Or the love of a parent unconditionally felt for their child, is there any other way.
Depth of love poetically expressed and a pleasure to read.
August 9th, 2019 09:10
dusk arising said:
In genuine romantic love is there any other way. Or the love of a parent unconditionally felt for their child, is there any other way.
Depth of love poetically expressed and a pleasure to read.
August 9th, 2019 09:10
Entirely devoted
Goldfinch60 said:
May that committed love be reciprocated. Good loving write.
August 9th, 2019 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May that committed love be reciprocated. Good loving write.
August 9th, 2019 02:28
Oh, to be a woman
Poetic Dan said:
You are a shining star and need no voice or opinions but your own! Your soul knows what to do and you\'re already following your heart
Much peace and respect
August 8th, 2019 07:26
Poetic Dan said:
You are a shining star and need no voice or opinions but your own! Your soul knows what to do and you\'re already following your heart
Much peace and respect
August 8th, 2019 07:26
Parental Slaughter
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.... Beautifully sad and fun of passion to move on!
Thank you for sharing with us!
August 8th, 2019 07:23
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.... Beautifully sad and fun of passion to move on!
Thank you for sharing with us!
August 8th, 2019 07:23
Oh, to be a woman
dusk arising said:
Great expose of the inner feelings of an individual who cannot conform with what society seems to expect through no fault of his/her own.
A subject i, for one, would like to see expressed deeper here on MPS. I am certain that among us poets there are many others who would also like to see this.
August 8th, 2019 00:27
dusk arising said:
Great expose of the inner feelings of an individual who cannot conform with what society seems to expect through no fault of his/her own.
A subject i, for one, would like to see expressed deeper here on MPS. I am certain that among us poets there are many others who would also like to see this.
August 8th, 2019 00:27
The Surgery
orchidee said:
I will probably faint if you say what happened in those 15 or 16 seconds! I\'m guessing.....
January 20th, 2019 09:16
orchidee said:
I will probably faint if you say what happened in those 15 or 16 seconds! I\'m guessing.....
January 20th, 2019 09:16
Parental Slaughter
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Very Open & Sad but I guess true. Many Children\'s lives are blighted by Parental Drinking. It never happened to me (thank GOD) but I have Friends (and Students) who have had similar experiences but in many cases they still stay loyal to their folks as your poem implies ! Please check my site which I share with my Fiancee ANGELA. MPS works by reading & commenting on each other POETRY ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 22nd, 2018 17:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Very Open & Sad but I guess true. Many Children\'s lives are blighted by Parental Drinking. It never happened to me (thank GOD) but I have Friends (and Students) who have had similar experiences but in many cases they still stay loyal to their folks as your poem implies ! Please check my site which I share with my Fiancee ANGELA. MPS works by reading & commenting on each other POETRY ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 22nd, 2018 17:35
