Comments received on poems by Neville
Tree of Souls
Doggerel Dave said:
Far too deep for my extremely literal mind, Neville....except is it not possible that the last six lines are the key to the rest of them.....? š
June 25th, 2021 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Far too deep for my extremely literal mind, Neville....except is it not possible that the last six lines are the key to the rest of them.....? š
June 25th, 2021 19:14
Tree of Souls
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
So glad I read this TODAY!
An excellent postā¦
A lot for my mind to ponder and evaluate. A very welcoming readā¦
especially for this day.
Thank you for sharing. āš»
Lauraš»
June 25th, 2021 15:43
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
So glad I read this TODAY!
An excellent postā¦
A lot for my mind to ponder and evaluate. A very welcoming readā¦
especially for this day.
Thank you for sharing. āš»
Lauraš»
June 25th, 2021 15:43
Tree of Souls
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
Got to fave this one.
June 25th, 2021 14:01
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
Got to fave this one.
June 25th, 2021 14:01
Tree of Souls
SureshG said:
who know!!! I want toā¦
but reading your words tell me to just inhale the moment
June 25th, 2021 13:28
SureshG said:
who know!!! I want toā¦
but reading your words tell me to just inhale the moment
June 25th, 2021 13:28
Tree of Souls
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we know next to no answers to the questions raised in this excellent piece of metaphor Nev - -- life is a sweet mystery at best and stars twinkle because who knows - - why indeed do birds start to sing in mating season and same goes for lovers who go without sleep when urges plague dreams- An inspired expression is \"Tree of Souls\" for we are all under the cover of heavily branched ignorance and Nature is keeping its secrets despite our wanting to know a bit more. - wow - - just look what your write roused in my mind...........x
June 25th, 2021 12:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we know next to no answers to the questions raised in this excellent piece of metaphor Nev - -- life is a sweet mystery at best and stars twinkle because who knows - - why indeed do birds start to sing in mating season and same goes for lovers who go without sleep when urges plague dreams- An inspired expression is \"Tree of Souls\" for we are all under the cover of heavily branched ignorance and Nature is keeping its secrets despite our wanting to know a bit more. - wow - - just look what your write roused in my mind...........x
June 25th, 2021 12:48
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
L. B. Mek said:
engrossing, for such a short write
by tantalisingly teasing us, with just enough detail
to force us, into a googling escapade
we\'ve learnt to fish-out, those contextual secrets
to your meaningful poetry\'s: soaring lessons..
a write, worthy of adorning the side
of the Wright Flyer, in my humble opinion..
what a fun treat, of a read!
thank you my friend
June 25th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
engrossing, for such a short write
by tantalisingly teasing us, with just enough detail
to force us, into a googling escapade
we\'ve learnt to fish-out, those contextual secrets
to your meaningful poetry\'s: soaring lessons..
a write, worthy of adorning the side
of the Wright Flyer, in my humble opinion..
what a fun treat, of a read!
thank you my friend
June 25th, 2021 04:01
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
orchidee said:
Oohh, I must meet some of these lasses. I can\'t live without them. Oh, I don\'t care - gonna let me hair down, be a dark horse, etc, etc!
Notice the mad moment of wild abandon from me? Keep taking the tablets, you say?! heehee.
June 25th, 2021 01:53
orchidee said:
Oohh, I must meet some of these lasses. I can\'t live without them. Oh, I don\'t care - gonna let me hair down, be a dark horse, etc, etc!
Notice the mad moment of wild abandon from me? Keep taking the tablets, you say?! heehee.
June 25th, 2021 01:53
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, that love of the sky is catching.
Andy
June 25th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, that love of the sky is catching.
Andy
June 25th, 2021 00:29
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
Jerry Reynolds said:
More than a good write, Neville.
Love, birds, and flying machines.
June 24th, 2021 14:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
More than a good write, Neville.
Love, birds, and flying machines.
June 24th, 2021 14:03
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
dusk arising said:
LOL I suppose that means i love the highway more than does the kittyhawk?
Or shall i read..... who loves sex more than the sexy?
Love and lovers....Scrubbing and scrubbers?
June 24th, 2021 09:10
dusk arising said:
LOL I suppose that means i love the highway more than does the kittyhawk?
Or shall i read..... who loves sex more than the sexy?
Love and lovers....Scrubbing and scrubbers?
June 24th, 2021 09:10
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely Nev. - Romantic lines again from your tender pen methinks - -- stating that even sky\'s expanse cannot be more broad or deep than love which the heart feels for a much cherished lady. - - twas using the Olde English of \"thee\" did it for me - - - sighingly - - - Fay.........x
June 24th, 2021 08:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely Nev. - Romantic lines again from your tender pen methinks - -- stating that even sky\'s expanse cannot be more broad or deep than love which the heart feels for a much cherished lady. - - twas using the Olde English of \"thee\" did it for me - - - sighingly - - - Fay.........x
June 24th, 2021 08:58
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
Saxon Crow said:
Nice. Can\'t beat a lapwing either. The spitfire of the sky.
Great poem Nev :)
June 24th, 2021 08:26
Saxon Crow said:
Nice. Can\'t beat a lapwing either. The spitfire of the sky.
Great poem Nev :)
June 24th, 2021 08:26
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
You met more lasses?!
June 24th, 2021 07:22
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
You met more lasses?!
June 24th, 2021 07:22
A Taste of Hunger
L. B. Mek said:
\'I live in a crooked world
of the most acute offset lines
and flawed masonry ..
So why should I pretend to
subscribe
to such technical lineography\'..
this is so, so deep my friend
it could anchor
an entire books worth of literary thread...
sheer articulated brevity of insightful brilliance!
in my humble opinion
(and sorry for my abrupt comment in your last poem
your words took me to my favourite metaphor of love
\'that red string of fate\';
a concept originally of Chinese origin, I think
but I love the Japanese wording, where I fatefully
came across it first)
June 24th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'I live in a crooked world
of the most acute offset lines
and flawed masonry ..
So why should I pretend to
subscribe
to such technical lineography\'..
this is so, so deep my friend
it could anchor
an entire books worth of literary thread...
sheer articulated brevity of insightful brilliance!
in my humble opinion
(and sorry for my abrupt comment in your last poem
your words took me to my favourite metaphor of love
\'that red string of fate\';
a concept originally of Chinese origin, I think
but I love the Japanese wording, where I fatefully
came across it first)
June 24th, 2021 04:15
A Taste of Hunger
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that hurt and hunger will be satisfied and all will be good in your house.
Andy
June 24th, 2021 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that hurt and hunger will be satisfied and all will be good in your house.
Andy
June 24th, 2021 00:50
A Taste of Hunger
Doggerel Dave said:
Hurt because you bust your head on the door lintel (them old houses) and the mice ate your tucker, Neville?
Great story - enjoyed the imagery.
June 23rd, 2021 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Hurt because you bust your head on the door lintel (them old houses) and the mice ate your tucker, Neville?
Great story - enjoyed the imagery.
June 23rd, 2021 20:13
A Taste of Hunger
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
A very interesting and intriguing read.
We may feed our hungerā¦
but never enough to sate it.
Lauraš»
June 23rd, 2021 16:53
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
A very interesting and intriguing read.
We may feed our hungerā¦
but never enough to sate it.
Lauraš»
June 23rd, 2021 16:53
A Taste of Hunger
dusk arising said:
Nothing is straight and linear when you are hurt and hungry for resolution.
Hurt and hungry stem from an unjust finale.
June 23rd, 2021 12:58
dusk arising said:
Nothing is straight and linear when you are hurt and hungry for resolution.
Hurt and hungry stem from an unjust finale.
June 23rd, 2021 12:58
A Taste of Hunger
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Nev - Is this your old house defending itself I wonder - or maybe tis a metaphor expertly constructed Everyone\'s flawed and to be reminded that crooked is unacceptable can hurt thus
creating one of the worst hungers - - a powerful piece of potent answer and do hope it worked........x
June 23rd, 2021 12:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Nev - Is this your old house defending itself I wonder - or maybe tis a metaphor expertly constructed Everyone\'s flawed and to be reminded that crooked is unacceptable can hurt thus
creating one of the worst hungers - - a powerful piece of potent answer and do hope it worked........x
June 23rd, 2021 12:57
A Taste of Hunger
SureshG said:
Maybe ācause Henry got all the courtesans and many wives, screwing up everybody elseās lives, thatās why you live in a crooked house and are always hungry - I know I would be
Loved the read
June 23rd, 2021 12:45
SureshG said:
Maybe ācause Henry got all the courtesans and many wives, screwing up everybody elseās lives, thatās why you live in a crooked house and are always hungry - I know I would be
Loved the read
June 23rd, 2021 12:45
A Taste of Hunger
Saxon Crow said:
Great title. Awesomely quirky house you live in!
June 23rd, 2021 12:18
Saxon Crow said:
Great title. Awesomely quirky house you live in!
June 23rd, 2021 12:18
Himawari - Sunflower
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āHimawariā as in Girasoleā¦
Beautiful words for a beautiful flower.š»
I feel like Iāve been in that field of beauty that you so elegantly have penned with an abundance of metaphors.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Lauraš»
June 23rd, 2021 12:17
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āHimawariā as in Girasoleā¦
Beautiful words for a beautiful flower.š»
I feel like Iāve been in that field of beauty that you so elegantly have penned with an abundance of metaphors.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Lauraš»
June 23rd, 2021 12:17
Himawari - Sunflower
Neville said:
another much appreciated visit, thank you L.B ...
right said Fred .. red thread doomed red thread .. :)
June 23rd, 2021 11:42
Neville said:
another much appreciated visit, thank you L.B ...
right said Fred .. red thread doomed red thread .. :)
June 23rd, 2021 11:42
Himawari - Sunflower
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Neville, may that light shine on us all forever.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Neville, may that light shine on us all forever.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 00:39
Himawari - Sunflower
Dove said:
Beautiful and a delight to read! Oh to see it bloom amongst the lovely flowers, metaphorically I imagine a handsome gents as yourself surrounded by beautiful women admiring from afar,
June 22nd, 2021 13:18
Dove said:
Beautiful and a delight to read! Oh to see it bloom amongst the lovely flowers, metaphorically I imagine a handsome gents as yourself surrounded by beautiful women admiring from afar,
June 22nd, 2021 13:18
Himawari - Sunflower
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Standing tall is a good start for sure.
June 22nd, 2021 12:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Standing tall is a good start for sure.
June 22nd, 2021 12:36
Himawari - Sunflower
dusk arising said:
Though no longer at the peak of his glorious self, he stood out from the well dressed crowd with a dignity unsurpassable.
June 22nd, 2021 07:39
dusk arising said:
Though no longer at the peak of his glorious self, he stood out from the well dressed crowd with a dignity unsurpassable.
June 22nd, 2021 07:39
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