Comments received on poems by Neville
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
L. B. Mek said:
like the play between the title and the poem itself,
sobering truths you penned
August 25th, 2020 02:57
L. B. Mek said:
like the play between the title and the poem itself,
sobering truths you penned
August 25th, 2020 02:57
Sun Shy
MendedFences27 said:
I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella,
when he wondrously presented a baton that outstretched her umbrella.
Okay, I quit. There\'s no humor like the original. Yes, your rhyme had me laughing. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2020 12:31
MendedFences27 said:
I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella,
when he wondrously presented a baton that outstretched her umbrella.
Okay, I quit. There\'s no humor like the original. Yes, your rhyme had me laughing. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2020 12:31
Sun Shy
dusk arising said:
Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment.
Nicely put together with easy flow and a big smiling finale.
August 24th, 2020 06:48
dusk arising said:
Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment.
Nicely put together with easy flow and a big smiling finale.
August 24th, 2020 06:48
Sun Shy
orchidee said:
That\'s me and her then. Notices subtle ending - I got me tickling-stick! Swoon! lol.
August 24th, 2020 05:27
orchidee said:
That\'s me and her then. Notices subtle ending - I got me tickling-stick! Swoon! lol.
August 24th, 2020 05:27
Bridges
L. B. Mek said:
oh my talented friend how deftly you capture those wishful winds of young lover\'s, vehemently clinging to the all or nothing, of the now
that often fails us and sails-on-by, till we are left wondering at what we purpled ourselves: grasping, as if our very breaths, were fuelled by it
brilliant!
August 24th, 2020 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
oh my talented friend how deftly you capture those wishful winds of young lover\'s, vehemently clinging to the all or nothing, of the now
that often fails us and sails-on-by, till we are left wondering at what we purpled ourselves: grasping, as if our very breaths, were fuelled by it
brilliant!
August 24th, 2020 05:18
Sun Shy
L. B. Mek said:
entertainingly witty,
a skip - back to days
of eager pulses, with naught - but hunting season\'s blinkered vision
for banishing, lonesome evenings
August 24th, 2020 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
entertainingly witty,
a skip - back to days
of eager pulses, with naught - but hunting season\'s blinkered vision
for banishing, lonesome evenings
August 24th, 2020 04:35
Sun Shy
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me quite wordless Nev - - your pen paints such on-going scenes with a finesse that makes me naughtily wanting more....................x
August 24th, 2020 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me quite wordless Nev - - your pen paints such on-going scenes with a finesse that makes me naughtily wanting more....................x
August 24th, 2020 03:58
Bridges
dusk arising said:
A bridge - a way to overcome a problem/where two purposes meet.
Life and death to some but easy life for others.
A bridge, a beginning, a step into the unknown for lifers.
So much to read into your piece today. Pictures, opportunities, failures and sadness are but a few. Though sadness prevails.
August 23rd, 2020 13:17
dusk arising said:
A bridge - a way to overcome a problem/where two purposes meet.
Life and death to some but easy life for others.
A bridge, a beginning, a step into the unknown for lifers.
So much to read into your piece today. Pictures, opportunities, failures and sadness are but a few. Though sadness prevails.
August 23rd, 2020 13:17
Bridges
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure if it\'s intentional or not but I can read into this. great bit of penmanship .
August 23rd, 2020 03:27
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure if it\'s intentional or not but I can read into this. great bit of penmanship .
August 23rd, 2020 03:27
Bridges
Fay Slimm. said:
The lure of bridges worldwide must provide a sad how for the unbalanced to say their goodbyes and your words lock this fact clearly into a shock-of-a-read Nev. with final lines sounding down so well the hopeless whys of such tragic endings to young lives.......
August 23rd, 2020 02:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The lure of bridges worldwide must provide a sad how for the unbalanced to say their goodbyes and your words lock this fact clearly into a shock-of-a-read Nev. with final lines sounding down so well the hopeless whys of such tragic endings to young lives.......
August 23rd, 2020 02:32
Bridges
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I know such a bridge. It\'s to keep people off private land.
August 23rd, 2020 01:40
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I know such a bridge. It\'s to keep people off private land.
August 23rd, 2020 01:40
Bridges
Goldfinch60 said:
But bridges are also the way to join each other and walk together along that pathway of happiness.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
But bridges are also the way to join each other and walk together along that pathway of happiness.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 00:56
Beautiful Contradictions
Goldfinch60 said:
May those beautiful contradictions within her keep you forever enamoured by her.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
May those beautiful contradictions within her keep you forever enamoured by her.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 00:04
Beautiful Contradictions
orchidee said:
Morning Puss! lol. A fine write Neville.
August 22nd, 2020 10:02
orchidee said:
Morning Puss! lol. A fine write Neville.
August 22nd, 2020 10:02
Beautiful Contradictions
dusk arising said:
Over the last coupe of days the mere mention of a cat/kitten has brought a wide grin to me due to a comment Goldfinch made calling cats \"arrogant little creatures\".
Your kitten though one supposes to be entirely of a more sleek variety..... like poetry themselves they hold you and take your imagination into their game. As did you, here, today.
August 22nd, 2020 06:09
dusk arising said:
Over the last coupe of days the mere mention of a cat/kitten has brought a wide grin to me due to a comment Goldfinch made calling cats \"arrogant little creatures\".
Your kitten though one supposes to be entirely of a more sleek variety..... like poetry themselves they hold you and take your imagination into their game. As did you, here, today.
August 22nd, 2020 06:09
Beautiful Contradictions
L. B. Mek said:
I really like this style/form of delivery you\'ve used lately,
engaging, thought provoking but never demanding, as always subtly nudging your readers to a more contemplative state
August 22nd, 2020 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
I really like this style/form of delivery you\'ve used lately,
engaging, thought provoking but never demanding, as always subtly nudging your readers to a more contemplative state
August 22nd, 2020 03:44
Beautiful Contradictions
Fay Slimm. said:
Never knew contradictions could be termed beautiful but that\'s what love sees when waking to an adored kitten - -- a warm sense of caring makes this read very special mon ami............x
August 22nd, 2020 03:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Never knew contradictions could be termed beautiful but that\'s what love sees when waking to an adored kitten - -- a warm sense of caring makes this read very special mon ami............x
August 22nd, 2020 03:36
Sky Hungry
MendedFences27 said:
I was airborne with you on this one.
\"hanging on the very edge of infinite circles,\" a great description of Harrier flight. A p;air of hawks lived in a tree just beyond our old backyard and we would watch them often as they circled. Of course your title says it all \"Sky hungry\" the desire to fly. It has motivated mankind for eternity. Although would I want to be a bird, or just able to fly like one. Basically it\'s a form of freedom we desire but cannot have. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 21st, 2020 14:50
MendedFences27 said:
I was airborne with you on this one.
\"hanging on the very edge of infinite circles,\" a great description of Harrier flight. A p;air of hawks lived in a tree just beyond our old backyard and we would watch them often as they circled. Of course your title says it all \"Sky hungry\" the desire to fly. It has motivated mankind for eternity. Although would I want to be a bird, or just able to fly like one. Basically it\'s a form of freedom we desire but cannot have. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 21st, 2020 14:50
Sky Hungry
Fay Slimm. said:
I love this impressive flight of fancy where \"sky lay-bys\" give hours of aloneness with someone you love - --what a notion eh - that potent finalé will stay long after the read in the mind of this reader.
August 21st, 2020 02:14
Fay Slimm. said:
I love this impressive flight of fancy where \"sky lay-bys\" give hours of aloneness with someone you love - --what a notion eh - that potent finalé will stay long after the read in the mind of this reader.
August 21st, 2020 02:14
Sky Hungry
dusk arising said:
Speaks of out admiration for the birds and the desire to fly.... fly free and away from material ties.
You took me to my dream worlds of long ago here Neville and yes, who better than a dream lover to accompany.
August 21st, 2020 02:06
dusk arising said:
Speaks of out admiration for the birds and the desire to fly.... fly free and away from material ties.
You took me to my dream worlds of long ago here Neville and yes, who better than a dream lover to accompany.
August 21st, 2020 02:06
Sky Hungry
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Friday Neville - Love the Metaphors & Fantasies ! Yes I do envy BIRDS their 3D existance and *Birds Eye View* of things. Fish as well but they do miss *The Beauty of the Earth* I have parachuted (to raise money for a scanner) but *Hang Gliding* is on My list ! When GOD created us *A Litte Lower than the Angels* He forgot the Wings. I have been down the Grand Canyon in the front seat of a Helicopter - Next best thing ! Thanks for Sharing - Please check *BRIDGES* Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 21st, 2020 00:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Friday Neville - Love the Metaphors & Fantasies ! Yes I do envy BIRDS their 3D existance and *Birds Eye View* of things. Fish as well but they do miss *The Beauty of the Earth* I have parachuted (to raise money for a scanner) but *Hang Gliding* is on My list ! When GOD created us *A Litte Lower than the Angels* He forgot the Wings. I have been down the Grand Canyon in the front seat of a Helicopter - Next best thing ! Thanks for Sharing - Please check *BRIDGES* Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 21st, 2020 00:49
Sky Hungry
Goldfinch60 said:
I can associate with this Neville as i have always said that when I come back I want to be a buzzard, just hanging in the sky looking down on the world.
Andy
August 21st, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
I can associate with this Neville as i have always said that when I come back I want to be a buzzard, just hanging in the sky looking down on the world.
Andy
August 21st, 2020 00:16
Crimson Ribbon
L. B. Mek said:
subtle, ever so subtle in delivery but, thunderously poignant!
indeed a message that is timely in bringing awareness to something that most urgently needs it,
these self isolation conditions have truly created more and more unbearable conditions for some of the most vulnerable in our society
August 20th, 2020 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
subtle, ever so subtle in delivery but, thunderously poignant!
indeed a message that is timely in bringing awareness to something that most urgently needs it,
these self isolation conditions have truly created more and more unbearable conditions for some of the most vulnerable in our society
August 20th, 2020 05:00
Pretty as a Pin
Fay Slimm. said:
Rag-tied cotton-capped hair would put any male off methinks but maybe Horatio must have looking at that sheepish grin - - - - laughin\' I am thinkin\' o\' that pretty scene all the way to me sinless breakfast............x
August 20th, 2020 04:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Rag-tied cotton-capped hair would put any male off methinks but maybe Horatio must have looking at that sheepish grin - - - - laughin\' I am thinkin\' o\' that pretty scene all the way to me sinless breakfast............x
August 20th, 2020 04:32
Pretty as a Pin
L. B. Mek said:
my friend have you been reading Harry Flashman\'s tales - again...
\'whey hey\' indeed, a fun start to my day, thank you
August 20th, 2020 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
my friend have you been reading Harry Flashman\'s tales - again...
\'whey hey\' indeed, a fun start to my day, thank you
August 20th, 2020 03:44
Pretty as a Pin
dusk arising said:
All at sea over this little matelot\'s dream.... another mermaid? no way... with legs like those who wants fishtail soup anyway.
Kismet Hardy?... Or are ya firing broadsides someplace.....
A most stimulating read, Nelsons column could take yer eye out. You shouldn\'t be doing this to the ageing red blooded males in the mornings Neville.
August 20th, 2020 01:58
dusk arising said:
All at sea over this little matelot\'s dream.... another mermaid? no way... with legs like those who wants fishtail soup anyway.
Kismet Hardy?... Or are ya firing broadsides someplace.....
A most stimulating read, Nelsons column could take yer eye out. You shouldn\'t be doing this to the ageing red blooded males in the mornings Neville.
August 20th, 2020 01:58
Pretty as a Pin
orchidee said:
A bit of \'whey hey\' that early in the day?! Swoon! lol. A \'Carry on\' film I think, says: \'I\'m not against slap, but I object to a bit of tickle!\'
August 20th, 2020 01:50
orchidee said:
A bit of \'whey hey\' that early in the day?! Swoon! lol. A \'Carry on\' film I think, says: \'I\'m not against slap, but I object to a bit of tickle!\'
August 20th, 2020 01:50
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