Comments received on poems by Neville
Recollections
A.H. Browning said:
“But so much harder to forget”
You speak the truth. Enjoyed.
October 24th, 2021 02:31
A.H. Browning said:
“But so much harder to forget”
You speak the truth. Enjoyed.
October 24th, 2021 02:31
Recollections
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I\'m into too much psychology at present. a nook says things like: \'Is there a thought that causes us to remember that we forgot something?\'
And - \'Is there a thought that causes us to forget what we remembered?\'
Summat like that. I will shut up and go back to sleep now. lol
October 24th, 2021 02:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I\'m into too much psychology at present. a nook says things like: \'Is there a thought that causes us to remember that we forgot something?\'
And - \'Is there a thought that causes us to forget what we remembered?\'
Summat like that. I will shut up and go back to sleep now. lol
October 24th, 2021 02:11
Magnificently Flawed
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Ahh…those first impressions can be so deceiving…so much packed within a few lines…
Another great one my dear poet.
Laura🌻
October 23rd, 2021 18:12
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Ahh…those first impressions can be so deceiving…so much packed within a few lines…
Another great one my dear poet.
Laura🌻
October 23rd, 2021 18:12
Magnificently Flawed
dusk arising said:
Not to mention the huge Gorilla swinging on her apex.
Great description of some of the time wasters out there, my radar has become finely attuned.
October 23rd, 2021 12:02
dusk arising said:
Not to mention the huge Gorilla swinging on her apex.
Great description of some of the time wasters out there, my radar has become finely attuned.
October 23rd, 2021 12:02
Magnificently Flawed
orchidee said:
Gotta meet her!
See ya later when I\'ve met her. lol.
October 23rd, 2021 06:49
orchidee said:
Gotta meet her!
See ya later when I\'ve met her. lol.
October 23rd, 2021 06:49
Magnificently Flawed
Lorna said:
Oh how I laughed.......... so funny - thank you.
October 23rd, 2021 06:02
Lorna said:
Oh how I laughed.......... so funny - thank you.
October 23rd, 2021 06:02
Magnificently Flawed
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - the timing was great if found out not too late the lady was not what she seemed - -- wise weekend read my friend............x
October 23rd, 2021 05:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - the timing was great if found out not too late the lady was not what she seemed - -- wise weekend read my friend............x
October 23rd, 2021 05:25
Magnificently Flawed
spilleronsheet said:
Flaws alright
Imperfections be treated with kind
But how to tolerate those who keep converted their flaws
To act fakes all time
Well crafted dear poet
In short lines
You conveyed the masks people carry nowadays
October 23rd, 2021 03:06
spilleronsheet said:
Flaws alright
Imperfections be treated with kind
But how to tolerate those who keep converted their flaws
To act fakes all time
Well crafted dear poet
In short lines
You conveyed the masks people carry nowadays
October 23rd, 2021 03:06
Magnificently Flawed
Goldfinch60 said:
All those flaws combined?
Yes some people cannot be trusted for so many reasons sometimes.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
All those flaws combined?
Yes some people cannot be trusted for so many reasons sometimes.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 03:05
Magnificently Flawed
Caring dove said:
Wow … someone with so many flaws … it sounds like the flaws are really revealing themselves .
A good poem , Neville
October 23rd, 2021 02:48
Caring dove said:
Wow … someone with so many flaws … it sounds like the flaws are really revealing themselves .
A good poem , Neville
October 23rd, 2021 02:48
A Diamond in The Making
Goldfinch60 said:
That diamond will always be there Neville.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That diamond will always be there Neville.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:32
A Diamond in The Making
L. B. Mek said:
oh now for the real - real, deep poetry like this
I gotta save it for my nightly reads
so I can muse over it
delicately, in-between
conversational distractions and that distracting, clink
of expensive flavoured, melting ice cubes;
yes, I need that ambience
to be tempered, just right
to do such depthless words, justice...
October 22nd, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
oh now for the real - real, deep poetry like this
I gotta save it for my nightly reads
so I can muse over it
delicately, in-between
conversational distractions and that distracting, clink
of expensive flavoured, melting ice cubes;
yes, I need that ambience
to be tempered, just right
to do such depthless words, justice...
October 22nd, 2021 05:21
A Diamond in The Making
Fay Slimm. said:
Good advice for a growing heart is this wise three liner. Diamonds are best when looking for value in making relationships..........x
October 22nd, 2021 03:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Good advice for a growing heart is this wise three liner. Diamonds are best when looking for value in making relationships..........x
October 22nd, 2021 03:34
A Diamond in The Making
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautifully stated my dear friend.
Laura🌻
October 22nd, 2021 03:12
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautifully stated my dear friend.
Laura🌻
October 22nd, 2021 03:12
A Diamond in The Making
dusk arising said:
Nice one Neville. I hate to think what my gallstones will turn out to be now that I\'ve invested in a ULEZ car.
October 22nd, 2021 03:10
dusk arising said:
Nice one Neville. I hate to think what my gallstones will turn out to be now that I\'ve invested in a ULEZ car.
October 22nd, 2021 03:10
Two Days into Autumn
dusk arising said:
I came home from a stay in hospital to a wonderful autumnal display on my tulip tree yesterday.
Kinda squared my wheel.... how the erstwhile taken for granted suddenly enlightens life.
October 21st, 2021 06:27
dusk arising said:
I came home from a stay in hospital to a wonderful autumnal display on my tulip tree yesterday.
Kinda squared my wheel.... how the erstwhile taken for granted suddenly enlightens life.
October 21st, 2021 06:27
Two Days into Autumn
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
yeah, ain\'t nothing like life
to get in the way
of our appreciation for nature\'s majesty,
wonderfully fun! bottled
all that aggression and unleashed it
in your furious showcasing of obsidian-sharp, wit
(\'Autumn just has to be up there
among the top four
of my most favest of seasons\') 🤣
unleash the cynic within! be free
ah, man you\'re just so funny!
October 21st, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
yeah, ain\'t nothing like life
to get in the way
of our appreciation for nature\'s majesty,
wonderfully fun! bottled
all that aggression and unleashed it
in your furious showcasing of obsidian-sharp, wit
(\'Autumn just has to be up there
among the top four
of my most favest of seasons\') 🤣
unleash the cynic within! be free
ah, man you\'re just so funny!
October 21st, 2021 05:42
Two Days into Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
I know just what you mean -- autumn appears of a sudden and magics shades into her choosing.- - love that last line..............x
October 21st, 2021 04:00
Fay Slimm. said:
I know just what you mean -- autumn appears of a sudden and magics shades into her choosing.- - love that last line..............x
October 21st, 2021 04:00
Two Days into Autumn
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Me diary says we\'re one month and two days into Autumn!
October 21st, 2021 02:22
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Me diary says we\'re one month and two days into Autumn!
October 21st, 2021 02:22
Two Days into Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, Autumn is with us.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, Autumn is with us.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 01:20
Ithaca
Goldfinch60 said:
Did you meet Odysseus there this time Neville?
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Did you meet Odysseus there this time Neville?
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:46
Ithaca
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day and look for his footsteps - or may be for yours mon ami......x
October 20th, 2021 09:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day and look for his footsteps - or may be for yours mon ami......x
October 20th, 2021 09:22
Ithaca
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Should I meet here? Ohh, it\'s an island! lol.
Now me next poem \'E\'ermore my friends.......\' I dunno the next lines! heehee.
Do shut up now Orchi.
October 20th, 2021 04:27
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Should I meet here? Ohh, it\'s an island! lol.
Now me next poem \'E\'ermore my friends.......\' I dunno the next lines! heehee.
Do shut up now Orchi.
October 20th, 2021 04:27
Ithaca
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for the morning Google as I was not sure and now I\'ve seen its all in your head, can I come on board!
Fantastic stuff my friend
October 20th, 2021 03:34
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for the morning Google as I was not sure and now I\'ve seen its all in your head, can I come on board!
Fantastic stuff my friend
October 20th, 2021 03:34
Dirty Laugh
Goldfinch60 said:
That laugh has been in my world in the past Neville, but a very long time ago.
Andy
October 20th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That laugh has been in my world in the past Neville, but a very long time ago.
Andy
October 20th, 2021 00:31
Dirty Laugh
MendedFences27 said:
The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the latter is accepted with pleasure. To find so willing a \"laugh\" charmer is most fortunate. To reveal it here in such a poetic form is very skillful and shows how tiny things can make a moment into a memory. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 18:18
MendedFences27 said:
The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the latter is accepted with pleasure. To find so willing a \"laugh\" charmer is most fortunate. To reveal it here in such a poetic form is very skillful and shows how tiny things can make a moment into a memory. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 18:18
Dirty Laugh
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Was hers a \'tee hee\' or a \'hee hee\' or a \'lol\' laugh?
And why am I talking rubbish?! (lol).
October 19th, 2021 10:28
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Was hers a \'tee hee\' or a \'hee hee\' or a \'lol\' laugh?
And why am I talking rubbish?! (lol).
October 19th, 2021 10:28
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