Comments received on poems by Neville
Nothing but a Keepsake
Saxon Crow said:
Ahhhh memories of regret. So bittersweet. Nicely penned Nev
June 14th, 2021 14:13
Saxon Crow said:
Ahhhh memories of regret. So bittersweet. Nicely penned Nev
June 14th, 2021 14:13
Nothing but a Keepsake
Fay Slimm. said:
What might have been is covered here with veils of maybe and faded postcards but the moments of here and now seem so comfortably right in this small celebration of glorious togetherness. A tender read dear Nev.......x
June 14th, 2021 13:38
Fay Slimm. said:
What might have been is covered here with veils of maybe and faded postcards but the moments of here and now seem so comfortably right in this small celebration of glorious togetherness. A tender read dear Nev.......x
June 14th, 2021 13:38
Nothing but a Keepsake
SureshG said:
We sigh to remember what could have been, that your words say it so softly
June 14th, 2021 12:32
SureshG said:
We sigh to remember what could have been, that your words say it so softly
June 14th, 2021 12:32
Nothing but a Keepsake
dusk arising said:
\"Memories light the corners of my mind, misty water coloured.....\"
Such poetry as these memories have planted. We reap their rich harvest here on MPS. Today yours flowers beautifully.
June 14th, 2021 11:44
dusk arising said:
\"Memories light the corners of my mind, misty water coloured.....\"
Such poetry as these memories have planted. We reap their rich harvest here on MPS. Today yours flowers beautifully.
June 14th, 2021 11:44
Overcome
L. B. Mek said:
\'each tiny pearl of salt laden lotion shifted
and swirled, in a perfectly decreasing cyclic motion\'
oh, ok - yeah, that
erm, washing machine
tumble and bubble, and its contents
instinctive friction
of pulsating, spontaneous symphony
a replayed metaphorical rendition
of their owners
once skin-tingling: mutually symbiotic attraction
as their serendipity\'s, beginning..
(funtastically, funtabolously
...erm, fun?)..
A steamy read, you know
for us who like a bit of washing machine
vivacious: tremble...
Ahem! lol
June 14th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'each tiny pearl of salt laden lotion shifted
and swirled, in a perfectly decreasing cyclic motion\'
oh, ok - yeah, that
erm, washing machine
tumble and bubble, and its contents
instinctive friction
of pulsating, spontaneous symphony
a replayed metaphorical rendition
of their owners
once skin-tingling: mutually symbiotic attraction
as their serendipity\'s, beginning..
(funtastically, funtabolously
...erm, fun?)..
A steamy read, you know
for us who like a bit of washing machine
vivacious: tremble...
Ahem! lol
June 14th, 2021 04:59
Overcome
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot? Hot over there? Winter here, hasn\'t got over 20 degrees C all week. Too cold to do much.... Could do an Oates I suppose.....not ready to go yet....
June 13th, 2021 19:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot? Hot over there? Winter here, hasn\'t got over 20 degrees C all week. Too cold to do much.... Could do an Oates I suppose.....not ready to go yet....
June 13th, 2021 19:16
Overcome
SureshG said:
After reading several of your recent posts, I have come to a conclusion that I’m jealous of you, your experiences and your talent.
June 13th, 2021 13:22
SureshG said:
After reading several of your recent posts, I have come to a conclusion that I’m jealous of you, your experiences and your talent.
June 13th, 2021 13:22
Overcome
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I remember it well................x
June 13th, 2021 10:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I remember it well................x
June 13th, 2021 10:07
Overcome
dusk arising said:
Disgracefully good!
You\'ve phrased this so well here to take your reader on their own sensual journey without revealing a thing. You\'re at it again pesky Neville.
June 13th, 2021 09:06
dusk arising said:
Disgracefully good!
You\'ve phrased this so well here to take your reader on their own sensual journey without revealing a thing. You\'re at it again pesky Neville.
June 13th, 2021 09:06
Overcome
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s hot out there already without you turning up the heat Nev!
June 13th, 2021 07:12
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s hot out there already without you turning up the heat Nev!
June 13th, 2021 07:12
Seizing Moments
Fay Slimm. said:
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different subject in my view Nev. - - secret indeed is the moment when even fierce winds cannot expose it - - so with this second comment I think a good title could have been Your Secret - - whatever - - tis still good stuff...........x
June 13th, 2021 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different subject in my view Nev. - - secret indeed is the moment when even fierce winds cannot expose it - - so with this second comment I think a good title could have been Your Secret - - whatever - - tis still good stuff...........x
June 13th, 2021 03:19
Seizing Moments
Doggerel Dave said:
And tomorrow \"The answer is blowin\' in the wind\"
Sorry Neville - I just couldn\'t get it out of my mind....
June 12th, 2021 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
And tomorrow \"The answer is blowin\' in the wind\"
Sorry Neville - I just couldn\'t get it out of my mind....
June 12th, 2021 19:51
Seizing Moments
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good twist, Neville. A bit of clever poetic kiss and tell.
June 12th, 2021 16:52
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good twist, Neville. A bit of clever poetic kiss and tell.
June 12th, 2021 16:52
Seizing Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrow is waiting for us and it will be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 12:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrow is waiting for us and it will be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 12:33
Seizing Moments
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Yes, let’s seize those moments
that gratify us…
in the now!
Let’s live for today…
for we don’t know what
tomorrow will bring!
Your penned “scribble”,
as you call it,
has been a very satisfying read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
June 12th, 2021 12:01
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Yes, let’s seize those moments
that gratify us…
in the now!
Let’s live for today…
for we don’t know what
tomorrow will bring!
Your penned “scribble”,
as you call it,
has been a very satisfying read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
June 12th, 2021 12:01
Seizing Moments
dusk arising said:
When passion becomes a whispering breeze - worry!
Whilst passiion is a screaming wind - let it blow, let it blow, let it blow.
June 12th, 2021 08:19
dusk arising said:
When passion becomes a whispering breeze - worry!
Whilst passiion is a screaming wind - let it blow, let it blow, let it blow.
June 12th, 2021 08:19
Seizing Moments
Fay Slimm. said:
Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as you poem this ode and I like the title you use above this play around Seizing Moments amigo - - great stuff.........x
June 12th, 2021 05:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as you poem this ode and I like the title you use above this play around Seizing Moments amigo - - great stuff.........x
June 12th, 2021 05:23
Seizing Moments
Accidental Poet said:
Giving reason to look forward to tomorrow. Nice write N. ; )
June 12th, 2021 04:51
Accidental Poet said:
Giving reason to look forward to tomorrow. Nice write N. ; )
June 12th, 2021 04:51
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Neville,
\"but then....who cares\" ......you do.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Neville,
\"but then....who cares\" ......you do.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:25
Nowhere Left to Bleed
SureshG said:
Exposed you have yourself, raw, in that moment of life. A song most of sign at least once in our lives.
June 11th, 2021 12:30
SureshG said:
Exposed you have yourself, raw, in that moment of life. A song most of sign at least once in our lives.
June 11th, 2021 12:30
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Inspiring poem.
June 11th, 2021 09:07
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Inspiring poem.
June 11th, 2021 09:07
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Doggerel Dave said:
A couple of my relationships were a little toxic, Neville - but compared to yours I feel grateful.......
Heavy, heavy...
June 11th, 2021 05:58
Doggerel Dave said:
A couple of my relationships were a little toxic, Neville - but compared to yours I feel grateful.......
Heavy, heavy...
June 11th, 2021 05:58
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