War is Not for Lovers
L. B. Mek said:

what a brilliant bridge, between
narrative and commentary
in a single poem,
I love your nod to Kipling\'s \'tommy\'
as well, adding to the innate fallacy
you unmask, in your portrayal
of all-things war and divisive tyranny!
(worth, reposting
on Thursday as a timely poem
to help us all insure, we Never
take their sacrifices for granted
and always Remember, their bravery:
of the 60 million who fought
some 9 million, lost their lives,
this freedom we waste, came
at such a heavy price...)
thanks for sharing, dear Masterful Poet

November 9th, 2021 04:14

Kitten
spilleronsheet said:

Kittens are lovely when they act coy
Beware when they turn tiger beside

November 4th, 2021 10:40

Kitten
dusk arising said:

Someones been eating their kellogs frosties i see.

Kittens climbing up your trouser leg as you open a can of cat food..... so cut but owww those bloody claws! especially when the kitten has your %%%% in her grasp (which financially is always).

November 4th, 2021 05:10

Kitten
orchidee said:

I thought this would be about a cat! (did I? lol). Did he say \'Here, kitty, kitty\'? Did he call her in from outdoors, before night-fall?! heehee.

November 4th, 2021 04:03

Shy
dusk arising said:

Nights in white satin.....

Well, better late than never. The things these ladies will do to give us the impression of purity when inside they are just........

LOvely teaser of a poem today.

November 3rd, 2021 11:53

Shy
orchidee said:

Good write N.
She was going to reveal all to me, but I fainted, and Fido revived me! lol.

November 3rd, 2021 06:48

Shy
Goldfinch60 said:

Good alluring words Neville.

Andy

November 3rd, 2021 04:48

Shy
Fay Slimm. said:

A pleasure indeed to read that finally all barriers down she can enjoy her naked shape quite shamelessly - - an alluring peek into remembered intimacy which Crete seemingly offered freely - - OOooh must go for a cold shower -gone a bit hot here amigo..............x

November 3rd, 2021 04:21

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Doggerel Dave said:

Bustle and rush to where? absolute futility....Nah I\'ve already made this post too long - I should just take the advice provided in your last two lines.
Thanks Nev.

November 2nd, 2021 20:00

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

Your penned words do speak for themselves and I appreciate what they’re communicating to yours truly.

Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.

Laura🌻

November 2nd, 2021 15:27

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
spilleronsheet said:

I really look at up at your works
So refined and majestic
With few lines they convey such a powerful message
The present scenario with an advice
Well crafted dear poet

November 2nd, 2021 09:33

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
L. B. Mek said:

\'Each with their pollen
pockets primed
and likewise filled
to the very
point of overflowing ..\'
these poem, just exudes
your poetic class, my friend
so subtle, ever
so majestically subtle..
you deliver that arrowed incision of insightful commentary
with the practised ease, of a Supreme wordsmith..
(I read and learn, dear Poet
and Proud, to call myself a fan)

November 2nd, 2021 05:47

Storm Petrel Rising
Goldfinch60 said:

Those petrels are wonderful to watch, have seen them when travelling this countries cliffs.

Andy

November 2nd, 2021 01:24

Storm Petrel Rising
spilleronsheet said:

Initially I felt nostalgic of a beach visit
Then felt the wrath man delivered to our nature
It’s a very well knit poetry
You played the words well dear poet

November 1st, 2021 08:46

Storm Petrel Rising
L. B. Mek said:

even all the way, from here
deep in our islander\'s, naïve existence
we smell the electrified menace in the gust
that ruffles our clothing and hair
delivering promise, of a Winter
that\'s gonna be remembered long
in the annals of Nature\'s
wrath of devastation..
\'brooding\' is putting it mildly!
(thanks for sharing dear Poet
your words, help sharpen our awareness
let\'s us know, its not just us
that\'s glimpsed those ominous, omens)

November 1st, 2021 07:31