Comments received on poems by Neville
Endsong
dusk arising said:
It\'s all there Neville. Superb! I aspire to write such apposite truths.
Into my fav\'s
August 30th, 2020 15:47
dusk arising said:
It\'s all there Neville. Superb! I aspire to write such apposite truths.
Into my fav\'s
August 30th, 2020 15:47
Endsong
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
\'Tomorrow will be a better day - if I don\'t sing!\' lol.
August 30th, 2020 14:15
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
\'Tomorrow will be a better day - if I don\'t sing!\' lol.
August 30th, 2020 14:15
Endsong
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise words and penned with inventive rhyming your Endsong is a reminder dear Nev. that any time left must be used to dream, wish and to hope................ x
August 30th, 2020 13:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise words and penned with inventive rhyming your Endsong is a reminder dear Nev. that any time left must be used to dream, wish and to hope................ x
August 30th, 2020 13:38
Endsong
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Evening Neville - I live on HOPE - what else is there to live for other than to hope that *Tomorrow will be a Better Day - AMEN !* Faith - Hope - Love - Now abides these three things to keep one OPTIMISTIC about the (post COVID 19) FUTURE! In my brief experience (32 Years) they are all EQUAL!
FAITH - That there will be a Future
HOPE - That the Future will be Brighter
LOVE - To keep you going if it isnt!
Please check our site THANKS A & B
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA - BRIAN - SMOKEY CAT ! ! !
August 30th, 2020 13:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Evening Neville - I live on HOPE - what else is there to live for other than to hope that *Tomorrow will be a Better Day - AMEN !* Faith - Hope - Love - Now abides these three things to keep one OPTIMISTIC about the (post COVID 19) FUTURE! In my brief experience (32 Years) they are all EQUAL!
FAITH - That there will be a Future
HOPE - That the Future will be Brighter
LOVE - To keep you going if it isnt!
Please check our site THANKS A & B
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA - BRIAN - SMOKEY CAT ! ! !
August 30th, 2020 13:22
When I Find You
Fay Slimm. said:
Love making with someone not even met is so specially tied in with inevitability in this intriguing and previously unread oldie mon ami - - glad to have caught the gentle erotica in that second stanza which warmed all my cockles.......................... x
August 30th, 2020 04:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Love making with someone not even met is so specially tied in with inevitability in this intriguing and previously unread oldie mon ami - - glad to have caught the gentle erotica in that second stanza which warmed all my cockles.......................... x
August 30th, 2020 04:39
Modern Love
Neville said:
You are most kind L. B. and I am most grateful to ya.....
nah’ even more than that even .....😎. 👍
August 30th, 2020 01:37
Neville said:
You are most kind L. B. and I am most grateful to ya.....
nah’ even more than that even .....😎. 👍
August 30th, 2020 01:37
Modern Love
L. B. Mek said:
timely, glad I visited and didn\'t miss out on this rib tickler 😁
liked the authentic author\'s comments:
\'...but then I thought, nah …………….\'
August 29th, 2020 02:54
L. B. Mek said:
timely, glad I visited and didn\'t miss out on this rib tickler 😁
liked the authentic author\'s comments:
\'...but then I thought, nah …………….\'
August 29th, 2020 02:54
Modern Love
MendedFences27 said:
Much better title, it adds to the surprise. Here\'s a take on this with nothing to do with Covid.
The \"hand wash \" confirmed he was indeed a doctor, and the \"designer mask\" nearly matched one of her own she kept in her bedside dresser. - Modern Love -
A year ago this would have been the premise of such lines, but now you have modernized love to fit the appropriate consequences of our time. It\'s light enough to bring laughter, and yet dark enough to cause concern. In all, thanks for some comic relief. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2020 10:56
MendedFences27 said:
Much better title, it adds to the surprise. Here\'s a take on this with nothing to do with Covid.
The \"hand wash \" confirmed he was indeed a doctor, and the \"designer mask\" nearly matched one of her own she kept in her bedside dresser. - Modern Love -
A year ago this would have been the premise of such lines, but now you have modernized love to fit the appropriate consequences of our time. It\'s light enough to bring laughter, and yet dark enough to cause concern. In all, thanks for some comic relief. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2020 10:56
Modern Love
dusk arising said:
I have decided that i am better looking behind a full face plastic visor rather than partially covered.
I asked a pal what he thought passed through his dogs mind when he saw somebody in a mask. - He\'s probably thinking I wonder who he\'s bitten to get himself muzzled.
August 27th, 2020 04:34
dusk arising said:
I have decided that i am better looking behind a full face plastic visor rather than partially covered.
I asked a pal what he thought passed through his dogs mind when he saw somebody in a mask. - He\'s probably thinking I wonder who he\'s bitten to get himself muzzled.
August 27th, 2020 04:34
Modern Love
Michael Edwards said:
\'When I grow old I shall wear purple\'
Well I\'ve got two designer face covers in manly purple - does that make me desirable I wonder - I doubt it.
Great fun write Neville.
August 27th, 2020 04:03
Michael Edwards said:
\'When I grow old I shall wear purple\'
Well I\'ve got two designer face covers in manly purple - does that make me desirable I wonder - I doubt it.
Great fun write Neville.
August 27th, 2020 04:03
Summer’s End
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness my friend, my mind read you words and got stuck - with your lines rearranged like this:
\'My walks in the park are now laboured
There is a chill in the air, I once savoured
The dapples, more darker now too
Saying goodbye to summer, simply: without you\'
wonderful write! (whatever way its read)
August 27th, 2020 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness my friend, my mind read you words and got stuck - with your lines rearranged like this:
\'My walks in the park are now laboured
There is a chill in the air, I once savoured
The dapples, more darker now too
Saying goodbye to summer, simply: without you\'
wonderful write! (whatever way its read)
August 27th, 2020 03:46
Modern Love
Fay Slimm. said:
Smilin\' big here at your worthy depiction of Modern Love Nev.
- -Falling for masks brings nothing but a collection of failures as this pert poem infers - - methinks better to seek the face of togetherness that only the cut of honest exchange can design .................x
August 27th, 2020 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Smilin\' big here at your worthy depiction of Modern Love Nev.
- -Falling for masks brings nothing but a collection of failures as this pert poem infers - - methinks better to seek the face of togetherness that only the cut of honest exchange can design .................x
August 27th, 2020 02:39
Modern Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Neville, my first laugh of the day.
Andy
August 27th, 2020 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Neville, my first laugh of the day.
Andy
August 27th, 2020 02:23
Summer’s End
MendedFences27 said:
The end of summer, isolated and alone, with only darkening days to look forward to, can take the fun out of life. But, there\'s nothing like a good love song being created, to fill the time. Go for it.
You know what they say , \" when you play Country Music backwards/\"
You get your girl back, your dog back, your truck back, etc.\"
Keep smiling, it\'ll soon be Spring. - Phil A.
August 26th, 2020 16:01
MendedFences27 said:
The end of summer, isolated and alone, with only darkening days to look forward to, can take the fun out of life. But, there\'s nothing like a good love song being created, to fill the time. Go for it.
You know what they say , \" when you play Country Music backwards/\"
You get your girl back, your dog back, your truck back, etc.\"
Keep smiling, it\'ll soon be Spring. - Phil A.
August 26th, 2020 16:01
Summer’s End
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing Neville - Any SEASON is DREARY - Even SPRING! When you*re not with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN!
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela & Brian 🧡💙
August 26th, 2020 11:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing Neville - Any SEASON is DREARY - Even SPRING! When you*re not with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN!
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela & Brian 🧡💙
August 26th, 2020 11:23
Summer’s End
dusk arising said:
When your heart is closing down and feeling like turning in on itself, it\'s not a good time to see the world\'s plantlife closing down too. Roll on spring and recovery.
August 26th, 2020 03:37
dusk arising said:
When your heart is closing down and feeling like turning in on itself, it\'s not a good time to see the world\'s plantlife closing down too. Roll on spring and recovery.
August 26th, 2020 03:37
Summer’s End
Fay Slimm. said:
A moving read Nev. - -Tender pathos follows your goodbye-to-summer aloneness in words only love could compose....................x
August 26th, 2020 02:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A moving read Nev. - -Tender pathos follows your goodbye-to-summer aloneness in words only love could compose....................x
August 26th, 2020 02:03
Summer’s End
orchidee said:
A nice write Neville. Oops, not yet - me diary says Summer ends about Sept 22nd! I\'m gonna think of it that way anyway.
August 26th, 2020 01:46
orchidee said:
A nice write Neville. Oops, not yet - me diary says Summer ends about Sept 22nd! I\'m gonna think of it that way anyway.
August 26th, 2020 01:46
Summer’s End
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A definite full stop to summer meteor-logically yesterday Neville bu wonderfully captured emotionally here for very different reasons, we have all pined this moment
I keep the sunglasses on that way no-one sees the tears
Thanks for todays... stay safe
August 26th, 2020 01:17
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A definite full stop to summer meteor-logically yesterday Neville bu wonderfully captured emotionally here for very different reasons, we have all pined this moment
I keep the sunglasses on that way no-one sees the tears
Thanks for todays... stay safe
August 26th, 2020 01:17
Summer’s End
jarcher54 said:
Well you\'ve gone and done it... you made me feel emotions. Damn you.
August 26th, 2020 00:32
jarcher54 said:
Well you\'ve gone and done it... you made me feel emotions. Damn you.
August 26th, 2020 00:32
Sun Shy
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening NEVILLE - Love the Poem ! Seems like although SHE was Shy of the Sun - the Lady liked *A Wee Drappy !* In my experience when a man is *LOADED* He doesnt need to be handsome too ! He had had a *Wee Drop too* Alcohol which *Maketh GLAD the Heart of Man* & *Available the Heart of Woman* ! So - It only took a wave & a smile & a nod & a wink ~ BINGO ~ C*est la Vie ! Thanks for Sharing
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 15:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening NEVILLE - Love the Poem ! Seems like although SHE was Shy of the Sun - the Lady liked *A Wee Drappy !* In my experience when a man is *LOADED* He doesnt need to be handsome too ! He had had a *Wee Drop too* Alcohol which *Maketh GLAD the Heart of Man* & *Available the Heart of Woman* ! So - It only took a wave & a smile & a nod & a wink ~ BINGO ~ C*est la Vie ! Thanks for Sharing
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 15:11
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, what happened to my youth?
Andy
August 25th, 2020 15:09
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, what happened to my youth?
Andy
August 25th, 2020 15:09
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
MendedFences27 said:
The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a seat closer to the exit.
A few words that explain my life, thanks. - Phil A.
August 25th, 2020 10:06
MendedFences27 said:
The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a seat closer to the exit.
A few words that explain my life, thanks. - Phil A.
August 25th, 2020 10:06
Why Do I Love Thee
L. B. Mek said:
so glad I skulked about long enough in your catalogue to find this gem,
for me my friend you are at your best, when the playful side makes way for the raw truths you have to share: words full of reality\'s warmth, a hot blooded existence - inked timeless for all to appreciate,
brilliant!
August 25th, 2020 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
so glad I skulked about long enough in your catalogue to find this gem,
for me my friend you are at your best, when the playful side makes way for the raw truths you have to share: words full of reality\'s warmth, a hot blooded existence - inked timeless for all to appreciate,
brilliant!
August 25th, 2020 03:38
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Michael Edwards said:
Perfect little shorty - the sort of poem that says so little in so few words - but then I\'m a minimalist.
August 25th, 2020 03:31
Michael Edwards said:
Perfect little shorty - the sort of poem that says so little in so few words - but then I\'m a minimalist.
August 25th, 2020 03:31
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
dusk arising said:
OH BRILL! short and sweet... hits the spot BULLSEYE.
into my favs
August 25th, 2020 03:13
dusk arising said:
OH BRILL! short and sweet... hits the spot BULLSEYE.
into my favs
August 25th, 2020 03:13
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts grow not old though skin starts to wrinkle and hope keeps the love-spots alive -- that is my offer to these three solemn lines...............x
August 25th, 2020 03:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts grow not old though skin starts to wrinkle and hope keeps the love-spots alive -- that is my offer to these three solemn lines...............x
August 25th, 2020 03:09
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