Comments received on poems by Neville
Nowhere Left to Bleed
L. B. Mek said:
\'And tho’ the well is just
as deep,
the bottom and the sides
have long run dry
and the drop is still as
steep ..\'
so, so steep: indeed
\'lived-in-words\'
sprouting that consoling solace
of shed-dry crimson: pulsed wisdom
realised
through fruits of stoic acceptance..
subtle, oh so subtle my friend
life\'s veracity hidden in plain sight
within each of your choice syllables
for us to bite, that harvested sweetness
of commonality\'s: relatability of relief...
June 11th, 2021 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'And tho’ the well is just
as deep,
the bottom and the sides
have long run dry
and the drop is still as
steep ..\'
so, so steep: indeed
\'lived-in-words\'
sprouting that consoling solace
of shed-dry crimson: pulsed wisdom
realised
through fruits of stoic acceptance..
subtle, oh so subtle my friend
life\'s veracity hidden in plain sight
within each of your choice syllables
for us to bite, that harvested sweetness
of commonality\'s: relatability of relief...
June 11th, 2021 05:08
Nowhere Left to Bleed
dusk arising said:
Don\'t pull yer punches Neville. Tell it like it is.
In her crazy fucked up mind will she even notice her loss.
June 11th, 2021 02:53
dusk arising said:
Don\'t pull yer punches Neville. Tell it like it is.
In her crazy fucked up mind will she even notice her loss.
June 11th, 2021 02:53
Nowhere Left to Bleed
orchidee said:
I best not meet this gal! lol.
A fine write N.
June 11th, 2021 01:39
orchidee said:
I best not meet this gal! lol.
A fine write N.
June 11th, 2021 01:39
Nowhere Left to Bleed
orchidee said:
I best not meet this gal! lol.
A fine write N.
June 11th, 2021 01:39
orchidee said:
I best not meet this gal! lol.
A fine write N.
June 11th, 2021 01:39
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Saxon Crow said:
There\'s certainly some powerful meaning behind this one Nev. Very nicely written
June 11th, 2021 01:31
Saxon Crow said:
There\'s certainly some powerful meaning behind this one Nev. Very nicely written
June 11th, 2021 01:31
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Fay Slimm. said:
Whooa - A strongly put set of reasons to say a firm Goodbye to love gone sour - -- - - your turn of words with searing imagery would shake to the core some crazy She who thinks otherwise..........x
June 11th, 2021 01:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Whooa - A strongly put set of reasons to say a firm Goodbye to love gone sour - -- - - your turn of words with searing imagery would shake to the core some crazy She who thinks otherwise..........x
June 11th, 2021 01:29
Upon Reflection
SureshG said:
Very intense, deep on many levels, worthy of series
June 10th, 2021 13:31
SureshG said:
Very intense, deep on many levels, worthy of series
June 10th, 2021 13:31
Cactus Days
Jerry Reynolds said:
That is so funny, Neville.
I agree with Dave he thought you were hitt\'n on his Mum.
June 8th, 2021 13:40
Jerry Reynolds said:
That is so funny, Neville.
I agree with Dave he thought you were hitt\'n on his Mum.
June 8th, 2021 13:40
Cactus Days
orchidee said:
Cooee - you brought a cactus?
\'Smelling like a rose.....\' They have thorns and prickles too!
June 8th, 2021 02:05
orchidee said:
Cooee - you brought a cactus?
\'Smelling like a rose.....\' They have thorns and prickles too!
June 8th, 2021 02:05
Cactus Days
Goldfinch60 said:
The F word seems to be part of the natural language now, there are so many other words in the wonderful English language that can be used to tell you to eradicate yourself to another position in your venerable society.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
The F word seems to be part of the natural language now, there are so many other words in the wonderful English language that can be used to tell you to eradicate yourself to another position in your venerable society.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 00:20
Cactus Days
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - With the first line\'s sweetest compliment I smiled at her prickly response through mis-interpretation of that one single word - - - - - clever linguistics again Nev.........x
June 7th, 2021 15:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - With the first line\'s sweetest compliment I smiled at her prickly response through mis-interpretation of that one single word - - - - - clever linguistics again Nev.........x
June 7th, 2021 15:55
Cactus Days
Michael Edwards said:
Just fick the tucking box - my grandaughter is working with special needs children and the language they use is mind blowing - my grandaughter has a way of telling us without any embarassment and a twinkle in her eye.
June 7th, 2021 15:29
Michael Edwards said:
Just fick the tucking box - my grandaughter is working with special needs children and the language they use is mind blowing - my grandaughter has a way of telling us without any embarassment and a twinkle in her eye.
June 7th, 2021 15:29
Cactus Days
SureshG said:
They say that to me even when they know me. Me think f****** should now be considered a polite ‘no’, with the amount it is used in everyday life.
June 7th, 2021 14:44
SureshG said:
They say that to me even when they know me. Me think f****** should now be considered a polite ‘no’, with the amount it is used in everyday life.
June 7th, 2021 14:44
Cactus Days
dusk arising said:
Suck who\'s lance was that?
A teenage called me a fat c.nt a while ago. I replied with due aplomb, \"young man my stomach may be big but it would rattle in your mouth\". He didn\'t appear to have sufficient command of basic English to understand my retort.
So many ladies are perfumed it appears to be more attractive. However, once the attraction has worked, they seem unduly perplexed by the attention they receive. True colours are revealed when the beauty tarnishes itself with language of the gutter.
So cunningly revealed in you short display here.
June 7th, 2021 12:21
dusk arising said:
Suck who\'s lance was that?
A teenage called me a fat c.nt a while ago. I replied with due aplomb, \"young man my stomach may be big but it would rattle in your mouth\". He didn\'t appear to have sufficient command of basic English to understand my retort.
So many ladies are perfumed it appears to be more attractive. However, once the attraction has worked, they seem unduly perplexed by the attention they receive. True colours are revealed when the beauty tarnishes itself with language of the gutter.
So cunningly revealed in you short display here.
June 7th, 2021 12:21
Cactus Days
L. B. Mek said:
because my dear poet
if we base our moral compass
on the base degenerate majority of society
then we might as well forget
our blood-spilled notion of humanity...!
see, and that\'s exactly what \'they\' want
for everyone to be despairingly reduced
into working
from \'their\' nihilistically meaningless dogma
of worthlessness
where, consequence is devoid of choice
and common decency is deemed a sham
just so they can feel comfortable continuing to exist
resorting to their most basic version of idiocy..
those few left, who have the capacity to be mindful
of the impact our words may have
on impressionable mind\'s
should try and do what is possible, not because
we Have-to, but because we make the Choice-to..
the choice to be more than
all the abundance of wilful ignorance
that surrounds us daily and threatens to drown-out
our capacity to think for ourselves..
the choice, to not have our values and fortitude
not be dictated-to
by those, who choose \'their\' self-serving - loathing
to posses: their warped-derelict sense of worth...
(also, succulent plants
are drought resistant plants....?!
in the words
of the great Quagmire: giggity! 😁)
yeah, I know I\'m a fool
I own it: relatively - and when tipsy
proudly! lol
June 7th, 2021 07:55
L. B. Mek said:
because my dear poet
if we base our moral compass
on the base degenerate majority of society
then we might as well forget
our blood-spilled notion of humanity...!
see, and that\'s exactly what \'they\' want
for everyone to be despairingly reduced
into working
from \'their\' nihilistically meaningless dogma
of worthlessness
where, consequence is devoid of choice
and common decency is deemed a sham
just so they can feel comfortable continuing to exist
resorting to their most basic version of idiocy..
those few left, who have the capacity to be mindful
of the impact our words may have
on impressionable mind\'s
should try and do what is possible, not because
we Have-to, but because we make the Choice-to..
the choice to be more than
all the abundance of wilful ignorance
that surrounds us daily and threatens to drown-out
our capacity to think for ourselves..
the choice, to not have our values and fortitude
not be dictated-to
by those, who choose \'their\' self-serving - loathing
to posses: their warped-derelict sense of worth...
(also, succulent plants
are drought resistant plants....?!
in the words
of the great Quagmire: giggity! 😁)
yeah, I know I\'m a fool
I own it: relatively - and when tipsy
proudly! lol
June 7th, 2021 07:55
Cactus Days
orchidee said:
And - well, I helped a shiny stag beetle go on its way. It may have got slightly crushed. I put it up the right way. It did not cuss me!
June 7th, 2021 06:10
orchidee said:
And - well, I helped a shiny stag beetle go on its way. It may have got slightly crushed. I put it up the right way. It did not cuss me!
June 7th, 2021 06:10
Cactus Days
orchidee said:
It\'s Fido on here, me imaginary dog! he can be a pest. He even barks at me, if I forget to mark a poem 18+, and it should be so. And I\'m his owner.
What\'s that Fido? Ohh f****. And furthermore: *&^^$£!@.
Don\'t you dare translate that, Fido! heehee.
June 7th, 2021 06:09
orchidee said:
It\'s Fido on here, me imaginary dog! he can be a pest. He even barks at me, if I forget to mark a poem 18+, and it should be so. And I\'m his owner.
What\'s that Fido? Ohh f****. And furthermore: *&^^$£!@.
Don\'t you dare translate that, Fido! heehee.
June 7th, 2021 06:09
Cactus Days
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems dead simple to me,….Neville…..
Main column: ‘He’ made straightforward offer - rejected.
Comments column: Kiddo felt you were trying to crack on to Mum and woz determined that wouldn’t happen…..Oh dear, won’t fit onto postcard….
June 7th, 2021 04:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems dead simple to me,….Neville…..
Main column: ‘He’ made straightforward offer - rejected.
Comments column: Kiddo felt you were trying to crack on to Mum and woz determined that wouldn’t happen…..Oh dear, won’t fit onto postcard….
June 7th, 2021 04:51
The Edge of Golden
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, nowadays
for a select majority, their passion is reserved
for those political or social activism
victimhood triggers..
and so
I suspect, they\'ll read these words
that you masterfully and succinctly
distilled into poetic brevity
then see your age restriction, categorisation
and reduce: this \'lived-in-truth\'
worded with a poet\'s gift for relatability
as a depiction of risqué playfulness;
and not
pointedly, more meaningfully
as an inked recollection
of experienced true love being actualised
into a physical expression
of sensuality, sincerity and loyalty;
where innately heightened
tantalised, fingertip nerves of spirituality
play those piano keys on flesh
to produce, a melody
of sensation\'s electrifying goosebumps;
a feat, only achieved
when the act of sex, has more meaning
than merely
sating biologically engraved mating cravings
and the excreting of stimulated liquids;
where literally: magically
at that time and in that moment
two people - become one, willingly and wholeheartedly
and impassioned, oh - so, much more satisfyingly;
a wondrously cathartic, artform
of physical and spiritual synchronicity, that few
get to experience this days
where blue pills and morning-after pills
mean, this gifted superpower
to experience
\'edge of golden\': nirvana on earth
as blissful affirmation
to all things, unique about our existence
is wasted, pitifully
as just another aspect of humanity
we take for granted, far - too, easily...
June 7th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, nowadays
for a select majority, their passion is reserved
for those political or social activism
victimhood triggers..
and so
I suspect, they\'ll read these words
that you masterfully and succinctly
distilled into poetic brevity
then see your age restriction, categorisation
and reduce: this \'lived-in-truth\'
worded with a poet\'s gift for relatability
as a depiction of risqué playfulness;
and not
pointedly, more meaningfully
as an inked recollection
of experienced true love being actualised
into a physical expression
of sensuality, sincerity and loyalty;
where innately heightened
tantalised, fingertip nerves of spirituality
play those piano keys on flesh
to produce, a melody
of sensation\'s electrifying goosebumps;
a feat, only achieved
when the act of sex, has more meaning
than merely
sating biologically engraved mating cravings
and the excreting of stimulated liquids;
where literally: magically
at that time and in that moment
two people - become one, willingly and wholeheartedly
and impassioned, oh - so, much more satisfyingly;
a wondrously cathartic, artform
of physical and spiritual synchronicity, that few
get to experience this days
where blue pills and morning-after pills
mean, this gifted superpower
to experience
\'edge of golden\': nirvana on earth
as blissful affirmation
to all things, unique about our existence
is wasted, pitifully
as just another aspect of humanity
we take for granted, far - too, easily...
June 7th, 2021 04:40
Cactus Days
Saxon Crow said:
Yoy should have said fucknoff you little c***. That would be a different poem haha
June 7th, 2021 04:01
Saxon Crow said:
Yoy should have said fucknoff you little c***. That would be a different poem haha
June 7th, 2021 04:01
As Yet Unforgiven
L. B. Mek said:
(sorry my friend, I just read your insightful shorty
and these words below exploded from somewhere
deep inside me, I didn\'t know existed
I can\'t thank you enough)..
its those repeated mistakes, we make
that perpetuate, our cycle of bad luck
to add to that hipping pile
of regretted: bad choices
that we can never forgive, and thus
we seldom acknowledge
yet perversely
hardly ever allow ourselves
to forget and shed, instead
carrying them
from one splintered reflection of self
to another, distorted mirrored impression
lost, endlessly dwelling
within that self loathing cocoon, blind
to all those fleeting possibilities
for healing and growth
we allow, to pass-us-by: frequently - wastefully..
June 7th, 2021 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
(sorry my friend, I just read your insightful shorty
and these words below exploded from somewhere
deep inside me, I didn\'t know existed
I can\'t thank you enough)..
its those repeated mistakes, we make
that perpetuate, our cycle of bad luck
to add to that hipping pile
of regretted: bad choices
that we can never forgive, and thus
we seldom acknowledge
yet perversely
hardly ever allow ourselves
to forget and shed, instead
carrying them
from one splintered reflection of self
to another, distorted mirrored impression
lost, endlessly dwelling
within that self loathing cocoon, blind
to all those fleeting possibilities
for healing and growth
we allow, to pass-us-by: frequently - wastefully..
June 7th, 2021 04:00
The Edge of Golden
Goldfinch60 said:
If you race too quickly you may well be too tired at the end of the race to give pleasure Neville. \"Slowly, slowly, catchee monkee\"
Andy
June 7th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
If you race too quickly you may well be too tired at the end of the race to give pleasure Neville. \"Slowly, slowly, catchee monkee\"
Andy
June 7th, 2021 00:12
The Edge of Golden
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sun\'s out here, Neville but this made it a bit brighter.
June 6th, 2021 14:02
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sun\'s out here, Neville but this made it a bit brighter.
June 6th, 2021 14:02
The Edge of Golden
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you for bringing back to memory what has been long gone for me.
June 6th, 2021 13:09
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you for bringing back to memory what has been long gone for me.
June 6th, 2021 13:09
The Edge of Golden
orchidee said:
She seems a bit feisty this lass. Should I give her a miss? lol.
June 6th, 2021 09:52
orchidee said:
She seems a bit feisty this lass. Should I give her a miss? lol.
June 6th, 2021 09:52
The Edge of Golden
Fay Slimm. said:
Another few lines of spice Nev. to brighten a sunless Sunday - -smiling big now so thanks in bunches . The ways raced to pleasures of love are truly gilded with touch.
June 6th, 2021 07:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Another few lines of spice Nev. to brighten a sunless Sunday - -smiling big now so thanks in bunches . The ways raced to pleasures of love are truly gilded with touch.
June 6th, 2021 07:41
As Yet Unforgiven
Goldfinch60 said:
True Neville, we must always move on in our lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2021 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
True Neville, we must always move on in our lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2021 00:14
As Yet Unforgiven
Michael Edwards said:
Love this little \'un - a mirror reversed.
June 5th, 2021 16:01
Michael Edwards said:
Love this little \'un - a mirror reversed.
June 5th, 2021 16:01
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