Comments received on poems by Neville
If Truth was a Colour
Goldfinch60 said:
I look up into the sky and see the blue of truth all around me.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
I look up into the sky and see the blue of truth all around me.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:11
If Truth was a Colour
SureshG said:
Truth is colorless, you see right through it.
Some say I’ve never told a truth in my life, and so your poetic term will do, truth be told
June 2nd, 2021 23:46
SureshG said:
Truth is colorless, you see right through it.
Some say I’ve never told a truth in my life, and so your poetic term will do, truth be told
June 2nd, 2021 23:46
If Truth was a Colour
MendedFences27 said:
There is an artist\'s palette for all of the truths to be told. One of every shade and hue. You have chosen \"blue\" and as though something sad or disheartening, having to do with the ocean or sky. has happened. Traveling, maybe to a sad affair.
One cannot speak of sadness in any color but \"blue\", and could not speak of happiness in that same tone.
There are simply too many truths and too many colors for the artist to speak or paint a \"Truth\" that pleases everyone.
If you ended your poem, would it be that \"blue is for ocean, and sky, and sadness.\"?
Wow! It\'s hard to believe that so few words in your poem can stir so much emotion. It must be that a central nerve has been awakened. Every comment will now expound on their chose of color for their emotions. You have stirred the hornets nest.- Phil A.
June 2nd, 2021 18:10
MendedFences27 said:
There is an artist\'s palette for all of the truths to be told. One of every shade and hue. You have chosen \"blue\" and as though something sad or disheartening, having to do with the ocean or sky. has happened. Traveling, maybe to a sad affair.
One cannot speak of sadness in any color but \"blue\", and could not speak of happiness in that same tone.
There are simply too many truths and too many colors for the artist to speak or paint a \"Truth\" that pleases everyone.
If you ended your poem, would it be that \"blue is for ocean, and sky, and sadness.\"?
Wow! It\'s hard to believe that so few words in your poem can stir so much emotion. It must be that a central nerve has been awakened. Every comment will now expound on their chose of color for their emotions. You have stirred the hornets nest.- Phil A.
June 2nd, 2021 18:10
If Truth was a Colour
myself and me said:
Sorry, I am color blind. All truth to me is grey, maybe. Like the thoughts behind it.
June 2nd, 2021 16:29
myself and me said:
Sorry, I am color blind. All truth to me is grey, maybe. Like the thoughts behind it.
June 2nd, 2021 16:29
If Truth was a Colour
Saxon Crow said:
Love it. Although not all truth is blue sometimes honesty is a nice shiny yellow
June 2nd, 2021 12:50
Saxon Crow said:
Love it. Although not all truth is blue sometimes honesty is a nice shiny yellow
June 2nd, 2021 12:50
If Truth was a Colour
Doggerel Dave said:
I Confess blue to be my favorite colour - at least during the first half of my life.
Now - not so sure.
But your poem neatly has Early Dave well and truly in it\'s pocket, Neville.
June 2nd, 2021 07:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I Confess blue to be my favorite colour - at least during the first half of my life.
Now - not so sure.
But your poem neatly has Early Dave well and truly in it\'s pocket, Neville.
June 2nd, 2021 07:05
If Truth was a Colour
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes I see it as silvery blue - - colour is deep in its meaning as are your thoughts in these lines Nev -- what a perfect hue to choose for truth........x
June 2nd, 2021 04:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes I see it as silvery blue - - colour is deep in its meaning as are your thoughts in these lines Nev -- what a perfect hue to choose for truth........x
June 2nd, 2021 04:38
If Truth was a Colour
dusk arising said:
I wish truth were black and white with no room for misinterpretation.....
However, blue seems to be, as you say, the inevitability of truth.
Short and punchy verse get my vote every time.
June 2nd, 2021 04:13
dusk arising said:
I wish truth were black and white with no room for misinterpretation.....
However, blue seems to be, as you say, the inevitability of truth.
Short and punchy verse get my vote every time.
June 2nd, 2021 04:13
If Truth was a Colour
Caring dove said:
I agree . Colours have so much meaning . A nice poem
June 2nd, 2021 03:39
Caring dove said:
I agree . Colours have so much meaning . A nice poem
June 2nd, 2021 03:39
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be forever there Neville.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be forever there Neville.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:29
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Doggerel Dave said:
To tell more would be to spoil it, I think, Neville. Best leave it right there, as you so carefully did.
June 1st, 2021 19:55
Doggerel Dave said:
To tell more would be to spoil it, I think, Neville. Best leave it right there, as you so carefully did.
June 1st, 2021 19:55
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
orchidee said:
I might have met some of these fine gals, with notes in my Little Red (?) Book.
But were they too much for me?! lol.
June 1st, 2021 09:25
orchidee said:
I might have met some of these fine gals, with notes in my Little Red (?) Book.
But were they too much for me?! lol.
June 1st, 2021 09:25
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
L. B. Mek said:
this was scarily reminiscent
of a crisp clear, cherished memory
I keep close
in those corridors of our heart\'s
where Time, can\'t blemish the sanctity
of a moment that exists
to reaffirm our tethers: to existence, itself...
utilising sumptuous imagery, my friend
a wonderful read
June 1st, 2021 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
this was scarily reminiscent
of a crisp clear, cherished memory
I keep close
in those corridors of our heart\'s
where Time, can\'t blemish the sanctity
of a moment that exists
to reaffirm our tethers: to existence, itself...
utilising sumptuous imagery, my friend
a wonderful read
June 1st, 2021 05:02
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Fay Slimm. said:
Thrilling as ever your best \"rainbow moment\" with I suspect a new family member.......... such a tender-packed bouquet of poetic wealth to keep and remember forever - - - or maybe the verse recalls another time of first smiles when a different amour struck afresh -- - - I love how the last line ends ........x
June 1st, 2021 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Thrilling as ever your best \"rainbow moment\" with I suspect a new family member.......... such a tender-packed bouquet of poetic wealth to keep and remember forever - - - or maybe the verse recalls another time of first smiles when a different amour struck afresh -- - - I love how the last line ends ........x
June 1st, 2021 03:14
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
dusk arising said:
Delightful. I\'m jealous.
How do you pack so much into short lines?
June 1st, 2021 02:41
dusk arising said:
Delightful. I\'m jealous.
How do you pack so much into short lines?
June 1st, 2021 02:41
Sheen
Trenz Pruca said:
I get an image of shimmering crystal as I read this. Good poem. Thank you.
May 31st, 2021 19:14
Trenz Pruca said:
I get an image of shimmering crystal as I read this. Good poem. Thank you.
May 31st, 2021 19:14
Sheen
SureshG said:
Sheen, a film thinner than the thinnest object, that your words colored so poetically
May 31st, 2021 11:36
SureshG said:
Sheen, a film thinner than the thinnest object, that your words colored so poetically
May 31st, 2021 11:36
Sheen
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a bit of sheen? And am I talking nonsense now?
And - does anyone notice the difference if I am?! lol.
I thought it was gonna be about polishing. You got any Mr Sheen?
May 31st, 2021 06:49
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a bit of sheen? And am I talking nonsense now?
And - does anyone notice the difference if I am?! lol.
I thought it was gonna be about polishing. You got any Mr Sheen?
May 31st, 2021 06:49
Riding a Curve
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was like
riding a curve ..
Set in stone
upon a simple
eyelash flutter\'..
see now, that\'s that Poetry: that can never be replicated
merely copied and imitated...
simply, and as ever subtly: Brilliant!
thanks for sharing my friend
May 31st, 2021 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was like
riding a curve ..
Set in stone
upon a simple
eyelash flutter\'..
see now, that\'s that Poetry: that can never be replicated
merely copied and imitated...
simply, and as ever subtly: Brilliant!
thanks for sharing my friend
May 31st, 2021 03:46
Sheen
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Yes -- Sheen - you use one of my favourite words in this gloriously readable verse on its meaning Nev -- an intriguingly gorgeous first read of my day and thanking you dearly......x
May 31st, 2021 03:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Yes -- Sheen - you use one of my favourite words in this gloriously readable verse on its meaning Nev -- an intriguingly gorgeous first read of my day and thanking you dearly......x
May 31st, 2021 03:10
Sheen
Caring dove said:
Lovely words . I liked reading this nicely expressed and flows nicely
May 31st, 2021 02:26
Caring dove said:
Lovely words . I liked reading this nicely expressed and flows nicely
May 31st, 2021 02:26
Riding a Curve
SureshG said:
One more in a series of sensuous recollections, so thoroughly enjoyed.
May 30th, 2021 16:00
SureshG said:
One more in a series of sensuous recollections, so thoroughly enjoyed.
May 30th, 2021 16:00
Riding a Curve
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with Fay, Neville. A very sensuous poem.
May 30th, 2021 13:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with Fay, Neville. A very sensuous poem.
May 30th, 2021 13:58
Riding a Curve
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone softened in time mon ami.....x
May 30th, 2021 12:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone softened in time mon ami.....x
May 30th, 2021 12:43
Riding a Curve
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes we\'re touched by an Angel\'s smile and it stays with us for a lifetime. Beautiful poem N. ; )
May 30th, 2021 09:16
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes we\'re touched by an Angel\'s smile and it stays with us for a lifetime. Beautiful poem N. ; )
May 30th, 2021 09:16
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