Comments received on poems by Neville
Geraldine
Fay Slimm. said:
This caring tribute to a much missed lady must have been hard to scribe my friend - but what a awesome message those dolphins brought you and right on cue dear Nev. -- am with you in the deep loss of a loved one and truly feel the emotion of your heartfelt and tender remembrance of Geraldine.
July 4th, 2021 04:28
Fay Slimm. said:
This caring tribute to a much missed lady must have been hard to scribe my friend - but what a awesome message those dolphins brought you and right on cue dear Nev. -- am with you in the deep loss of a loved one and truly feel the emotion of your heartfelt and tender remembrance of Geraldine.
July 4th, 2021 04:28
Geraldine
Accidental Poet said:
Meaningfully penned N. A strong pull on this heart. ; )
July 4th, 2021 03:47
Accidental Poet said:
Meaningfully penned N. A strong pull on this heart. ; )
July 4th, 2021 03:47
Three T’s
MendedFences27 said:
Of the three, \"time\" is the most consistent. Perpetually there, racing onward. Every second ticks away and we wonder, \"Have I wasted another?\"
and so we write as if to be useful.
A very concise yet haunting threat to all of us. I sit here asking myself \"What\'s next?\" - Phil A.
July 3rd, 2021 18:49
MendedFences27 said:
Of the three, \"time\" is the most consistent. Perpetually there, racing onward. Every second ticks away and we wonder, \"Have I wasted another?\"
and so we write as if to be useful.
A very concise yet haunting threat to all of us. I sit here asking myself \"What\'s next?\" - Phil A.
July 3rd, 2021 18:49
Three T’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I like this three T take on what gets man to face his limits Nev. - - strange but it made me think of the she\'s and what their three T\'s may reveal - hope you will smile as you read my three liner stating there are risks that women too cannot deny taking ................x
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Talk of taste for tease
when males start courting ladies
gives ease to no man\'s ardour.
July 3rd, 2021 11:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I like this three T take on what gets man to face his limits Nev. - - strange but it made me think of the she\'s and what their three T\'s may reveal - hope you will smile as you read my three liner stating there are risks that women too cannot deny taking ................x
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Talk of taste for tease
when males start courting ladies
gives ease to no man\'s ardour.
July 3rd, 2021 11:07
Three T’s
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m not about to wait Neville - I’ve seen.
What I’m about now is dancing, dodging and dilly dallying, but especially dodging…
July 3rd, 2021 08:25
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m not about to wait Neville - I’ve seen.
What I’m about now is dancing, dodging and dilly dallying, but especially dodging…
July 3rd, 2021 08:25
Three T’s
orchidee said:
Sounds like one of them gals I met.
Ahh, so I\'m meeting them now, am I?!
July 3rd, 2021 07:20
orchidee said:
Sounds like one of them gals I met.
Ahh, so I\'m meeting them now, am I?!
July 3rd, 2021 07:20
Three T’s
dusk arising said:
Been there... T-shirt etc.
Short and punchy, just as the best always are.
July 3rd, 2021 04:37
dusk arising said:
Been there... T-shirt etc.
Short and punchy, just as the best always are.
July 3rd, 2021 04:37
All the Best Words
myself and me said:
Waiting for more best words from you. May I borrow a few from you?
July 2nd, 2021 20:58
myself and me said:
Waiting for more best words from you. May I borrow a few from you?
July 2nd, 2021 20:58
All the Best Words
Caring dove said:
It’s selfish to take work as ones own when it isn’t . A good expressive poem )
July 2nd, 2021 10:39
Caring dove said:
It’s selfish to take work as ones own when it isn’t . A good expressive poem )
July 2nd, 2021 10:39
All the Best Words
Accidental Poet said:
When words are all one has to give, such a shame that there are those who would steal, misrepresent and take credit for of work that they don\'t own. Excellently penned N. ; )
July 2nd, 2021 08:20
Accidental Poet said:
When words are all one has to give, such a shame that there are those who would steal, misrepresent and take credit for of work that they don\'t own. Excellently penned N. ; )
July 2nd, 2021 08:20
All the Best Words
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a prophetic epitaph, for me?
or am I deluded in thinking, one will be written
for a subtle blinked existence, like me...
still, kinda scary how uncanny
our connection reveals itself to be, my friend
how thankful I am, of that good fortune
that introduced me, to your sublime Poetry!
July 2nd, 2021 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a prophetic epitaph, for me?
or am I deluded in thinking, one will be written
for a subtle blinked existence, like me...
still, kinda scary how uncanny
our connection reveals itself to be, my friend
how thankful I am, of that good fortune
that introduced me, to your sublime Poetry!
July 2nd, 2021 05:18
All the Best Words
Doggerel Dave said:
Plagiarism and aggressive misinterpretation rampant, Neville?
Time to abandon ship…..
July 2nd, 2021 04:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Plagiarism and aggressive misinterpretation rampant, Neville?
Time to abandon ship…..
July 2nd, 2021 04:46
All the Best Words
orchidee said:
Sounds like someone about to hear me sing! heehee. \'The end was in sight\'!
You met more gals lately? Should I meet them too?!
July 2nd, 2021 04:14
orchidee said:
Sounds like someone about to hear me sing! heehee. \'The end was in sight\'!
You met more gals lately? Should I meet them too?!
July 2nd, 2021 04:14
All the Best Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Words are invaluable compared to fighting but can bring their own troubles when misheard or interpreted - love your lively bisecting in this fine example of word-skill dear Nev..........x
July 2nd, 2021 03:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Words are invaluable compared to fighting but can bring their own troubles when misheard or interpreted - love your lively bisecting in this fine example of word-skill dear Nev..........x
July 2nd, 2021 03:36
Six Million Candles
Goldfinch60 said:
We must never forget, powerful words Neville.
Andy
July 2nd, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
We must never forget, powerful words Neville.
Andy
July 2nd, 2021 00:16
Six Million Candles
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
After all the suffering throughout our history, there’s still so much hatred going on. Will we ever learn?
You’ve poignantly penned a subject matter that boggles my mind; a necessary reminder of how inhuman humans can be for their own pervasive pleasures.
Laura🌻
July 1st, 2021 09:06
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
After all the suffering throughout our history, there’s still so much hatred going on. Will we ever learn?
You’ve poignantly penned a subject matter that boggles my mind; a necessary reminder of how inhuman humans can be for their own pervasive pleasures.
Laura🌻
July 1st, 2021 09:06
Six Million Candles
Accidental Poet said:
So sad that man has not and will ever learn the value of life. Well penned N.
July 1st, 2021 08:15
Accidental Poet said:
So sad that man has not and will ever learn the value of life. Well penned N.
July 1st, 2021 08:15
Six Million Candles
orchidee said:
A poignant write N.
You spot the \'Like\' button. We can\'t cheat on it like before (or on another site). We could keep \'liking\' our own poems then, and the total went up! heehee.
July 1st, 2021 07:37
orchidee said:
A poignant write N.
You spot the \'Like\' button. We can\'t cheat on it like before (or on another site). We could keep \'liking\' our own poems then, and the total went up! heehee.
July 1st, 2021 07:37
Six Million Candles
Saxon Crow said:
Very sombre my friend. But we haven\'t learnt.
July 1st, 2021 05:47
Saxon Crow said:
Very sombre my friend. But we haven\'t learnt.
July 1st, 2021 05:47
Six Million Candles
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(made me stop, and contemplate
not only the six million
but the millions from before
and the inevitable Billions - to come
with a heavy lump, in my throat
I squeeze out, a next breath
and taste
a reminder of what a gift, it is
to be alive)
thank you, my friend
July 1st, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(made me stop, and contemplate
not only the six million
but the millions from before
and the inevitable Billions - to come
with a heavy lump, in my throat
I squeeze out, a next breath
and taste
a reminder of what a gift, it is
to be alive)
thank you, my friend
July 1st, 2021 05:24
Six Million Candles
Doggerel Dave said:
Once more, a great piece, Neville. Another topic I cannot deal with anymore (as if I ever could).
But I have no confidence that it could never happen again…..
July 1st, 2021 04:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Once more, a great piece, Neville. Another topic I cannot deal with anymore (as if I ever could).
But I have no confidence that it could never happen again…..
July 1st, 2021 04:36
Six Million Candles
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-wrenching the feelings that these lines evoke Nev - each individual giving up life for a cause that should have brought peace - may those candles burn on forever each inscribed this time with a much missed name.........x
July 1st, 2021 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-wrenching the feelings that these lines evoke Nev - each individual giving up life for a cause that should have brought peace - may those candles burn on forever each inscribed this time with a much missed name.........x
July 1st, 2021 04:01
Six Million Candles
dusk arising said:
Each and every one of those candles should burn into our soul, our conscience, so that never ever should any such chrime against humanity be contemplated ever again.
Do we ever learn peace and brotherhood of peace?
July 1st, 2021 02:50
dusk arising said:
Each and every one of those candles should burn into our soul, our conscience, so that never ever should any such chrime against humanity be contemplated ever again.
Do we ever learn peace and brotherhood of peace?
July 1st, 2021 02:50
Cold Shoulder
Goldfinch60 said:
That paranoia controls so many people who should know better Neville.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That paranoia controls so many people who should know better Neville.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:24
Cold Shoulder
SureshG said:
disagreements escalated to paranoia is now the norm of the day, that you have given words so potently.
June 30th, 2021 14:21
SureshG said:
disagreements escalated to paranoia is now the norm of the day, that you have given words so potently.
June 30th, 2021 14:21
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