Comments received on poems by Neville
Listen Through the Breeze
Caring dove said:
“ turquoise triangles “ .. I really like this poem .. I like your choice of words ... you even mention fairies !
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September 6th, 2021 02:24
Caring dove said:
“ turquoise triangles “ .. I really like this poem .. I like your choice of words ... you even mention fairies !
)
September 6th, 2021 02:24
Listen Through the Breeze
Thekkinkkattil said:
With things gone terribly wrong you have been able to make it a pleasant poem . Kudos to you
September 6th, 2021 01:00
Thekkinkkattil said:
With things gone terribly wrong you have been able to make it a pleasant poem . Kudos to you
September 6th, 2021 01:00
Listen Through the Breeze
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times passed can be so wonderful but also so sad Neville.
Andy
September 6th, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times passed can be so wonderful but also so sad Neville.
Andy
September 6th, 2021 00:20
Listen Through the Breeze
Doggerel Dave said:
Did you get it together again or not, Nev?
Great flow with some depth - I\'m not quite sure just how it was resolved with all that baggage.....
September 5th, 2021 05:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Did you get it together again or not, Nev?
Great flow with some depth - I\'m not quite sure just how it was resolved with all that baggage.....
September 5th, 2021 05:30
Listen Through the Breeze
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening hard after reading this bit of familiar intrigue and thinking I can hear - maybe - - that romantic mandolin - I love this legacy of a remembered yesterday Nev - - now left for readers to unfold their own ending.......... x
September 5th, 2021 02:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening hard after reading this bit of familiar intrigue and thinking I can hear - maybe - - that romantic mandolin - I love this legacy of a remembered yesterday Nev - - now left for readers to unfold their own ending.......... x
September 5th, 2021 02:52
This is Not a Hake
Doggerel Dave said:
Could be shark - ah no - they\'re protected (just) now.....
September 4th, 2021 17:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Could be shark - ah no - they\'re protected (just) now.....
September 4th, 2021 17:19
This is Not a Hake
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Should I meet her? Oh, it\'s not on the theme of \'her\' this time! lol.
September 4th, 2021 06:25
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Should I meet her? Oh, it\'s not on the theme of \'her\' this time! lol.
September 4th, 2021 06:25
This is Not a Hake
Fay Slimm. said:
And tis highly prized so I understand - never tasted European Hake myself but hey have your tasted Cornish salmon then ? - - - gorgeous and tis in the same class.......x
September 4th, 2021 05:42
Fay Slimm. said:
And tis highly prized so I understand - never tasted European Hake myself but hey have your tasted Cornish salmon then ? - - - gorgeous and tis in the same class.......x
September 4th, 2021 05:42
I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
dusk arising said:
Blimey, If they aint got saxes in heaven I\'ve got 5 of the damned things u can borrow mate.
Which reminds me, I havent had a good honk on any one of them lately.
Maybe, if they let me into heaven (hmmmm) i could try to become the virtuoso i always dreamed of.
September 3rd, 2021 10:37
dusk arising said:
Blimey, If they aint got saxes in heaven I\'ve got 5 of the damned things u can borrow mate.
Which reminds me, I havent had a good honk on any one of them lately.
Maybe, if they let me into heaven (hmmmm) i could try to become the virtuoso i always dreamed of.
September 3rd, 2021 10:37
I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
L. B. Mek said:
(\'Kebero\' drums, to herald our fluster of last blinks
trumpets and flutes, as our swansong of last breadth
and saxophones: to play midnight Blues
as we traverse, that matter of nothingness existence
in that universe of endlessness...)
a wonderfully melancholic write, my friend
(got me in the mood for some Coltrane\'s Sound
Equinox if you will, c-sharp of modal Jazz
enticing free, that inner serenity)
September 3rd, 2021 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
(\'Kebero\' drums, to herald our fluster of last blinks
trumpets and flutes, as our swansong of last breadth
and saxophones: to play midnight Blues
as we traverse, that matter of nothingness existence
in that universe of endlessness...)
a wonderfully melancholic write, my friend
(got me in the mood for some Coltrane\'s Sound
Equinox if you will, c-sharp of modal Jazz
enticing free, that inner serenity)
September 3rd, 2021 05:23
I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
Doggerel Dave said:
Big question,........Saxophones would definitely sooth the transition... always supposing.... DD.
September 3rd, 2021 04:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Big question,........Saxophones would definitely sooth the transition... always supposing.... DD.
September 3rd, 2021 04:31
I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
Goldfinch60 said:
Of course you will know, meet you there one day - but not for a long time yet.
Andy
September 3rd, 2021 03:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Of course you will know, meet you there one day - but not for a long time yet.
Andy
September 3rd, 2021 03:21
Songs From a Room
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words from a fine inspiring person Neville.
Andy
September 3rd, 2021 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words from a fine inspiring person Neville.
Andy
September 3rd, 2021 02:52
I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
Fay Slimm. said:
So do I re.the title my friend - - the sax has mystical seduction - am sure its sweet music will go on forever - - like love...........x
September 3rd, 2021 02:37
Fay Slimm. said:
So do I re.the title my friend - - the sax has mystical seduction - am sure its sweet music will go on forever - - like love...........x
September 3rd, 2021 02:37
Songs From a Room
Caring dove said:
I don’t know who Leanord is but this poem is lovely 🙂
September 3rd, 2021 02:03
Caring dove said:
I don’t know who Leanord is but this poem is lovely 🙂
September 3rd, 2021 02:03
I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I was only reading recently: \'Store up treasure in heaven, not on earth, where rust corrupts and moths devour\'. So you will only have lost earthly treasures.
You opened that wallet? Them moths flew out of it?!
September 3rd, 2021 01:57
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I was only reading recently: \'Store up treasure in heaven, not on earth, where rust corrupts and moths devour\'. So you will only have lost earthly treasures.
You opened that wallet? Them moths flew out of it?!
September 3rd, 2021 01:57
Songs From a Room
orchidee said:
Good write Neville - all about me?
Now how did you know my real name was Leonard?!
If it is, ya should say \'DON\'T sing for me Len! heehee.
Wish I would shut up sometimes. lol.
September 2nd, 2021 11:48
orchidee said:
Good write Neville - all about me?
Now how did you know my real name was Leonard?!
If it is, ya should say \'DON\'T sing for me Len! heehee.
Wish I would shut up sometimes. lol.
September 2nd, 2021 11:48
Songs From a Room
Fay Slimm. said:
men to all that Nev - -- LC \'s inspiration is really exceptional - -- I especially liked the final lines of your appealing stanzas
September 2nd, 2021 10:03
Fay Slimm. said:
men to all that Nev - -- LC \'s inspiration is really exceptional - -- I especially liked the final lines of your appealing stanzas
September 2nd, 2021 10:03
Songs From a Room
Nicholas Browning said:
Had to look up whom you were referring to, but I must say the poem was splendid. I really enjoyed the read. Thank you.
September 2nd, 2021 09:17
Nicholas Browning said:
Had to look up whom you were referring to, but I must say the poem was splendid. I really enjoyed the read. Thank you.
September 2nd, 2021 09:17
Called to War
L. B. Mek said:
my words are too feeble, to honour your write
with empty commentary, so if you\'ll permit me
I\'ll borrow, words of a true battle hardened Genius, survivor
of war\'s, all-consuming Horror:
\'Dim through the misty panes and thick green light,
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.
In all my dreams before my helpless sight
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.
If in some smothering dreams, you too could pace
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil\'s sick of sin,\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-21210 )
September 2nd, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
my words are too feeble, to honour your write
with empty commentary, so if you\'ll permit me
I\'ll borrow, words of a true battle hardened Genius, survivor
of war\'s, all-consuming Horror:
\'Dim through the misty panes and thick green light,
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.
In all my dreams before my helpless sight
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.
If in some smothering dreams, you too could pace
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil\'s sick of sin,\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-21210 )
September 2nd, 2021 04:59
Songs From a Room
L. B. Mek said:
\'show me the wonder you found hidden in poetry
Then teach me to live, to love and not hate …\'
Amen!
a wonderfully inspiring dedication, my friend
September 2nd, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'show me the wonder you found hidden in poetry
Then teach me to live, to love and not hate …\'
Amen!
a wonderfully inspiring dedication, my friend
September 2nd, 2021 04:52
Songs From a Room
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t need to add to your piece, do I Nev.... a beautifully crafted tribute to LC and ....don\'t forget his rich catalogue.....
September 2nd, 2021 04:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t need to add to your piece, do I Nev.... a beautifully crafted tribute to LC and ....don\'t forget his rich catalogue.....
September 2nd, 2021 04:42
Called to War
Fay Slimm. said:
Wars have ever made skies weep large tears - - these few lines of poetic power tell well some of the troubles about being drafted to \"someone else\'s war\" and results of objecting......... \"shame on them all\" for wars in the first place my friend.
September 2nd, 2021 01:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Wars have ever made skies weep large tears - - these few lines of poetic power tell well some of the troubles about being drafted to \"someone else\'s war\" and results of objecting......... \"shame on them all\" for wars in the first place my friend.
September 2nd, 2021 01:23
Called to War
Goldfinch60 said:
So many innocent men died because of the people in power.
Andy
September 2nd, 2021 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
So many innocent men died because of the people in power.
Andy
September 2nd, 2021 01:02
Called to War
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s always someone else\'s bloody war. In Australia of right age at the time of Vietnam and conscription by ballot. I did not win a place --- It terrifies me even now to think that had I won, I could have lost my life or been damaged beyond repair as a result of participation in that act of absolute futility.
And as Redgum put\'s it - \'I was Only 19\'.
Thanks v. much for a very powerful write Nev.
September 1st, 2021 22:03
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s always someone else\'s bloody war. In Australia of right age at the time of Vietnam and conscription by ballot. I did not win a place --- It terrifies me even now to think that had I won, I could have lost my life or been damaged beyond repair as a result of participation in that act of absolute futility.
And as Redgum put\'s it - \'I was Only 19\'.
Thanks v. much for a very powerful write Nev.
September 1st, 2021 22:03
To Be Continued Maybe
myself and me said:
Such a mystery lady full of stories, a fascinating start. Continue please. Why she carried her passport while baking bread?
September 1st, 2021 18:00
myself and me said:
Such a mystery lady full of stories, a fascinating start. Continue please. Why she carried her passport while baking bread?
September 1st, 2021 18:00
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