Comments received on poems by Neville
Crimson Ribbon
orchidee said:
I gotta meet these gals. I\'m sure it\'s not the same gal each time. I dunno what I\'m missing! Back in 6 months, when I\'ve met them all. lol.
August 19th, 2020 11:31
orchidee said:
I gotta meet these gals. I\'m sure it\'s not the same gal each time. I dunno what I\'m missing! Back in 6 months, when I\'ve met them all. lol.
August 19th, 2020 11:31
Crimson Ribbon
Michael Edwards said:
You never fail to succeed - you have a style of your own and your choice of subject matter is inspired.
August 19th, 2020 11:24
Michael Edwards said:
You never fail to succeed - you have a style of your own and your choice of subject matter is inspired.
August 19th, 2020 11:24
Crimson Ribbon
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good afternoon Neville - Thnaks for a verry challenging comment in suppoert of Broken Women ! In my PHYSIO Clinic I get Clients from ORTHPEDIC whose limbs have been literally broken by violent & abusive MEN ! Often they are *Scared of & scarred by MEN* and prefer a Female Physio with lots of TLC. They need a lot of LOVE to help them HEAL Physically & Mentally. Because I am Catholic I wear a Cross and we have a Nun in the Hospital Chaplaincy - who will pray with them !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 19th, 2020 08:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good afternoon Neville - Thnaks for a verry challenging comment in suppoert of Broken Women ! In my PHYSIO Clinic I get Clients from ORTHPEDIC whose limbs have been literally broken by violent & abusive MEN ! Often they are *Scared of & scarred by MEN* and prefer a Female Physio with lots of TLC. They need a lot of LOVE to help them HEAL Physically & Mentally. Because I am Catholic I wear a Cross and we have a Nun in the Hospital Chaplaincy - who will pray with them !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 19th, 2020 08:44
Crimson Ribbon
Fay Slimm. said:
The fate of some females is frayed just like your tender verse says like ribbon and oft-times from birth they have abuse to crimson the colour of sadness - a truly moving write on a growing section of modern community - thanks for the caring reminder Nev.
August 19th, 2020 04:35
Fay Slimm. said:
The fate of some females is frayed just like your tender verse says like ribbon and oft-times from birth they have abuse to crimson the colour of sadness - a truly moving write on a growing section of modern community - thanks for the caring reminder Nev.
August 19th, 2020 04:35
Crimson Ribbon
Neville said:
..Thanks Andy ... much appreciated sir .. I had one of them heads on today ..
.. Neville
August 19th, 2020 04:19
Neville said:
..Thanks Andy ... much appreciated sir .. I had one of them heads on today ..
.. Neville
August 19th, 2020 04:19
A Mermaids Tale
MendedFences27 said:
A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight ambitions, and disappearing with the return of reality.
Brief and colorful descriptions, just enough to wet the readers appetite,
a bit of sadness at the end \"a sigh on the wind.\" and acceptance of the impossible, \" I just knew I could fly.\" altogether a great tale superbly rendered. Thanks for a brief moment of fantasy. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2020 13:56
MendedFences27 said:
A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight ambitions, and disappearing with the return of reality.
Brief and colorful descriptions, just enough to wet the readers appetite,
a bit of sadness at the end \"a sigh on the wind.\" and acceptance of the impossible, \" I just knew I could fly.\" altogether a great tale superbly rendered. Thanks for a brief moment of fantasy. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2020 13:56
A Mermaids Tale
dusk arising said:
We all fly in our dreams and see the jewelry of our minds imagination - here the light reflects off the shimmering of mermaid incantation and then.... as if waking.... we are momentarily the bird but..... oh, here is reality again.
An absorbing, enchanting read which took me places which \\i enjoyed very much.... going to re-read now.
August 18th, 2020 12:23
dusk arising said:
We all fly in our dreams and see the jewelry of our minds imagination - here the light reflects off the shimmering of mermaid incantation and then.... as if waking.... we are momentarily the bird but..... oh, here is reality again.
An absorbing, enchanting read which took me places which \\i enjoyed very much.... going to re-read now.
August 18th, 2020 12:23
A Mermaids Tale
Fay Slimm. said:
The essence of mermaid tales are so well enfolded in this colourful read Nev. - - just imagine the magic of flying above the sightings of these legendary sea-maids - - great read.
August 18th, 2020 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The essence of mermaid tales are so well enfolded in this colourful read Nev. - - just imagine the magic of flying above the sightings of these legendary sea-maids - - great read.
August 18th, 2020 03:46
A Mermaids Tale
L. B. Mek said:
a fairy tale grounded in the reality of intricate details, wonderfully dreamy - immersive writing.
has that semblance of the child we carry within us, to our very end
August 18th, 2020 02:36
L. B. Mek said:
a fairy tale grounded in the reality of intricate details, wonderfully dreamy - immersive writing.
has that semblance of the child we carry within us, to our very end
August 18th, 2020 02:36
Wax Butterflies
orchidee said:
Note to self: If I got nothing sensible to say, don\'t say anything at all!
But then - I may not make any comments at all! lol.
How\'s that lass today?
August 18th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
Note to self: If I got nothing sensible to say, don\'t say anything at all!
But then - I may not make any comments at all! lol.
How\'s that lass today?
August 18th, 2020 01:55
Wax Butterflies
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show how special she was in life and still is in your memories, those memories will be forever with you.
Andy
August 18th, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show how special she was in life and still is in your memories, those memories will be forever with you.
Andy
August 18th, 2020 00:04
Wax Butterflies
MendedFences27 said:
Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that this was a short relationship, \"appeared to me then to be drowning,\" \"yes this is me and I\'m free,\" but one well remembered, \" I do still miss her.\"
Fond memories arising on occasion, along with a melancholy of \'maybe,\' \'what if?\' A sesual recall that ends on, \"they both disappeared and were gone.\" I especially liked the casual tone of this poem. It brings the images into focus as a casual occurrence, but now remains with a powerful draw. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2020 16:45
MendedFences27 said:
Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that this was a short relationship, \"appeared to me then to be drowning,\" \"yes this is me and I\'m free,\" but one well remembered, \" I do still miss her.\"
Fond memories arising on occasion, along with a melancholy of \'maybe,\' \'what if?\' A sesual recall that ends on, \"they both disappeared and were gone.\" I especially liked the casual tone of this poem. It brings the images into focus as a casual occurrence, but now remains with a powerful draw. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2020 16:45
Wax Butterflies
dusk arising said:
A beautiful story told as if through a mist of mystery itself, memories, desire, regret, acceptance, a pleasure passed but not lost. Recounted as only true memories are, a collection of detail and emotion.
Another masterpiece in your style.
August 17th, 2020 06:43
dusk arising said:
A beautiful story told as if through a mist of mystery itself, memories, desire, regret, acceptance, a pleasure passed but not lost. Recounted as only true memories are, a collection of detail and emotion.
Another masterpiece in your style.
August 17th, 2020 06:43
Wax Butterflies
L. B. Mek said:
how easy your words flow, tripping us from one stanza to the next, simple lines - morphing to deeply contemplative metaphorical imagery:
\'Much like that wax butterfly
she once took from the window
to protect
and keep out of the sun ..\'
liked the intrigue element as well
August 17th, 2020 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
how easy your words flow, tripping us from one stanza to the next, simple lines - morphing to deeply contemplative metaphorical imagery:
\'Much like that wax butterfly
she once took from the window
to protect
and keep out of the sun ..\'
liked the intrigue element as well
August 17th, 2020 03:45
Wax Butterflies
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Did she run off with me when she disappeared? Probably! lol.
August 17th, 2020 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Did she run off with me when she disappeared? Probably! lol.
August 17th, 2020 02:09
Wax Butterflies
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a read that takes a tale and embellishes its half-remembered meanings to leave readers again in romantic intrigue - who, when and where we have to imagine - what a gift your mind is to poetry Nev......................x
August 17th, 2020 01:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a read that takes a tale and embellishes its half-remembered meanings to leave readers again in romantic intrigue - who, when and where we have to imagine - what a gift your mind is to poetry Nev......................x
August 17th, 2020 01:59
Knocking On
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
A powerful good 👍 write.
Age is in the mind.
My father is 81 he thinks he\'s much younger than that.
Keep him safe and protected during lockdown has been a challenge.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 16th, 2020 13:48
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
A powerful good 👍 write.
Age is in the mind.
My father is 81 he thinks he\'s much younger than that.
Keep him safe and protected during lockdown has been a challenge.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 16th, 2020 13:48
Knocking On
MendedFences27 said:
No need for filters, we know how you feel. \"Rejection\" seems to be the call of the day. \"Old\" is a matter of taste, like in \"old\" wine, or sight like in how you see things, or sound as in what you listen to, or touch, like in \"That feels good!.\" So, keep your dignity and pride, muddle through, and perhaps another bit of fluff, will blow your way. You\'re always as young as you want to be. - Phil A.
August 16th, 2020 11:54
MendedFences27 said:
No need for filters, we know how you feel. \"Rejection\" seems to be the call of the day. \"Old\" is a matter of taste, like in \"old\" wine, or sight like in how you see things, or sound as in what you listen to, or touch, like in \"That feels good!.\" So, keep your dignity and pride, muddle through, and perhaps another bit of fluff, will blow your way. You\'re always as young as you want to be. - Phil A.
August 16th, 2020 11:54
Knocking On
Poetic Dan said:
I believe I will be here for as long as needed, every now and then I day good bye in my head! For in the blink of an eye, you\'ll be fucking dead!
No regrets, if do it all again. Maybe just learn my this less quicker!
Fantastic vibes my skipper, no matter what!
I\'m glad I (sort of) met ya!
See you on the next ride ;)
August 16th, 2020 07:23
Poetic Dan said:
I believe I will be here for as long as needed, every now and then I day good bye in my head! For in the blink of an eye, you\'ll be fucking dead!
No regrets, if do it all again. Maybe just learn my this less quicker!
Fantastic vibes my skipper, no matter what!
I\'m glad I (sort of) met ya!
See you on the next ride ;)
August 16th, 2020 07:23
Knocking On
orchidee said:
Ohhh, a F..... [*(&^%$] [(*&^%!!] [(*&^%] [&^%$£)(*!] good write there N.
Fido\'s barking like mad now - at me!
He said - don\'t translate this. lol.
Notice the square brackets separating each expletive!
August 16th, 2020 02:01
orchidee said:
Ohhh, a F..... [*(&^%$] [(*&^%!!] [(*&^%] [&^%$£)(*!] good write there N.
Fido\'s barking like mad now - at me!
He said - don\'t translate this. lol.
Notice the square brackets separating each expletive!
August 16th, 2020 02:01
Theory of Endurance
MendedFences27 said:
Life is but a series of changes. Nothing is permanent, including time.
To be used as a measure, time must remain constant, which it does not, in space. But that\'s neither here nor there and irrelevant to your poem.
In your poem it is the comparison that is paramount, one thing against another. No \"maybe\"s about it. and it left me to wonder what is being measured against what? I found the answer,I think, in the title, Theory of Endurance. How long will this relationship last? \"Time and Purpose\" become the governing things to be considered.. A thought provoker to say the least, and thoroughly enjoyable. - Phil A.
August 15th, 2020 12:19
MendedFences27 said:
Life is but a series of changes. Nothing is permanent, including time.
To be used as a measure, time must remain constant, which it does not, in space. But that\'s neither here nor there and irrelevant to your poem.
In your poem it is the comparison that is paramount, one thing against another. No \"maybe\"s about it. and it left me to wonder what is being measured against what? I found the answer,I think, in the title, Theory of Endurance. How long will this relationship last? \"Time and Purpose\" become the governing things to be considered.. A thought provoker to say the least, and thoroughly enjoyable. - Phil A.
August 15th, 2020 12:19
Theory of Endurance
Fay Slimm. said:
Time is form and form as this piece of wisdom states is temporary in nature - but the formless as found in love and peace is part of the permanent - -- as I believe............x
August 15th, 2020 06:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Time is form and form as this piece of wisdom states is temporary in nature - but the formless as found in love and peace is part of the permanent - -- as I believe............x
August 15th, 2020 06:56
Theory of Endurance
L. B. Mek said:
conversational style poetry is so under valued, it allows for so much more than a writer\'s skill or brevity to be exemplified, it opens the opportunity for all who read the work to make it entirely their own,
outstanding effort, instinctively compelling and yet - as ever with your work: sumptuously subtle
August 15th, 2020 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
conversational style poetry is so under valued, it allows for so much more than a writer\'s skill or brevity to be exemplified, it opens the opportunity for all who read the work to make it entirely their own,
outstanding effort, instinctively compelling and yet - as ever with your work: sumptuously subtle
August 15th, 2020 06:15
Theory of Endurance
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Time—an unmeasurable concept
Time—a progression of events of past, present, and future.
‘Tis wise to be mindful of such events.
A meaningful and purposeful writing for yours truly considering the personal events of this past year.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 15th, 2020 05:54
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Time—an unmeasurable concept
Time—a progression of events of past, present, and future.
‘Tis wise to be mindful of such events.
A meaningful and purposeful writing for yours truly considering the personal events of this past year.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 15th, 2020 05:54
Maybe Old but Not Daft
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea has the power to call us all, so much life to be remembered by the sea.
Andy
August 15th, 2020 00:03
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea has the power to call us all, so much life to be remembered by the sea.
Andy
August 15th, 2020 00:03
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