Comments received on poems by Neville



Tserevo Koria
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

May 21st, 2019 01:51

Tserevo Koria
Michael Edwards said:

A delight to read Neville - just looked at a video of a 4by4 drive in the area - it looks like a beautiful place.

May 21st, 2019 01:31

Tserevo Koria
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fond write Neville.

May 21st, 2019 01:07

Tserevo Koria
Fay Slimm. said:

Good to read such lovely warm memories of a favourite place and time your pen verses so well Neville - -- a fine first read of my day and thank you muchly.

May 21st, 2019 00:47

Upon Her Ears
Goldfinch60 said:

A fine gentle good bye with hopes of it being rekindled.

May 21st, 2019 00:33

Upon Her Ears
SerenWise said:

This is lovely :)

May 20th, 2019 13:40

Upon Her Ears
Suresh said:

AH! well never whispered.
Fine tease Nev

May 20th, 2019 10:39

Upon Her Ears
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ! Im too young to be hairsuite and ANGELA prefers me to be smooth ! Perhaps one day when Im 40+ (2025 ?). Once in a while along the way ~ I have returned to former LOVES but not permenantly !

Blessings & Peace
Yours A & B 🧡🧡

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May 20th, 2019 08:11

Upon Her Ears
Michael Edwards said:

Ah just lovely - except for that beard, fine write Neville

May 20th, 2019 03:46

Upon Her Ears
Poetic Dan said:

Suit you sir! Very nicely done and a reminder I can\'t feel my lips past my tash must give this bush a trim!

May 20th, 2019 03:09

Upon Her Ears
dusk arising said:

Your way of imparting these words speaks of so much more finesse and romance than the likes of Arnie with his \"I\'ll be back\".

A whimsical Orchi is only chasing the bear necessities of life. Hugs!


May 20th, 2019 03:06

Upon Her Ears
Fay Slimm. said:

Letting go gently could not be more aptly phrased in this tender view of a last time together - a moving read Nev.

May 20th, 2019 02:47

Upon Her Ears
Neville said:

if you grow a bear, it will either fall in love with you, or rip ya face off.. I suggest you grow a bard and then you can write a poem about it.......thanks, have a great day.... Neville

May 20th, 2019 02:34

Upon Her Ears
orchidee said:

Good write N. I\'m gonna grow a bears and meet some of these gals!

May 20th, 2019 02:29

Signor
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine write Neville which bought a smile to my face but the serious undertones had me thinking as well. It is such a shame that in this day and age there are still people struggling to live.

May 20th, 2019 00:28

The Weavers Knot
Suresh said:

I don\'t mind loosing my Vir---ity to her, but she remains aloof.
She has been a reason of many a wet dream, always teasing

Even in my dreams she weaves a web, that tangles my erotic threads
Just as your poem.


May 19th, 2019 13:58

Before Leaving
Fay Slimm. said:

A poignant hue to this read but a lesson in how to end an affair if ever I saw one - tender and loving up to the end.......... memories then always taste sweeter doncha think Nev..........so glad I caught this little gem.

May 19th, 2019 13:35

Signor
Suresh said:

I don\'t want to bring everybody down and be rotten, but:

Isn\'t it a pity that those who can afford it, bargain for pennies with those that need them - AHHHH human nature.

--- but the poem did bring a smile



May 19th, 2019 11:49

Signor
orchidee said:

I was around, of course! A fine write N.

May 19th, 2019 09:36

Beautifully Broken
SerenWise said:

Lovely simple write, but holds great meaning

May 19th, 2019 08:36

Signor
Fay Slimm. said:

Well said this telling message . Seems easy exchange for food on the table in places like Cuba yet when humans have no other choice than life on the poverty line such bargains are very hard driven- - serious wit comes to the fore Nev. methinks in all your uniquely informative writing............. Fay

May 19th, 2019 04:49

Signor
dusk arising said:

Ahhh Cuba eh? Heavenly Havannah.

Thanks for the big smile.

May 19th, 2019 03:51

Beautifully Broken
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a good poem, it can be imperfections in our loved ones that draw us closer to them.

May 19th, 2019 00:30

Beautifully Broken
Silkseduction said:

Beautifully broken, beautifully done...

-Lauren

May 18th, 2019 14:14

No Pillow Required
Fay Slimm. said:

Sensuous and very appealing that need for no pillows Nev. .............. writing desire so clearly often makes love a dual decision. Lucky lady I say.

May 18th, 2019 11:12

The Initiation
Suresh said:

All the butchers that robs her of their maidenhead, must pay with their own heads.
I feel very strongly about such issues, where one gender has the right over another just because of their bronze for they have no brains.

May 18th, 2019 10:53

Beautifully Broken
Michael Edwards said:

Poses a lot of questions - an intriguing write.

May 18th, 2019 10:37

Beautifully Broken
orchidee said:

Good write N. Should I meet her?!

May 18th, 2019 09:38

Beautifully Broken
dusk arising said:

LOL good fun.

May 18th, 2019 09:00

Beautifully Broken
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Oooh so many questions
was him another him
were you THAt flawed
We need more
GREAT write Neville

May 18th, 2019 06:58



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