Comments received on poems by Neville
Between Mountains
Fay Slimm. said:
You warm and romantic pen writing of \"might- have -beens\" - and so appealingly..... felt I was there beating those passes and cresting the clouds. A great read again Nev......... x
May 1st, 2019 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
You warm and romantic pen writing of \"might- have -beens\" - and so appealingly..... felt I was there beating those passes and cresting the clouds. A great read again Nev......... x
May 1st, 2019 04:02
Between Mountains
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville
well captured mans affinity with the world and how its changes impact on us in life and death
WELL DONE
May 1st, 2019 02:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville
well captured mans affinity with the world and how its changes impact on us in life and death
WELL DONE
May 1st, 2019 02:54
Colours Without Names
Goldfinch60 said:
Many look but only some see the colours that can brighten our lives.
April 30th, 2019 15:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Many look but only some see the colours that can brighten our lives.
April 30th, 2019 15:07
Colours Without Names
MendedFences27 said:
Just as there are sounds the human ear cannot hear, there are colors and other things the human eye cannot perceive. Change the frequency, change the color. Change the time, change the frequency. Welcome to the other-world.
I want to have a color named \"Sanguine.\" Any other ideas?
Very much a thought inducing write. Loved it.- Phil A.
April 30th, 2019 14:13
MendedFences27 said:
Just as there are sounds the human ear cannot hear, there are colors and other things the human eye cannot perceive. Change the frequency, change the color. Change the time, change the frequency. Welcome to the other-world.
I want to have a color named \"Sanguine.\" Any other ideas?
Very much a thought inducing write. Loved it.- Phil A.
April 30th, 2019 14:13
Colours Without Names
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea of colours without names - fine work Neville
April 30th, 2019 13:35
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea of colours without names - fine work Neville
April 30th, 2019 13:35
Colours Without Names
dusk arising said:
Like the colours of the places which frequent my dreams..... unable to grasp with a conscious mind.
April 30th, 2019 12:34
dusk arising said:
Like the colours of the places which frequent my dreams..... unable to grasp with a conscious mind.
April 30th, 2019 12:34
Colours Without Names
Suresh said:
Time-slip, I googled it.
A nice tease piece
April 30th, 2019 10:23
Suresh said:
Time-slip, I googled it.
A nice tease piece
April 30th, 2019 10:23
Colours Without Names
Fay Slimm. said:
New things learnt today by reading this news about nameless colours - am waiting now Nev. for their call to be noticed in my first time-slip.
April 30th, 2019 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
New things learnt today by reading this news about nameless colours - am waiting now Nev. for their call to be noticed in my first time-slip.
April 30th, 2019 03:13
Colours Without Names
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Exellent Neville
Great pictures thank you for showing them to us... I love those games
April 30th, 2019 02:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Exellent Neville
Great pictures thank you for showing them to us... I love those games
April 30th, 2019 02:50
Crumbs of Comfort
Goldfinch60 said:
Unfortunately this is still true today and if it weren\'t for the crumbs of comfort given by Mums to their children it could be a whole lot worse.
Good write Neville.
April 30th, 2019 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Unfortunately this is still true today and if it weren\'t for the crumbs of comfort given by Mums to their children it could be a whole lot worse.
Good write Neville.
April 30th, 2019 00:14
Crumbs of Comfort
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Touching Neville very touching
Well written
April 29th, 2019 17:14
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Touching Neville very touching
Well written
April 29th, 2019 17:14
Students
Fay Slimm. said:
The beauty of poetry is in its seduction whatever the subject and this read allures - -- missed it first time around but am sure of wanting to view it again - mirrored and saved to live the dream.
April 29th, 2019 17:13
Fay Slimm. said:
The beauty of poetry is in its seduction whatever the subject and this read allures - -- missed it first time around but am sure of wanting to view it again - mirrored and saved to live the dream.
April 29th, 2019 17:13
Crumbs of Comfort
MendedFences27 said:
Food for thought (no pun intended). We often forget the plight of others.
Growing up in a neighborhood in a poorer section of town, neighbors always seemed to know who was struggling, and a dinner invite would be proposed and generally accepted. There was no shame attached, and reciprocation was expected., just neighborly \"crumbs.\" A great and moving poem. A Mother\'s tender care during trying times. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 29th, 2019 11:30
MendedFences27 said:
Food for thought (no pun intended). We often forget the plight of others.
Growing up in a neighborhood in a poorer section of town, neighbors always seemed to know who was struggling, and a dinner invite would be proposed and generally accepted. There was no shame attached, and reciprocation was expected., just neighborly \"crumbs.\" A great and moving poem. A Mother\'s tender care during trying times. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 29th, 2019 11:30
Crumbs of Comfort
Suresh said:
More than half the world population still lives hand to mouth, if the harvest does come in, or the boat is still out or any of the human made disasters, the struggling go hungry.
You have captured their plight well with your words here.
April 29th, 2019 09:08
Suresh said:
More than half the world population still lives hand to mouth, if the harvest does come in, or the boat is still out or any of the human made disasters, the struggling go hungry.
You have captured their plight well with your words here.
April 29th, 2019 09:08
Crumbs of Comfort
dusk arising said:
ee-bah-gum lad. Thou reminds me of yon Hovis advert here. Always runnin oot a bread me mam was.
Ye shall have a fishy on a little dishy, when the boat comes in... dance to yer daddy \'wor little laddie.
You are definately in those veins today with this great evocative story. A real treat to read.
April 29th, 2019 06:44
dusk arising said:
ee-bah-gum lad. Thou reminds me of yon Hovis advert here. Always runnin oot a bread me mam was.
Ye shall have a fishy on a little dishy, when the boat comes in... dance to yer daddy \'wor little laddie.
You are definately in those veins today with this great evocative story. A real treat to read.
April 29th, 2019 06:44
Crumbs of Comfort
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I only got crumbs left. Fido ate his dog food, then raided me pantry!
Indeed - and some Bible words say that if we see anyone in need and CAN help, but don\'t do so, what use is that?!
April 29th, 2019 03:57
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I only got crumbs left. Fido ate his dog food, then raided me pantry!
Indeed - and some Bible words say that if we see anyone in need and CAN help, but don\'t do so, what use is that?!
April 29th, 2019 03:57
Crumbs of Comfort
Fay Slimm. said:
So often given to poverty\'s children are crumbs of parental comfort - your tale tells well the conditions of need still existing in many parts of our troubled globe Nev. .......... thanks for this poignant reminder.
April 29th, 2019 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
So often given to poverty\'s children are crumbs of parental comfort - your tale tells well the conditions of need still existing in many parts of our troubled globe Nev. .......... thanks for this poignant reminder.
April 29th, 2019 03:32
Empty Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Just look into that empty sky and a light will be seen, that light will be the first word of many to rain down into your heart.
April 29th, 2019 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Just look into that empty sky and a light will be seen, that light will be the first word of many to rain down into your heart.
April 29th, 2019 00:15
What Happened to the Painter
Suresh said:
A persons wealth is the treasure trove of memories they leave behind.
Your fondness to this person is penned very well.
P.S. I travel back in time, to seek missed treasures. I hope you don\'t mind
April 28th, 2019 19:12
Suresh said:
A persons wealth is the treasure trove of memories they leave behind.
Your fondness to this person is penned very well.
P.S. I travel back in time, to seek missed treasures. I hope you don\'t mind
April 28th, 2019 19:12
On Waking
Fay Slimm. said:
Another dunk into the scented draw of an early morning bare tease stripping to show her repartee. Grrrreat read this............... x
April 28th, 2019 16:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Another dunk into the scented draw of an early morning bare tease stripping to show her repartee. Grrrreat read this............... x
April 28th, 2019 16:23
Empty Sky
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes putting words to paper is a lot like chopping wood, much more difficult to do if you fear the axe. They are only words, they will not take an arm or leg. Sometimes, however, we cannot remember where we left the axe .
With a sky to choose from,, surely the words will rain down. - Phil A.
April 28th, 2019 13:42
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes putting words to paper is a lot like chopping wood, much more difficult to do if you fear the axe. They are only words, they will not take an arm or leg. Sometimes, however, we cannot remember where we left the axe .
With a sky to choose from,, surely the words will rain down. - Phil A.
April 28th, 2019 13:42
Empty Sky
dusk arising said:
Empty skies,
forever blue
deserve filling
from a poet
as today
so well
you do
Truly a poets daydreaming mind relaxing on a page/screen before us today...... thank you for the spaces in the summer picture you gave today..... gave me a place to begin summer daydreams.
April 28th, 2019 11:03
dusk arising said:
Empty skies,
forever blue
deserve filling
from a poet
as today
so well
you do
Truly a poets daydreaming mind relaxing on a page/screen before us today...... thank you for the spaces in the summer picture you gave today..... gave me a place to begin summer daydreams.
April 28th, 2019 11:03
Empty Sky
Suresh said:
The words that flow freely, form the best poetry,
Your words flow most freely, and are always a treat to read
April 28th, 2019 09:43
Suresh said:
The words that flow freely, form the best poetry,
Your words flow most freely, and are always a treat to read
April 28th, 2019 09:43
Empty Sky
Poetic Dan said:
Some people like a dry & sweet wine, maturing wonderfully my friend.
There\'s wisdom in your pen!
April 28th, 2019 06:57
Poetic Dan said:
Some people like a dry & sweet wine, maturing wonderfully my friend.
There\'s wisdom in your pen!
April 28th, 2019 06:57
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