Comments received on poems by Neville



Babies Don’t Bounce
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I was dropped on my head as a baby
Never did me any HaRGBMKJNBVCSDHIGG
Sorry where was I?

Great write N

May 3rd, 2019 04:34

Babies Don’t Bounce
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

May 3rd, 2019 03:57

Babies Don’t Bounce
Neville said:

Unfortunately and far too often there are folk that try to test the theory out... bless ya Fay .... Neville

May 3rd, 2019 03:20

Babies Don’t Bounce
Fay Slimm. said:

Wow this write amazes me Nev. - Full of powerful imagery (as is my posting today) - - means what readers think - and I see a strong message on how not to treat offspring -- - or is it ?

May 3rd, 2019 03:17

In The Beginning
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine write of innocent afternoons of youth, it was all a learning curve and those experiences we have had cannot be taught.

May 3rd, 2019 00:40

Enlightenment
Suresh said:

Two people
Same event
Different perspective

One gave the other received

May 2nd, 2019 16:17

The Width of a Table
Suresh said:

When exposed to receiving affection
Heart throbs at the slightest acceptance

Another light hearted poem indeed



May 2nd, 2019 16:09

Victims of Indifference
Suresh said:

From my poem \"FANATICISM\"
Liberals want it tamed
But that only sends it underground
Emotions cannot be framed
And voices cannot be drowned


I am a staunch believer of Freedom of Speech, and as you stated, so far as it is not violating another.
The way hatred can be diluted is not by labeling it \'politically incorrect\', but by letting all express themselves, so that they can be intelligently approached. By shutting them down, it festers underneath and finally explode with devastating results.
I so enjoy these subjects

May 2nd, 2019 15:58

In The Beginning
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ! A salutary tale for us Men about the Art of Courtship ! In my experience ~ over the last 20 years ~ every Lady is unique in terms of her past experience and pace & level of LIBIDO ! One has to rely on ones own experience and judgement ! If one makes a difinitive move too soon or too abrubtly (V 3) we pay the price of *rejection* which is painful ! I wish I knew @ 15 what I now know @ 35 I would have been spared some embarassment. Angela is 31 and we have an exceallent understanding of each others feelings ~ AMEN !
Blessing & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡

May 2nd, 2019 14:04

In The Beginning
Suresh said:

I profess my ignorance of \"cathedral afternoon\". Couldn\'t find on google Please enlighten

May 2nd, 2019 11:17

In The Beginning
MendedFences27 said:

Funny how the difference between \"here\" and \"gone\" can change our totality of existence, our perception of happiness.
Loved this remorseful recollection, so melancholy. - Phil A.

May 2nd, 2019 08:14

In The Beginning
SerenWise said:

Nicely written, agreed that cathedral afternoons is a beautiful metaphor!

May 2nd, 2019 06:19

In The Beginning
Fay Slimm. said:

Looking back with regret brings no closer those innocent Cathedral afternoons - lost but never forgotten eh Nev ?.......... another great read.

May 2nd, 2019 04:51

In The Beginning
orchidee said:

A fine write N. I might have swooned if she had stayed!

May 2nd, 2019 03:10

In The Beginning
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Cathedral afternoons a heaven sent metaphor 1-0 Neville
There it is
BRAVO! Now that would have been ymy title
Hats off Neville

May 2nd, 2019 02:49

In The Beginning
Michael Edwards said:

Oh I hope not - lets think she was just a tad shy - she\'ll come back - sequel please.

May 2nd, 2019 02:45

Between Mountains
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Neville those places that we see in our lives are so meaningful and some are never forgotten.

May 2nd, 2019 00:11

Between Mountains
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks NEVILLE for a very descriptive Poem ! It revived many memories of our recent tour of SOUTH ISLAND ~ NZ.
V 1. The Glories of Mount Cook
V 2. Up close & personal @ night in our VW Camper !
V 3. The Alpine Forests in AUTUMN
V 4. Arthurs Pass where we said GOODBYE to the Southern Alps ~ NZ
BUT ~ never ever to each other ~ AMEN

Blessings & thanks for sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡


May 1st, 2019 16:43

Crumbs of Comfort
Poetic Dan said:

Captured well his place we dwell, said to say it have feel like....

May 1st, 2019 16:09

Between Mountains
Suresh said:

Beautiful vision of what was and could be.
Thnx Nev.

May 1st, 2019 11:03

Between Mountains
dusk arising said:

Wonderful atmospheric blend of mystery and romance.

May 1st, 2019 06:25

Between Mountains
orchidee said:

You dancing round that May Pole now?!

May 1st, 2019 04:04

Between Mountains
Fay Slimm. said:

You warm and romantic pen writing of \"might- have -beens\" - and so appealingly..... felt I was there beating those passes and cresting the clouds. A great read again Nev......... x

May 1st, 2019 04:02

Between Mountains
orchidee said:

Erm goodbye! Doh! Good write N.

May 1st, 2019 03:08

Between Mountains
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great write Neville
well captured mans affinity with the world and how its changes impact on us in life and death
WELL DONE

May 1st, 2019 02:54

Colours Without Names
Goldfinch60 said:

Many look but only some see the colours that can brighten our lives.

April 30th, 2019 15:07

Colours Without Names
MendedFences27 said:

Just as there are sounds the human ear cannot hear, there are colors and other things the human eye cannot perceive. Change the frequency, change the color. Change the time, change the frequency. Welcome to the other-world.
I want to have a color named \"Sanguine.\" Any other ideas?
Very much a thought inducing write. Loved it.- Phil A.

April 30th, 2019 14:13

Colours Without Names
Michael Edwards said:

Love the idea of colours without names - fine work Neville

April 30th, 2019 13:35

Colours Without Names
dusk arising said:

Like the colours of the places which frequent my dreams..... unable to grasp with a conscious mind.

April 30th, 2019 12:34

Colours Without Names
Suresh said:

Time-slip, I googled it.
A nice tease piece

April 30th, 2019 10:23



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