Comments received on poems by Neville
Captivating Games
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING NEVILLE : ANGELA here : Its 10:30 am (MON) in NZ first Clinic is 1 pm just catching up on MPS ! Love yout quintet of triplets each one a Captivating Love Match ! BRIAN and I are 11,500 miles apart so we often play Cyber Captivating Games !
1. Im the KITE @ the end of an 11,500 mile string !
2. Our LOGO is two doves kissing on the wing !
3. CYBER LOVE is like a Nameless colour
4. When BRIAN comesfor me (OCTOBER) we wont play Silly Games !
5. When we*re together again our shackles will be LOVE !
Loved your very elegant POEM
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 16:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING NEVILLE : ANGELA here : Its 10:30 am (MON) in NZ first Clinic is 1 pm just catching up on MPS ! Love yout quintet of triplets each one a Captivating Love Match ! BRIAN and I are 11,500 miles apart so we often play Cyber Captivating Games !
1. Im the KITE @ the end of an 11,500 mile string !
2. Our LOGO is two doves kissing on the wing !
3. CYBER LOVE is like a Nameless colour
4. When BRIAN comesfor me (OCTOBER) we wont play Silly Games !
5. When we*re together again our shackles will be LOVE !
Loved your very elegant POEM
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 16:47
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Suresh said:
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
June 30th, 2019 14:00
Suresh said:
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
June 30th, 2019 14:00
Captivating Games
Suresh said:
I visualize five spells separating two loves, and with each verse a spell dissipates.... And no, it\'s not too much to ask.
I am still figuring out the spells ....
June 30th, 2019 12:41
Suresh said:
I visualize five spells separating two loves, and with each verse a spell dissipates.... And no, it\'s not too much to ask.
I am still figuring out the spells ....
June 30th, 2019 12:41
Captivating Games
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed with what I am - a smug git lol
Niceione Neville
June 30th, 2019 09:06
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed with what I am - a smug git lol
Niceione Neville
June 30th, 2019 09:06
Captivating Games
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
June 30th, 2019 07:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
June 30th, 2019 07:25
Captivating Games
Fay Slimm. said:
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like this one my tender friend - - an alluring read and I want to say how much I enjoyed the way you you want to play games that captivate this reader - - - - another thoroughly engaging write. ..................... Fay
June 30th, 2019 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like this one my tender friend - - an alluring read and I want to say how much I enjoyed the way you you want to play games that captivate this reader - - - - another thoroughly engaging write. ..................... Fay
June 30th, 2019 03:38
I Found Myself Thinking of You
SerenWise said:
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
June 30th, 2019 02:14
SerenWise said:
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
June 30th, 2019 02:14
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Goldfinch60 said:
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
June 30th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
June 30th, 2019 00:20
I Found Myself Thinking of You
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
June 29th, 2019 11:20
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
June 29th, 2019 11:20
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
June 29th, 2019 05:03
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
June 29th, 2019 05:03
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Fay Slimm. said:
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
June 29th, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
June 29th, 2019 03:44
Poppy Seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
Going up passed the clouds can bring some wonderful memories of love and joy.
June 29th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Going up passed the clouds can bring some wonderful memories of love and joy.
June 29th, 2019 00:48
Poppy Seeds
Suresh said:
This darn gravity keep me grounded, or else I\'ll in those clouds and among those poppy seeds in a blink of an eye, no directions necessary
Very enjoyable
June 28th, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
This darn gravity keep me grounded, or else I\'ll in those clouds and among those poppy seeds in a blink of an eye, no directions necessary
Very enjoyable
June 28th, 2019 11:38
Poppy Seeds
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Neville, are you Peter?
Very interesting
June 28th, 2019 08:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Neville, are you Peter?
Very interesting
June 28th, 2019 08:26
Poppy Seeds
Poetic Dan said:
Stop going left! Message well received my friend. Great write
June 28th, 2019 02:43
Poetic Dan said:
Stop going left! Message well received my friend. Great write
June 28th, 2019 02:43
Poppy Seeds
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can happen when we walk amid poppy fields but no-one puts it better than thee...........
June 28th, 2019 02:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can happen when we walk amid poppy fields but no-one puts it better than thee...........
June 28th, 2019 02:35
Poppy Seeds
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said \'Take the No.11 bus; get off at the third cloud on your right; the bus destination indicator will say \'Cuckoo Land\'. lol.
June 28th, 2019 02:29
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said \'Take the No.11 bus; get off at the third cloud on your right; the bus destination indicator will say \'Cuckoo Land\'. lol.
June 28th, 2019 02:29
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Neville, words and music can always be interspersed to bring beauty into our lives.
June 28th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Neville, words and music can always be interspersed to bring beauty into our lives.
June 28th, 2019 00:48
A Sound for Sore Eyes
kevin browne said:
Class act here going on in your work. Brilliant and don\'t stop growing with you pen.
June 27th, 2019 16:04
kevin browne said:
Class act here going on in your work. Brilliant and don\'t stop growing with you pen.
June 27th, 2019 16:04
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Suresh said:
My words will fall far short in praising your words
June 27th, 2019 11:46
Suresh said:
My words will fall far short in praising your words
June 27th, 2019 11:46
A Sound for Sore Eyes
orchidee said:
An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He would have dashed out straightway in torment! heehee.
June 27th, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He would have dashed out straightway in torment! heehee.
June 27th, 2019 03:13
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft from its title to the revealing last line. First class writing again Neville.
June 27th, 2019 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft from its title to the revealing last line. First class writing again Neville.
June 27th, 2019 03:07
Dance
Suresh said:
I envision an abandoned place where shadows dance hauntingly, with a stagnant pool of still and dark waters.
Very enjoyable piece.
June 26th, 2019 11:26
Suresh said:
I envision an abandoned place where shadows dance hauntingly, with a stagnant pool of still and dark waters.
Very enjoyable piece.
June 26th, 2019 11:26
Dance
orchidee said:
What you up to in that forest?! Don\'t fall on me like a ton of bricks, but that happened on a similar comment I made to a poet. That\'ll teach me to be too familiar! lol.
June 26th, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
What you up to in that forest?! Don\'t fall on me like a ton of bricks, but that happened on a similar comment I made to a poet. That\'ll teach me to be too familiar! lol.
June 26th, 2019 04:16
Dance
Fay Slimm. said:
So clear your amorous tale I feel I am on that mill-pool bank and dancing in between deep shadows - a lovely first read of my day dear Neville.
June 26th, 2019 03:45
Fay Slimm. said:
So clear your amorous tale I feel I am on that mill-pool bank and dancing in between deep shadows - a lovely first read of my day dear Neville.
June 26th, 2019 03:45
Dance
Neville said:
I am delighted.. what a smashing thing to say.. cheers Dan...... Neville
June 26th, 2019 03:12
Neville said:
I am delighted.. what a smashing thing to say.. cheers Dan...... Neville
June 26th, 2019 03:12
Dance
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! I\'ve had a song call dance monkey in my head all morning, now I\'m going to have to play it!
Really enjoyed what felt like in and out of the dark and light, the dance of life!
June 26th, 2019 03:08
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! I\'ve had a song call dance monkey in my head all morning, now I\'m going to have to play it!
Really enjoyed what felt like in and out of the dark and light, the dance of life!
June 26th, 2019 03:08
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