Comments received on poems by Neville
I Am What I Am
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a rhythmic and multi-textured assessment of a few nots - but what you really are does nicely for me mon ami. Pleased I caught this insightful read...............
May 4th, 2019 02:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a rhythmic and multi-textured assessment of a few nots - but what you really are does nicely for me mon ami. Pleased I caught this insightful read...............
May 4th, 2019 02:56
Babies Don’t Bounce
Poetic Dan said:
But....
They do in a door swing
Or a special chair
They do on my knee
Or on my sofa
We can bounce with love
But not anger
I was going to write something else but then changed it to the above.
As you I read the comments I thought of being a young parent, that till was not easy and I could understand how easy it must be to loose control when a scream child won\'t stop!
May have to try and write this one out now..
Cheers for the inspiration
Much peace and respect
May 4th, 2019 02:38
Poetic Dan said:
But....
They do in a door swing
Or a special chair
They do on my knee
Or on my sofa
We can bounce with love
But not anger
I was going to write something else but then changed it to the above.
As you I read the comments I thought of being a young parent, that till was not easy and I could understand how easy it must be to loose control when a scream child won\'t stop!
May have to try and write this one out now..
Cheers for the inspiration
Much peace and respect
May 4th, 2019 02:38
Babies Don’t Bounce
Goldfinch60 said:
I just cannot understand why people mistreat children, it is the one thing that I could not reconcile with the ideal of Christian forgiveness.
Unfortunately it seems to be happening more and more in this world of ours.
May 4th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I just cannot understand why people mistreat children, it is the one thing that I could not reconcile with the ideal of Christian forgiveness.
Unfortunately it seems to be happening more and more in this world of ours.
May 4th, 2019 00:25
Babies Don’t Bounce
SerenWise said:
This is very powerful, I had an almost physical reaction...
May 3rd, 2019 14:23
SerenWise said:
This is very powerful, I had an almost physical reaction...
May 3rd, 2019 14:23
Babies Don’t Bounce
Michael Edwards said:
When it comes to babies and children I melt - how can anyone act in this way - this packs a message with the strongest of punches.
May 3rd, 2019 13:02
Michael Edwards said:
When it comes to babies and children I melt - how can anyone act in this way - this packs a message with the strongest of punches.
May 3rd, 2019 13:02
Babies Don’t Bounce
moordykspot2 said:
Consise True in every line. A neccessary Message in todays world. Thank you
May 3rd, 2019 05:13
moordykspot2 said:
Consise True in every line. A neccessary Message in todays world. Thank you
May 3rd, 2019 05:13
Babies Don’t Bounce
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I was dropped on my head as a baby
Never did me any HaRGBMKJNBVCSDHIGG
Sorry where was I?
Great write N
May 3rd, 2019 04:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I was dropped on my head as a baby
Never did me any HaRGBMKJNBVCSDHIGG
Sorry where was I?
Great write N
May 3rd, 2019 04:34
Babies Don’t Bounce
Neville said:
Unfortunately and far too often there are folk that try to test the theory out... bless ya Fay .... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 03:20
Neville said:
Unfortunately and far too often there are folk that try to test the theory out... bless ya Fay .... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 03:20
Babies Don’t Bounce
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow this write amazes me Nev. - Full of powerful imagery (as is my posting today) - - means what readers think - and I see a strong message on how not to treat offspring -- - or is it ?
May 3rd, 2019 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow this write amazes me Nev. - Full of powerful imagery (as is my posting today) - - means what readers think - and I see a strong message on how not to treat offspring -- - or is it ?
May 3rd, 2019 03:17
In The Beginning
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write of innocent afternoons of youth, it was all a learning curve and those experiences we have had cannot be taught.
May 3rd, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write of innocent afternoons of youth, it was all a learning curve and those experiences we have had cannot be taught.
May 3rd, 2019 00:40
Enlightenment
Suresh said:
Two people
Same event
Different perspective
One gave the other received
May 2nd, 2019 16:17
Suresh said:
Two people
Same event
Different perspective
One gave the other received
May 2nd, 2019 16:17
The Width of a Table
Suresh said:
When exposed to receiving affection
Heart throbs at the slightest acceptance
Another light hearted poem indeed
May 2nd, 2019 16:09
Suresh said:
When exposed to receiving affection
Heart throbs at the slightest acceptance
Another light hearted poem indeed
May 2nd, 2019 16:09
Victims of Indifference
Suresh said:
From my poem \"FANATICISM\"
Liberals want it tamed
But that only sends it underground
Emotions cannot be framed
And voices cannot be drowned
I am a staunch believer of Freedom of Speech, and as you stated, so far as it is not violating another.
The way hatred can be diluted is not by labeling it \'politically incorrect\', but by letting all express themselves, so that they can be intelligently approached. By shutting them down, it festers underneath and finally explode with devastating results.
I so enjoy these subjects
May 2nd, 2019 15:58
Suresh said:
From my poem \"FANATICISM\"
Liberals want it tamed
But that only sends it underground
Emotions cannot be framed
And voices cannot be drowned
I am a staunch believer of Freedom of Speech, and as you stated, so far as it is not violating another.
The way hatred can be diluted is not by labeling it \'politically incorrect\', but by letting all express themselves, so that they can be intelligently approached. By shutting them down, it festers underneath and finally explode with devastating results.
I so enjoy these subjects
May 2nd, 2019 15:58
In The Beginning
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ! A salutary tale for us Men about the Art of Courtship ! In my experience ~ over the last 20 years ~ every Lady is unique in terms of her past experience and pace & level of LIBIDO ! One has to rely on ones own experience and judgement ! If one makes a difinitive move too soon or too abrubtly (V 3) we pay the price of *rejection* which is painful ! I wish I knew @ 15 what I now know @ 35 I would have been spared some embarassment. Angela is 31 and we have an exceallent understanding of each others feelings ~ AMEN !
Blessing & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
May 2nd, 2019 14:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ! A salutary tale for us Men about the Art of Courtship ! In my experience ~ over the last 20 years ~ every Lady is unique in terms of her past experience and pace & level of LIBIDO ! One has to rely on ones own experience and judgement ! If one makes a difinitive move too soon or too abrubtly (V 3) we pay the price of *rejection* which is painful ! I wish I knew @ 15 what I now know @ 35 I would have been spared some embarassment. Angela is 31 and we have an exceallent understanding of each others feelings ~ AMEN !
Blessing & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
May 2nd, 2019 14:04
In The Beginning
Suresh said:
I profess my ignorance of \"cathedral afternoon\". Couldn\'t find on google Please enlighten
May 2nd, 2019 11:17
Suresh said:
I profess my ignorance of \"cathedral afternoon\". Couldn\'t find on google Please enlighten
May 2nd, 2019 11:17
In The Beginning
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how the difference between \"here\" and \"gone\" can change our totality of existence, our perception of happiness.
Loved this remorseful recollection, so melancholy. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 08:14
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how the difference between \"here\" and \"gone\" can change our totality of existence, our perception of happiness.
Loved this remorseful recollection, so melancholy. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 08:14
In The Beginning
SerenWise said:
Nicely written, agreed that cathedral afternoons is a beautiful metaphor!
May 2nd, 2019 06:19
SerenWise said:
Nicely written, agreed that cathedral afternoons is a beautiful metaphor!
May 2nd, 2019 06:19
In The Beginning
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking back with regret brings no closer those innocent Cathedral afternoons - lost but never forgotten eh Nev ?.......... another great read.
May 2nd, 2019 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking back with regret brings no closer those innocent Cathedral afternoons - lost but never forgotten eh Nev ?.......... another great read.
May 2nd, 2019 04:51
In The Beginning
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I might have swooned if she had stayed!
May 2nd, 2019 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I might have swooned if she had stayed!
May 2nd, 2019 03:10
In The Beginning
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Cathedral afternoons a heaven sent metaphor 1-0 Neville
There it is
BRAVO! Now that would have been ymy title
Hats off Neville
May 2nd, 2019 02:49
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Cathedral afternoons a heaven sent metaphor 1-0 Neville
There it is
BRAVO! Now that would have been ymy title
Hats off Neville
May 2nd, 2019 02:49
In The Beginning
Michael Edwards said:
Oh I hope not - lets think she was just a tad shy - she\'ll come back - sequel please.
May 2nd, 2019 02:45
Michael Edwards said:
Oh I hope not - lets think she was just a tad shy - she\'ll come back - sequel please.
May 2nd, 2019 02:45
Between Mountains
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville those places that we see in our lives are so meaningful and some are never forgotten.
May 2nd, 2019 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville those places that we see in our lives are so meaningful and some are never forgotten.
May 2nd, 2019 00:11
Between Mountains
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for a very descriptive Poem ! It revived many memories of our recent tour of SOUTH ISLAND ~ NZ.
V 1. The Glories of Mount Cook
V 2. Up close & personal @ night in our VW Camper !
V 3. The Alpine Forests in AUTUMN
V 4. Arthurs Pass where we said GOODBYE to the Southern Alps ~ NZ
BUT ~ never ever to each other ~ AMEN
Blessings & thanks for sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡
May 1st, 2019 16:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for a very descriptive Poem ! It revived many memories of our recent tour of SOUTH ISLAND ~ NZ.
V 1. The Glories of Mount Cook
V 2. Up close & personal @ night in our VW Camper !
V 3. The Alpine Forests in AUTUMN
V 4. Arthurs Pass where we said GOODBYE to the Southern Alps ~ NZ
BUT ~ never ever to each other ~ AMEN
Blessings & thanks for sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡
May 1st, 2019 16:43
Crumbs of Comfort
Poetic Dan said:
Captured well his place we dwell, said to say it have feel like....
May 1st, 2019 16:09
Poetic Dan said:
Captured well his place we dwell, said to say it have feel like....
May 1st, 2019 16:09
Between Mountains
Suresh said:
Beautiful vision of what was and could be.
Thnx Nev.
May 1st, 2019 11:03
Suresh said:
Beautiful vision of what was and could be.
Thnx Nev.
May 1st, 2019 11:03
Between Mountains
dusk arising said:
Wonderful atmospheric blend of mystery and romance.
May 1st, 2019 06:25
dusk arising said:
Wonderful atmospheric blend of mystery and romance.
May 1st, 2019 06:25
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