Comments received on poems by Neville
Wanting to be Wanted
Suresh said:
Me thinks, she thinks, she\'s grossly misunderstood - but isn\'t that what they all feel, for they never see in themselves being massively self centered - that is so poetically exclaimed here.
June 4th, 2019 15:42
Suresh said:
Me thinks, she thinks, she\'s grossly misunderstood - but isn\'t that what they all feel, for they never see in themselves being massively self centered - that is so poetically exclaimed here.
June 4th, 2019 15:42
Everywhere I Look
Goldfinch60 said:
It is dreadful that there are people out there that do this, they just do not care of the hurt and frustration they cause. The person is a bully in some respects and as you are aware all bullies are cowards!
June 4th, 2019 15:16
Goldfinch60 said:
It is dreadful that there are people out there that do this, they just do not care of the hurt and frustration they cause. The person is a bully in some respects and as you are aware all bullies are cowards!
June 4th, 2019 15:16
Everywhere I Look
Michael Edwards said:
If I knew his name I\'d get him for you.
June 4th, 2019 13:27
Michael Edwards said:
If I knew his name I\'d get him for you.
June 4th, 2019 13:27
Everywhere I Look
Suresh said:
There are always those that take a short cut, and regrettably in the age of new mediums, their number is increasing geometrically - in all walks of life. Even more train is that they are gaining momentum because of the internet.
June 4th, 2019 13:22
Suresh said:
There are always those that take a short cut, and regrettably in the age of new mediums, their number is increasing geometrically - in all walks of life. Even more train is that they are gaining momentum because of the internet.
June 4th, 2019 13:22
Everywhere I Look
orchidee said:
Well, I only sing (99% of the time), so it can\'t be me! (heehee). It\'s a pain though. Is it a case of \'You know who you are, you....\'. (all what I wrote yesterday. oohh!).
June 4th, 2019 07:52
orchidee said:
Well, I only sing (99% of the time), so it can\'t be me! (heehee). It\'s a pain though. Is it a case of \'You know who you are, you....\'. (all what I wrote yesterday. oohh!).
June 4th, 2019 07:52
Everywhere I Look
dusk arising said:
I never sensed anything was going on...blimey i am so detached and naive.
Wherever one goes as an individual on the web there seems to be a prat lurking with a chip on their shoulder waiting to amuse themselves by being negative about ones input. Sometimes they may have an appreciative audience of one or two like-minded similarly \'chipped\' sad individuals but gladly 99% of people see them for the inadequate souls they truly are.
June 4th, 2019 07:51
dusk arising said:
I never sensed anything was going on...blimey i am so detached and naive.
Wherever one goes as an individual on the web there seems to be a prat lurking with a chip on their shoulder waiting to amuse themselves by being negative about ones input. Sometimes they may have an appreciative audience of one or two like-minded similarly \'chipped\' sad individuals but gladly 99% of people see them for the inadequate souls they truly are.
June 4th, 2019 07:51
Arbeit Macht Frie
Lorna said:
For \"Nazis\" substitute \"Corporations\" and you have it in a nutshell.
June 4th, 2019 06:46
Lorna said:
For \"Nazis\" substitute \"Corporations\" and you have it in a nutshell.
June 4th, 2019 06:46
Everywhere I Look
Lorna said:
Goodness gracious you think he\'d have something better to do ... there is so much \"bogus\" out there I am outraged for you..... kind of sad on his part really...... he can\'t do it himself so he steals... here\'s a phrase I just love: \"A never was posing as a has been\"............
June 4th, 2019 05:54
Lorna said:
Goodness gracious you think he\'d have something better to do ... there is so much \"bogus\" out there I am outraged for you..... kind of sad on his part really...... he can\'t do it himself so he steals... here\'s a phrase I just love: \"A never was posing as a has been\"............
June 4th, 2019 05:54
Everywhere I Look
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful push in the right direction for someone who has left the road of guaranteed success to speed toward literary disintegration. Hope these forthright lines are heeded my friend.
June 4th, 2019 04:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful push in the right direction for someone who has left the road of guaranteed success to speed toward literary disintegration. Hope these forthright lines are heeded my friend.
June 4th, 2019 04:46
Arbeit Macht Frie
Suresh said:
One of my brevity yet to post:
If one enjoys their work, then are they always at play! UHH......
June 3rd, 2019 16:23
Suresh said:
One of my brevity yet to post:
If one enjoys their work, then are they always at play! UHH......
June 3rd, 2019 16:23
Arbeit Macht Frie
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āArbeit Macht Frieā...
My work does set me free! I find that teaching (lecturer) is very rewarding! I choose the subject, time, and location!
I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2019 15:12
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āArbeit Macht Frieā...
My work does set me free! I find that teaching (lecturer) is very rewarding! I choose the subject, time, and location!
I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2019 15:12
Arbeit Macht Frie
dusk arising said:
Three words to remind us all of tryranny and madmen. Work in that instance only free\'d one of ones mortal coil.
WE should not forget, regardless of our race, creed or religion.
A very sobering piece.
June 3rd, 2019 02:17
dusk arising said:
Three words to remind us all of tryranny and madmen. Work in that instance only free\'d one of ones mortal coil.
WE should not forget, regardless of our race, creed or religion.
A very sobering piece.
June 3rd, 2019 02:17
Arbeit Macht Frie
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville. I feel that I have been fortunate in my working life in that on the whole I enjoyed it. I can look back on it from my retirement with no regrets.
June 3rd, 2019 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville. I feel that I have been fortunate in my working life in that on the whole I enjoyed it. I can look back on it from my retirement with no regrets.
June 3rd, 2019 02:14
Arbeit Macht Frie
Fay Slimm. said:
Work has a freedom agreed but labouring to sheer exhaustion which was the aim in prison camps rings with sadistic slavery.. You nail the results in this needed reminder that some things must not be forgotten. Potent write my friend.
June 3rd, 2019 02:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Work has a freedom agreed but labouring to sheer exhaustion which was the aim in prison camps rings with sadistic slavery.. You nail the results in this needed reminder that some things must not be forgotten. Potent write my friend.
June 3rd, 2019 02:14
Arbeit Macht Frie
Michael Edwards said:
The fruits of my endeavours contain the seeds of my childrens aspirations - fine write Neville.
June 3rd, 2019 01:57
Michael Edwards said:
The fruits of my endeavours contain the seeds of my childrens aspirations - fine write Neville.
June 3rd, 2019 01:57
Salt Marsh Fields
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and beautiful memories, those times were so very special, thank you for taking me there with your words.
June 3rd, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and beautiful memories, those times were so very special, thank you for taking me there with your words.
June 3rd, 2019 00:44
Bethune Re-visited
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh this makes such clever use of exchangeable words -- - Bethune who was the first time taken in covert positions and shamed would surely remember her fall to false innocence during the re-visit as this impressive piece so well relates ........ your talent for half-obscured meanings which need interpretation stands alone methinks. Top marks yet again mon ami.
June 2nd, 2019 13:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh this makes such clever use of exchangeable words -- - Bethune who was the first time taken in covert positions and shamed would surely remember her fall to false innocence during the re-visit as this impressive piece so well relates ........ your talent for half-obscured meanings which need interpretation stands alone methinks. Top marks yet again mon ami.
June 2nd, 2019 13:05
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Suresh said:
She caught ya looking, and heard ya panting. Now she wants ya for herself, you dog, you.....
Enjoyed it
June 2nd, 2019 12:17
Suresh said:
She caught ya looking, and heard ya panting. Now she wants ya for herself, you dog, you.....
Enjoyed it
June 2nd, 2019 12:17
Salt Marsh Fields
orchidee said:
Thanks N. This sounds like some \'classical\' poet\'s words. Being a bit un-cultured (am I?) I\'m not \'into\' being an authority on many well-known poets!
June 2nd, 2019 11:20
orchidee said:
Thanks N. This sounds like some \'classical\' poet\'s words. Being a bit un-cultured (am I?) I\'m not \'into\' being an authority on many well-known poets!
June 2nd, 2019 11:20
Salt Marsh Fields
orchidee said:
A fine write N - you in meadows and pastures green?!
June 2nd, 2019 07:56
orchidee said:
A fine write N - you in meadows and pastures green?!
June 2nd, 2019 07:56
Salt Marsh Fields
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - those were really the best of days Nev where innocence tried kissing and you verse it so well with the sounds, the smells and the wild flowers - - took me back to Billingham\'s Field near our local reservoire and being sixteen....... x
June 2nd, 2019 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - those were really the best of days Nev where innocence tried kissing and you verse it so well with the sounds, the smells and the wild flowers - - took me back to Billingham\'s Field near our local reservoire and being sixteen....... x
June 2nd, 2019 05:33
Salt Marsh Fields
dusk arising said:
Great visions come out of this. I think youve encapsulated the magic of a certain stage when we begin to sense something else about girlies. Spring in the air and sap rises.
June 2nd, 2019 05:06
dusk arising said:
Great visions come out of this. I think youve encapsulated the magic of a certain stage when we begin to sense something else about girlies. Spring in the air and sap rises.
June 2nd, 2019 05:06
A Moment
dusk arising said:
Dramatic Neville, very dramatic. Which is exactly what the subject deserves..
That is one very well crafted piece. It gets better on successive re-reads too!
June 2nd, 2019 01:08
dusk arising said:
Dramatic Neville, very dramatic. Which is exactly what the subject deserves..
That is one very well crafted piece. It gets better on successive re-reads too!
June 2nd, 2019 01:08
A Moment
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m up late and can\'t sleep, this one my friend was so perfectly deep.
Thank you
June 1st, 2019 19:32
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m up late and can\'t sleep, this one my friend was so perfectly deep.
Thank you
June 1st, 2019 19:32
The Drowning Game
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a compelling write with imagery to sigh for dear friend - - the title appealed and am pleased I caught your nymph who with poetic whispers wooed males to a watery grave........ you so easily take me along Nev with your gift for telling romantic tales. Luverly last read of my day .........x Fay
June 1st, 2019 16:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a compelling write with imagery to sigh for dear friend - - the title appealed and am pleased I caught your nymph who with poetic whispers wooed males to a watery grave........ you so easily take me along Nev with your gift for telling romantic tales. Luverly last read of my day .........x Fay
June 1st, 2019 16:22
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