Comments received on poems by Neville



Rough Sketched & True
Goldfinch60 said:

From that sketch a wonderful painting will emerge to complement your words.

December 31st, 2018 01:32

Rough Sketched & True
MendedFences27 said:

Whether it becomes a completed painting or not it will leave a vision in my eyes. A well drawn scene, painted with the poet\'s brush. Words of brilliant color describe the artist\'s eye. A delightful read. - Phil A.

December 30th, 2018 18:37

Rough Sketched & True
Neville said:

then I shall thank you again

December 30th, 2018 12:25

Rough Sketched & True
sylviasearcher said:

And I thought it was because their flowers were bright yellow!

I never liked the term though.

December 30th, 2018 08:23

Rough Sketched & True
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville. We should put the dandelion and burdock down then!

December 30th, 2018 08:16

Rough Sketched & True
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud cheers for this lyrical walk around countryside with an artistic eye for what is delightful. An inspiring read Neville.

December 30th, 2018 05:33

Secrets of the Field
MendedFences27 said:

A field filled with feelings. A harvest of Love and rape. A history of death erased, replaced perhaps with new life. A terrific write softly spoken. - Phil A.

December 29th, 2018 19:02

Wind Washed & Flying
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Spectacular! MY favorite stanza...

\"Wait though

Much like the haunted cry of gulls

Neath rocky crags and outposts

Wind washed these eyes and ears of mine do

Catch you flying\"

Kurt

December 29th, 2018 11:46

Wind Washed & Flying
sylviasearcher said:

And it was Avery beautiful cusscword free poem too.

A sensory delight!

December 29th, 2018 05:32

Wind Washed & Flying
Fay Slimm. said:

An engaging read filled with gentle erotica so discreetly described it needs to be read again in my faves. - - - - a first class write Neville.

December 29th, 2018 03:54

Wind Washed & Flying
Neville said:

thank you for checking in and for checking it out....cheers

December 29th, 2018 02:54

Wind Washed & Flying
orchidee said:

This fine write might be swoony N. lol.

December 29th, 2018 02:50

The Very first Time
Goldfinch60 said:

F*****g on the stairs can be painful you only do it once!

December 28th, 2018 09:42

The Very first Time
Viv Wade said:

The very first time I read this poem... I blushed! Nice write, Neville. ;)

December 28th, 2018 08:21

The Very first Time
Neville said:

Maybe I could add a verse or two... cheers orchidee.. appreciate the visit .. N

December 28th, 2018 05:31

The Very first Time
orchidee said:

Swoon! I thought this would be about the first time ya tried Christmas Pudding or summat like that?! heehee.

December 28th, 2018 04:57

Secrets of the Field
Viv Wade said:

I wondered what that noise was coming from behind the hedge when I walked past! :) Nice write, Neville.

December 27th, 2018 23:22

Secrets of the Field
orchidee said:

Oh don\'t mind me and Fido. If poems are not too swoony, they might not need to be marked \'18+\'. Don\'t be afraid of Fido, though he\'s an over-enthusiastic watchdog sometimes with a terrible bark - worse than his bite! heehee.

December 27th, 2018 11:44

Secrets of the Field
Simon Bromley said:

Very good write. Your descriptive nature and word usage has the reader compelled. Excellent poet.

December 27th, 2018 11:36

Secrets of the Field
sue.evans said:

If a sigh was words then this is it. Lovely!

December 27th, 2018 03:49

Secrets of the Field
Neville said:

always carry a few sugar cubes with ya when out and keep taking the medicine.. they say a swoon full of sugar helps the medicine go down a treat..... cheers

December 27th, 2018 03:14

Secrets of the Field
orchidee said:

I would swoon if I went past that bit of the field! Fido, me watchdog would bark to warn me! heehee.

December 27th, 2018 03:01

Talk Me Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, they will walk forever by the wild oceans reading your words.

December 27th, 2018 02:04

Talk Me Poetry
Viv Wade said:

Beautiful love story, beautifully written. Nice job, Neville!

December 26th, 2018 23:55

Talk Me Poetry
sylviasearcher said:

I like this one

December 26th, 2018 19:59

Talk Me Poetry
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

December 26th, 2018 11:05

Talk Me Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:

An amazing flow and a wonderful metre to this delight read Neville. nto my favs. with this little gem.

December 26th, 2018 06:51

Hark
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful message Neville.

December 26th, 2018 01:17

Hark
Viv Wade said:

A worthy reminder that it\'s good to just stop everything once in a while, and tune in to the sounds of nature. Nice write!

December 26th, 2018 00:01

Hark
ron parrish aka wordman said:

the world is a movie screen,with all the sounds and colors you could want
all you need do is look and listen

December 25th, 2018 23:28



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