Comments received on poems by Neville
Prolet
Neville said:
I feel that I should write something profound, like how these words have let you down.. but I know it has nothing to do with these words
I would like to say things will improve and you will fell joy again and pleasure etc
However, I know that I can only hope such things.... And true...
March 7th, 2019 15:42
Neville said:
I feel that I should write something profound, like how these words have let you down.. but I know it has nothing to do with these words
I would like to say things will improve and you will fell joy again and pleasure etc
However, I know that I can only hope such things.... And true...
March 7th, 2019 15:42
Prolet
sylviasearcher said:
I used to get excited at the first sight of little green buds on trees.
I used to wonder who else noticed them and felt the same funny little joy.
It used to remind me of renewal and hope and beauty and wonder. Of Mother Nature and her endless rhythms and endurance, painting her beauty across the seasons, in spite of the state of the world.
Some how I just can’t feel it right now, but I tried and I felt a little bit sad for the loss of it.
March 7th, 2019 15:28
sylviasearcher said:
I used to get excited at the first sight of little green buds on trees.
I used to wonder who else noticed them and felt the same funny little joy.
It used to remind me of renewal and hope and beauty and wonder. Of Mother Nature and her endless rhythms and endurance, painting her beauty across the seasons, in spite of the state of the world.
Some how I just can’t feel it right now, but I tried and I felt a little bit sad for the loss of it.
March 7th, 2019 15:28
Prolet
dusk arising said:
And i though a prolet was something the NHS operated on.
A fitting tribute to this rebirth time of year.
March 7th, 2019 15:18
dusk arising said:
And i though a prolet was something the NHS operated on.
A fitting tribute to this rebirth time of year.
March 7th, 2019 15:18
Prolet
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m currently working with a rescue German Shepherd and today he gave me a lot of jip trying to rush me out the door! I will admit I couldn\'t blame him.... Spring is here!
March 7th, 2019 07:27
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m currently working with a rescue German Shepherd and today he gave me a lot of jip trying to rush me out the door! I will admit I couldn\'t blame him.... Spring is here!
March 7th, 2019 07:27
Prolet
JaydeVictoria said:
A wonderful write as always, thoroughly enjoyed Neville
March 7th, 2019 07:25
JaydeVictoria said:
A wonderful write as always, thoroughly enjoyed Neville
March 7th, 2019 07:25
Prolet
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspirational my friend to say the least. - -this revered tribute to something called Spring - - or be it Prolet - tis versed to perfection in this special invite to stay with the beauty of here and now.
March 7th, 2019 05:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspirational my friend to say the least. - -this revered tribute to something called Spring - - or be it Prolet - tis versed to perfection in this special invite to stay with the beauty of here and now.
March 7th, 2019 05:27
Prolet
orchidee said:
A fine write. Glad ya told me that N! If I hadn\'t have known, I would have thought Prolet was a Property Service Agency - really exists - based on pro-let?
March 7th, 2019 05:22
orchidee said:
A fine write. Glad ya told me that N! If I hadn\'t have known, I would have thought Prolet was a Property Service Agency - really exists - based on pro-let?
March 7th, 2019 05:22
Precious Scars
Suresh said:
Loves scars are deeper
But those who mend them are even more precious
March 6th, 2019 17:36
Suresh said:
Loves scars are deeper
But those who mend them are even more precious
March 6th, 2019 17:36
Precious Scars
Goldfinch60 said:
Those scars can be so meaningful within your life.
March 6th, 2019 15:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those scars can be so meaningful within your life.
March 6th, 2019 15:55
Precious Scars
orchidee said:
Good write N. Can ya mend those fossils that I dropped at an antiques show?!
March 6th, 2019 09:18
orchidee said:
Good write N. Can ya mend those fossils that I dropped at an antiques show?!
March 6th, 2019 09:18
Precious Scars
Michael Edwards said:
My wife had kidney cancer 7 years ago and had a kidney removed - it saved her life but left her with a 14ins scar - that scar is the most beautiful reminder of how blessed we both are.
A precious scar as reminded by this super little write.
March 6th, 2019 09:18
Michael Edwards said:
My wife had kidney cancer 7 years ago and had a kidney removed - it saved her life but left her with a 14ins scar - that scar is the most beautiful reminder of how blessed we both are.
A precious scar as reminded by this super little write.
March 6th, 2019 09:18
Precious Scars
dusk arising said:
OK, so you noticed i\'m a broken old croc. I didn\'t get this cracked up without working at it you know.
Your words reminded me of the piece \'scars\' i published last month. Whereas my suggestion was we conceal the damage life has inflicted upon us, kintsugi is a proudly displayed scar adding or even validating the age or preciousness of the article.
Gosh you must be hideous! LOL
March 6th, 2019 06:41
dusk arising said:
OK, so you noticed i\'m a broken old croc. I didn\'t get this cracked up without working at it you know.
Your words reminded me of the piece \'scars\' i published last month. Whereas my suggestion was we conceal the damage life has inflicted upon us, kintsugi is a proudly displayed scar adding or even validating the age or preciousness of the article.
Gosh you must be hideous! LOL
March 6th, 2019 06:41
Precious Scars
Fay Slimm. said:
ah I meant to mention how apt the illustration of Jananese Kintsugi - - another something new learnt today...
March 6th, 2019 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
ah I meant to mention how apt the illustration of Jananese Kintsugi - - another something new learnt today...
March 6th, 2019 05:30
Precious Scars
Fay Slimm. said:
Your loving assurance of the value of scars when faced and borne comes through these three tender and informative lines - - a revealing write about love my friend.
March 6th, 2019 05:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Your loving assurance of the value of scars when faced and borne comes through these three tender and informative lines - - a revealing write about love my friend.
March 6th, 2019 05:28
What We Have Here
Goldfinch60 said:
That tree is for us all to embrace. Race you to the top.
March 6th, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That tree is for us all to embrace. Race you to the top.
March 6th, 2019 01:11
What We Have Here
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll keep a low profile - now where\'s that pen and paper.
March 5th, 2019 14:33
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll keep a low profile - now where\'s that pen and paper.
March 5th, 2019 14:33
What We Have Here
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Out of the park with this one my friend. I\'m climbing and stopping to embrace along the way ;)
March 5th, 2019 08:48
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Out of the park with this one my friend. I\'m climbing and stopping to embrace along the way ;)
March 5th, 2019 08:48
I Am That Guy
Poetic Dan said:
I love what you have done and dam did my trigger go off when you spiked the drink....
Look forward to the next ton under your belt!
March 5th, 2019 08:40
Poetic Dan said:
I love what you have done and dam did my trigger go off when you spiked the drink....
Look forward to the next ton under your belt!
March 5th, 2019 08:40
What We Have Here
dusk arising said:
Nice one. A bit like a mirror for me... I\'m a creature of mood.
You do have some brill ideas.
March 5th, 2019 05:51
dusk arising said:
Nice one. A bit like a mirror for me... I\'m a creature of mood.
You do have some brill ideas.
March 5th, 2019 05:51
What We Have Here
Fay Slimm. said:
Good message my friend with quite a few moves toward getting a grip on black loneliness. I second that - yes indeed.
March 5th, 2019 05:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Good message my friend with quite a few moves toward getting a grip on black loneliness. I second that - yes indeed.
March 5th, 2019 05:34
What We Have Here
orchidee said:
I\'m getting off me horse then - me \'high\' moral hobby-horse! lol. It\'s called Trigger.
March 5th, 2019 05:15
orchidee said:
I\'m getting off me horse then - me \'high\' moral hobby-horse! lol. It\'s called Trigger.
March 5th, 2019 05:15
I Am That Guy
MendedFences27 said:
Imagination is what makes the poet and the storyteller what they are. All things are possible, the limits are those of the universe. Creativity is the brush in the hand of the artist or the pen with the poet. Your poem offers a walk on the wild side of creativity. We can be evil or good, human or other, we can relate truth or falsehoods, the possible or the fantastic. We can frighten or sooth, express beauty or ugliness.
Awesome write, thoughtful and provoking. You are mayhem waiting to happen. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2019 13:08
MendedFences27 said:
Imagination is what makes the poet and the storyteller what they are. All things are possible, the limits are those of the universe. Creativity is the brush in the hand of the artist or the pen with the poet. Your poem offers a walk on the wild side of creativity. We can be evil or good, human or other, we can relate truth or falsehoods, the possible or the fantastic. We can frighten or sooth, express beauty or ugliness.
Awesome write, thoughtful and provoking. You are mayhem waiting to happen. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2019 13:08
I Am That Guy
Fay Slimm. said:
Words can be juggled to provide exciting adventures when we become what we want to be - poetry is the best outlet for imaginative journeys to never-land Neville as this good write proves.
March 4th, 2019 05:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Words can be juggled to provide exciting adventures when we become what we want to be - poetry is the best outlet for imaginative journeys to never-land Neville as this good write proves.
March 4th, 2019 05:07
I Am That Guy
dusk arising said:
I could cuss you but you\'re the guy i always wanted to be?
The guy i always wanted to be was a jailbird who seemed able to hold the devotion of the most desireable ladies i happened to fail to woo.
Owlish, i was a twit to woo.
March 4th, 2019 03:16
dusk arising said:
I could cuss you but you\'re the guy i always wanted to be?
The guy i always wanted to be was a jailbird who seemed able to hold the devotion of the most desireable ladies i happened to fail to woo.
Owlish, i was a twit to woo.
March 4th, 2019 03:16
I Am That Guy
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, our imagination holds so many people within it it that are not ourselves. Congrats on reaching one hundred.
March 4th, 2019 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, our imagination holds so many people within it it that are not ourselves. Congrats on reaching one hundred.
March 4th, 2019 02:43
I Am That Guy
sylviasearcher said:
Yes an interesting read,
Tis true, just because we write it does not make it who we are.
I am that girl,
Dust
Maybe
March 4th, 2019 02:39
sylviasearcher said:
Yes an interesting read,
Tis true, just because we write it does not make it who we are.
I am that girl,
Dust
Maybe
March 4th, 2019 02:39
I Am That Guy
orchidee said:
I wondered who that guy was - now I know! I thought it was Joe Bloggs, until I read your poem N.
March 4th, 2019 02:38
orchidee said:
I wondered who that guy was - now I know! I thought it was Joe Bloggs, until I read your poem N.
March 4th, 2019 02:38
I Am That Guy
Michael Edwards said:
This is what I mean by a \'good poet\' - one who can write from imagination and doesn\'t rely solely on personal experiences. another great posting Neville and congrats on your 100th posting.
March 4th, 2019 02:18
Michael Edwards said:
This is what I mean by a \'good poet\' - one who can write from imagination and doesn\'t rely solely on personal experiences. another great posting Neville and congrats on your 100th posting.
March 4th, 2019 02:18
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