Comments received on poems by Neville
A Taste of Nothing
Suresh said:
A silent lover/admirer, whose not even on the radar, feels the pain of their subject, and feels helpless to do anything
April 27th, 2019 20:39
Suresh said:
A silent lover/admirer, whose not even on the radar, feels the pain of their subject, and feels helpless to do anything
April 27th, 2019 20:39
The Pyramid of Longing
Suresh said:
This was not a scribble, and it may have been a long time ago, but the memory of it is as fresh in your mind, as if it happened only an instant ago.
You have and will continue to CHEERISH them forever...
April 27th, 2019 17:18
Suresh said:
This was not a scribble, and it may have been a long time ago, but the memory of it is as fresh in your mind, as if it happened only an instant ago.
You have and will continue to CHEERISH them forever...
April 27th, 2019 17:18
Orchid
orchidee said:
What you doing, writing about me?! heehee. Me singing is not beautiful, so it\'s a true write, to be sure!
I was an orchid in a storm today too. Not much rain, so it seemed like a sand storm, blowing dust, blossom, etc. Could hardly see a thing! Horrid.
April 27th, 2019 09:59
orchidee said:
What you doing, writing about me?! heehee. Me singing is not beautiful, so it\'s a true write, to be sure!
I was an orchid in a storm today too. Not much rain, so it seemed like a sand storm, blowing dust, blossom, etc. Could hardly see a thing! Horrid.
April 27th, 2019 09:59
A Travelling Man
Fay Slimm. said:
This I can relate to as I watch seagulls too -- ha -- and have baked a decent loaf or two -- looking for miracles though and hoping they yet happen - or am I a lost cause.... glad to read your very first offering on this friendly site my romantic friend.
April 27th, 2019 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
This I can relate to as I watch seagulls too -- ha -- and have baked a decent loaf or two -- looking for miracles though and hoping they yet happen - or am I a lost cause.... glad to read your very first offering on this friendly site my romantic friend.
April 27th, 2019 05:51
Orchid
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEV and a reminder that BEAUTY is transient. Im only 31 so I maintain much of my Inner & Outer BEAUTY. But BRIAN & I have found TRUE LOVE and the Beauty of True Love never diminishes : AMEN
Yours ANGELA 🧡
April 27th, 2019 04:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEV and a reminder that BEAUTY is transient. Im only 31 so I maintain much of my Inner & Outer BEAUTY. But BRIAN & I have found TRUE LOVE and the Beauty of True Love never diminishes : AMEN
Yours ANGELA 🧡
April 27th, 2019 04:41
Orchid
Fay Slimm. said:
Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn orchid will stand taller when love calls again - - - interesting read Nev.
April 27th, 2019 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn orchid will stand taller when love calls again - - - interesting read Nev.
April 27th, 2019 03:35
Orchid
dusk arising said:
Ouch!
A beauty beheld can indeed lose its magnificence when the storm of argument taints the appeal.
April 27th, 2019 03:24
dusk arising said:
Ouch!
A beauty beheld can indeed lose its magnificence when the storm of argument taints the appeal.
April 27th, 2019 03:24
In a Moment Gone
Suresh said:
MOMENT gives you hope
ETERNALLY never happens
Thnx Nev
P.S. Goes well with my response to your comment on my poem \'Let\'s take a Walk\'
April 26th, 2019 10:33
Suresh said:
MOMENT gives you hope
ETERNALLY never happens
Thnx Nev
P.S. Goes well with my response to your comment on my poem \'Let\'s take a Walk\'
April 26th, 2019 10:33
In a Moment Gone
dusk arising said:
Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite
(she was only bringing me a nice cup of cocoa to help me sleep).
April 26th, 2019 10:27
dusk arising said:
Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite
(she was only bringing me a nice cup of cocoa to help me sleep).
April 26th, 2019 10:27
In a Moment Gone
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again Nev.
April 26th, 2019 10:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again Nev.
April 26th, 2019 10:23
Ten Dead Chickens
Suresh said:
You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.
And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.
April 25th, 2019 12:01
Suresh said:
You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.
And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.
April 25th, 2019 12:01
The Pyramid of Longing
Fay Slimm. said:
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
April 25th, 2019 06:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
April 25th, 2019 06:45
Ten Dead Chickens
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.
April 25th, 2019 04:20
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.
April 25th, 2019 04:20
Ten Dead Chickens
dusk arising said:
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52
dusk arising said:
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52
Head Rest
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).
April 24th, 2019 08:10
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).
April 24th, 2019 08:10
Ten Dead Chickens
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.
April 24th, 2019 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.
April 24th, 2019 03:15
Ten Dead Chickens
orchidee said:
Spookiness,N! Fido would be a guard-dog to them.
April 24th, 2019 02:08
orchidee said:
Spookiness,N! Fido would be a guard-dog to them.
April 24th, 2019 02:08
Ten Dead Chickens
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put a bit........ Wow- - what a sad mystery and told with your flair it had my attention from the first line Nev..........spirits or no those chicks will stay with me all day - - poor things.......... Fay x
April 24th, 2019 02:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put a bit........ Wow- - what a sad mystery and told with your flair it had my attention from the first line Nev..........spirits or no those chicks will stay with me all day - - poor things.......... Fay x
April 24th, 2019 02:06
Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on stages we all have to face - - love the metaphor of
Mourning summer
Contemplating winter
Anticipating spring - -
yet stuck in the autumn years --
I for one take you just as you are my luverly friend.
Glad I caught up with this read today.............. x
April 23rd, 2019 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on stages we all have to face - - love the metaphor of
Mourning summer
Contemplating winter
Anticipating spring - -
yet stuck in the autumn years --
I for one take you just as you are my luverly friend.
Glad I caught up with this read today.............. x
April 23rd, 2019 13:39
Head Rest
Fay Slimm. said:
A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a most tender read my friend.
April 23rd, 2019 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a most tender read my friend.
April 23rd, 2019 03:46
Head Rest
Poetic Dan said:
You be a man chocolate bar then, unwrapped enjoyed and then discarded!
Sounds a good way to go to me!
Nice one
April 23rd, 2019 03:16
Poetic Dan said:
You be a man chocolate bar then, unwrapped enjoyed and then discarded!
Sounds a good way to go to me!
Nice one
April 23rd, 2019 03:16
Head Rest
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna plant some flower seeds - or I might swoon! Or Fido won\'t let me have \'excitement\'. lol.
April 23rd, 2019 02:19
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna plant some flower seeds - or I might swoon! Or Fido won\'t let me have \'excitement\'. lol.
April 23rd, 2019 02:19
The Company of Angels
Fay Slimm. said:
First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to deny the Reaper his quota of souls by salacine burning and prayers etc.- - futile maybe but how bent those knees of love pleading for the one with broken wings. Your friend must have cherished this spiritual tribute.
April 22nd, 2019 13:50
Fay Slimm. said:
First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to deny the Reaper his quota of souls by salacine burning and prayers etc.- - futile maybe but how bent those knees of love pleading for the one with broken wings. Your friend must have cherished this spiritual tribute.
April 22nd, 2019 13:50
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