Comments received on poems by Neville



A Travelling Man
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Neville, those miracles are still there.

November 30th, 2018 02:07

A Travelling Man
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Makes me think of \"Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus.\"

Excellent poem and it gives the reader the perspective from both sides and ultimately melds into the G rating. LOL!

Great job, Neville. :-)

November 29th, 2018 17:03

A Travelling Man
orchidee said:

It\'s all right for him swanning about, while she\'s left grafting at home! lol. Does he bake some bread too?
I will have to swoon at the end of this poem. heehee.

November 29th, 2018 15:40

A Travelling Man
Michael Edwards said:

Super write although I would like to think miracles still do happen.

November 29th, 2018 13:20

Appetite for Words
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words in our lives are so important to many of us.

November 29th, 2018 01:55

Appetite for Words
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Neville,

No abibliophobia here!
As a logophile, I very much enjoyed reading your poem!

Check out the acrostic Goldfinch60 posted today...if you havenā€™t already. You May find it interesting.

~Laura~



November 28th, 2018 18:43

Appetite for Words
Neville said:

In succinct terms, I thank thee, but with a certain passion... N

November 28th, 2018 18:14

When You Were Perfect
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A well-written poem Neville that cherishes your once lover and trumpets the fact there is no ill will, at least from your standpoint.

Loved the honesty in this write. :-)

November 27th, 2018 15:49

When You Were Perfect
Neville said:

much appreciated and true...

November 27th, 2018 04:36

When You Were Perfect
Goldfinch60 said:

Very moving emotive write Neville.

November 27th, 2018 03:03

When You Were Perfect
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - I was perfect all the time - still am! heehee. I\'m getting too big for me boots. I best eat some humble pie!

November 27th, 2018 02:49

A Certain Distance
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Beautifully penned emotional romantic poem. You\'ve chosen your words wisely and, as a result, capture your readers\' hearts.

Great read, Neville. :-)

November 26th, 2018 17:56

A Certain Distance
Goldfinch60 said:

Those moments can be so near yet so far apart at the same time.

November 26th, 2018 16:33

Zen Hunting
Neville said:

thanks for the tip... N

November 26th, 2018 05:01

Zen Hunting
Goldfinch60 said:

Your Spirit can be fond in many ways. I know that My Spirit is always with me and it is nothing to do with a particular religion. I do hope that you bliss stays with you. Good write.

November 26th, 2018 01:11

Zen Hunting
Neville said:

What a delightful thing to say, and how very kind too.. nothing lasts forever though, does it......Many thank you\'s on their way... N

November 25th, 2018 15:41

The Pyramid of Longing
Neville said:

That love to which these words refer, was a very long time ago now my friend... N

November 25th, 2018 04:30

The Pyramid of Longing
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love increase like the pyramid that you have created. Clever write Neville.

November 25th, 2018 01:22

The Pyramid of Longing
Neville said:

Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging gift of words.. They are very much appreciated.. Neville

November 24th, 2018 12:37

Why Do I Love Thee
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good lovelorn write Neville.

November 24th, 2018 01:19

Why Do I Love Thee
Neville said:

I am truly grateful to you Fay.. many thank you\'s for such a kind & encouraging message... kind Regards & All Good Things, Neville

November 23rd, 2018 07:19

Why Do I Love Thee
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the original classic but so heartwarming this modern ode to true love - thanks for posting it Neville.

November 23rd, 2018 06:39

Before We Die
Neville said:

Many thanks Goldfinch60, the \'Book of Longing\' was written by the late great Leonard Norman Cohen, who was kind enough to respond to a letter that I wrote to him regarding my Fathers eulogy.. tis a book that I would highly recommend to anyone.... Neville

November 23rd, 2018 04:46

Before We Die
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Neville, that Book of Longing could have a great deal for which to answer.

November 23rd, 2018 02:01

Abattoir Gulls
Goldfinch60 said:

I was there watching these gulls

\"Pinned to our sky
On invisible wire\"

Your words conveyed a glorious picture.

November 22nd, 2018 01:48

Abattoir Gulls
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Neville, the imagery is amazing in this write. I particularly liked

\"Angry and loud
Dancing and scything
High upon higher
Pinned to the sky
On invisible wire
How they do hang
There.\"

You paint such a beautiful canvas for your readers.

Great job!

November 21st, 2018 13:22

Abattoir Gulls
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - Loud applause for this flow of bird-assault Neville - - You capture so well the noise in flight of gulls whenever a meal is sighted. I relate to their cleverness as I live by the sea. An engaging read.

November 21st, 2018 11:19

Abattoir Gulls
Michael Edwards said:

Great flow - an enjoyable read.

November 21st, 2018 06:31

Abattoir Gulls
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

November 21st, 2018 06:00

A Taste of Nothing
Goldfinch60 said:

I believe there are many interpretations of this but the one that keeps on crossing my mind is the political one about the state of our country at the moment and this flaming brexit fiasco (I will not give it a capital letter). If this is anywhere near the truth I\'ll have a goldfish please.
Very intriguing write by the way.

November 21st, 2018 01:25



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