Comments received on poems by Neville
She Sparkles
Suresh said:
Black widow spider in the true sense, for it was lust no doubt. You escaped, though bruised, to yet live and love
July 22nd, 2019 09:11
Suresh said:
Black widow spider in the true sense, for it was lust no doubt. You escaped, though bruised, to yet live and love
July 22nd, 2019 09:11
She Sparkles
Goldfinch60 said:
The danger that can be in the beauty of life. Good one Neville.
July 22nd, 2019 03:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The danger that can be in the beauty of life. Good one Neville.
July 22nd, 2019 03:27
She Sparkles
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. You got biscuits there?! heehee.
July 22nd, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. You got biscuits there?! heehee.
July 22nd, 2019 02:48
She Sparkles
Fay Slimm. said:
Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
the planned moves of a manipulative female and bow to its tawdry truth- - tho\' hopefully you saw it in time and escaped such jaws my friend.......... Fay
July 22nd, 2019 02:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
the planned moves of a manipulative female and bow to its tawdry truth- - tho\' hopefully you saw it in time and escaped such jaws my friend.......... Fay
July 22nd, 2019 02:25
One Day Maybe
Suresh said:
Better to hurt now, then to hurt forever.
Well penned, my friend
July 21st, 2019 14:12
Suresh said:
Better to hurt now, then to hurt forever.
Well penned, my friend
July 21st, 2019 14:12
One Day Maybe
dusk arising said:
There\'s an untold story and a well intentioned deed revealed here.
Together with the wonder - did she realise it was how it had to be resolved. The regret of hurting a loved one who may never see reason too.
So well compacted into your lines.
July 21st, 2019 10:04
dusk arising said:
There\'s an untold story and a well intentioned deed revealed here.
Together with the wonder - did she realise it was how it had to be resolved. The regret of hurting a loved one who may never see reason too.
So well compacted into your lines.
July 21st, 2019 10:04
One Day Maybe
orchidee said:
I never knew my singing caused all this trouble and upset! heehee. I\'m a pest though. Me singing goes on. lol.
July 21st, 2019 07:37
orchidee said:
I never knew my singing caused all this trouble and upset! heehee. I\'m a pest though. Me singing goes on. lol.
July 21st, 2019 07:37
One Day Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo and then ended with kindness - - your talent for tale-telling as always draws this reader for wanting more my friend....... Fay
July 21st, 2019 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo and then ended with kindness - - your talent for tale-telling as always draws this reader for wanting more my friend....... Fay
July 21st, 2019 04:57
One Day Maybe
Michael Edwards said:
Something so appealing about this simple piece - I did enjoy the read .
July 21st, 2019 04:42
Michael Edwards said:
Something so appealing about this simple piece - I did enjoy the read .
July 21st, 2019 04:42
No Hint of An End
Suresh said:
The conch shell, swirling within it the mesmerizing sound if the sea, and the smell and taste of salt, when blown has called many a lovers together.
Lovely write indeed.
July 19th, 2019 17:58
Suresh said:
The conch shell, swirling within it the mesmerizing sound if the sea, and the smell and taste of salt, when blown has called many a lovers together.
Lovely write indeed.
July 19th, 2019 17:58
The Whimbrel
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Neville, I have been bird watching all my life and have Knott yet seen a Whimbrel but have seen the others that you mentioned.
July 16th, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Neville, I have been bird watching all my life and have Knott yet seen a Whimbrel but have seen the others that you mentioned.
July 16th, 2019 01:06
No Hint of An End
Fay Slimm. said:
A roundelay of tender vibrations follow this read - - wordless but there all the same - the magic of poetry oozes from this simple verse with no hint of an end showing your gift for laying down intriguing words my friend......x Fay - - - - stay safe in your journey to Serbia.
July 16th, 2019 00:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A roundelay of tender vibrations follow this read - - wordless but there all the same - the magic of poetry oozes from this simple verse with no hint of an end showing your gift for laying down intriguing words my friend......x Fay - - - - stay safe in your journey to Serbia.
July 16th, 2019 00:54
The Whimbrel
Christina8 said:
A funny and brilliant write Neville! ---Christina
July 15th, 2019 22:26
Christina8 said:
A funny and brilliant write Neville! ---Christina
July 15th, 2019 22:26
The Whimbrel
Poetic Dan said:
I shall read again tomorrow as I kept losing my place, the comments helped alot ;) and was fun to read.
Thank you
July 15th, 2019 16:40
Poetic Dan said:
I shall read again tomorrow as I kept losing my place, the comments helped alot ;) and was fun to read.
Thank you
July 15th, 2019 16:40
The Whimbrel
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a mixed-heritage Shag-Knott - it\'s these darn knees. Enjoyed this Neville.
July 15th, 2019 09:28
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a mixed-heritage Shag-Knott - it\'s these darn knees. Enjoyed this Neville.
July 15th, 2019 09:28
The Whimbrel
Suresh said:
A birdwatchers delight. All males, and I mean us, like Knotts would like to be Shags
July 15th, 2019 08:51
Suresh said:
A birdwatchers delight. All males, and I mean us, like Knotts would like to be Shags
July 15th, 2019 08:51
The Whimbrel
Fay Slimm. said:
This treatise on waders runs to its end by producing the giggles in my hitherto serious take on sorting out bird-names - -ha - - you did it again in describing the Shag !! - -- oh by the way the pretty Whimbrel has a continuous call at times of mating - not a lot of people though know about that.................. x Fay
July 15th, 2019 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
This treatise on waders runs to its end by producing the giggles in my hitherto serious take on sorting out bird-names - -ha - - you did it again in describing the Shag !! - -- oh by the way the pretty Whimbrel has a continuous call at times of mating - not a lot of people though know about that.................. x Fay
July 15th, 2019 04:50
Miss Me Hard
Christina8 said:
I really liked this! I don\'t know....sometimes even a quick kiss one is able to love. Well, I certainly did think hard about this! LOL
July 14th, 2019 16:40
Christina8 said:
I really liked this! I don\'t know....sometimes even a quick kiss one is able to love. Well, I certainly did think hard about this! LOL
July 14th, 2019 16:40
Miss Me Hard
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll decline on this occasion - super little penning.
July 14th, 2019 14:40
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll decline on this occasion - super little penning.
July 14th, 2019 14:40
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