Comments received on poems by Neville
A Silent Refrain
Fay Slimm. said:
Who could resist capitulating to these tender invites my friend - -that kitten knows how to set male-hearts astir. A read to remember and full of your unique style earns top marks from me again........... Fay
July 25th, 2019 03:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Who could resist capitulating to these tender invites my friend - -that kitten knows how to set male-hearts astir. A read to remember and full of your unique style earns top marks from me again........... Fay
July 25th, 2019 03:49
When You Were Perfect
MendedFences27 said:
Perfection found, and then lost. Memories remain. Wishes expressed to be equally remembered. Recollection filters all.
Enjoyed this reflection from the past, so well expressed, in your unique style. Last line is a killer, a wow line , to be remembered by all who read it. It just leaves the reader wanting more.
Love, whether here and living or just a memory, still warms the heart. a terrific poem. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2019 18:25
MendedFences27 said:
Perfection found, and then lost. Memories remain. Wishes expressed to be equally remembered. Recollection filters all.
Enjoyed this reflection from the past, so well expressed, in your unique style. Last line is a killer, a wow line , to be remembered by all who read it. It just leaves the reader wanting more.
Love, whether here and living or just a memory, still warms the heart. a terrific poem. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2019 18:25
A Thimbleful of Seeds
MendedFences27 said:
Could not agree more, since I believe Love and Life are everything. Here, you speak it well, with emotion and pride. In particular, I enjoyed the way that you organized your stanzas. Mix in some rhyme, some ideals, and you have a poem of seriousness about Man\'s existence. Short and to the point. Enjoyed all of it. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2019 17:33
MendedFences27 said:
Could not agree more, since I believe Love and Life are everything. Here, you speak it well, with emotion and pride. In particular, I enjoyed the way that you organized your stanzas. Mix in some rhyme, some ideals, and you have a poem of seriousness about Man\'s existence. Short and to the point. Enjoyed all of it. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2019 17:33
A Thimbleful of Seeds
Christina8 said:
Good to see you are so passionate about love and life.....very inspirational words, my friend!!
July 24th, 2019 14:22
Christina8 said:
Good to see you are so passionate about love and life.....very inspirational words, my friend!!
July 24th, 2019 14:22
A Thimbleful of Seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
My faith in My Spirit is unchanging and death has no mysteries as if I were to die for anyone or anything in My Life I know that I will always be with My Spirit.
Good thought provoking write Neville.
July 24th, 2019 04:57
Goldfinch60 said:
My faith in My Spirit is unchanging and death has no mysteries as if I were to die for anyone or anything in My Life I know that I will always be with My Spirit.
Good thought provoking write Neville.
July 24th, 2019 04:57
A Thimbleful of Seeds
Fay Slimm. said:
A list of emotive reasons why some believe strongly that love of life is to die for and with an ending stanza that states without doubt which camp your kind heart lies in......... a read to remember my friend.
July 24th, 2019 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
A list of emotive reasons why some believe strongly that love of life is to die for and with an ending stanza that states without doubt which camp your kind heart lies in......... a read to remember my friend.
July 24th, 2019 02:22
A Thimbleful of Seeds
orchidee said:
A good write Neville.
Fido was about to bark when he saw \'passion\', but I said - not that sort of passion, Fido! heehee.
July 24th, 2019 02:00
orchidee said:
A good write Neville.
Fido was about to bark when he saw \'passion\', but I said - not that sort of passion, Fido! heehee.
July 24th, 2019 02:00
A Thimbleful of Seeds
dusk arising said:
Passionate words from a man of passions.
July 24th, 2019 01:53
dusk arising said:
Passionate words from a man of passions.
July 24th, 2019 01:53
Crimson Swathe
Goldfinch60 said:
That field of poppies is so powerful in our lives. One hopes that that wasteland reminds all of the troubles of the past and those who gave their lives for us did so so it would not happen again.
\"MAKE LOVE! NOT WAR!\"
July 24th, 2019 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That field of poppies is so powerful in our lives. One hopes that that wasteland reminds all of the troubles of the past and those who gave their lives for us did so so it would not happen again.
\"MAKE LOVE! NOT WAR!\"
July 24th, 2019 00:41
Wanting to be Wanted
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful rhyming poem yet a sad situation. Nonetheless, beautifully written. Glad you got out of this situation.---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:58
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful rhyming poem yet a sad situation. Nonetheless, beautifully written. Glad you got out of this situation.---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:58
Marcella
Christina8 said:
Very sensual poem. I love it! Obviously more exciting than a Ferrari.....women always are! :-) Great tribute to Marcella!---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:50
Christina8 said:
Very sensual poem. I love it! Obviously more exciting than a Ferrari.....women always are! :-) Great tribute to Marcella!---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:50
Crimson Swathe
MendedFences27 said:
Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies inspired your desire for both, but then... things happened.
Cheer up it\'s only poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2019 16:42
MendedFences27 said:
Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies inspired your desire for both, but then... things happened.
Cheer up it\'s only poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2019 16:42
Head Rest
Christina8 said:
This was an exhilarating write! A somewhat erotic read. Enjoyed!
July 23rd, 2019 12:50
Christina8 said:
This was an exhilarating write! A somewhat erotic read. Enjoyed!
July 23rd, 2019 12:50
Tomorrow Lost
Christina8 said:
Very nice imagery! Yes, lets move on and lets not regret our past. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!--Christina
July 23rd, 2019 12:44
Christina8 said:
Very nice imagery! Yes, lets move on and lets not regret our past. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!--Christina
July 23rd, 2019 12:44
Crimson Swathe
Christina8 said:
I like this piece quite a bit! It would be romantic to make out in a field of poppies I think because I don\'t relate them to a wasteland.....I think they are beautiful!
July 23rd, 2019 12:41
Christina8 said:
I like this piece quite a bit! It would be romantic to make out in a field of poppies I think because I don\'t relate them to a wasteland.....I think they are beautiful!
July 23rd, 2019 12:41
Crimson Swathe
Suresh said:
Hope lies - hope died......
This poem begging the reader to know the poets mindset
So good tease
July 23rd, 2019 10:06
Suresh said:
Hope lies - hope died......
This poem begging the reader to know the poets mindset
So good tease
July 23rd, 2019 10:06
Crimson Swathe
Fay Slimm. said:
A hint of pathos made me change my mind on the comment I was about to make on these subtle words....... making out in a poppy field could feel good but for that last solemn line.... you did it again and left me wanting just a bit more............... x Fay
July 23rd, 2019 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A hint of pathos made me change my mind on the comment I was about to make on these subtle words....... making out in a poppy field could feel good but for that last solemn line.... you did it again and left me wanting just a bit more............... x Fay
July 23rd, 2019 04:19
Crimson Swathe
orchidee said:
A fine write again Neville.
Meanwhile - did hope die long before I sang?! Or was it the expectancy of me singing that caused everyone to \'abandon hope all ye that enter here?!\'\'
July 23rd, 2019 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write again Neville.
Meanwhile - did hope die long before I sang?! Or was it the expectancy of me singing that caused everyone to \'abandon hope all ye that enter here?!\'\'
July 23rd, 2019 02:50
Crimson Swathe
dusk arising said:
Symbolic poppies always divert my mind to the great loss of warfare.
Poppies though are vibrant life and your words \'make out\' lead me along different thought paths..... tbh im not quite sure where.
July 23rd, 2019 02:27
dusk arising said:
Symbolic poppies always divert my mind to the great loss of warfare.
Poppies though are vibrant life and your words \'make out\' lead me along different thought paths..... tbh im not quite sure where.
July 23rd, 2019 02:27
She Sparkles
Suresh said:
Black widow spider in the true sense, for it was lust no doubt. You escaped, though bruised, to yet live and love
July 22nd, 2019 09:11
Suresh said:
Black widow spider in the true sense, for it was lust no doubt. You escaped, though bruised, to yet live and love
July 22nd, 2019 09:11
She Sparkles
Goldfinch60 said:
The danger that can be in the beauty of life. Good one Neville.
July 22nd, 2019 03:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The danger that can be in the beauty of life. Good one Neville.
July 22nd, 2019 03:27
She Sparkles
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. You got biscuits there?! heehee.
July 22nd, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. You got biscuits there?! heehee.
July 22nd, 2019 02:48
She Sparkles
Fay Slimm. said:
Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
the planned moves of a manipulative female and bow to its tawdry truth- - tho\' hopefully you saw it in time and escaped such jaws my friend.......... Fay
July 22nd, 2019 02:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
the planned moves of a manipulative female and bow to its tawdry truth- - tho\' hopefully you saw it in time and escaped such jaws my friend.......... Fay
July 22nd, 2019 02:25
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