Comments received on poems by Neville
Beautifully Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good poem, it can be imperfections in our loved ones that draw us closer to them.
May 19th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good poem, it can be imperfections in our loved ones that draw us closer to them.
May 19th, 2019 00:30
Beautifully Broken
Silkseduction said:
Beautifully broken, beautifully done...
-Lauren
May 18th, 2019 14:14
Silkseduction said:
Beautifully broken, beautifully done...
-Lauren
May 18th, 2019 14:14
No Pillow Required
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensuous and very appealing that need for no pillows Nev. .............. writing desire so clearly often makes love a dual decision. Lucky lady I say.
May 18th, 2019 11:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensuous and very appealing that need for no pillows Nev. .............. writing desire so clearly often makes love a dual decision. Lucky lady I say.
May 18th, 2019 11:12
The Initiation
Suresh said:
All the butchers that robs her of their maidenhead, must pay with their own heads.
I feel very strongly about such issues, where one gender has the right over another just because of their bronze for they have no brains.
May 18th, 2019 10:53
Suresh said:
All the butchers that robs her of their maidenhead, must pay with their own heads.
I feel very strongly about such issues, where one gender has the right over another just because of their bronze for they have no brains.
May 18th, 2019 10:53
Beautifully Broken
Michael Edwards said:
Poses a lot of questions - an intriguing write.
May 18th, 2019 10:37
Michael Edwards said:
Poses a lot of questions - an intriguing write.
May 18th, 2019 10:37
Beautifully Broken
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oooh so many questions
was him another him
were you THAt flawed
We need more
GREAT write Neville
May 18th, 2019 06:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oooh so many questions
was him another him
were you THAt flawed
We need more
GREAT write Neville
May 18th, 2019 06:58
Beautifully Broken
Fay Slimm. said:
A type of Florence Nightingale come to mind here my friend. A tender picture of traits which we as females could do well to imitate - - thank you an inspiring first read of my day.
May 18th, 2019 03:18
Fay Slimm. said:
A type of Florence Nightingale come to mind here my friend. A tender picture of traits which we as females could do well to imitate - - thank you an inspiring first read of my day.
May 18th, 2019 03:18
The Initiation
Michael Edwards said:
A powerful write about one of the most awful and disgusting practices that still so sadly persists.
May 18th, 2019 01:20
Michael Edwards said:
A powerful write about one of the most awful and disgusting practices that still so sadly persists.
May 18th, 2019 01:20
The Initiation
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awful thing to happen to the innocence of those who are forced to have it done in this day and age.
Good write though Neville.
May 18th, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awful thing to happen to the innocence of those who are forced to have it done in this day and age.
Good write though Neville.
May 18th, 2019 00:26
The Initiation
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awful thing to happen to the innocence of those who are forced to have it done in this day and age.
Good write though Neville.
May 18th, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awful thing to happen to the innocence of those who are forced to have it done in this day and age.
Good write though Neville.
May 18th, 2019 00:26
The Initiation
orchidee said:
But seriously - I see the theme. Horrific, meaning a real blade, not...….
May 17th, 2019 14:20
orchidee said:
But seriously - I see the theme. Horrific, meaning a real blade, not...….
May 17th, 2019 14:20
The Initiation
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. Ahh, Maidenhead - a town not too far from me. That\'s all I would know about it! Fido won\'t let me find out more. lol.
May 17th, 2019 14:19
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. Ahh, Maidenhead - a town not too far from me. That\'s all I would know about it! Fido won\'t let me find out more. lol.
May 17th, 2019 14:19
The Initiation
Fay Slimm. said:
Worded with care by your much missed pen is innocence on display - the travesty of initiation at which I can only wonder in this day and age and at which I guess every western female must shudder - - - thanks Nev. for an honest and informed review of part of the on -going ceremony
May 17th, 2019 12:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Worded with care by your much missed pen is innocence on display - the travesty of initiation at which I can only wonder in this day and age and at which I guess every western female must shudder - - - thanks Nev. for an honest and informed review of part of the on -going ceremony
May 17th, 2019 12:55
Just Take a Look
Suresh said:
To be without a care
What a wonderful world that would be
To be, just to be
To be for no one but thee
Romantic indeed
May 11th, 2019 15:23
Suresh said:
To be without a care
What a wonderful world that would be
To be, just to be
To be for no one but thee
Romantic indeed
May 11th, 2019 15:23
Fire-Crest
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, your are on fire lately and leave just absorbing your words with not much to say.
Thanks for being
Perfectly you
Much peace and respect
Hope your flight went well
May 9th, 2019 14:39
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, your are on fire lately and leave just absorbing your words with not much to say.
Thanks for being
Perfectly you
Much peace and respect
Hope your flight went well
May 9th, 2019 14:39
Dear Capricorn
Poetic Dan said:
Had to take a deep breath after this....
Thank you
May 9th, 2019 10:40
Poetic Dan said:
Had to take a deep breath after this....
Thank you
May 9th, 2019 10:40
Fire-Crest
dusk arising said:
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
May 8th, 2019 05:43
dusk arising said:
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
May 8th, 2019 05:43
Fire-Crest
dusk arising said:
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
May 8th, 2019 05:25
dusk arising said:
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
May 8th, 2019 05:25
Fire-Crest
Fay Slimm. said:
A scene when enacted brings out raw feelings in females like me....... abuse leads to behaviour where lust replaces true love and girls as described get drug-hooked ........ your forceful verse Nev, though disturbing outlines the treatment young unfortunates receive who see no other way out.
May 8th, 2019 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
A scene when enacted brings out raw feelings in females like me....... abuse leads to behaviour where lust replaces true love and girls as described get drug-hooked ........ your forceful verse Nev, though disturbing outlines the treatment young unfortunates receive who see no other way out.
May 8th, 2019 04:44
Fire-Crest
orchidee said:
You only marked it 18+ cos of fear of Fido\'s bark?! He won\'t bite ya though, but he barks terrible. He saw \'naked\'. That started him off. heehee. You met any dogs that can read?!
Much more of this and we\'ll all go potty! lol.
May 8th, 2019 04:35
orchidee said:
You only marked it 18+ cos of fear of Fido\'s bark?! He won\'t bite ya though, but he barks terrible. He saw \'naked\'. That started him off. heehee. You met any dogs that can read?!
Much more of this and we\'ll all go potty! lol.
May 8th, 2019 04:35
Ghosts & Shells
dusk arising said:
I knew a lady recently who\'s memories were erased within a fortnight just like your analogy. I know i will not be remembered there (messed up by serious prescribed drugs and therapies).
Strangers on a landing is an amazing phrase. Though i think we are all barnacled children. Were my mirror on the landing then sure... there would be a stranger there. Intriguing read.
May 7th, 2019 16:44
dusk arising said:
I knew a lady recently who\'s memories were erased within a fortnight just like your analogy. I know i will not be remembered there (messed up by serious prescribed drugs and therapies).
Strangers on a landing is an amazing phrase. Though i think we are all barnacled children. Were my mirror on the landing then sure... there would be a stranger there. Intriguing read.
May 7th, 2019 16:44
Hark
Fay Slimm. said:
Even on Holy Days the earth\'s sighs, if heard, can reverberate in still hearts and blow tears over all celebrations. Such a telling read from the pen of a committed carer.... I love this one Nev ......... x
May 7th, 2019 16:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Even on Holy Days the earth\'s sighs, if heard, can reverberate in still hearts and blow tears over all celebrations. Such a telling read from the pen of a committed carer.... I love this one Nev ......... x
May 7th, 2019 16:33
Paper Cuts
Suresh said:
I had one yesterday, but not as painful as those you penned
Intense
May 7th, 2019 10:31
Suresh said:
I had one yesterday, but not as painful as those you penned
Intense
May 7th, 2019 10:31
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