Comments received on poems by Neville
Big Empty Space
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, had to take a deep breath after that one my friend.
Very grateful
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:53
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, had to take a deep breath after that one my friend.
Very grateful
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:53
Big Empty Space
orchidee said:
Yes, extra space Neville, but sometimes made by sadnesses. Then again, space made by some we may say good riddance to!
Much space in your garden?
April 3rd, 2019 04:12
orchidee said:
Yes, extra space Neville, but sometimes made by sadnesses. Then again, space made by some we may say good riddance to!
Much space in your garden?
April 3rd, 2019 04:12
Big Empty Space
Fay Slimm. said:
Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the reasons why wounds can take time to heal. Sad but such a meaningful write Nev.
April 3rd, 2019 03:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the reasons why wounds can take time to heal. Sad but such a meaningful write Nev.
April 3rd, 2019 03:30
Hungry Corner
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hungry corners soon be filled with nourishment for all.
April 2nd, 2019 15:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hungry corners soon be filled with nourishment for all.
April 2nd, 2019 15:28
Hungry Corner
Suresh said:
We see, we hear, we momentarily convulse
But only momentarily
For the tragedy is playing out tooooo often
We have chosen to become oblivion to its causes
April 2nd, 2019 14:21
Suresh said:
We see, we hear, we momentarily convulse
But only momentarily
For the tragedy is playing out tooooo often
We have chosen to become oblivion to its causes
April 2nd, 2019 14:21
Hungry Corner
dusk arising said:
There is hungry corner and hungry corner. Several completely differing places. For one exists where real hunger kills people and beasts. Another exists in the mind of the needy. Well fed and cosseted can still be needy and hungry for something missing. Finally there is need in the desperate, a need never satisfied and as you write, everything will turn out wrong.
I try to get into the mental pictures given to me when i read poetry like this. Life has some sad jumbles beyond comprehension and i think hungry corner leads your reader into them if they are prepared to look.
April 2nd, 2019 13:03
dusk arising said:
There is hungry corner and hungry corner. Several completely differing places. For one exists where real hunger kills people and beasts. Another exists in the mind of the needy. Well fed and cosseted can still be needy and hungry for something missing. Finally there is need in the desperate, a need never satisfied and as you write, everything will turn out wrong.
I try to get into the mental pictures given to me when i read poetry like this. Life has some sad jumbles beyond comprehension and i think hungry corner leads your reader into them if they are prepared to look.
April 2nd, 2019 13:03
Hungry Corner
Fay Slimm. said:
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - - named and shamed these conditions where yesterday means more than tomorrow and no energy to sway away from a perceived culture. The read leaves food for much thought on how to force change.......... x
April 2nd, 2019 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - - named and shamed these conditions where yesterday means more than tomorrow and no energy to sway away from a perceived culture. The read leaves food for much thought on how to force change.......... x
April 2nd, 2019 04:16
Hungry Corner
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Neville.
Meanwhile - what\'s going on? You was thirsty, now you is hungry?! heehee.
April 2nd, 2019 04:10
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Neville.
Meanwhile - what\'s going on? You was thirsty, now you is hungry?! heehee.
April 2nd, 2019 04:10
A Thirst Well Quenched
orchidee said:
I\'m a pest, keep nagging - you done that garden yet?! lol.
April 2nd, 2019 01:51
orchidee said:
I\'m a pest, keep nagging - you done that garden yet?! lol.
April 2nd, 2019 01:51
A Thirst Well Quenched
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. Those silences can be so profound and meaningful in our lives.
April 2nd, 2019 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. Those silences can be so profound and meaningful in our lives.
April 2nd, 2019 00:23
A Thirst Well Quenched
Fay Slimm. said:
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this time even deeper in its unique use of perception. The second stanza is methinks a masterpiece - - - - Saved now and in my faves.
April 1st, 2019 16:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this time even deeper in its unique use of perception. The second stanza is methinks a masterpiece - - - - Saved now and in my faves.
April 1st, 2019 16:13
A Thirst Well Quenched
dusk arising said:
A bird in hand is worth keeping out of your pocket.
\"You say it loudest when you say nothing at all\".
Funny how, after you have a drink or several, your head ends up swimming.
April 1st, 2019 06:16
dusk arising said:
A bird in hand is worth keeping out of your pocket.
\"You say it loudest when you say nothing at all\".
Funny how, after you have a drink or several, your head ends up swimming.
April 1st, 2019 06:16
A Thirst Well Quenched
Fay Slimm. said:
A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a charmingly sensitive write.
April 1st, 2019 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a charmingly sensitive write.
April 1st, 2019 03:19
A Thirst Well Quenched
orchidee said:
A jolly good write Neville. Yes, and also - \'When at first you don\'t succeed, give up!\' Subtitled \'Ain\'t no sense keep banging ya head against a brick wall!\' lol.
A pessimistic start to the week from me!
April 1st, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
A jolly good write Neville. Yes, and also - \'When at first you don\'t succeed, give up!\' Subtitled \'Ain\'t no sense keep banging ya head against a brick wall!\' lol.
A pessimistic start to the week from me!
April 1st, 2019 03:13
To Whom It May Concern
Goldfinch60 said:
Familiar strangers can be so meaningful that they can soon become dear friends or even more. Good words Neville.
April 1st, 2019 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Familiar strangers can be so meaningful that they can soon become dear friends or even more. Good words Neville.
April 1st, 2019 00:59
To Whom It May Concern
dusk arising said:
Was it you who wrote prince Phillips proposal to Elizabeth.
So formal. A tad stand offish. The sort of thing a very timid upper class twit might phrase in desperation in an attempt to gain marriage before his 40th birthday perhaps.
Verily i begst of thee, wilt thou lay with me this morrow lest we part yet unfamiliar of pleasures betwixt bed linen.
Familiar strangers with benefits perhaps?
March 31st, 2019 05:29
dusk arising said:
Was it you who wrote prince Phillips proposal to Elizabeth.
So formal. A tad stand offish. The sort of thing a very timid upper class twit might phrase in desperation in an attempt to gain marriage before his 40th birthday perhaps.
Verily i begst of thee, wilt thou lay with me this morrow lest we part yet unfamiliar of pleasures betwixt bed linen.
Familiar strangers with benefits perhaps?
March 31st, 2019 05:29
To Whom It May Concern
Neville said:
Thank you ever so much and kindly too my dear friend.... for the very life of me.. this post seemed to write itself... That\'s what seems to happen.. Sometimes my imagination gets the better of me and then the pen takes over..... N
March 31st, 2019 05:24
Neville said:
Thank you ever so much and kindly too my dear friend.... for the very life of me.. this post seemed to write itself... That\'s what seems to happen.. Sometimes my imagination gets the better of me and then the pen takes over..... N
March 31st, 2019 05:24
To Whom It May Concern
Fay Slimm. said:
Some uniquely meaningful words in this respectful but solemn request my friend - -hope whoever the piece refers to allows that special place in your memory Nev. Familiar strangers need not always remain so.
March 31st, 2019 05:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Some uniquely meaningful words in this respectful but solemn request my friend - -hope whoever the piece refers to allows that special place in your memory Nev. Familiar strangers need not always remain so.
March 31st, 2019 05:08
Before Breakfast
orchidee said:
Done much before brekkie today? No time for it, having lost an hour?!
March 31st, 2019 04:26
orchidee said:
Done much before brekkie today? No time for it, having lost an hour?!
March 31st, 2019 04:26
Before Breakfast
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, a wicked reminder upon beard and fingers. Such a pleasurable reminisce in an empty bed.
Though it did bring to mind the first time i ate a sizeable portion of strong dope cake and went to bed stoned only to wake equally stoned the next morning. A truly glorious feeling.
March 31st, 2019 00:06
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, a wicked reminder upon beard and fingers. Such a pleasurable reminisce in an empty bed.
Though it did bring to mind the first time i ate a sizeable portion of strong dope cake and went to bed stoned only to wake equally stoned the next morning. A truly glorious feeling.
March 31st, 2019 00:06
Before Breakfast
Michael Edwards said:
I must be the only one who shudders at the idea of tasting ones facial growth where lurks all that bacteria - thankfully I\'m clean shaven. Great write nonetheless.
March 30th, 2019 14:08
Michael Edwards said:
I must be the only one who shudders at the idea of tasting ones facial growth where lurks all that bacteria - thankfully I\'m clean shaven. Great write nonetheless.
March 30th, 2019 14:08
Before Breakfast
orchidee said:
All this before brekkie? There\'s all day to go yet!
March 30th, 2019 08:45
orchidee said:
All this before brekkie? There\'s all day to go yet!
March 30th, 2019 08:45
Before Breakfast
Fay Slimm. said:
Romance could not be better reduced to a few lines of poetic appeal than we have here - - you always amaze by your way with words my friend .....
March 30th, 2019 07:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Romance could not be better reduced to a few lines of poetic appeal than we have here - - you always amaze by your way with words my friend .....
March 30th, 2019 07:07
Cutlery Talking
Michael Edwards said:
A spoonful of fun - and it\'s a yes from me too.
March 29th, 2019 16:31
Michael Edwards said:
A spoonful of fun - and it\'s a yes from me too.
March 29th, 2019 16:31
Cutlery Talking
orchidee said:
I\'m too busy looking up \'runcible\' to be doing any \'cutlery\' stuff! lol.
March 29th, 2019 10:32
orchidee said:
I\'m too busy looking up \'runcible\' to be doing any \'cutlery\' stuff! lol.
March 29th, 2019 10:32
Cutlery Talking
dusk arising said:
A good fork is a guarantee of many an ongoing good insertion. Juices flow freely as you push it in deeper. Lips relish the glistening tool\'s approach loaded with sating promise.
Only to be outclassed by the runcible spooning of course.
A delightful mischeivous romp around her cutlery drawers from you today sir!
March 29th, 2019 07:15
dusk arising said:
A good fork is a guarantee of many an ongoing good insertion. Juices flow freely as you push it in deeper. Lips relish the glistening tool\'s approach loaded with sating promise.
Only to be outclassed by the runcible spooning of course.
A delightful mischeivous romp around her cutlery drawers from you today sir!
March 29th, 2019 07:15
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