Comments received on poems by Cassie58
Driving Ambition
Tom Dylan said:
Wow, I love this, and love the idea of the boy and would-be explorer climbing to the roof. A fine write.
December 10th, 2024 08:34
Tom Dylan said:
Wow, I love this, and love the idea of the boy and would-be explorer climbing to the roof. A fine write.
December 10th, 2024 08:34
Driving Ambition
arqios said:
The scale of such thoughts and processes are of a magnitude that takes years to digest !
December 10th, 2024 05:14
arqios said:
The scale of such thoughts and processes are of a magnitude that takes years to digest !
December 10th, 2024 05:14
Driving Ambition
Goldfinch60 said:
I believe that Mallory did reach the top of Everest as when his body was found in 1999 the photograph of his wife was not on it as he had said he would leave that photo on the top of Everest. Irvine who climber with Mallory has never been found an if he ever is their camera should be with him.
Andy
December 10th, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
I believe that Mallory did reach the top of Everest as when his body was found in 1999 the photograph of his wife was not on it as he had said he would leave that photo on the top of Everest. Irvine who climber with Mallory has never been found an if he ever is their camera should be with him.
Andy
December 10th, 2024 02:20
Driving Ambition
Doggerel Dave said:
That took me to a few places this morning:
Smooth poem which climbed effortlessly to its conclusion;
Information on a historical figure which tickles the interest.
Reminded of my admiration of rock climbing.
Prompted Soren’s mention of parkour, which parallels my fascination.
Polished interesting write, Cassie.
December 9th, 2024 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
That took me to a few places this morning:
Smooth poem which climbed effortlessly to its conclusion;
Information on a historical figure which tickles the interest.
Reminded of my admiration of rock climbing.
Prompted Soren’s mention of parkour, which parallels my fascination.
Polished interesting write, Cassie.
December 9th, 2024 16:49
Driving Ambition
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful Cassie! Mallory and other mountaineers fascinate me. I would not have ths courage they do, though my mind often climbs those peaks. 😂 Thank you for this my friend!
December 9th, 2024 16:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful Cassie! Mallory and other mountaineers fascinate me. I would not have ths courage they do, though my mind often climbs those peaks. 😂 Thank you for this my friend!
December 9th, 2024 16:35
Driving Ambition
jim56 said:
hi Cassie another beautiful poem
and piece of history the circumstances of his death
remain a mystery his climbing partner was never found
they dont know he reached top when he fell
your poem has described his life amazingly
poetry documentry of dedicated climber
who will remain part of history
your talent is never ending
you are an amazing writer jim xx
December 9th, 2024 16:35
jim56 said:
hi Cassie another beautiful poem
and piece of history the circumstances of his death
remain a mystery his climbing partner was never found
they dont know he reached top when he fell
your poem has described his life amazingly
poetry documentry of dedicated climber
who will remain part of history
your talent is never ending
you are an amazing writer jim xx
December 9th, 2024 16:35
Driving Ambition
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve watched parkour before and this brought that to mind. Moving on to mountain climbing. A nostalgic write Cassie and one that has an outcome. Lovely
December 9th, 2024 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve watched parkour before and this brought that to mind. Moving on to mountain climbing. A nostalgic write Cassie and one that has an outcome. Lovely
December 9th, 2024 15:32
Driving Ambition
Poetic Licence said:
I always find your poetry so easy flowing and enjoyable to read, an ability i do not have. This ones a little treasure , thank you Cassie
December 9th, 2024 13:28
Poetic Licence said:
I always find your poetry so easy flowing and enjoyable to read, an ability i do not have. This ones a little treasure , thank you Cassie
December 9th, 2024 13:28
Driving Ambition
Teddy.15 said:
This is magnificent and yet again proof that we are born with that certain fire in our souls of passion. Fabulous dearest Cassie. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 13:12
Teddy.15 said:
This is magnificent and yet again proof that we are born with that certain fire in our souls of passion. Fabulous dearest Cassie. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 13:12
Reaching
vividvoid14 said:
I love this piece, I could be wrong but I understand it as a lingering empty feeling, but a live to thrive And put yourself out there sensation. I really enjoyed the read
December 9th, 2024 07:16
vividvoid14 said:
I love this piece, I could be wrong but I understand it as a lingering empty feeling, but a live to thrive And put yourself out there sensation. I really enjoyed the read
December 9th, 2024 07:16
Veils Of Mystique
teardrop said:
Yes, disagreeing doesn\'t make us enemies, makes us human with different opinions. While not dismising your convections, actknowledge others, discuss and learn from one another. Excellent write. Thank you.
December 8th, 2024 02:40
teardrop said:
Yes, disagreeing doesn\'t make us enemies, makes us human with different opinions. While not dismising your convections, actknowledge others, discuss and learn from one another. Excellent write. Thank you.
December 8th, 2024 02:40
Reaching
Teddy.15 said:
And I suspect your voice was like having a welcome angel in that room. 🌹
December 8th, 2024 02:31
Teddy.15 said:
And I suspect your voice was like having a welcome angel in that room. 🌹
December 8th, 2024 02:31
Reaching
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Cassie, my wife Joyce was in a Care Home at the end and I could see what you have described.
Andy
December 8th, 2024 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Cassie, my wife Joyce was in a Care Home at the end and I could see what you have described.
Andy
December 8th, 2024 02:24
Reaching
David Wakeling said:
This is great fun. Certainly keeps you interested from the start to the finish. Wonderful
December 8th, 2024 01:48
David Wakeling said:
This is great fun. Certainly keeps you interested from the start to the finish. Wonderful
December 8th, 2024 01:48
Reaching
Dan Williams said:
You have a thing with your last lines so exactly defining the rest. Spent summers on my Aunt\'s farm, typical city boy, I felt bailing hay was an adventure, lost a bet about catching a chicken. The lady in the corner provides mystery though. Well Done.
December 8th, 2024 01:31
Dan Williams said:
You have a thing with your last lines so exactly defining the rest. Spent summers on my Aunt\'s farm, typical city boy, I felt bailing hay was an adventure, lost a bet about catching a chicken. The lady in the corner provides mystery though. Well Done.
December 8th, 2024 01:31
Reaching
Doggerel Dave said:
\'her voice rings out clear\' \"Who\'s nicked my bleedin shoe?\"
Chorus: \'Her shoe.. her shoe.. her shoe .....
Now I have a funny feeling that this piece, in all it\'s careful structure and rhythm had a higher purpose than that, Cassie..... You may put this down to a slightly disordered mind. I hope it prepares you to some extent for what you might encounter in the future.
Did enjoy the write really....
December 7th, 2024 16:41
Doggerel Dave said:
\'her voice rings out clear\' \"Who\'s nicked my bleedin shoe?\"
Chorus: \'Her shoe.. her shoe.. her shoe .....
Now I have a funny feeling that this piece, in all it\'s careful structure and rhythm had a higher purpose than that, Cassie..... You may put this down to a slightly disordered mind. I hope it prepares you to some extent for what you might encounter in the future.
Did enjoy the write really....
December 7th, 2024 16:41
Reaching
arqios said:
As long as there are no signs of it being “Animal Farm” it is all harmless enough. Makes me wonder if I will ever be a resident myself. It isn’t really going to be too long now… mmm….
December 7th, 2024 15:09
arqios said:
As long as there are no signs of it being “Animal Farm” it is all harmless enough. Makes me wonder if I will ever be a resident myself. It isn’t really going to be too long now… mmm….
December 7th, 2024 15:09
Reaching
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie, what a beautiful portrayal of the rural life. I have lived some summers on a farm and enjoy the quiet and country life. I now live a good deal of time on what once was a farm and enjoy the solitude and singing of the birds. A most wonderful poem it brought back many memories.
December 7th, 2024 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie, what a beautiful portrayal of the rural life. I have lived some summers on a farm and enjoy the quiet and country life. I now live a good deal of time on what once was a farm and enjoy the solitude and singing of the birds. A most wonderful poem it brought back many memories.
December 7th, 2024 13:37
Reaching
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
A powerful, poignant and
evocative poem indeed! 😢
Another grandslam poetess!🙏
Rock solid penning,
my pleasure to read!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹🐦 Thad
December 7th, 2024 13:33
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
A powerful, poignant and
evocative poem indeed! 😢
Another grandslam poetess!🙏
Rock solid penning,
my pleasure to read!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹🐦 Thad
December 7th, 2024 13:33
Sunset and Wind Farms
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem
and presentation and
amazingly vivid imagery!! 💯✨
I love wind mills
so picturesque and
calming to see!! 😊
Thanks for sharing poetess,
poetic perfection to me!! 😍
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🐦 Thad
December 7th, 2024 13:22
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem
and presentation and
amazingly vivid imagery!! 💯✨
I love wind mills
so picturesque and
calming to see!! 😊
Thanks for sharing poetess,
poetic perfection to me!! 😍
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🐦 Thad
December 7th, 2024 13:22
Reaching
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent share, Cassie! I was glad to see you post another one, my friend 🌹👏
December 7th, 2024 13:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent share, Cassie! I was glad to see you post another one, my friend 🌹👏
December 7th, 2024 13:16
Reaching
orchidee said:
Good write Cassie. Aww, why they shoot cockerels (or want to)? They wake people up in the morning or they will oversleep. lol.
December 7th, 2024 08:41
orchidee said:
Good write Cassie. Aww, why they shoot cockerels (or want to)? They wake people up in the morning or they will oversleep. lol.
December 7th, 2024 08:41
Sunset and Wind Farms
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Cassie, I like watching those windmills out at sea, they are so calming.
Andy
December 7th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Cassie, I like watching those windmills out at sea, they are so calming.
Andy
December 7th, 2024 02:19
Veils Of Mystique
jim56 said:
say what you mean mean what you say
love this it says a lot and means lot
says a lot well written lovely poem
flows nicely aswell you really are amazing
and so is your talent
December 6th, 2024 15:27
jim56 said:
say what you mean mean what you say
love this it says a lot and means lot
says a lot well written lovely poem
flows nicely aswell you really are amazing
and so is your talent
December 6th, 2024 15:27
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