Comments received on poems by Cassie58



Pastures In The Sky
rrodriguez said:

Cassie, the title of your poem is amazing. The simile of your eyes \"brimful of rain,\" and the \"pastures unknown\" paint a truly clear picture of heaven. I can relate to your poem, too. Thank you for sharing.

September 19th, 2024 07:46

Pastures In The Sky
Teddy.15 said:

It was a very long time until I re took my mother\'s photo back out of the cupboard, now I don\'t feel sad I show my beautiful son and he is very curious, as for my beloved brother. That is also on show a bit higher up as I don\'t think I could ever feel so sweet about his passing, such a beautiful beautiful poem, funny how photographs can do so much to a persons emotions. 🌹

September 19th, 2024 05:39

Bicycles in Beijing
aDarkerMind said:

very poetic, full of rhyme.
and a joy to read Cassie.

and theres no place like home, is there.

September 19th, 2024 04:01

Bicycles in Beijing
Goldfinch60 said:

I have a granddaughter working i Beijing, she has been out there for 6 or 7 years and loves it out there.

Andy

September 19th, 2024 02:03

Bicycles in Beijing
Dan Williams said:

Nice clarity and flow for such a tangled story. How did parking spaces get to be so important?

September 19th, 2024 01:06

Bicycles in Beijing
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. You make this come alive with sound. Superb work.

September 18th, 2024 20:38

Felt
Thad Wilk said:

👏👏
A wonderful poem and
true story too!!
I\'m sooo happy that
you pulled through!! 🙏
Thanks for sharing
this with us poetess!! 👍
Stay safe!!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹 🐦. Thad

September 18th, 2024 19:52

Bicycles in Beijing
Thad Wilk said:

Great read!!⭐⭐
Terrific imagery, rhyme,
rhythm and flow! 👍
What a trip! 😳
That\'s not a place
Id wanna visit though! 😊
Best wishes 🤗 🌹 🐦. Thad

September 18th, 2024 19:42

Bicycles in Beijing
orchidee said:

Good write Cassie.

September 18th, 2024 13:41

Bicycles in Beijing
Teddy.15 said:

Oh yes, I so get this, i find It pure education to see how others live in different cultures, I was once in Madagascar incredible learning for life. Those bikes I can assure you if I was there there would have been some sort of calamity as I am incredibly clumsy for example parking one in a row, they\'d come down like the 10 green bottles. Where ever I am even here in Italy I always miss home. A beautiful piece of poetry dearest Cassie. 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁥󠁮󠁧󠁿🌹🏴󠁧󠁢󠁥󠁮󠁧󠁿🌹

September 18th, 2024 12:44

Felt
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Cassie, I too have had Covid but as ever music brought me through it.

Andy

September 18th, 2024 01:58

Felt
Dan Williams said:

Scary stuff. Plagues are pretty high on my list of ways human will undo ourselves. Good for you though.

September 18th, 2024 00:39

Felt
orchidee said:

A true spiritual experience Cassie.

September 17th, 2024 11:38

Felt
Accidental Poet said:

Simply beautiful words. Thankfully your still here with us. 😉👍

September 17th, 2024 10:03

Felt
Neville said:



When I eventually get better, I shall pray for a near life experience ..

jeez Cassie, how I wish I woz your pen Chuck .. Neville


September 17th, 2024 08:46

Felt
sorenbarrett said:

Visions in our darkest hours are sometimes the most uplifting. The depths of pain and despair balanced by the euphoria of joy. Lovely Cassie so glad you made it through

September 17th, 2024 08:42

Felt
Teddy.15 said:

Wow a boomerang into the beyond and unknown, the singing maybe angels? Lyrics written for you and you alone, wow I just got a glimpse into someone else\'s mind, so very happy you are here to tell your tale because so many only went one way. As you always do with style and grace kudos my dear Cassie. 🌹

September 17th, 2024 08:08

A Winter Passing
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Cassie, some people in your life bring so much meaning to it. We must always move on as I am sure those people would not want us to dwell on the sadness but remember the good times together.

Andy

September 17th, 2024 01:22

A Winter Passing
NafisaSB said:

omg - the raw pain shining through your words are so expressive and beautiful.. emotions put into words...great job

September 17th, 2024 00:46

A Winter Passing
Dan Williams said:

I have unfortunately outlived most of my friends so this rings very true. Thank you.

September 17th, 2024 00:31

A Winter Passing
John Prophet said:

Love, the true double edge sword.
Well said.
John

September 16th, 2024 18:01

A Winter Passing
Doggerel Dave said:

Sometimes it can be about words unsaid ...and now..
Thanks Cassie.

September 16th, 2024 17:33

A Winter Passing
Accidental Poet said:

Yes Cassie, the impact certain people can have on you will last a lifetime. I have several such individuals. Beautifully penned. 🌹

September 16th, 2024 09:14

A Winter Passing
Neville said:


You sure don\'t do things by halves Cassie, this is not only beautiful, but it also has a timeless quality to it that would both fit comfortably and sit perfectly among anyone\'s collection of poetry anywhere .. it is a quintessential mourning song Neville

September 16th, 2024 08:57

A Winter Passing
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. This works on many levels.

September 16th, 2024 08:15

A Winter Passing
sorenbarrett said:

Touching with appropriate delicate wording in beautiful rhym that falls from the tongue as soft as falling snow with such a sense of respect. Beautiful imagery set in the metaphor of winter as a symbol of death,

September 16th, 2024 06:48

A Winter Passing
Tom Dylan said:

A lovely, moving poem, Cassie. Thanks for sharing.

September 16th, 2024 05:59

A Winter Passing
orchidee said:

One said \'Live so as to be missed\'. A poignant write Cassie. Grief seems wintry. We are shivery emotionally here.
Meanwhile - I wouldn\'t miss KP if she left for a thousand years, let alone a day! lol.

September 16th, 2024 05:16

A Winter Passing
Teddy.15 said:

the price one pays in life for love

is grief, so when it grips you know

the measure and the depth of it

when passes on another soul

Outstanding in beauty and wisdom

Absolutely amazing and beautiful. 🌹 ❤️

September 16th, 2024 03:07

A Winter Passing
aDarkerMind said:

how very true Cassie.

a very expressive and touching write.

September 16th, 2024 02:56



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