Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
RIP Boffington Town
dusk arising said:
Hopefully tales of Boffington will continue to be heard along with its nefarious characters.
Damn good reading.
July 27th, 2021 08:24
dusk arising said:
Hopefully tales of Boffington will continue to be heard along with its nefarious characters.
Damn good reading.
July 27th, 2021 08:24
RIP Boffington Town
L. B. Mek said:
that jovial rhymed tone, throughout
and abruptly - morose, yet somehow hilarious
last line, made me want to read this again..
strangely, I found this to be a fun read
thanks for sharing dear poet
(sorry if I\'m being insensitive for writing this)
July 27th, 2021 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
that jovial rhymed tone, throughout
and abruptly - morose, yet somehow hilarious
last line, made me want to read this again..
strangely, I found this to be a fun read
thanks for sharing dear poet
(sorry if I\'m being insensitive for writing this)
July 27th, 2021 05:19
RIP Boffington Town
Goldfinch60 said:
Many towns resurrect from the ashes, I am sure B Town will be back.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 04:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Many towns resurrect from the ashes, I am sure B Town will be back.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 04:41
RIP Boffington Town
Neville said:
from a single abode doth vast cities grow ..
dunno why that phrase came to me .. maybe its just a phrase I\'m going through ...
I guess all good comes to an end ... in the end ...
a great tale told terribly well again sir ....
... the end :)
July 27th, 2021 03:43
Neville said:
from a single abode doth vast cities grow ..
dunno why that phrase came to me .. maybe its just a phrase I\'m going through ...
I guess all good comes to an end ... in the end ...
a great tale told terribly well again sir ....
... the end :)
July 27th, 2021 03:43
RIP Boffington Town
Doggerel Dave said:
OOOOOOh Noooooooo..... You can\'t do that, Sax. Shows complete lack of compassion for B Town\'s residents...Where is your humanity?
Can I suggest you petition Prince Charles to build a second town....that\'s the best I can do at this distance... I feel so powerless...
A skilled chronicler of the end....
July 27th, 2021 02:34
Doggerel Dave said:
OOOOOOh Noooooooo..... You can\'t do that, Sax. Shows complete lack of compassion for B Town\'s residents...Where is your humanity?
Can I suggest you petition Prince Charles to build a second town....that\'s the best I can do at this distance... I feel so powerless...
A skilled chronicler of the end....
July 27th, 2021 02:34
Mortar
Neville said:
there\'s just gotta be mortar life than sadness, misery, getting old, moving on and loosing things ............................. despite me liking todays offering and very much, I cannot put my finger on why exactly I found it so compelling or intriguing .................................... N :)
July 26th, 2021 15:36
Neville said:
there\'s just gotta be mortar life than sadness, misery, getting old, moving on and loosing things ............................. despite me liking todays offering and very much, I cannot put my finger on why exactly I found it so compelling or intriguing .................................... N :)
July 26th, 2021 15:36
Mortar
Jerry Reynolds said:
Melancholy write, S.C.
are dreams disposed of
raging on the winds of time
July 26th, 2021 09:26
Jerry Reynolds said:
Melancholy write, S.C.
are dreams disposed of
raging on the winds of time
July 26th, 2021 09:26
Mortar
L. B. Mek said:
\'The mortar is crumbling to dust
And this home I\'ve lived in for so long is falling apart\'
\'Each creak of the floorboards
A symphony of life in motion
But the stairs are ready to topple now
So many times they\'ve been trodden on\'..
yeah, I am there
hovering on that same plank
between, that next step
and:
\'Just shadows and dust
Ghosts and what may have been\'
so I try, to find a view to a future:
\'I breathe deeply and step forward
So goes it with my heart\'..
(such a brilliantly, despairing voice
you\'ve inked alive
for us to connect with and relate-to)
thank you, dear poet
July 26th, 2021 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'The mortar is crumbling to dust
And this home I\'ve lived in for so long is falling apart\'
\'Each creak of the floorboards
A symphony of life in motion
But the stairs are ready to topple now
So many times they\'ve been trodden on\'..
yeah, I am there
hovering on that same plank
between, that next step
and:
\'Just shadows and dust
Ghosts and what may have been\'
so I try, to find a view to a future:
\'I breathe deeply and step forward
So goes it with my heart\'..
(such a brilliantly, despairing voice
you\'ve inked alive
for us to connect with and relate-to)
thank you, dear poet
July 26th, 2021 05:55
Mortar
Doggerel Dave said:
What now - tent? caravan? squat?
No option? Renovation or detonation?
Housing has been a problem for much of my life (until now), Sax - so I\'m up for problem solving.... Got enough to eat and warm clothing?
July 26th, 2021 04:35
Doggerel Dave said:
What now - tent? caravan? squat?
No option? Renovation or detonation?
Housing has been a problem for much of my life (until now), Sax - so I\'m up for problem solving.... Got enough to eat and warm clothing?
July 26th, 2021 04:35
Mortar
Thekkinkkattil said:
Just don\'t say there is no life here.It seems to a very lived in house.With lots of memories
July 26th, 2021 04:15
Thekkinkkattil said:
Just don\'t say there is no life here.It seems to a very lived in house.With lots of memories
July 26th, 2021 04:15
Mortar
orchidee said:
You falling to bits? Will you be just a heap?! A fine write SC.
July 26th, 2021 01:49
orchidee said:
You falling to bits? Will you be just a heap?! A fine write SC.
July 26th, 2021 01:49
Mortar
dusk arising said:
A well described feeling i know only too well on occasion.
July 26th, 2021 01:23
dusk arising said:
A well described feeling i know only too well on occasion.
July 26th, 2021 01:23
Mortar
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words SC. As you move away from those memories new ones will be created.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words SC. As you move away from those memories new ones will be created.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 01:01
Not A Love Poem
dusk arising said:
Well Saxon, this is really an excellent piece and deserving of much acclaim.
Deserving of more recognition than it will receive if only posted on MPS where it is receiving much praise.
Into my fav\'s for sure
July 25th, 2021 11:27
dusk arising said:
Well Saxon, this is really an excellent piece and deserving of much acclaim.
Deserving of more recognition than it will receive if only posted on MPS where it is receiving much praise.
Into my fav\'s for sure
July 25th, 2021 11:27
Not A Love Poem
Poetic Dan said:
Boom! I\'ve though the line of love is sharing what\'s left of nothing but then the end blow my mind. Love most certainly undefined, its all your words and more. I\'m sure we\'ll be writing about it till the end of time....
Inspirational stuff!
July 25th, 2021 04:15
Poetic Dan said:
Boom! I\'ve though the line of love is sharing what\'s left of nothing but then the end blow my mind. Love most certainly undefined, its all your words and more. I\'m sure we\'ll be writing about it till the end of time....
Inspirational stuff!
July 25th, 2021 04:15
Not A Love Poem
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes SAx - love hurts and is often made out to be other than this honest verse reminds us - that \"love is a lot of effort\" yet it surely is too the \"greatest prize\"
July 25th, 2021 04:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes SAx - love hurts and is often made out to be other than this honest verse reminds us - that \"love is a lot of effort\" yet it surely is too the \"greatest prize\"
July 25th, 2021 04:07
Tell Me
Poetic Dan said:
That it will be for sure, got me saying it half way through...... Dam I love this dude!
July 25th, 2021 03:06
Poetic Dan said:
That it will be for sure, got me saying it half way through...... Dam I love this dude!
July 25th, 2021 03:06
Not A Love Poem
Doggerel Dave said:
You are not talking about Love as this nebulous thing everyone is waiting around for, or finding it is unrequited, are you Sax? As I read you it is tangible, concrete with all its complexities.
As I’ve made plain in an earlier piece of mine , I’m not fond of Love poetry as it appears far too often, but this has a reality embodied in it - Thanks.
July 25th, 2021 01:19
Doggerel Dave said:
You are not talking about Love as this nebulous thing everyone is waiting around for, or finding it is unrequited, are you Sax? As I read you it is tangible, concrete with all its complexities.
As I’ve made plain in an earlier piece of mine , I’m not fond of Love poetry as it appears far too often, but this has a reality embodied in it - Thanks.
July 25th, 2021 01:19
Not A Love Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Love certainly is the greatest prize SC, that I know so very well even though my lover has departed this earth she is always with me and that love grows stronger each day.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Love certainly is the greatest prize SC, that I know so very well even though my lover has departed this earth she is always with me and that love grows stronger each day.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 01:10
The Colerutter Fire Service
Trenz Pruca said:
Haha. I loved the ride, Thanks for the experience.
July 24th, 2021 21:00
Trenz Pruca said:
Haha. I loved the ride, Thanks for the experience.
July 24th, 2021 21:00
You\'re My Pea
Laura🌻 said:
Saxon,
I truly enjoyed your captivating write.
It made me think of …
I am your sunflower, you are my sun.
Laura🌻
July 24th, 2021 08:24
Laura🌻 said:
Saxon,
I truly enjoyed your captivating write.
It made me think of …
I am your sunflower, you are my sun.
Laura🌻
July 24th, 2021 08:24
The Colerutter Fire Service
orchidee said:
Me again!
Yes, and it always baffles us: \'Fire Door - Must be kept closed at all times\'. How we going to get out if there\'s a fire? Hmm!
July 24th, 2021 02:17
orchidee said:
Me again!
Yes, and it always baffles us: \'Fire Door - Must be kept closed at all times\'. How we going to get out if there\'s a fire? Hmm!
July 24th, 2021 02:17
The Colerutter Fire Service
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
Clowns? Bozo, Coco, etc? Do they deserve those names?!
July 24th, 2021 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
Clowns? Bozo, Coco, etc? Do they deserve those names?!
July 24th, 2021 02:15
The Colerutter Fire Service
Doggerel Dave said:
There you go - psychic, that\'s me.
Now just a tiny bit of geographical clarification if yer don\'t mind, Author: I take it that Griddly blasted himself into a neighboring town, ie Colerutter?
Either way, twas a lively read and up to your usual standard, perfectionist.....
July 24th, 2021 01:42
Doggerel Dave said:
There you go - psychic, that\'s me.
Now just a tiny bit of geographical clarification if yer don\'t mind, Author: I take it that Griddly blasted himself into a neighboring town, ie Colerutter?
Either way, twas a lively read and up to your usual standard, perfectionist.....
July 24th, 2021 01:42
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