Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
No Curtain Call
L. B. Mek said:
If we had no shadows in our Past
we couldn\'t be hopeful
of finding something better, brighter
in our dreamed tomorrow\'s...
(really liked the concept of merging
two versions of self, the now
and the regretted past, but maybe
some direct dialogue
between the two poetic voices
would add more depth;
such an intriguing read, thank you!
and those first few lines flowed effortlessly)
\'The character I became in a play I didn\'t write
has made his final curtain call
However no accolades shall be given
no rave reviews or awards
Instead I\'ll sweep the stage clean
before making a hasty exit, stage left\'
August 6th, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
If we had no shadows in our Past
we couldn\'t be hopeful
of finding something better, brighter
in our dreamed tomorrow\'s...
(really liked the concept of merging
two versions of self, the now
and the regretted past, but maybe
some direct dialogue
between the two poetic voices
would add more depth;
such an intriguing read, thank you!
and those first few lines flowed effortlessly)
\'The character I became in a play I didn\'t write
has made his final curtain call
However no accolades shall be given
no rave reviews or awards
Instead I\'ll sweep the stage clean
before making a hasty exit, stage left\'
August 6th, 2021 04:31
No Curtain Call
Doggerel Dave said:
But was it an actor on a stage.....or.... Either way an engaging piece , as I\'ve come to expect of your work, Sax
August 6th, 2021 00:53
Doggerel Dave said:
But was it an actor on a stage.....or.... Either way an engaging piece , as I\'ve come to expect of your work, Sax
August 6th, 2021 00:53
No Curtain Call
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions laid out in your words SC hopefully you have found the real you once more.
Andy
August 6th, 2021 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions laid out in your words SC hopefully you have found the real you once more.
Andy
August 6th, 2021 00:51
Love You Double
Freni Karaluthara said:
beautiful poem. Spiritual and love
And the love I feel transcends eternity..
August 5th, 2021 14:53
Freni Karaluthara said:
beautiful poem. Spiritual and love
And the love I feel transcends eternity..
August 5th, 2021 14:53
Love You Double
Coyote said:
A beautiful poem of separation and reconciliation. Of love lost and later found. Love always finds a way and you Express it perfectly here my friend. Nice write.
August 5th, 2021 07:49
Coyote said:
A beautiful poem of separation and reconciliation. Of love lost and later found. Love always finds a way and you Express it perfectly here my friend. Nice write.
August 5th, 2021 07:49
Love You Double
L. B. Mek said:
such a wonderful dedication
(if we\'re thinking about them, with Love
then, we can be reassured in the fact
that at least - They: are being Loved...)
or at least that\'s how I, selfishly
choose to interpret
this treasured - thorn adorned, anchor
I carry with me
to and from my dreams, dear poet
August 5th, 2021 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
such a wonderful dedication
(if we\'re thinking about them, with Love
then, we can be reassured in the fact
that at least - They: are being Loved...)
or at least that\'s how I, selfishly
choose to interpret
this treasured - thorn adorned, anchor
I carry with me
to and from my dreams, dear poet
August 5th, 2021 04:35
The Crikka Man
Coyote said:
Reads like a bedtime story with a wonderful moral.
August 4th, 2021 12:21
Coyote said:
Reads like a bedtime story with a wonderful moral.
August 4th, 2021 12:21
The Crikka Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Crikka, Crikey I know how he feels – if society don’t give yer a fair go and enuf to eat, ‘cos yer old, then wots a poor fella to do? Got to abandon yer vegetarianism an find some young tender kiddies to keep me belly full an the wolf from the door – yer don’t wanna meet that wolf……unless he’s got a poem in him, Sax ?
August 4th, 2021 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Crikka, Crikey I know how he feels – if society don’t give yer a fair go and enuf to eat, ‘cos yer old, then wots a poor fella to do? Got to abandon yer vegetarianism an find some young tender kiddies to keep me belly full an the wolf from the door – yer don’t wanna meet that wolf……unless he’s got a poem in him, Sax ?
August 4th, 2021 05:03
The Crikka Man
orchidee said:
He having a bad hair day, that Crikka guy?! lol.
August 4th, 2021 01:16
orchidee said:
He having a bad hair day, that Crikka guy?! lol.
August 4th, 2021 01:16
Two Parts made One
Goldfinch60 said:
Being at one together is so very wonderful SC, I know how that is.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Being at one together is so very wonderful SC, I know how that is.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:25
Mirror Poet
Coyote said:
When you see yourself in another\'s art, you truly make a connection with that person. That\'s what happened here with me. Nicely penned.
August 3rd, 2021 15:50
Coyote said:
When you see yourself in another\'s art, you truly make a connection with that person. That\'s what happened here with me. Nicely penned.
August 3rd, 2021 15:50
Two Parts made One
Freni Karaluthara said:
Dear Saxon Crow, your poem really touched my soul. And the much liked lines are:
\"And nothing can stop us now our path has been made
Strong in our hearts that were made to be sharedard\"
thank you for sharing it
August 3rd, 2021 15:10
Freni Karaluthara said:
Dear Saxon Crow, your poem really touched my soul. And the much liked lines are:
\"And nothing can stop us now our path has been made
Strong in our hearts that were made to be sharedard\"
thank you for sharing it
August 3rd, 2021 15:10
Two Parts made One
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant love poem Sax. -- must read this some more so into my faves with this gentle tribute to love.
August 3rd, 2021 11:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant love poem Sax. -- must read this some more so into my faves with this gentle tribute to love.
August 3rd, 2021 11:36
Two Parts made One
Accidental Poet said:
I believe Teddy just referred to you as a magician Sax. And I have to agree. 👍
August 3rd, 2021 05:54
Accidental Poet said:
I believe Teddy just referred to you as a magician Sax. And I have to agree. 👍
August 3rd, 2021 05:54
Two Parts made One
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read, relatable
to say the least
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 3rd, 2021 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read, relatable
to say the least
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 3rd, 2021 05:05
Two Parts made One
Janani said:
that was really touching and it somehow reminded me of how much i love my little brother:)
August 3rd, 2021 03:08
Janani said:
that was really touching and it somehow reminded me of how much i love my little brother:)
August 3rd, 2021 03:08
Changing moment
Poetic Dan said:
Ka boom! Another hit out tune room. With lines like your what chill my go wrong! Lol
Everything but I\'m sure your rhyme it right.
Great stuff
August 2nd, 2021 06:46
Poetic Dan said:
Ka boom! Another hit out tune room. With lines like your what chill my go wrong! Lol
Everything but I\'m sure your rhyme it right.
Great stuff
August 2nd, 2021 06:46
Changing moment
L. B. Mek said:
or...
they, all - moved: for you!
we can never know
just how much of fate
we curate, dear poet
and that\'s where all our hope
is siphoned from..
a warming read, an intriguing concept
August 2nd, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
or...
they, all - moved: for you!
we can never know
just how much of fate
we curate, dear poet
and that\'s where all our hope
is siphoned from..
a warming read, an intriguing concept
August 2nd, 2021 05:16
Effortless
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words SC may that connection be forever there and get stronger every moment.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words SC may that connection be forever there and get stronger every moment.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:33
Mirror Poet
Doggerel Dave said:
Good advice, interesting write there Sax. Only caveat I have is this:
Poetry comes in all shapes and sizes. Some (many) are word pictures about nature and so on, misery or….love…..for example. Most noncontroversial.
Some can be ‘sociopolitical’ as MPS calls it. Those are not there for acceptance of difference they are presented for debate and clarification.
This is not to subvert the meaning of your piece , which I think is very valid….just saying….
July 31st, 2021 05:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Good advice, interesting write there Sax. Only caveat I have is this:
Poetry comes in all shapes and sizes. Some (many) are word pictures about nature and so on, misery or….love…..for example. Most noncontroversial.
Some can be ‘sociopolitical’ as MPS calls it. Those are not there for acceptance of difference they are presented for debate and clarification.
This is not to subvert the meaning of your piece , which I think is very valid….just saying….
July 31st, 2021 05:28
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