Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Jigsaw
Quijote said:
Good metaphor for life and there will obviously pieces from other jigsaws that need to be discarded.
Does anyone ever complete their life’s jigsaw?
August 14th, 2021 02:35
Quijote said:
Good metaphor for life and there will obviously pieces from other jigsaws that need to be discarded.
Does anyone ever complete their life’s jigsaw?
August 14th, 2021 02:35
Jigsaw
Quijote said:
Good metaphor for life and there will obviously pieces from other jigsaws that need to be discarded.
Does anyone ever complete their life’s jigsaw?
August 14th, 2021 02:35
Quijote said:
Good metaphor for life and there will obviously pieces from other jigsaws that need to be discarded.
Does anyone ever complete their life’s jigsaw?
August 14th, 2021 02:35
Love Hiccups
Arvy said:
\"It\'s our souls that are embracing
And kissing lovingly\" even with distance people can still feel each other as if they\'re together. Beautiful dear, Sax!
August 14th, 2021 02:10
Arvy said:
\"It\'s our souls that are embracing
And kissing lovingly\" even with distance people can still feel each other as if they\'re together. Beautiful dear, Sax!
August 14th, 2021 02:10
Love Hiccups
orchidee said:
Slap and tickles?! I might swoon! heehee. Good write SC.
August 14th, 2021 01:34
orchidee said:
Slap and tickles?! I might swoon! heehee. Good write SC.
August 14th, 2021 01:34
Jigsaw
Goldfinch60 said:
Very positive words SC, I am sure that you will soon have that jigsaw completed.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Very positive words SC, I am sure that you will soon have that jigsaw completed.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 00:33
Jigsaw
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
\"Jigsaw\" what a superb metaphor for life
So many un-finished Jigsaws
Loved it!
August 13th, 2021 11:09
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
\"Jigsaw\" what a superb metaphor for life
So many un-finished Jigsaws
Loved it!
August 13th, 2021 11:09
Jigsaw
dusk arising said:
A really excellent composition Saxon. I enjoyed reading this very much and it is so relateable.
Into my favourites for sure.
August 13th, 2021 07:01
dusk arising said:
A really excellent composition Saxon. I enjoyed reading this very much and it is so relateable.
Into my favourites for sure.
August 13th, 2021 07:01
Jigsaw
L. B. Mek said:
\'But it\'s that look in his eyes he\'s got which interests me
And I\'ll only get the answer once the jigsaw\'s complete
So I\'m patiently searching for the pieces that I\'d lost
And finding my enjoyment at the ones I come across\'
(yeah, this definitely hit home for me
accessibly worded with purpose
a great read, thank you dear poet)
August 13th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'But it\'s that look in his eyes he\'s got which interests me
And I\'ll only get the answer once the jigsaw\'s complete
So I\'m patiently searching for the pieces that I\'d lost
And finding my enjoyment at the ones I come across\'
(yeah, this definitely hit home for me
accessibly worded with purpose
a great read, thank you dear poet)
August 13th, 2021 04:55
Jigsaw
Doggerel Dave said:
Well said, Sax - that\'s the way I went too - I feel that I and many others will be able to identify with that.
And for any that can\'t........
I vote with orchi - a fine write.
August 13th, 2021 02:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Well said, Sax - that\'s the way I went too - I feel that I and many others will be able to identify with that.
And for any that can\'t........
I vote with orchi - a fine write.
August 13th, 2021 02:01
Yearning
Coyote said:
You say much in this short verse. \"What ifs\" indeed. Brilliant!
August 12th, 2021 12:31
Coyote said:
You say much in this short verse. \"What ifs\" indeed. Brilliant!
August 12th, 2021 12:31
Yearning
Thekkinkkattil said:
It is always the her you seek but why the dilemma?
August 12th, 2021 07:32
Thekkinkkattil said:
It is always the her you seek but why the dilemma?
August 12th, 2021 07:32
Yearning
L. B. Mek said:
so true,
when we trip or buckle
we seldom have time
to look, at the root cause
of our demise
rather, we hurry to limit our fall
and rush to resume
our blind leap, to that same
aspirational trap
of belatedly realised, conformity...
an intriguing read
like the \'her\', adds a meaningful twist
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
so true,
when we trip or buckle
we seldom have time
to look, at the root cause
of our demise
rather, we hurry to limit our fall
and rush to resume
our blind leap, to that same
aspirational trap
of belatedly realised, conformity...
an intriguing read
like the \'her\', adds a meaningful twist
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2021 05:04
Yearning
Accidental Poet said:
Very thought provoking Sax. Straight to my favs. 👍
August 12th, 2021 05:03
Accidental Poet said:
Very thought provoking Sax. Straight to my favs. 👍
August 12th, 2021 05:03
Yearning
dusk arising said:
A dilemma indeed but I learned the hard way to just move on. The what if\'s were the things which didn\'t happen.
Great concise piece to wake up a contrary old beast like me.
August 12th, 2021 04:30
dusk arising said:
A dilemma indeed but I learned the hard way to just move on. The what if\'s were the things which didn\'t happen.
Great concise piece to wake up a contrary old beast like me.
August 12th, 2021 04:30
Yearning
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? the most difficult question in our lives SC.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? the most difficult question in our lives SC.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:56
Words Left Unsaid
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words in your heart break free and show the love that you have for others.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words in your heart break free and show the love that you have for others.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:26
Words Left Unsaid
Coyote said:
Loved this, particularly the final stanza. Excellent!
August 11th, 2021 15:42
Coyote said:
Loved this, particularly the final stanza. Excellent!
August 11th, 2021 15:42
Words Left Unsaid
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful piece of poetry, of love never spoken and the aftermath of that hollowness. Life\'s many forked pathways are strewn with the poorly selected and often neglected choices. Here you have shown that words \"unspoken\" can be as powerful as those we shout. The \"unsaid\" can scar as deeply as the freely spoken. We spend years wondering why and what if, and at some point we render a graceful and articulate poem. Well done. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 13:26
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful piece of poetry, of love never spoken and the aftermath of that hollowness. Life\'s many forked pathways are strewn with the poorly selected and often neglected choices. Here you have shown that words \"unspoken\" can be as powerful as those we shout. The \"unsaid\" can scar as deeply as the freely spoken. We spend years wondering why and what if, and at some point we render a graceful and articulate poem. Well done. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 13:26
Words Left Unsaid
dusk arising said:
A woeful tale of regret when ones head overruled ones heart.
August 11th, 2021 09:06
dusk arising said:
A woeful tale of regret when ones head overruled ones heart.
August 11th, 2021 09:06
Words Left Unsaid
rebmasters said:
Beautiful first stanza and bittersweet throughout ❤️
August 11th, 2021 03:22
rebmasters said:
Beautiful first stanza and bittersweet throughout ❤️
August 11th, 2021 03:22
For the love of clouds
Accidental Poet said:
What else can I say that hasn\'t already been said? Another masterpiece Sax. 👍
August 10th, 2021 18:36
Accidental Poet said:
What else can I say that hasn\'t already been said? Another masterpiece Sax. 👍
August 10th, 2021 18:36
To Begin Again
Coyote said:
Wow! This is profoundly flawless. Not just poetry but literature. Excellent, excellent write!
August 10th, 2021 10:45
Coyote said:
Wow! This is profoundly flawless. Not just poetry but literature. Excellent, excellent write!
August 10th, 2021 10:45
To Begin Again
orchidee said:
So you started again with another poem! Good write SC.
August 10th, 2021 01:42
orchidee said:
So you started again with another poem! Good write SC.
August 10th, 2021 01:42
To Begin Again
Goldfinch60 said:
May that new path lead you to the wonder of new life that is there before you SC.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May that new path lead you to the wonder of new life that is there before you SC.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:57
For the love of clouds
Laura🌻 said:
Saxon,
A beautifully written poem expressing an everlasting bond/love between two people.
As you run free like the wind, your world is a heavenly place to
“dance on clouds”.
An enjoyable read…
indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 9th, 2021 16:36
Laura🌻 said:
Saxon,
A beautifully written poem expressing an everlasting bond/love between two people.
As you run free like the wind, your world is a heavenly place to
“dance on clouds”.
An enjoyable read…
indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 9th, 2021 16:36
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