Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
For the love of clouds
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, S.C.
Beautiful poem, I may just print it and give it to Linda. You get the credit, my Saxon friend.
August 9th, 2021 15:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, S.C.
Beautiful poem, I may just print it and give it to Linda. You get the credit, my Saxon friend.
August 9th, 2021 15:59
For the love of clouds
dusk arising said:
May a cloudburst only bring you springtimes dance of growth and good fortune.
August 9th, 2021 06:20
dusk arising said:
May a cloudburst only bring you springtimes dance of growth and good fortune.
August 9th, 2021 06:20
For the love of clouds
L. B. Mek said:
\'its just me and you
and our lifelong romance
We are dancing on clouds
in perpetual harmony\'..
those hope\'s, we intrust to destiny
lightly
tend, to float-along merely and last
longer
than those wishes: we grasp far too, tight
or
at least, that\'s how it seems to me...
(a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 9th, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'its just me and you
and our lifelong romance
We are dancing on clouds
in perpetual harmony\'..
those hope\'s, we intrust to destiny
lightly
tend, to float-along merely and last
longer
than those wishes: we grasp far too, tight
or
at least, that\'s how it seems to me...
(a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 9th, 2021 05:39
For the love of clouds
orchidee said:
Good write SC. Keep on dancing! I will accompany you with singing if ya wish! Aww, no one wishes that. lol.
August 9th, 2021 01:38
orchidee said:
Good write SC. Keep on dancing! I will accompany you with singing if ya wish! Aww, no one wishes that. lol.
August 9th, 2021 01:38
Insanely mad
Accidental Poet said:
For some, a comfort zone they feel locked within. Great write Sax. ✔
August 7th, 2021 07:36
Accidental Poet said:
For some, a comfort zone they feel locked within. Great write Sax. ✔
August 7th, 2021 07:36
Insanely mad
Neville said:
makes perfect sense to me
and me
................................... and me too
:)
August 7th, 2021 02:20
Neville said:
makes perfect sense to me
and me
................................... and me too
:)
August 7th, 2021 02:20
Insanely mad
orchidee said:
Fill the well with water and drown that clown! Don\'t know how that all works out metaphorically. Long word there too. lol.
Demons and other nasties don\'t like water. They seek out dry places. Not that I\'m any expert on demonology.
August 7th, 2021 01:46
orchidee said:
Fill the well with water and drown that clown! Don\'t know how that all works out metaphorically. Long word there too. lol.
Demons and other nasties don\'t like water. They seek out dry places. Not that I\'m any expert on demonology.
August 7th, 2021 01:46
Insanely mad
Goldfinch60 said:
If you just look up from that \'deep dark well\' you will see the light and you just need to reach up for it and the light will show you the way to life\'s wonder.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
If you just look up from that \'deep dark well\' you will see the light and you just need to reach up for it and the light will show you the way to life\'s wonder.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:26
No Curtain Call
Trenz Pruca said:
A good one Sax. A play full on sound and fury...
August 6th, 2021 16:27
Trenz Pruca said:
A good one Sax. A play full on sound and fury...
August 6th, 2021 16:27
No Curtain Call
Fay Slimm. said:
A thrilling drama about life and its lessons being played out and need for learning where decisions quickly made could make all the difference to our role....... a compelling read Sax.
August 6th, 2021 15:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A thrilling drama about life and its lessons being played out and need for learning where decisions quickly made could make all the difference to our role....... a compelling read Sax.
August 6th, 2021 15:38
No Curtain Call
Poetic Dan said:
Omg this was absolutely incredible, I wrote one just like this once but no where near as magnificent you made this! My very life dancing in front of me, the opening line made me sit up and take note. As I followed to the end I was glad for each role that I took and will execute my final day\'s on my stage. ...100% my way!
Thanks for doing yours ;)
One of a kind!
August 6th, 2021 12:06
Poetic Dan said:
Omg this was absolutely incredible, I wrote one just like this once but no where near as magnificent you made this! My very life dancing in front of me, the opening line made me sit up and take note. As I followed to the end I was glad for each role that I took and will execute my final day\'s on my stage. ...100% my way!
Thanks for doing yours ;)
One of a kind!
August 6th, 2021 12:06
No Curtain Call
Accidental Poet said:
A play so many of us have starred in. Excellently penned Sax. 👍
August 6th, 2021 05:41
Accidental Poet said:
A play so many of us have starred in. Excellently penned Sax. 👍
August 6th, 2021 05:41
No Curtain Call
L. B. Mek said:
If we had no shadows in our Past
we couldn\'t be hopeful
of finding something better, brighter
in our dreamed tomorrow\'s...
(really liked the concept of merging
two versions of self, the now
and the regretted past, but maybe
some direct dialogue
between the two poetic voices
would add more depth;
such an intriguing read, thank you!
and those first few lines flowed effortlessly)
\'The character I became in a play I didn\'t write
has made his final curtain call
However no accolades shall be given
no rave reviews or awards
Instead I\'ll sweep the stage clean
before making a hasty exit, stage left\'
August 6th, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
If we had no shadows in our Past
we couldn\'t be hopeful
of finding something better, brighter
in our dreamed tomorrow\'s...
(really liked the concept of merging
two versions of self, the now
and the regretted past, but maybe
some direct dialogue
between the two poetic voices
would add more depth;
such an intriguing read, thank you!
and those first few lines flowed effortlessly)
\'The character I became in a play I didn\'t write
has made his final curtain call
However no accolades shall be given
no rave reviews or awards
Instead I\'ll sweep the stage clean
before making a hasty exit, stage left\'
August 6th, 2021 04:31
No Curtain Call
Doggerel Dave said:
But was it an actor on a stage.....or.... Either way an engaging piece , as I\'ve come to expect of your work, Sax
August 6th, 2021 00:53
Doggerel Dave said:
But was it an actor on a stage.....or.... Either way an engaging piece , as I\'ve come to expect of your work, Sax
August 6th, 2021 00:53
No Curtain Call
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions laid out in your words SC hopefully you have found the real you once more.
Andy
August 6th, 2021 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions laid out in your words SC hopefully you have found the real you once more.
Andy
August 6th, 2021 00:51
Love You Double
Freni Karaluthara said:
beautiful poem. Spiritual and love
And the love I feel transcends eternity..
August 5th, 2021 14:53
Freni Karaluthara said:
beautiful poem. Spiritual and love
And the love I feel transcends eternity..
August 5th, 2021 14:53
Love You Double
Coyote said:
A beautiful poem of separation and reconciliation. Of love lost and later found. Love always finds a way and you Express it perfectly here my friend. Nice write.
August 5th, 2021 07:49
Coyote said:
A beautiful poem of separation and reconciliation. Of love lost and later found. Love always finds a way and you Express it perfectly here my friend. Nice write.
August 5th, 2021 07:49
Love You Double
L. B. Mek said:
such a wonderful dedication
(if we\'re thinking about them, with Love
then, we can be reassured in the fact
that at least - They: are being Loved...)
or at least that\'s how I, selfishly
choose to interpret
this treasured - thorn adorned, anchor
I carry with me
to and from my dreams, dear poet
August 5th, 2021 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
such a wonderful dedication
(if we\'re thinking about them, with Love
then, we can be reassured in the fact
that at least - They: are being Loved...)
or at least that\'s how I, selfishly
choose to interpret
this treasured - thorn adorned, anchor
I carry with me
to and from my dreams, dear poet
August 5th, 2021 04:35
The Crikka Man
Coyote said:
Reads like a bedtime story with a wonderful moral.
August 4th, 2021 12:21
Coyote said:
Reads like a bedtime story with a wonderful moral.
August 4th, 2021 12:21
The Crikka Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Crikka, Crikey I know how he feels – if society don’t give yer a fair go and enuf to eat, ‘cos yer old, then wots a poor fella to do? Got to abandon yer vegetarianism an find some young tender kiddies to keep me belly full an the wolf from the door – yer don’t wanna meet that wolf……unless he’s got a poem in him, Sax ?
August 4th, 2021 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Crikka, Crikey I know how he feels – if society don’t give yer a fair go and enuf to eat, ‘cos yer old, then wots a poor fella to do? Got to abandon yer vegetarianism an find some young tender kiddies to keep me belly full an the wolf from the door – yer don’t wanna meet that wolf……unless he’s got a poem in him, Sax ?
August 4th, 2021 05:03
The Crikka Man
orchidee said:
He having a bad hair day, that Crikka guy?! lol.
August 4th, 2021 01:16
orchidee said:
He having a bad hair day, that Crikka guy?! lol.
August 4th, 2021 01:16
Two Parts made One
Goldfinch60 said:
Being at one together is so very wonderful SC, I know how that is.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Being at one together is so very wonderful SC, I know how that is.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:25
Mirror Poet
Coyote said:
When you see yourself in another\'s art, you truly make a connection with that person. That\'s what happened here with me. Nicely penned.
August 3rd, 2021 15:50
Coyote said:
When you see yourself in another\'s art, you truly make a connection with that person. That\'s what happened here with me. Nicely penned.
August 3rd, 2021 15:50
Two Parts made One
Freni Karaluthara said:
Dear Saxon Crow, your poem really touched my soul. And the much liked lines are:
\"And nothing can stop us now our path has been made
Strong in our hearts that were made to be sharedard\"
thank you for sharing it
August 3rd, 2021 15:10
Freni Karaluthara said:
Dear Saxon Crow, your poem really touched my soul. And the much liked lines are:
\"And nothing can stop us now our path has been made
Strong in our hearts that were made to be sharedard\"
thank you for sharing it
August 3rd, 2021 15:10
Two Parts made One
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant love poem Sax. -- must read this some more so into my faves with this gentle tribute to love.
August 3rd, 2021 11:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant love poem Sax. -- must read this some more so into my faves with this gentle tribute to love.
August 3rd, 2021 11:36
Two Parts made One
Accidental Poet said:
I believe Teddy just referred to you as a magician Sax. And I have to agree. 👍
August 3rd, 2021 05:54
Accidental Poet said:
I believe Teddy just referred to you as a magician Sax. And I have to agree. 👍
August 3rd, 2021 05:54
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